『壹』 求高一英语作文的写作技巧!(广东的最好)
俗话说:“万事开头难。”对于作文来说,写好作文开头尤为重要。总的来说开头方法多种多样,有一条是最重要的,那就是:简洁明了迅速入题。请看近年各地中考满分文的开头。
技巧一:设计悬念,吸引读者
我快要死了——我躺在病床上,四周黑漆漆的一片,十分寂静,偌大的房间里,只能听得见我微弱的呼吸声。(陕西省中考满分作文《感受生活之美》)
技巧点拨:这篇文章的开头设计了一个悬念:“我”快要死了。于是读者不由得被吸引住了,会想,他怎么会快要死了死了呢?他得了什么病?后来会怎样?这种开头方法,抓住了人们阅读时的好奇心理,精心设计吸引读者阅读,效果很好。
技巧二:开门见山,亮明观点
痛苦的时候,你会回家,用眼泪尽情发泄;心烦的时候,你会回家,让家的温暖驱散心中的乌云;家——融进去的是悲伤,化解出来的是快乐;家——接纳的是难过,释放的是开心。家真好!(选自云南省中考作文《家,真好》)
技巧点拨:记叙文也能开门见山。你看,这篇文章运用排比的形式将自己对“家”的感受毫无遮掩的表达出来。为全文定下了基调。
技巧三:联想回忆,巧妙叙述
独立小院,月光如水,静静地流泻在我的身边,我感到了心沉水底的清凉,引起了对你的不尽的思念!曾记得也是这样一个月色溶溶的夜晚,我把你送上了开往异乡的列车…… 小小年纪,孤身一人在异乡奋斗的你,一切还好吗?(河南中考满分作文《当我面对“溶溶月色”的时候》)
技巧点拨:中考中,常有追忆式文题出现,需要考生追忆过去发生的某一件事。此时不妨联想回忆,引发思绪。
技巧四:突出矛盾,渲染气氛
“你这书记趁早别当了,半点用也没有!”从学校风尘仆仆赶来的我,离家门还有百来米远,就闻到了一股浓浓的火药味,听到了妈妈对爸爸的呵斥声,一种“黑云压城”的感觉猛烈袭上我的心头。妈妈也是多事,爸爸干什么她都要干预一通,搞不好就暴跳如雷。好在爸爸宰相肚里能撑船,每次都是任凭妈妈一阵暴风骤雨过后,才用几句绵里藏针的话收拾残局。今天不知又为了什么。(选自湖北仙桃中考满分文《“民主墙”的风波》)
技巧点拨:记叙文的写作要善于制造矛盾,在矛盾中展开故事情节才能吸引人。这篇文章在一开头就抖出一个矛盾冲突。目的是要迅速抓住读者的心,引发读者的阅读兴趣。
技巧五:巧用修辞,展示文采
假如我是小鸟,我会记住那出生时的巢穴;假如我是树苗,我无法忘记那滋养我的土地;假如我是江河,那雪域高原成为我记忆中的烙印;假如……无论我是什么,无论我以什么方式存在,我可以忘记周围的一切,甚至可以抛弃自己,但有一样东西是不可泯灭的——那就是回报。(选自贵阳市中考满分文《诠释回报》)
技巧点拨:修辞是语言运用中不可缺少的部分。巧妙而又贴切的修辞手法的运用常能使语言增添许多风采。在考场作文中,考生若能熟练运用修辞手法扮靓语言,定能得到良好的效果。
技巧六:描写环境,烘托背景
晚风吹过河面上最后一波涟漪,夕阳收起它最后一首余晖,秋霜目送去最后一只归雁。我们默默地站着,目光游离在那若即若离的记忆之门上。当许许多多都已凋尽,我们起码还可以对自己说:“别伤心,我已体验过那种感觉,虽然只是曾经拥有。”(选自安徽省中考满分文《曾经拥有》) 技巧点拨:一切景语皆情语,在记叙文、散文的写作中,环境描写是不可少的。环境描写可以渲染气氛,可以衬托人物、可以推动故事情节的发展。如果在文章的开头先进行一段简洁的环境描写,既可以为文章提供一个特定的背景,又能使文章形成一种特殊的氛围。
技巧七:广泛引用,突出主题
“月朦胧,鸟朦胧,帘卷海棠红。” 每当我吟诵这句诗,心中便有说不出的陶醉。心也朦胧,眼也朦胧,眼前真个展现了同一幅画来。(选自吉林省中考满分文《陶醉》)
技巧点拨:引用法是一种很常见的文章开头法,的内容是很丰富的,若是议论文则常名人名言以增强论证效果,突出主题;若是记叙文、散文则可以引用歌词、诗句。此外,还可引用古语、俗谚、对联等等。
『贰』 高中英语作文写作技巧
刚参加过高考~~绝对有用(总结了很久)
①给观点分组讨论类 开头模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****(根据题目要求套用了)
论述观点 when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that **** ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they consider that ***
结尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****
②一些精彩亮点连接词 in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore
moreover(另外)
last but not least important ,most important (最重要的是)
worst of all (最糟糕的是),
to make matters wores(更糟的是)
as far as i concerned, personally(我个人看来)
however ,nevertheless(然而)
希望对你学习有用!
参考资料:自己咯~
『叁』 高中英语作文范文:如何准备高考
首先你有一年的时间去自己慢慢探索规律技巧
其次一定要注意书写
再者调查报告、记叙文、议论文、书信、说明文等格式、写作时应注意问题都要在复习过程中慢慢总结
『肆』 高中英语作文题目(可以不要范文!)~急!
有点没懂你的意思 你是要 英语作文的题目?
是不是帮你想几个题目就行
但你又要中文信息是什么意思啊
你网络hi我 我再告诉你
『伍』 高一英语作文写作(120词左右)拜托帮忙了,谢谢
Dear daddy,
Now,love is the only word i can say.How touched i was after i saw the letter written by you.How much you love me!When I was just a baby,you loved me without any reason.You hope me to be a great men like a lion so that i can be brave and successful.Thank you ,daddy.
I am 14 years old and i am a junior school student ,now.i have faced lots of things that is not so easy in society. Maybe i am not as successful as you think.But you know ,I will always be brave enough to face difficulties.
Today is your 50-year-old birthday.i just hope you can always be happy and stay health.I love you.
辛苦了,问题要打这么多字。
现打的,有错误的话还请包涵啊。
『陆』 速求“高中英语作文范文”十篇
高中英语作文复范文写作讲评
......看图作文讲制评8 江苏省石庄高级中学 秦建华 为迎接高考高中作文讲评课,你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。 注意:1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,高中作文讲评教案可以适当增 ...
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『柒』 高一英语作文范文10篇
1.Last Chinese New Year. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to changshan by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,my shoes broke. Dad said to me,“tingting, don’ do anything halfway.”at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept these shoes。i was very happy
dear mike,
haven’t seen you for a long time. how have you been? i am missing you all the time. as the weather is splendid now, i have made a plan to go out to the countryside by bike. each of us may take food for the picnic, which we will have at the hillside. the countryside must be very lovely, with grass and trees growing flourishingly, flowers full bloom and bright sunshine. we can enjoy the scenery to our hearts content, at the same time and take some pictures as a memory. it is possible for us to meet at the bus stop 8 a. m. i am sure we will have a good time. do come and join us.
yours always,
Beijing, the capital of People's Republic of China, the central municipality, National Center City China, Chinese politics, culture, ecation and international exchange center, while the decision-making centers and management centers in China's economy and finance. Beijing is located in the northern end of the North China Plain, southeast connected with Tianjin, the rest is surrounded by Hebei Province. Beijing has built more than 3000 years of history of the capital city and the history of 850 years, is one of "China's four ancient capitals", with some international influence, which first appeared in the literature of the name "thistle." Beijing since the Yuan, Ming blend of Chinese culture, has many historical sites and cultural landscapes, is the world's largest city has the world's cultural heritage. Beijing is also one of the most rainfall in North China region. The historic International Higher university, Peking University, Tsinghua University, also located in Beijing.
Yuan Yuan:
With the calendar torn off, the weather has been hot summer day into the cool of the fall, you and me corporations meet by chance, know not long, but you're moving and righteous people, we hit it off, as has been known to pay, it can be said It is destined, but now far divided in two. Non-vegetation can be ruthless cooked. The thought here, mind quite melancholy, surely you are too it! Two in the afternoon, in Huanggang Huangmei Opera Theater to watch Dream of Red Mansions. We hope arrive
Chinese government reiterated: South China Sea islands are Chinese territory since ancient times, China's South China Sea Islands and adjacent waters has indisputable sovereignty, "will never allow any country under any pretext and in any manner be violated." Insist on sovereignty belongs to me, this is the Chinese government's consistent position is to negotiate a basic prerequisite for China to solve the South China Sea and the South China Sea neighboring countries concerned.
Yesterday, we visited space hotel. We came to the visitors to experience weightlessness room.Seen from the porthole to look beautiful planet once every 45 minutes and the sunrise and sunset, it is a unique experience. In addition, the window around some equipment specially designed for fixed body of tourists. Visitors who do not wear those bulky flight suits and oxygen equipment. Space hotel is really beautiful.
I have a friend named yangyang. Her medium height, shapely, oval face, small eyes but great temperament. She is interested in singing and dancing. She has participated in the city's singing competition, won the first prize. She loves sports, like hiking fitness. She was a helpful person. Once she saw in the street an old lady fell on the road, she was sent to hospital after the old woman propped up their own money to grandma doctor, then quietly leave, even the name was left. Her favorite food is pasta, I always ask her to eat noodles.
Last Saturday, I went to the zoo and parents. That morning, the weather was fine. We decided to go by bike, environmentally friendly and convenient. To the zoo, originally planned with the animals according to a like, a lot of zoo visitors, not the camera. In the afternoon it began to rain, the animals are sleeping. No umbrella, feeling tired and hungry. So we will return home.
Hua southeast of the annual flower fair was a feast, but also a good opportunity for the development of cross-strait agricultural exchanges, sixteenth Strait Flower Expo in November in Zhangzhou City, southeast Hua meet with you, the number of flowers on the square ten kinds of flowers bloom, very spectacular; EAF shop dozen highly ornamental freshwater fish; romantic rose garden four fragrance; and modern agricultural science and technology museum and fantasy Pavilion advanced agricultural technology and fresh proce. Flower Expo held at a time when the harvest season, fans can also spend for good fruit and enjoy all the flowers, never want
In real life, all kinds of extravagance and waste of the phenomenon is still uncommon, the fine tradition of thrift that some people seem to be forgotten. In daily life, the waste phenomenon is shocking. Large shopping malls, supermarkets and other occasions, open air summer wear jackets, winter wear a shirt open air has become a surprising phenomenon. The ubiquitous plastic bags when shopping and disposable supplies; office pulled the curtains open daylight fluorescent power; not after work lights, computers, printers and other office equipment is always in standby mode ...... all kinds of waste common.
Yesterday, we visited space hotel. We came to the visitors to experience weightlessness room.Seen from the porthole to look beautiful planet once every 45 minutes and the sunrise and sunset, it is a unique experience. In addition, the window around some equipment specially designed for fixed body of tourists. Visitors who do not wear those bulky flight suits and oxygen equipment. Space hotel is really beautiful.
Yesterday, we went to the work park with whole school teachers and students.We entered the park to see everywhere full of flowers, the road on both sides by tall Metasequoia. We all appreciate the beauty, she came to the playground. Amusement park roller coaster, bumper cars, carousel, Ferris wheel, pirate ship and so on. We get together enjoyable to play. Finally, we saw a four-dimensional movie. It was a happy and meaningful day.
My father was born in May 1971, is now an accountant. My mother was born in November 1978, is now a teacher. They love life, love outdoor sports, every weekend to take me climbing, let me breathe the fresh air of nature. I am happy and harmonious family, parents courteous.
xinghuatan Park is big and good-looking, where there are many trees, flowers and a Great Lakes. In the middle of the park ,there is a small river before. Middle Creek has a pond with lotus in full bloom, there are many fish enjoy swimming in. Planted with almond trees around the park, a tree covered with sweet fruit. In front of every house loaded with beautiful flowers.
My hometown in shantou. Sand everywhere there before, very desolate.Traffic blocking。 Now ,the railway connecting the capital,there is very beautiful. In the middle of the village there is a small river before. Middle Creek has a pond with lotus in full bloom, there are many fish enjoy swimming in. Planted with almond trees around the village, a tree covered with sweet fruit. In front of every house loaded with beautiful flowers. Happy people live here.
Dear jane,
I’m LiHua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua
My favorite character is Chibi Maruko. Chibi Maruko is a lovely lazy little girl, she has a pair of bright eyes, a small mouth, short hair. Her stature is very short, so people called her little meatball. She is 10 years old, on the third grade. She has many friends, such as jade, Toshiko, Hanawa, Maruo and so on. Her family a total of six people, namely small balls grandfather, grandmother, father, mother and sister. Maruko especially like Grandpa, do not like my father, because my father always said that some small balls did not understand the words. Small balls favorite food burgers, ice cream, pudding, cakes and so on. Small balls sometimes contradictory trouble with your sister, but she was both less than a day and well, really a Ming amazing!
Notice
9:00 tomorrow held in small school each class monitor session;. Staff and students 16:00 see the cinema to see a movie in English; starting at 1:30 pm in the curriculum 。please tell each other .
『捌』 2016山西运城高一期中英语作文范文
书面表达(满分20分)
假设你叫李华,是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信,提到自己偏胖,想节食减肥,征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信,谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下:
1. 健康比漂亮重要
2. 学生以学习为主,不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法
3. 可以通过多锻炼身体来保持健康,要改变不良的饮食习惯 4. 健康的心态也很重要
注意:1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥
2. 词数:100左右 3.参考词汇: state of mind 心态
写作参考
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others’ opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
『玖』 高一英语作文范文
09)全国卷I (1)
假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言,内容如下:1. 外出购物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言:1).咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2).此事已告知Susan .3)尽快回电
范文:Mrs Wilson ,
I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10)全国卷 (2)
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近大学的外籍教师Smith 女生来做评委。请参照以下通知给她写一封信。
英语演讲比赛
主题:人与自然
时间:6月15日下午2:---5:
地点:501教室
参赛选手:10名
联系人:李华(电话44876655)
范文: Dear Ms. Smith ,
I’m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students’ Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11) 全国卷 (3)
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按下列的要求写一封信:1.本人简介 2.求助内容 3.约定时间 4.你的联系方式(Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678)
范文: Dear Sir ,
I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。 内容包括:1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通
范文: Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假设你将参加某英文杂志开展的一次征文活动,内容要求你在电视,手机和网络三者中,放弃其中的一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?” 为题,写一篇短文。
范文: Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there’re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文报社开设了一个专栏:experience . 本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的一些做法。
范文: My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
范文: The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期2个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动 2. 谈谈你们开展活动的收获。
范文:
Boys and girls ,
Today I’ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That’s all. Thank you.
11) 陕西卷 (9)
假定你是李华,在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 (10)
假设你是某中学新老师李红,请给你的朋友张华写封信,告诉他你第一天上课的情景,主要内容如下:1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介绍你处理该事的方式 3.谈谈你的感想
范文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong