『壹』 在老师的帮助下我在英语写作上已经取得了很大进步(in English writing)
With the help of my teacher, I have made much progress in English writing.
『贰』 英语写作~Assignment Writing English
Michael Jackson died of fatal cardiac arrest on June 25th 2009. He was 50 years old.
Jackson was the most well-known idol in the world. Even people who never listen any music know his name.
People always blame Michael Jackson for his plastic surgery, accusations of child catamite and his abnormal personality, but they do not care his lonely sad childhood. Jackson grew up surrounded by famous people and an adoring public. It seems he never enjoyed his childhood like a normal boy. Actually, Jackson is so shy that he shrunk from meeting strangers. So how can we believe the famous Pop star really like his stage career in his childhood? He played the role of others and screw up his tiny courage to face the large audience. Michael Jackson lived in the applause of crowd. Maybe he was accustomed to live with the surround of praise and fame, or he just got addict to the perfect performances of his own. Nevertheless his contribution to music is obvious to all of us.
Jackson started his musical career at the age of 5 and he became a famous singer when he was 8. As the lead singer of the “Jackson 5” who formed in 1964, Jackson established his unsurpassed situation of “King of Pop”. He is one of the most successful artists and 5 of his albums are among the best selling of all time. So when people say he has contributed "absolutely nothing" to society, they are very wrong.
Why Jackson is remembered by us all? It is because not only the wonderful music, the fantastic dance and his character but also his charity.
Michael Jackson is a true humanitarian, an example to us all. He has devoted much time and money to a wide range of charities. He loves children and takes time out to visit sick children. He also has special rooms at his home Neverland for sick and terminally ill children. Neverland Ranch every 3 weeks was open to children to play at the amusement park. Many of these children were sick with things like cancer. Sometimes Jackson would completely pay for their medical costs. He was also listed in the 2000 edition of the Guiness Book Of World Records for breaking the world record for the "Most Charities Supported By a Pop Star". It states that Michael Jackson has supported 39 charity organizations either with monetary donations.
Nobody is perfect. Although Michael Jackson is the god of music, he inevitably receives much attention by media. His privacy was often violated. Eventually he had to live in his own Wonderland like a naive boy. But what he did is still the focus of mass media. When some paparazzi and unprincipled reporters could not find anything of Jackson’ affairs, they overstate his rumor or make up gossip and scandal. I have listened only a few Jackson’s songs, and I am not a fan of MJ. But I am moved by what he want to convey through his songs. His music has touched the souls of millions of people around the world.
『叁』 英语写作：初级词汇和高级词汇，用哪个得分高显而易见
用词越简单越好。如果用得过于频繁，所谓的高级词汇会让人生厌。讲到底，版看你的diction of words 在语法的媒介下怎么使用权。
----- The easier the words, the better the reader feeels about your writing. Used too frequently, the so-called high-class words will get your reader away from your work. Obviously it is the diction of words that are assisted with your grammar that makes your writing pleasant / enjoyable to read.
『肆』 求经典的英语谚语，写作用得上
你看下，不知能否用得上啊！哈哈！祝您学业有成！
1.爱屋及乌 Love me, love my dog.
2.百闻不如一见 Seeing is believing.
3.比上不足比下有余 worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best, but be better than the worst.
4.笨鸟先飞 A slow sparrow should make an early start.
5.不眠之夜 white night
6.不以物喜不以己悲 not pleased by external gains, not saddened by personnal losses
7.不遗余力 spare no effort; go all out; do one's best
8.不打不成交 No discord, no concord.
9.拆东墙补西墙 rob Peter to pay Paul
10.辞旧迎新 bid farewell to the old and usher in the new; ring out the old year and ring in the new
11.大事化小小事化了 try first to make their mistake sound less serious and then to rece it to nothing at all
12.大开眼界 open one's eyes; broaden one's horizon; be an eye-opener
13.国泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace
14.过犹不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough; beyond is as wrong as falling short; too much is as bad as too little
15.功夫不负有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.
16.好了伤疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more
17.好事不出门恶事传千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.
18.和气生财 Harmony brings wealth.
19.活到老学到老 One is never too old to learn.
20.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones
21.金无足赤人无完人 Gold can't be pure and man can't be perfect.
22.金玉满堂 Treasures fill the home.
23.脚踏实地 be down-to-earth
24.脚踩两只船 sit on the fence
25.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal; a hedge between keeps friendship green
26.老生常谈陈词滥调 cut and dried, cliché
27.礼尚往来 Courtesy calls for reciprocity.
28.留得青山在不怕没柴烧 Where there is life, there is hope.
29.马到成功 achieve immediate victory; win instant success
30.名利双收 gain in both fame and wealth
31.茅塞顿开 be suddenly enlightened
32.没有规矩不成方圆 Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 33.每逢佳节倍思亲 On festive occasions more than ever one thinks of one's dear ones far away.It is on the festival occasions when one misses his dear most.
34.谋事在人成事在天 The planning lies with man, the outcome with Heaven. Man proposes, God disposes.
35.弄巧成拙 be too smart by half; Cunning outwits itself
36.拿手好戏 masterpiece
37.赔了夫人又折兵 throw good money after bad
38.抛砖引玉 a modest spur to ince others to come forward with valuable contributions; throw a sprat to catch a whale
39.破釜沉舟 cut off all means of retreat；burn one‘s own way of retreat and be determined to fight to the end
40.抢得先机 take the preemptive opportunities
41.巧妇难为无米之炊 If you have no hand you can't make a fist. One can't make bricks without straw.
42.千里之行始于足下 a thousand-li journey begins with the first step--the highest eminence is to be gained step by step
43.前事不忘后事之师 Past experience, if not forgotten, is a guide for the future. 44.前人栽树后人乘凉 One generation plants the trees in whose shade another generation rests.One sows and another reaps.
45.前怕狼后怕虎 fear the wolf in front and the tiger behind hesitate in doing something
46.强龙难压地头蛇 Even a dragon (from the outside) finds it hard to control a snake in its old haunt - Powerful outsiders can hardly afford to neglect local bullies.
47.强强联手 win-win co-operation
48.瑞雪兆丰年 A timely snow promises a good harvest.
49.人之初性本善 Man's nature at birth is good.
50.人逢喜事精神爽 Joy puts heart into a man.
51.人海战术 huge-crowd strategy
52.世上无难事只要肯攀登 Where there is a will, there is a way.
53.世外桃源 a fictitious land of peace away from the turmoil of the world;
54.死而后已 until my heart stops beating
55.岁岁平安 Peace all year round.
56.上有天堂下有苏杭 Just as there is paradise in heaven, ther are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth
57.塞翁失马焉知非福 Misfortune may be an actual blessing.
58.三十而立 A man should be independent at the age of thirty.At thirty, a man should be able to think for himself.
59.升级换代 updating and upgrading (of procts)
60.四十不惑 Life begins at forty.
61.谁言寸草心报得三春晖 Such kindness of warm sun, can't be repaid by grass. 62.水涨船高 When the river rises, the boat floats high.
63.时不我待Time and tide wait for no man.
64.杀鸡用牛刀break a butterfly on the wheel
65.实事求是seek truth from facts; be practical and realistic; be true to facts
66.说曹操,曹操到Talk of the devil and he comes.
67.实话实说speak the plain truth; call a spade a spade; tell it as it is
68.实践是检验真理的唯一标准Practice is the sole criterion for testing truth.
69.山不在高，有仙则名'No matter how high the mountain is, its name will spread far and wide if there is a fairy; '
70.韬光养晦hide one's capacities and bide one's time
71.糖衣炮弹sugar-coated bullets
72.天有不测风云Anything unexpected may happen. a bolt from the blue
73.团结就是力量Unity is strength.
74.“跳进黄河洗不清”'eve if one jumped into the Yellow River, one can not wash oneself clean--there's nothing one can do to clear one's name '
75.歪风邪气unhealthy practices and evil phenomena
76.物以类聚，人以群分Birds of a feather flock together.
77.往事如风'The past has vanished (from memory) like wind.; What in past, is pas
78.望子成龙hold high hopes for one's child
79.屋漏又逢连阴雨Misfortunes never come singly. When it rains it pours.
80.文韬武略military expertise; military strategy
81.唯利是图draw water to one's mill
82.无源之水,无本之木water without a source, and a tree wiithout roots
83.无中生有make create something out of nothing
84.无风不起浪There are no waves without wind. There's no smoke without fire. 85.徇私枉法bend the law for the benefit of relatives or friends
86.新官上任三把火a new broom sweeps clean
87.虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind.
88. 蓄势而发accumulate strength for a take-off
89.心想事成May all your wish come true
90.心照不宣have a tacit understanding; give tacit consent; tacit understanding 91.先入为主First impressions are firmly entrenched.
92.先下手为强catch the ball before the bound
93.像热锅上的蚂蚁like an ant on a hot pan
94.现身说法warn people by taking oneself as an example
95.息事宁人pour oil on troubled waters
96.喜忧参半mingled hope and fear
97.循序渐进step by step
98.一路平安，一路顺风speed somebody on their way; speed the parting guest
99.严以律己,宽以待人be strict with oneself and lenient towards others
100鱼米之乡
101.有情人终成眷属'Jack shall have Jill, all shall be well.'
102.有钱能使鬼推磨Money makes the mare go. Money talks.
103. 有识之士people of vision
104.有勇无谋use brawn rather than brain
105.有缘千里来相会Separated as we are thousands of miles apart, we come together as if by predestination.
106.与时俱进advance with times
107.以人为本people oriented; people foremost
108.因材施教teach students according to their aptitude
109.欲穷千里目，更上一层楼'to ascend another storey to see a thousand miles further; Ascend further, were you to look farther; Would eye embrace a thousand miles? Go up, one flight.' a land of milk and honey
110.欲速则不达Haste does not bring success.
111. 优胜劣汰survival of the fittest
112.英雄所见略同Great minds think alike.
113.冤家宜解不宜结Better make friends than make enemies.
114.冤假错案'cases in which people were unjustly, falsely or wrongly charged or sentenced; unjust, false or wrong cases'
115.一言既出，驷马难追A real man never goes back on his words.
116.招财进宝Money and treasures will be plentiful
117.债台高筑become debt-ridden
118.致命要害Achilles' heel
119. 众矢之的target of public criticism
120.知己知彼,百战不殆Know the enemy and know yourself, and you can fight a hundred battles with no danger of defeat.
121. 纸上谈兵be an armchair strategist
122.纸包不住火Truth will come to light sooner or later.
123.左右为难between the devil and the deep blue sea
『伍』 英语写作高手请进！
what should we do to prevent AIDS
1 带套抄
2 daitao
3 always wear a condom before having affairs
4 不要吸毒 don't using drugs
6 不要非法卖血 don't selling your blood illegally
7 宣传这些给周围的人 let everybody around you know these
这点东西都写不好 哎。。。
『陆』 英语写作:写奖学金的必背句型
56 .But with low-income students projected to make up an ever-larger share of the college-bound population in coming years，some schools are re-examining whether that aid，typically known as“merit aid”，is the most effective use of precious institutional dollars.
英语四级译文:
但随着接下来几年里低收人家庭的孩子进入大学，在大学生中所占比重越来越大，一些学校开始重新审视这种资助，也就是通常所说的奖学金制度是否能最有效地利用宝贵的教育基金。
四级词汇讲解:
本句的主干是some schools are re-examining...。with low-income students...in coming years作伴随状语;whether引导的从句whether that aid...is the most effective use of precious institutional dollars作re-examining的宾语;过去分词短语typically known as"merit aid”则是对aid进行的补充说明。
merit aid指“优秀奖学金”。
英语四级考点归纳:
美国本科奖学金分为三类:
※ Need-Blind(资金需求无关):此类奖学金的发放一般多为资金实力雄厚的私立大学，他们不考虑学生是否需要学校提供资助，一旦学生符合录取标准，他们会根据学生的家庭情况判断该学生的家庭能够承担多少费用，其余费用全部由学校设法提供。美国的很多私立名牌学校都执行需求无关的政策，例如哈佛大学、普林斯顿大学、耶鲁大学等。
※ Need-Based(资金需求有关):该类奖学金依据学生家庭经济状况提供，主要考虑父母收入、家庭资产、家庭大小和其他因素。
※ Merii-Based(优秀奖学金):此类奖学金一般发放给学业优秀的学生，名额一般很少，而且数额一般不能满足学生的需要，奖学金主要是起表彰作用。
『柒』 珍贵用英语如何表达英语写作,急用!!
这里应该想表达的是稀罕的：
rare/scarce/unique
『捌』 （关于英语写作）Clear opening statement of the point of your paper
of the point of your paper 是来 statement 的后源置定语，of your paper 是 point 嵌套的后置定语，整体意思是 “对你论文的观点的陈述” (从后往前翻译)。
这本身是不完整的句子，可能是 Is it a clear opening statement of the point of your paper？的省略。