『壹』 国外essay补习 学术英语写作注意要点
1、避免使用反问句、设问句。
例如: What’s the objective of the information? Is it to makepeople more confused and astray? I partly agree with theauthor’s contention that the enormous and otiose information sometimes render people lose their way and fail to consider question penetratingly and originally.
在作文的开头就扔出两个问题,然后接下来的陈述却与问题基本毫无干系。作为读者,首先要考虑那两个问题的答案到底是什么,然后才能往下读。这些在中文里可能会被评作“引人入胜”的好词好句,在英语的论文写作里面,可以说是最大的败笔之一。如果同学一定要问问题的话,那就改成陈述句式,例如:Whether this issue is right or wrong? 可以改成:It has been a controversial issue that.....
2、避免集中使用“Be”动词。
避免集中使用"Be"动词,包括is, are, has been, have been, etc.
例如:What is the purpose of ecation? Some people may say that the purpose of ecation should be to create a totally academic environment that separates from the outside world, for,they think, this situation allows students to focus on their academic research work without beingdisturbed by practical concerns. In fact, this suggestion is harmful to the scientific research work.
这是某一篇文章的开头。作者除了要注意不要使用疑问句以外,还有很重要的一点:总共两三句话,出现4个"Be"动词。这种写法,在英语里面被称作"non-act"的动词。"Be" 仅仅表示一种状态,例如:"i am here", "you are there". 对于母语者来说,"Be"动词其实就是写在纸上,而没有任何感情色彩。所以应该尽量避免成篇累牍地使用。留学生们的例子可以改为:
Some people argue that the purpose of ecation lies in its strength in creating a totally academic environment separated from the outside world. They think this situation allows students to focuson academic research by excluding outside disturbance from practical concerns. However, this suggestion in fact does harm to the scientific research work.
留学生们可以看到,使用了lie in, exclude, do harm to以后,句子更有色彩了。
3、避免重复使用单词或者词组。
尽量避免重复使用单词或者词组。特别是近距离集中在某一两句话里使用。
例如:The author argues that to understand one’s own culture, one must know about at leastone another culture which is distinctly different from one’s own culture. While as I am concerned, Ican’t agree with the author’s assertion.
这一个开头,总共两行字,却连续出现了4个One,3个culture。如果同学把这段话大声朗读一下,就会觉得别扭、好笑了。连续使用相同的单词或者词组(包括短句),体现的是作者词汇量匮乏,写作风格较差,遣词造句能力不强。给读者的感觉就是昏昏欲睡。
很容易的留学生们就可以改正:The author argues that the knowledge of another distinctly differentculture helps us to truly understand our own. However, I disagree with this assertion.
这句话把原来的三句分句合成了并无冗长感觉的一句。精简的同时,也恰当地避免了重复多次使用culture,one的问题。用了"this assertion",也避免了在近距离使用两个"author"。
4、避免使用从句套从句的超长句子。
学术性的文章,应当避免追求华丽词藻和句型。作为非母语者,留学生们在语感上面已经处于劣势。为了避免缺乏语感而造成的很多语法上面、句子结构上面的小失误,留学生们更应该尽量避免使用长句。看了很多作者的文章,长句造成的后果通常有:单复数混淆,it、that指代不清,从句两头时态不符,连接介词错误,等等。
例如:Things happened in the past, known as history, is great treasure for us huan beings,through and only through studying the past can we gain valuable experience which serves as ameans of guiding our development of the society.
例子中作者用了3处逗号,而事实上面,从句间关系并非密不可分。留学生们可以很轻松的分成三句话,作者写得安心,读者读得舒心,做到真正的言必达意。
History consists of the things happened in the past and it is a great treasure to human beings.Through and only through studying the past thoroughly can we gain valuable experience fromhistory. The historical experience serves as a means of guidance for the new development in thesociety.
5、避免陈词滥调等废话。
例如:For getting a satisfying score, students have to prepare for and review their textsfrequently, remember all the knowledge they have learned deep in mind, enlarge their learning if itis possible and so on, especially when examinations are coming. All these efforts, no matter whattheir aims are, will surely lead to a corresponding paying back.
段中的这一句"no matter what their aims are",在整个上下文表达上面没有任何实质性的意义,完完全全是句废话。
『贰』 我最近要写英语学术文章,可是写作的时候都需要注意哪些要点
1、避免使用反问句、设问句。特别是作者也没有答案的问题。
例如: What’s the objective of the information? Is it to make people more confused and astray? I partly agree with the author’s contention that the enormous and otiose information sometimes render people lose their way and fail to consider question penetratingly and originally.
在作文的开头就扔出两个问题,然后接下来的陈述却与问题基本毫无干系。作为读者,首先要考虑那两个问题的答案到底是什么,然后才能往下读。这些在中文里可能会被评作“引人入胜”的好词好句,在英语的论文写作里面,可以说是最大的败笔之一。如果你一定要问问题的话,那就改成陈述句式,例如:Whether this issue is right or wrong? 可以改成:It has been a controversial issue that.....
2、避免集中使用"Be"动词,包括is, are, has been, have been, etc.
即使GRE考题statement里面有很多"Be"动词,你也要避免照抄,因为statement是浅显地告诉你一个idea,而不是向你展示writing。
例如:What is the purpose of ecation? Some people may say that the purpose of ecation should be to create a totally academic environment that separates from the outside world, for, they think, this situation allows students to focus on their academic research work without being disturbed by practical concerns. In fact, this suggestion is harmful to the scientific research work.
这是某一篇文章的开头。我们现在只是分析语法问题。作者除了要注意不要使用疑问句以外,还有很重要的一点:总共两三句话,出现4个"Be"动词。这种写法,在英语里面被称作"non-act"的动词。"Be" 仅仅表示一种状态,例如:"i am here", "you are there". 对于母语者来说,"Be"动词其实就是写在纸上,而没有任何感情色彩。所以应该尽量避免成篇累牍地使用。我们的例子可以改为:
Some people argue that the purpose of ecation lies in its strength in creating a totally academic environment separated from the outside world. They think this situation allows students to focus on academic research by excluding outside disturbance from practical concerns. However, this suggestion in fact does harm to the scientific research work.
我们可以看到,使用了lie in, exclude, do harm to以后,句子更有色彩了。
3、尽量避免重复使用单词或者词组。特别是近距离集中在某一两句话里使用。
4、避免使用从句套从句的超长句子。
学术性的文章,应当避免追求华丽词藻和句型。作为非母语者,我们在语感上面已经处于劣势。为了避免缺乏语感而造成的很多语法上面、句子结构上面的小失误,我们更应该尽量避免使用长句。
5、避免陈词滥调等废话
建议您找个专业英语老师进行辅导,听说在奥威斯发展大厦29层就不错。那里在英语写作方面指导的很专业,您不妨去试试。
『叁』 雅思写作学术类第一篇作文一般怎么写
英语学习分为两种,一种是综合英语(General English,也叫生活英语),另一种是学术英语(Academic English)。
生活英语非常好理解,日常生活中的衣食住行,购物旅游时用到的英语都属于生活英语的范畴。
而学术英语则应用在相对正式的场合,比如深层次的交流,课堂学术讨论,演讲,辩论,采访,各种presentation等。
学习学术英语需要建立在一定的综合英语基础上,但从初中阶段开始,学术英语会越来越受重视,一方面中考和高考大量阅读材料都是学术英语范畴,另一方面托福、雅思以及SAT等大量出国必备标化考试的阅读和写作,也在考察孩子的学术英语能力。
学术英语写作要求学生有着优秀的语言能力,同时还要考虑论点论据分析、批判性思考、有效说服等手法的运用。
比如,雅思考试中分析图表的小作文,新SAT考试中对议论文的分析性写作,托福综合作文中的摘要总结,就都属于学术英语。在海外课堂,学术写作的运用领域就更为广泛了。学生一个学期要交5到10份论文,包括读书报告、书评、文献综述、开题报告等各种类型。
尽管学术英语写作对学生的要求很高,但我们也可以看看,从哪些方面入手可以帮助孩子提高。
1大量的读,而且要读最好的材料
在读写部分,阅读是输入,写作是输出,而输入部分包含以下层面:知识背景,思辨模式。
在知识背景的输入方面,中国学生的问题不大,主要缺乏的是思辨模式,如果让一个同学看完一本书后说出这本书里用了哪些思辨模式,包括这一段的功能是什么,跟上一段有什么联系,大部分同学都是不能总结出来的。
建议孩子可以抽空浏览国外的新闻网站,或者下载国外的新闻APP,比如:The New York Times、BBC、The Wall Street Journal、Economist等(其中一些app可能需要翻墙才能阅读哦)。注意要挑孩子感兴趣的话题,如果文中包含太多术语,孩子不仅看不懂,也会觉得枯燥无味。另外,感兴趣的话题可能还会激发孩子自觉地去查字典,增加词汇量。
2有意识地储备背景知识
年纪比较小的同学平时看书看得较少,所以对社会话题的了解非常浅,经常说“这件事情我喜欢,那件事情我不喜欢”。
但是,喜欢与不喜欢是不可以写到学术写作当中去的,除非能给出非常明确的理由。比如,说清楚我不喜欢这件事的三点原因,并且每一点原因都有足够的证据支撑。
所以,建议学生在平时生活中,适当浏览社科类杂志,将一些能够作为论据的材料记录下来,扩大自己的背景知识储备。这样,在写作时才能做到有理有据。
3大量写作,训练清晰表达和严谨逻辑
很多同学看了很多书,也背了很多单词,但平时一个字都不写,觉得上考场写就行了,这样是不对的。
平时应该大量的写,并且批改。日记、新闻总结及评论、书评/章评、文章评论等这些类型的文章都能写。主要是要发表自己的看法,还可以跟家长讨论,不管用中文还是英文讨论,都对写作有好处。
不停地写完后就是不停地改,训练个性化的行文风格和表达逻辑,写作就是这么提高的,不是套用一个框架就够了。一般来说,修改三到四稿后,才能说这篇作文已经写好了。
『肆』 你认为你的大学学术氛围怎么样英语作文
1.背课文和参考例文.每次考试后老师因该会把考试作文的范文抄出来,自己抄回下来,能背下来最好,不行答也要熟读.课文就不用说了,每篇至少要读5遍.
2.背单词.我这里说的单词不仅仅是指课本上的单词,要尽量加大自己的词汇量,所选单词的最好出处是平时所做的阅读和完形,每天背上几个自己感觉高级德词汇.有时,同一个意思,词用的好可以添不少彩(例如说大可以用big,large,huge,但很明显用后两个效果要好于第一个)
3.记住典型文章的格式.目前高考的英语作文以应用文为主,记住应用文的一些基本格式是保证分数的关键(例如写书信开头就可以来上一句I'm writing to tell you something about....).
『伍』 学术英语写作中需要引用common knowledge吗
学术英语写作就像写论文,怎么可以和普通作文相提并论。学术英语回写作具有更强的严谨性,答如果说用常识去写作会显得不够严谨因此必须用专业的对你所在的专业上的知识的理解进行词汇、句型、格式的选择。最好对专业方面具有一定程度的理解后再去写。你最好写草稿。切记不可马虎对待,同时最好要有数据、专业理论等去支持你的观点。记住,英语写作最忌讳的就是千篇一律,不可盲目套用格式套用其他不符合论文的措辞以及不可盲目套用其他非论文文体去写作。每一种英文文体都有其固定的用词、写作逻辑思路。
『陆』 英语作文题目为我的学术研究计划
《我的新学计划》的英语内作容文
After a happy summer holiday,another new term comes again.So I should have a study plan to improve myself.First,I will finish my homework more carefully than before and pay more attention to the knowledge which I do not understand.Secondly,I will do lots of reading to widen myself,and try to combine theory to practice.Finally,I will learn to be more positive and helpful.THat's what I plan to do in the new term.
『柒』 英语对中国学术的作用作文
好的开端是成功的一半”。开头在文章中的作用十分重要。它能提炼中心,完整结版构,吸引读者权。它能使文章锦上添花,令阅卷者倦处生神。这种说法并不夸张。因此,作文时多花费点时间、多动点脑筋,写个好的开头,是十分必要的。请看来自中考满分作文的精彩开头:
1.落笔入题,总领全篇
例1.小时候,对印在连环画、贺卡上那些“挥着翅膀的孩子——天使”爱得痴迷。那纯洁的,绒棉似的白翅膀是一切美好的象征,它装饰着我儿时的梦。(重庆满分文《白翅膀装饰着我的梦……》开头)
这篇文章一开头就交代自己喜欢白翅膀,并用“它装饰着我儿时的梦”既照应文题,又领起下文。这种开头能给人干脆利落,入题快捷,不枝不蔓的感觉。应为考场作文开头的首选方法。
2.序引题记,醒人耳目
例2.叶子,是不会飞翔的翅膀;翅膀,是落在天上的叶子。(重庆满分文《翅膀,落在天上的叶子》题记)
『捌』 关于好书推荐的英语作文_百度学术
you tried of selecting thousends of books in the huge book store?
Do you want to be successful in communicating in english?
now,just look at this book:,<how American people say english everyday>
it not only give you the most popular slang,but provide the background information.
no matter the english standerd you are now, you surely can use it,for the content is simple and fresh,even if you are a excellent speaker of english,you still can learn lots of helpful idiom or the American value,and this will help you understand the other phrese better.
besides,togerther with the book,are two useful cds which help you listen how their speaker say,actually, you know,there are lots of prouncation skills in American english ,if you can say them beautifully,eveyone will definatly admaire your english.How fantastic !
well,to sum up ,i just want to call on all the students,just pay more attention on your prouncation and usage of english,that is the best way and only way to better your english,why not?
the book and practise,that is perfect!
now ,everybody,just open up your mouth,open up your mind,open up your soul,to learn english,esp.spoken english!
『玖』 一篇学术英语特点的英语作文
The English language, we know, till today has a history of about six hundred years. For half that time, English was just the language of the English living in England. The modern English language grew by about the year 1400. Many words were borrowed from French such as salon, madam and German such as wagon. As people from Europe traveled outside Europe, European languages began to be used in other parts of the world.
Today in the world, more than one billion of people speak English. Generally the English-speaking countries can be divided into three groups. The first group are those countries with English as their mother tongue, such as England, America, Canada, Australia, New Zealand. The second group are those bilingual countries or areas, with English as one of the two official languages, such as Hong Kong, Singapore, India, Nigeria. The third group are those which use English as a very important language in communication with other countries, such as China, Japan, Thailand. ii. Englishes with Local colors
So English is an international language. Its spread is followed with the expansion of English colonization since 300 or 400 years ago. When the English language was taken to the colonies, it would be influenced more or less by the native culture and society. It was changed and formed different Englishes. For example, in Australian English, there are some special vocabulary, such as paddock (草地), kangaroo, dingo (澳洲野狗). And there are the differences in pronunciations. For example, Australian English’s pronunciation of the sentence “Today is Friday” sounds like “To die is fry die”.
But at present the most popular Englishes are British English and American English. Till now there are one billion people speaking British English and 240 million people speak American English. Canada and America are both American-English-speaking countries.
『拾』 学术气氛英语作文
再往后,从“一个多情的水手与一个多情的妇人”到“历史是一条河”,你会了内解到,水手和拉船容人拿着少得可怜的收入,却干着辛苦且随时有生命危险的行船行当。冬日三九,天再冷,船遇险时照样往下跳,行船过程中,船遇上险滩,河水再凶猛也得冒着生命危险下水护船,十年如一日。而即使这样,这些水手和拉船人却从不曾失去应有的勇敢和努力。而吊脚楼上妇人,多半因为这个社会的黑暗,以及家庭生计的原因沦落为妓女,而即使这样,她们依旧不失去那一份质朴和可爱,以及那一份对生活的纯真希望。