⑴ 如何复习中考英语的初级写作
最基本的一条,跟汉语作文一样,“书读百遍,其义自见”。英文更是如此。多背诵课文和一些有趣的小文章,对语感的形成很有帮助呢。
可以边背诵边由易到难复习课本和练习中的写作题目。
不管写什么作文 ,脑子里先有个大概的思路。也就是说,不能想一句挤一句。
比如说,写关于健康生活方式的作文,一般从饮食,锻炼和休息三方面写。脑子里先有了这三个方面,再根据自己的词汇量和对文章的理解去补充。 再比如写人们的生活变化,那首先要考虑这里有个前后对比,然后再考虑从哪几个方面去对比——无非是衣食住行四方面,当然想到更多的,更好啦 O(∩_∩)O~。再比如写污染问题,至少要想到空气污染,固体废弃物污染和水污染,噪音污染这几个方面。然后就这几个方面出现的问题简单分析,再阐明应对措施。
总之一句话,就是先有框架,再有内容。就象画一棵树一样,不是先画叶子和果实,是先画树干和枝条。 还象画一个人,先勾勒基本骨架线条,再填充肌肉。
英语起码要保证语法和词汇的准确性——词性用对了没有?名词需要复数加了没?动词的单三形式有没有体现?……等等。 句子首字母大写了吗?后面的标点加了没有?牵涉到并列的三个以上的事物,前两个用逗号隔开,最后的用and连接,这些都注意了吗?
好希望你进步的 ↖(^ω^)↗ 加油啦·~~
⑵ 中考英语复习资料 作文 课件
1)常见的体裁有:记叙文、描写文、说明文和应用文(包括书信、日记、通知、便条、贺卡、启事、电话留言条)等。
(2)题材与生活实际紧密联系,并关注社会焦点、热点问题,体现人文关怀。
(3)注重情境设计。书面表达中所设计的情景密切联系现实生活,写作题材源于生活,使学生有话可说,有利于学生写出真情实感,也有利于学生主动性、创造性的发挥。
(4)内容要点清楚,表达形式多样,为学生提供更自由的发挥空间。
预计2015年中考对书面表达的考查难度会稍有加大,文体以应用作文为主,话题作文和看图作文将有增加的趋势;内容会更加广泛,贴近社会生活。
⑶ 如何复习备考中考英语作文12
要大量阅读英文版的世界名著,积累优美的句子,培养水到渠成的回文感,最好把一答些漂亮的句子摘抄下来随时诵读,在平时写作中养成将这些句子运用进文章的好习惯。可以练习用英语写日记、诗歌,甚至写小说,写完以后给英语老师欣赏并完善,或者如果有老外笔友更好,遇到不知道的词汇,可以在网上搜索或者借助汉英词典查询。内容风格要中规中矩,写作功底牢靠的考生可以多用复合句式,对语法掌握得不是很熟练的考生则宁可多用短句,也不要硬撑着用复合句式,以免暴露语病。
⑷ 中考英语复习资料,写作为主
一、善于思考 勤于积累
要想在中考作文中拿到高分,这需要考生在日常生活中善于观察,不能两耳不闻窗外事,而应积极关注当今社会热点,如人口问题、污染问题、世界和平等一系列现象;要善于思考,勤于把自己的思想用英语正确地表达和记录下来,只有通过不断的积累和磨练,才能练就良好的写作基本功。建议大家在考前把今年的相关重点问题,热点问题回顾一下。积累一些相关词汇,有备无患。
二、认真审题 写好提纲
考生在拿到试卷之后,当听力题做完,可以先看一看作文的题目与类型,对它有一个大致的印象和准备,在做语法和阅读题时对自己的作文能有一个初步的构思。应尽可能地留出20分钟的时间来写作文。在正式写作文时,可参照以下步骤:
1、认真审题,确定题目中的关键词。
2、展开一次“Brain Storm”即头脑风暴,对该题引申出各种联想和论点。
3、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。
4、确定基本的写作时态,如记叙文通常用一般过去时。(时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因。)
5、对于有能力的同学,注意不能通篇均用简单句型,可适当引入初中的语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。
6、当整篇作文写完,一定要进行仔细的检查,注意使句子流畅,时态运用准确,单词拼写正确,冠词运用正确,名词的大小写正确。
下面,我们来针对中考作文题型和例文进行评析。
中考作文题型分析与例文评析
命题作文即给出一个统一的题目,限定考生写作的具体范围,要求考生就同一主题展开叙述或评论。写好命题作文的关键是紧扣主题、立意明确、观点清晰。
一、命题作文
〔例1〕To be a lovely Shanghainese(2003年上海市英语中考题)
审题:该题的重点在于阐述作为一个可爱的上海人,我们关键应怎样做?在2003年的考生作文中,有一部分同学发生了严重的偏题,把描述重点放在形容上海是怎样的一个大都市,因此失分很多。由此看来,审题的准确是非常重要的。
学生作文:Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our enthusiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch.
教师评析:该篇作文行文流畅,结构清晰,以“first,Next,Finally”的结构描述,层次感很强。不定式的恰当运用体现了考生较好的语法功底。
教师拟评分:9分
〔例2〕Four years' school life
审题:该题要求考生对四年的初中生活进行回顾和总结,适合以夹叙夹议的方式来写作。(此外,从情感教育的角度来看,阅卷老师总希望读到考生回忆自己美好、快乐的初中生活,而不是讨厌自己的母校、老师、同学等消极情绪的体现。)
学生作文:I've been in my middle school for four years. Four years' school life plays an important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting knowledge and having interesting time in my school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. I have grown up a lot in the past four years. I will never forget my four years' school life.
教师评析:整篇作文非常明快、流畅,体现了考生对母校依依不舍的情怀。由于是对初中生活的回顾和总结,考生恰当地选择以现在完成时作为主要的时态来强调影响和结果,文中"plays an important role"这一词组和被动语态的正确运用也体现了考生良好的词汇和语法功底。
教师拟评分:10分
二、应用文写作
应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式,它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容,还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写,这也是考生对于英语传统文化了解多少的反映。因此,考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及打电话的规范用语,以做到处变不惊、百战百胜。
〔例3〕写一封信给你在云南省西双版纳市的笔友李帆,告诉他你很愿意与他交朋友,并邀请他到上海来旅行。
审题:该题要求考生以规范的信件格式来书写,并把题中所出现的信息点都涵概在内。建议考生可把题目中的信息点都一一划出,以免发生遗漏。
学生作文:
Lifan
Xishuangbanna
Yunnan Province China
May 25th, 2004
Dear Lifan,
Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai? I'd like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road Walkway.
If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Let's be best friends!
Yours sincerely,
Xiaomin
教师拟评分:9分
〔例4〕写一篇题为“A Visit To_____”的日记。
审题:该题为半命题式作文。考生除了要注意运用正确的日记格式,还可根据自己的经验和熟悉程度来选择、确定文章的主题.
学生作文:
May 25th, 2004 sunny
A Visit To Jinmao Building
Jinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today.
The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and you will get some unexpected gains there.
教师评析:整篇作文主题明确,对于金茂大厦的描述也较具体,文中“the signal construction”一词是全文的亮点。但整篇文章的层次不够清晰,句子也以简单句为主,对于参观这一动词的阐述还不够充分。
教师拟评分:8分
三、看图写话
看图写话是初中英语作文常考的一种形式,但随着牛津版教材的大量应用,学生的写作能力有了较大的提高,因此中考作文的要求和难度也相应提高。所以,在中考作文中继续出现简单的叙事型看图写话的可能性很小,但有可能会提供给考生一些具有寓意的漫画或图片,要求考生从中发现问题、提出自己的观点,这对考生的逻辑思维能力和英语语言的娴熟运用都提出了更高的要求。
审题:这幅漫画蕴涵了一个深刻的主题即战争与和平,这与当今世界的热点问题密切相关,它不仅考核考生是否能流畅地表达自己的观点,更需要考生站在人文关怀的高度来观察整个世界。
学生作文:
A Represent of Freedom and Peace
Almost everyday we can see there are always a huge number of pigeons enjoying the sunbath in some large squares, but do you often care what a white pigeon stands for? That is peace. For hundreds of years, people always regard pigeons as a represent of freedom and peace. That is because of not only its lovely pure figure, but also its great passion to the outside world. Till now, I still can't help thinking of such a picture: In Iraq, a boy was watching a white pigeon over his head. The background was full of wounded solders and guns. Thus, this lovely white pigeon was contrastive to this iced background and gave people a deep consideration. Suddenly, athought comes into my mind: Why there have been so many wars in the world just for someone's own interest? Why can't people live like as mall pigeon with freedom? I hope there will not be wars, FOREVER!
教师评析:应该说,要把这篇看图作文写好是有相当难度的,但考生以非常流畅的笔调从鸽子联想到自由与和平,再联想到发生在伊拉克的战争。文风成熟老练,这在初中生的作文中是难能可贵的。
教师拟评分:10分
〔例6〕审题:该图要求考生先看懂漫画,对它进行清晰的描述,同时根据其隐藏的寓意提出自己的观点,如在此图中应关注树木被砍伐而提出环保的重要性。
学生作文:
Seeing this picture, we know that these trees have been cut down. But as a very little baby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What are these? Are these trees? Of course, in our imagination, trees must be tall, strong and green enough. Actually, his question shows humans a problem that is worth thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in the world has kept decreasing these years and it caused a lot of problems on environment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They can make the air fresher, rece natural disasters and soon. So I appeal: Don't cut down trees. Let' s make our earth greener for our later generation. Don't let the children think trees are only roots!
教师评析:整篇作文结构清晰,全文分三段,第一段详细地描述漫画的内容;第二段阐述其蕴涵的寓意即环保对于世界和后代们的重要性;第三段提出作者的号召,使文章的结尾明快、有力!
教师拟评分:10分
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70% 都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
写作绝招
结尾万能公式:
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之 ”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2 . 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作绝招
写作的“七项基本原则”:
一、 长 短 句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主 题 句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1) first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间, general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加 and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
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Olympics
The 2008 Olympics is coming. Everyone is excited about it.Well,as students,what can we do for the Olympics.In fact,there are so many things we can do if we are willing to.Here are some examples:
First,study English hard so that when we meet foreigners we can show the best side of us Chineses.We can offer to help the guests from all over the world!
Second,we should take an active part in various activities held by our school, like giving out posters and going to comunities to teach English for Olympics
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About the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster
As if the nature went out of its way to trouble and challenge Chinese,when Olympics coming,two big disasters have occoured in China this year--the Earthquake and the snowstorm disaster.We saw so many people suffered a lot.During these days,we also see a lot things moving and poor.What should we learn from all these?And what can we do ?
First,we must study hard and cherish all we have now,we have seen many poor people are even starving!
Second,we should not waste anymore.We can save pocket money for the sufferers to help them out of trouble.
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The environment
Nowadays,our life has become better and better.High buildings stand up,and private cars are more and more.While we enjoy all of these,however,shouldn't we pay attention to the nature?
We have seen so much pollution,such as air pollution\water pollution and white pollution.The CO2increasing causes the global warming.Scientists are even worrying whether we can live on the poor earth for another 50 years.
We must take actions from now!
We must plant trees.Trees are our friends,and they can change co2 to o2.They can also prevent big sandstrom.
We must give up using plastic bags.These days the government has banned free plastic bags ,too.We should just follow the rules.Plastic bags are difficult to be decomposed.
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