增加高考英语写作亮点

㈠ 高考英语写作，如何提升文章亮点

要想把一篇文章写好，不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，以增加文章的亮点，给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧设开头和结尾

1．开头

常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各异，但又有其共同遵循的原则：

开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要

开头常能展示文章的主题

开头应能抓住读者的注意力，引导读者读下去。

用于文章开头的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．结尾

结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。

用于文章结尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准确地道的英美式表达

1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异

a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)

a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)

2．恰当使用限定词

用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意词语的习惯搭配

用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义，还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配，一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口语化

高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体，因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免赘言啰嗦

赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只需要一两个词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表达结构

1．变简单句为并列句或复合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．语态互换

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．语序调整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．强调句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感叹及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．语气虚拟

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非谓语动词的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入语

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)No pains，no gains.不劳无获。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

11．句式调换

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

㈡ 高考英语作文怎么合理扩展写作要点

1. 把字给我写好!!!

就是所谓的“第一印象”，至关重要，这决定了你的作文档。阅卷老师阅卷时首先给你的作文定档，如满分25分，一档20-25，二档15-20，以此类推。想拿高分必须保证自己的作文在一档。

试想你的字老师都看不懂，给你三档就不错了。这个楼上有图有真相，我就不赘述了，字写得不好看也没关系，一笔一画写清楚。切记别写花体，反正我是看不懂的，老师愿不愿意看我就不知道了。

2. 结构清晰

简而言之就是段落清楚，我的建议是三段式，第一段写现象，第二段写方法，第三段写总结。大概就是这样一个模式，随便翻一个高考例文就差不多这样。

全文必须有清晰的连词和介词，比如however，moreover，more importantly;to begin
with，further-more 。总结用to conclude，generally speaking等等。

3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮点词句

这个问题我之前回答过，高考英语作文该怎样做好积累呢? 也是我的经验之谈，全靠这个拿高分。

有人私信我要我再补充几个亮点句式和词组，在这里满足一下。

it is vital for us to do ……

……is nothing but wasting time

prevail among

broaden sb‘s horizon

……is groundless

It’s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……

there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon

就说这么多，只要自己用心积累，考试的时候必然不愁词用。不过请务必弄清这些句式或词组的准确用法。

4. 几个重要的注意事项

请不要使用同一个词超过3遍!学会变词，比如要重复表示"下降"，请不要写三四个“drop”，学会用decrease，descend，go
down，fall，decline。

绝对不能出现拼写错误，时态错误，单复数错误。想从一档变成二档，请出错。请不要忘记三单动词加s。请保持文章所用时态合理的一致。

不断的变换句式。被动句，强调句等变换着使用，尝试用虚拟语气等多种时态。前提是合理，不要把自己搞糊涂了。

㈢ 高考英语作文常用亮点句型有哪些

1.Nothing is + er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive ecation。
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
2.can not emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much
(再怎么强调.。。的重要性也不为过。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
3.There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的……)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad toworse。
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
4.It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道……)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
5.There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的……)
例句：There is no doubt that our ecational system leaves something to bedesired。
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
6.An advantage of is that + 句子(……的优点是……)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(proce) any pollution。
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

㈣ 高考英语作文亮点短语

就我而言：as far as i concerned
briefly/ in brief 总之
yaccident偶然
onaccountof…因为…，由于…
inadditionto…除…之外
on(the/an)average平均，一般来说
onthebasisof…根据…，在…的基础上
at(the)best充其量，至多
onbusiness因公，因事
inanycase无论如何，总之
incaseof…假使…，万一…incase假如，以防(万一)免得
innocase决不
keep/holdpacewith…跟上…，与…同步
takeplace发生，进行
taketheplaceof…代替…
makesense讲得通，有意义
agreat/gooddealof大量(修饰不可数名词)
influenceon影响
replyto…回答…，答复…
onceuponatime从前onceinawhile偶尔，有时
accountfor…说明…
allowfor…考虑到…
liveon/by…靠…生活，以…为食
referto…参考…，查阅…，涉及…，提到…
serveas…用做…
takefor把……认为是…，把……看成是…
thinkover仔细考虑
dependon…取决于…
devoteto…奉献…，致力于…
engagein…从事于…，忙着

㈤ 如何增加英语作文亮点

加入经典语句，好词好句

㈥ 怎样使英语作文有亮点

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。

㈦ 关于提高高中学生英语写作能力的几点看法

1. 把字给我写好！！！
就是所谓的“第一印象”，至关重要，这决定了你的作文档。阅卷老师阅卷时首先给你的作文定档，如满分25分，一档20-25，二档15-20，以此类推。想拿高分必须保证自己的作文在一档。
试想你的字老师都看不懂，给你三档就不错了。这个楼上有图有真相，我就不赘述了，字写得不好看也没关系，一笔一画写清楚。切记别写花体，反正我是看不懂的，老师愿不愿意看我就不知道了。
2. 结构清晰
简而言之就是段落清楚，我的建议是三段式，第一段写现象，第二段写方法，第三段写总结。大概就是这样一个模式，随便翻一个高考例文就差不多这样。
全文必须有清晰的连词和介词，比如however，moreover，more importantly；to begin with，further-more 。总结用to conclude，generally speaking等等。
3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮点词句
这个问题我之前回答过，高考英语作文该怎样做好积累呢？ 也是我的经验之谈，全靠这个拿高分。
有人私信我要我再补充几个亮点句式和词组，在这里满足一下。
it is vital for us to do ……
……is nothing but wasting time
prevail among
broaden sb‘s horizon
……is groundless
It’s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……
there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon
就说这么多，只要自己用心积累，考试的时候必然不愁词用。不过请务必弄清这些句式或词组的准确用法。
4. 几个重要的注意事项
请不要使用同一个词超过3遍！学会变词，比如要重复表示"下降"，请不要写三四个“drop”，学会用decrease，descend，go down，fall，decline。
绝对不能出现拼写错误，时态错误，单复数错误。想从一档变成二档，请出错。请不要忘记三单动词加s。请保持文章所用时态合理的一致。
不断的变换句式。被动句，强调句等变换着使用，尝试用虚拟语气等多种时态。前提是合理，不要把自己搞糊涂了。
请平时做好积累，考试时直接套用。
希望能帮助到你，望采纳！

㈧ 求：高考英语作文亮点句型

1.It was not until I failed to pass the exam that I realized only
by making every effort to prepare it can one improve his grades.
直到考试失败,我才意识到只有全力做好准备,才能专提高成绩属一百字

㈨ 高中英语作文中常用哪些可以加分，有亮点

一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分：
Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.
正文部分：
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分：
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all.Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...（导入话题）
Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）
Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段：However,the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）
Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,for it will do us more harm than good,so I support it.（个人观点） オ
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板：
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others,however,argue that B is much better.Personally,I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that ...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段:Of course,B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)
结论：
第4段:But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ
3.观点论述类议论文模板：
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student,I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）
The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（过渡句,承上启下）
正文：
第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论：
第3段：In conclusion,I believe that...（照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构）
4."How to"类议论文模板：
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem,but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is ...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 .This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 .After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化,the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) .The figures also tell us that图表细节二 .In the column,we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that (结论).The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因)./ It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、图画类写作模板：
1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture,we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know,.../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...