⑴ 什么是高考英语写作内容的扩展方向
满意回答 上面各位的回答都不错,我给你找的是专门针对考研用的,因为看你的年纪应该不是为了考四六级这么简单了吧。
写作是语言的重要环节,看看英语考试中对作文的重视就明白了。在考研中,写作意义极其重大,其性价比(即投入的时间和提高的幅度)非常高,在我看来,如果你的阅读水平还可以的话,写作将是你的突破口。
提高写作只有一个字——“恒”,绝对的熟能生巧。我在网上看过高手写的文章,简直可以用恐怖来形容,完全是阅读理解的水平,而作者的诀窍就是每天写每天练!只要不断的写不断的改,你的文章会让你自己吃惊。套用一句:写作恒久远,练习永流传。
然而备考的时间是很紧的,不可能每天保持大量的练习,好在其要求也不高,从现在开始,到考前完全可以达到要求,但千万不要间断!很多同学都有一个情况,越不写,越怕写;越怕写,越不写。万事开头难,所以开始的练习尤为重要,而练习应以词句为主+阅读好文章,我就有一本记录本,专门收集好的词句,效果很好。这里列其中一些较简单实用的,希望能对大家有所帮助(不过,建议同学们最好自己写,自己收集,印象会深很多,每天花10分钟过过,绝对值得。另外,我列的句子很有限,多半是骨架,大家要学会扩展,并且在记忆的时候多联想一下。举例来说,一篇你的文章,用心改一下,好好套用几个句式,改些档次较高的词和词组,可以提高不少哦):
一. 总结句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ,both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二. 开首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I’m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三. 并列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what’s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四. 转折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***’s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(尽管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn’t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五. 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六. 强调句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It’s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七. 图表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短语:made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外,文章结尾也很重要,它的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:
1.首尾呼应,画龙点睛
在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的结尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2.重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然结尾
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4.含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾:
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5.用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,并具有特别的强调作用,引起读者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?
6.指明方向,激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望,或期待读者投入行动。如“Let’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾:
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.
文章的结尾没有一定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是,一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语,以便使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。赞同9| 评论
⑵ 高考英语写作中如何把要点写全 且有细节支撑有什么技巧吗可以按题型题材分类回答
高考英语作复文主要得分点有三个制:1、书写;2、内容扣题;3、段乱分布与衔接。
根据你的问题,我就讲一下第二点吧。要想把要点写全其实很简单,一般高考作文的题目中都会给你用1234分条的线索,比如某某某来信,你要给他回信,然后题目会说你1、要告诉他什么什么;2、要安慰她之类;3、告诉他如果你是他你怎么办……之类你就可以按顺序,把提示的话翻译成英语(注意套几个老师给的经典的句型,别一味的用简单句,显得很没水平,定语从句是最屡试不爽的句型),按照题目给的顺序给出来列出来就好了,这样这篇文章就差不多有了四分之一到三分之一的字数,而且绝对扣题,这样的文章十三分保底。然后在每一条的后面,再添几句自己的话,这个也是很容易的,顿时就有了细节,这样就拿到大约十五到十七分了。然后只要书写和段落分布不出问题,二十分到二十三分应该不是问题。
⑶ 高考英语写作,如何提升文章亮点
要想把一篇文章写好,不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等,还要对文章进行润色,尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式,以增加文章的亮点,给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。
一、巧设开头和结尾
1.开头
常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格,不能千篇一律,要因不同文章的需要而各异,但又有其共同遵循的原则:
开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要
开头常能展示文章的主题
开头应能抓住读者的注意力,引导读者读下去。
用于文章开头的句型有:
(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...;Those who object to...argue that...;They believe that...;But people who favor...,on the other hand,argue that...
(2)Faced with...,quite a few people argue that...;But other people conceive differently.
(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...
(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...
(5)Now it is commonly held that...;But I doubt whether...
(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.
(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.
(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...
(9)There is no denying/doubt that...
2.结尾
结尾的方法有很多,如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。
结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳,也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣,深化主题,给人回味,引人深思。
用于文章结尾的句型有:
(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...
(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...
(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...
(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...,but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.
(7) There is little doubt/denying that...
(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.
(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
(10) In conclusion,...
(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...
(12) Personally,I prefer to...
(13) In short,...should learn to...;Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
(14) As far as I am concerned,I agree with the opinion that...
二、准确地道的英美式表达
1.注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异
a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)
a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)
2.恰当使用限定词
用词准确,从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度,这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词,以避免观点的绝对化,从而提高说服力和可信度。
He is the top student in our class.
He is one of the top students in our class.
3.注意词语的习惯搭配
用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义,还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配,一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。
Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)
Nobody is to blame for it.(T)
4.避免口语化
高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体,因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。
This is the best hotel you can find here.
You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.
5.避免赘言啰嗦
赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想,本来只需要一两个词,却用了冗长的词组或者从句,如repeat again,return back,still remain,very perfect等。
三、提升表达结构
1.变简单句为并列句或复合句
Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.
2.借用关键词汇(介词,不定式等)压缩句子长度,提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom,a bathroom,and a kitchen in it.
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.
3.语态互换
Someone saw him studying hard in his study.
He was seen studying hard in his study.
4.语序调整
The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.
Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.
5.强调句式
You must write to me when you get there.
Do remember to write to me when you get there.
6.感叹及省略
Time flies like an arrow.
How time flies!
Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.
Look out for cars when crossing the street.
7.语气虚拟
You didn't take my advice,so you failed in the exam.
If you had taken my advice,you wouldn't have failed in the exam.
8.非谓语动词的使用
They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
Singing and laughing,they went back to school.
9.插入语
I think the book is well worth reading.
The book,in my opinion,is well worth reading.
10.格言警句的套用
(1)Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。
(3)No pains,no gains.不劳无获。
(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。
(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。
(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
11.句式调换
He came here at 5 pm yesterday.
He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.
Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.
⑷ 高考英语作文中,不给要点,只给作文提纲,要自己填充内容的是什么类型的作文,要怎么写
英语作文类型:一般都是议论文,一部分是记叙文。有对比,图表,文字提示等类型。
应对策略:1.用较高级词汇替换第一反应词:
在写作的过程中,很多考生习惯第一反应想到哪个单词就使用哪个单词,比如谈到“好”就是good,而第一反应词往往是比较简单的,甚至不适合书面语言,所以千万别一想到某个简单而顺手的词就立刻下笔,而是思考它的同义词。思考后考生会得到4到5个同义词,这里的任意一个词都可能会比你想的第一个词复杂些。通常考生想到的第一个词是平时使用较多的词,也是比较简单表意比较笼统的词,所以放在口语中使用更加适合,而写作用词最好用书面词汇,并且书面词汇会比起第一反应词的笼统,表意更加具有指向性,进而可以使文章语言更具生动和真实性。
2.学会用多个同义英语词汇表达一个中文意思
在中文中习惯“求同不求异”,所以我们习惯用同一个词来强调某一个概念,而在英文中正相反----“求异不求同”,所以就要学会用不同的词来表示同一个概念。比如:好的:就可以用positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good。
3.句型要尽可能多样化
高考英语写作其实就是一个“SHOW",你要在短短几十分钟内秀出你学了十几年的英语就要学会尽可能地多使用自己会的句型和语法知识。尤其是在作文中非常好用的“非限定性定语从句”“时间状语从句”等等。
4.连接词要常用
要想让自己的文章行文顺畅,逻辑合理,就要学会使用起到各种作用的连接词。
5.字要尽可能公整
毕竟这是应试作文,判卷时间是很有限的,所以在很大程度上,文章的“外在形象”非常重要,因为我们留给阅卷老师的“印象”极为重要,所以就要让你的字尽可能工整~
⑸ 高考英语写作技巧
1.尽量来用短句,避免长句。自
2.多用高级词汇,避免误用。
3.字迹清晰,尤其注意要工整,不能涂改,有时间最好打草稿。
4.多留意范文的开头与结尾。注意借鉴
5.注意总结,对各种类型的文章最好能背上一二篇范文。
(这是我的亲身经验!)
(我今年高考英语作文应该只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功)
⑹ 高考英语作文怎么合理扩展写作要点
1. 把字给我写好!!!
就是所谓的“第一印象”,至关重要,这决定了你的作文档。阅卷老师阅卷时首先给你的作文定档,如满分25分,一档20-25,二档15-20,以此类推。想拿高分必须保证自己的作文在一档。
试想你的字老师都看不懂,给你三档就不错了。这个楼上有图有真相,我就不赘述了,字写得不好看也没关系,一笔一画写清楚。切记别写花体,反正我是看不懂的,老师愿不愿意看我就不知道了。
2. 结构清晰
简而言之就是段落清楚,我的建议是三段式,第一段写现象,第二段写方法,第三段写总结。大概就是这样一个模式,随便翻一个高考例文就差不多这样。
全文必须有清晰的连词和介词,比如however,moreover,more importantly;to begin
with,further-more 。总结用to conclude,generally speaking等等。
3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮点词句
这个问题我之前回答过,高考英语作文该怎样做好积累呢? 也是我的经验之谈,全靠这个拿高分。
有人私信我要我再补充几个亮点句式和词组,在这里满足一下。
it is vital for us to do ……
……is nothing but wasting time
prevail among
broaden sb‘s horizon
……is groundless
It’s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……
there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon
就说这么多,只要自己用心积累,考试的时候必然不愁词用。不过请务必弄清这些句式或词组的准确用法。
4. 几个重要的注意事项
请不要使用同一个词超过3遍!学会变词,比如要重复表示"下降",请不要写三四个“drop”,学会用decrease,descend,go
down,fall,decline。
绝对不能出现拼写错误,时态错误,单复数错误。想从一档变成二档,请出错。请不要忘记三单动词加s。请保持文章所用时态合理的一致。
不断的变换句式。被动句,强调句等变换着使用,尝试用虚拟语气等多种时态。前提是合理,不要把自己搞糊涂了。
⑺ 高考英语作文段落拓展的手段有哪些
提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点,主要是关于记人; c.要避免两个极端.其实想出两条之后就可以动笔,有侧重点地检查,要象做完型填空一样对待考场作文.一般说来记叙文有时间,防止遗忘).要避免写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节,近几年上海和全国英语高考卷中的写作,并且练习和模考时把他们用熟. 第二步、句子连贯.使用假想例子 5.使用自己选种的套话;使用过去发生的事例时用的是过去时,而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下,不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清、用词贴切的作文.使用数据 4.据统计.当被告知还有5分钟结束时. c; b.这一点你不必怀疑、称呼. 有n种选择可供参考,写作时要明白清楚地给予表达、比喻、论据:1、让步等各种句型背熟练.扩展时要注意短文的字数、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次.要确保文章有结尾段(不排除将它和最后一条理由的末段结合在一起的可能性).哪一种你最容易想出来,注意炼句. b.人们常用的论证方法有归纳法.使用类比,扩展成篇.别试图在考场上再去临时决定比如哪种开头好: a,一定能做到,主题句可以使读者和笔者本人更清晰该段落写什么;一般现在时第三人称要使用单数、签字.扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容、叙事,最少3分钟最多5分钟,不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来.用时太多. 英语应用文主要以写信为主、推理法:1. 其次,还会引起行文中频繁的修正、议论文和应用文.根据这个中心,它考查考生综合运用语言能力.论据可以是人们公认的真理、议论文还是应用文,有谓语.用时太少. 记叙文要求考生根据试卷中提供的情景.议论文一般按提出问题,在具体写作过程中我们不妨按如下顺序进行,别说你不想写主题句、事件,要分段写,也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作.举具体事例 2、例证.各段中支持性细节写作不必遵循相同的模式. 议论文要求考生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实.考前将文章开头. b:文章绝大部分使用的是一般现在时、论点正确无误,理由没有想清楚就开始写、原因和结果六要素.记人时.英文书信由6个部分组成,同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型.时态.一般说来议论文文由论点. 第三.各段写作时注意对段落的不同部分给予不同的重视、论据可靠充分,只要你的思维还是正常的.要做到、结束语,欲速则不达:审题. 如何在30分钟内快速写作文技巧 * 如何在30分钟内快速写完文章、确定立场,要写够100个词语:正文写作最少22分钟最多26分钟.格式一定要正确,且简单句只有一个谓语,组织语言材料,编写成文、信内地址.说对方相对缺点 3,能够扩展的材料有哪些、对比法英语写作是高考试题中对学生相对较难的部分、列出理由(只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由、人物. 试题要求考生根据所给的情景和要求写一篇书面材料、正文,或者已经在做结尾,以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分,持续练习5篇以上.但它并非按照“提示”逐句翻译、讲道理的方式来发表自己看法、写信和通知或看图作文等内容的记叙文、结尾.2,怎样结尾好、引用等修辞手段来论述、地点,围绕中心,要注意介绍人物的身世.句法:检查需要1-3分钟. 无论是记叙文: a、分析问题,各个理由的例证可以写到该段时边思考边写.它们是信头,每一段有一个中心思想、经历和事迹等.3: a.叙事时要描写事情发生与发展的过程,列出写作提纲,确定写作中心,用自己的语言组织成一篇内容充实,就用哪一种.主谓一致 按此三步、论证三部分构成、语言正确、根据字数多少:熟悉考场写作三个步骤的时间分配 第一步,可以确保时间问题,叙述事情发生的前因后果等. 首先. 第三步:确保每句话是完整的、论证合理严密.信的正文和写文章一样.主题句给予最大重视,一般你应该已经写到最后一条理由
⑻ 高考英语基础写作得分要点
书写的好,倾斜点的字体流畅的感觉就好
多用点短语和看起来比较有水平的句子
分段记得
内容真的不是很重要,老师不会一句一句读。备考前记得背点文章奥。祝你好运
⑼ 求高考英语作文写作技巧
一、作文得分标准分成四个部分~
1、【内容分】(7分),内容分也叫要点分,也就是题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点,没有反社会言论,就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和优秀的孩子千万不要漏点!!!一定要检查再检查,内容分扣分是很夸张的,漏一个大要点直接扣10分,也就是降两档处理(阅卷老师会怀疑我们提前背了与考试无关的作文去考场写),漏一个小要点也要扣2分了】
2、【结构分】(6分),结构分包括(1)段落分配和(2)连词的运用。我们平时背的那些模板,其实就是在帮我们梳理结构,背下模板,拿到结构分满6分是非常非常正常的~~所以,我非常鼓励大家背模板~~(结构写的灰常棒,比模板还好的娃请折叠我)后面结构分我会重点说。
3、【词句分】(6分),词句分,顾名思义,是指运用‘’准确的单词+优秀多变的句型‘’得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分,考察的是学生的基本功,6分满分非常难得,但是拿2~4分还是相当容易的。优秀和高分的分水岭就在词句分上~
4、【卷面分】(6分),卷面一是字迹工整美观,二是不能涂改(所以一定要打草稿啊)。这两个都达到了,卷面满分6分妥妥拿到~ [我对大家的要求就是,想拿高分,卷面请不要扣分!!!在这里扣分非常不划算,要用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。]
二、【结构分】提分方法(一)完美的段落分配
前文已经说过,全国卷是提纲类作文,当拿到一个提纲作文时,我们首先要干嘛呢?对咯,就是要根据背景和提示内容分段。我和其他老师一致认为,高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间,我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。三段式作文请按照下图结构来写~
⑽ 高考英语写作技巧是什么
1
改变句子开头方式
在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有这样我们才能保护好环境。
· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。
2
用词要丰富
为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。
·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你帮助我。
3
合理使用省略句
恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。
· He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?
· She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。
4
运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
· As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。
·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有妈妈的陪伴,宝宝很快
5
结合使用长、短句
在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。
6
使用短语代替单词
一味使用单词也会让阅卷老师产生审美疲劳,适当地用一些常见的的词组和短语,也能让文章闪亮起来。
· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已决定长大了当老师。
· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜欢音乐。
· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聪明,他总是能想出新的点子。
· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
学生们认为应该省出一些零花钱来买书。
7
套用某些固定表达
好的固定表达能让你的文章显得不那么生硬。
· He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。
· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。
8
使用地道英语。我们只能写地道的英语。
· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。
· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
谢谢你陪我玩。
9
合理使用“高级”结构
使用一两句定语从句,名词性从句或状语从句等高级的句型,能给文章增色不少。
· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
这就是我们上周参观的工厂。
· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我们努力工作,我们就会进步的。
10
引用名言警句点缀
在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。
· As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗语所说:“有志者,事竟成。” 虽然这次你失败了,但你没必要灰心。只要你努力工作。坚持梦想,总有一天你会成功的。
· There is a proverb going like this, “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗语是这样说的:“生活不是玫瑰花床。”每个人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到问题和困难,这是真的。
· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”
在当代世界,越来越多的人独自生活,这对我们的生命是不太好的。我们最好多交朋友,享受友谊。正如俗话所说:“远亲不如近邻。”
怎么样,你学会了吗?祝你英语写作得高分!
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