雅思英语写作技巧案例范文

❶ 如何合理的运用雅思写作范文

1.反复琢磨文章思路、整体结构。
2.分类总结各段句型和词组。如此一来，就触类旁通，茅塞顿开。无论判断分析，还是遣词造句，均渐入佳境，可培养学术研究的能力。此法需1-2周，因各人基础、领悟和态度而异。
3.提升思想境界，拓展阅历经验，丰富社会类词句，全赖平素累积。充分利用网络，谷歌网络，与前辈或同僚时常沟通讨论，关注时事、宏观政策、国际往来、焦点访谈，甚至奇闻轶事，坊间杂话、观点舆论，尽入囊中。凡速成者，可紧密围绕当年试题回忆，俗称‘机经’，以宏观和微观多维视角，展开地毯式分析。此法于2-3周内可初见成效。
4.临场发挥，时间乃劲敌。雅思作文自备考之日起，可请老师协助制定每日学习计划表，把繁杂的工程，量化到小时。比如，雅思作文有2篇任务，即：图表和议论，各有具体的时间建议，已被专家们量化到分钟，可操作性极高。力求精准，训练有素，是提高效率的先决条件、产生质变的催化剂和人才的终极定义。树立时间观念，追求高效培训，全赖心态调整和持之以恒，非时间本身可限定。

❷ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文

可以从个人抄发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇，以及在此过程中自己水平的更大提升；
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作，有利于更好的发挥自己的特长，从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~

❸ 求一篇雅思写作范文

Consumerism grants a taste of the good life for people. Obviously, it also concerns for a material possession earning money and social status in the society. However, some people believe that consumer culture might bring vital role to improve their life, but I think that a good life could not be potentially affected by consumer culture.

Consumerism has several positive impacts to their happy life because it is marked as acquire prestigious items to force people to work hard for their better earnings. Thereby, creativity and innovation are flooding in their head as a stimulator to earn much more money. For example, online shoppers who really want to buy iPhone use several innovations to reach their sale target. The power of consumerism also affects the trades among countries and then consecutively increases their national domestic income.

On the contrary, a good living is not always linear with consumerism. Some people are willing to be selfish and unaware surround. They may guide their behavior to satisfy their unlimited pleasure. It makes them as victim of their act followed by unhappiness feeling certainly.

Finally, the good and bad impact of consumer societies might point as a human choice for their life improving continuously. I believe that every person has already taken the consideration highly before diving into consumer culture.

❹ 英语雅思议论文写作方法和技巧

雅思技巧与注意事项(写作---补充)

议论文注意事项1。开头必须直接明了，不需要对背景做介绍(或者简单介绍)，然后直接列出题目的观点用你自己的观点来对比(即平常说的“thesis statement”)

2。结尾不能太长，必须是对“thesis statement”以及每段的SUMMARY做概括

3。雅思的议论文，必须是先列出题目观点即你自己反对的观点，然后再提出你的观点，而不是单一观点的陈列。

4。每一个段落只表达一个问题或者是观点而且必须有主题句，而其后的句子必须与此主题句子相关，是比较，是论证，是举例，无论如何都要围绕中心来写。在每一段的结尾必须有引入下一段的过度性句子。你必须保证你所写的每一句话都与中心有关系，而不是凭借感觉的乱写

5。文章的主题句必须在第一段出现，或是支持或者是赞同，或者是站在中立的角度

6。认真分析题目，划出重点以及题目潜在的意思，并进行分析

7。评分项目CQ交流技巧AIE讨论、论点和论据VSS词汇与句型谈交流技巧以及其应用

请使用关联词(但重复使用会扣分)，即比较常用的来增加文章的连贯性如：

比较性however but although,nevertheless

重要性in fact indeed

总结性otherwise as a result because of this as a consequence therefore

例子性including such as for instance

增加性moreover in addition and also as well

时间性between ring when just after before until following whilst

请注意语法

表达将来请不要用标准的将来时用语如will/ going to要用

It can be argued that -----

It is often argued that ---

This suggests that

This would suggest that

This seems to suggest that

It could potentially result in ----

It may result in

It is possible that

请使用代词如-------nuclear energy后面提到时候要用it.its

图表作文注意事项

1。开头除了包括我们以前练习作文时所说的介绍，还要加入what you would expect to find

(即一眼就能够看出来的整体趋势)，还要写出我们所能真正找到的如

the chart shows average earnings in the uk over a 30 yers period --we would expect to find that a person--however--

2.结尾除了回应文章外，还要把最关键的点或者是最明显的变化提出来如

while peoplke’s earnings increased accoring to their level of ecation ,the differences are far smaller than would be expected .What is more interesting ,however ,is,that the increase in earnings among

❺ 如何运用雅思写作范文呢

1.反复琢磨文章思路、整体结构。
2.分类总结各段句型和词组。如此一来，就触类旁通，茅塞顿开。无论判断分析，还是遣词造句，均渐入佳境，可培养学术研究的能力。此法需1-2周，因各人基础、领悟和态度而异。小编提醒大家注意总结雅思写作词汇以及雅思写作万能模板，这些都是大家要做的基本功课。
3.提升思想境界，拓展阅历经验，丰富社会类词句，全赖平素累积。充分利用网络，谷歌网络，与前辈或同僚时常沟通讨论，关注时事、宏观政策、国际往来、焦点访谈，甚至奇闻轶事，坊间杂话、观点舆论，尽入囊中。凡速成者，可紧密围绕当年试题回忆，俗称‘机经’，以宏观和微观多维视角，展开地毯式分析。此法于2-3周内可初见成效。
4.临场发挥，时间乃劲敌。雅思作文自备考之日起，可请老师协助制定每日学习计划表，把繁杂的工程，量化到小时。比如，雅思作文有2篇任务，即：图表和议论，各有具体的时间建议，已被专家们量化到分钟，可操作性极高。力求精准，训练有素，是提高效率的先决条件、产生质变的催化剂和人才的终极定义。树立时间观念，追求高效培训，全赖心态调整和持之以恒，非时间本身可限定。

❻ 推荐一本雅思写作范文书

慎小嶷除了《十天突破雅思写作》还有一个6-9分范文(书皮都差不多，只不过《十天写作》主色是绿的，6-9分范文主色是蓝的)，里面全是范文和对应范文的解析，应该合你胃口~剑8的我看过，剑9不知道有没有。不过从作文的角度来讲剑8剑9差不了多少吧，作文题目分类就那么多~

另外还有一个《雅思8分万能作文》，范文也不少，特别推荐小作文。他的大作文写的感觉不是很主流(即没有固定的套路，很随性，看起来感觉水平很高的样子)，可以说是比较有特点，行文方式基本各不相同，看你喜不喜欢了。

《雅思8分万能作文》的PDF我在太傻上下过，后来又买的纸质的就删了。。。慎小嶷的书买的纸质的~

❼ 雅思英语写作中如何举例子

一篇文章举一到两个例子来support 观点
例子可以有场有短
以广告的一篇model essay为例，
长例子，一句话解释
Constant images and signs wherever we look can be very intrusive and irritating at times. Take for example advertising on the mobile phone. With the latest technology mobile companies are now able to send advertising messages via SMS to consumer’s phones whenever they choose.

泛泛列举 一二三
Children and young people in particular are influenced by adverts showing the latest toys, clothing or music and this can put enormous pressure on the parents to buy these procts.

来源主要是生活经历，加工下都是好例子~

❽ 如何有效利用雅思写作范文

各位烤鸭可以马上来练习一下，看以下两题雅思作文应该如何开头。

1. City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost. Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?（2016年9月24日真题）

2. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2017年5月20日真题）

然后，请各位将自己写的与老雅范文来比较一下。

1. Now we have numerous newspaper reports about a child being robbed without anybody offering to help him or a ninety-year-old poor woman dead at home for days without anybody knowing it. All these reports point to one key problem that face dwellers in cities, especially big cities: they seldom interact with their neighbors, much less to say they care about their neighbors and they feel lonely because they do not feel they belong to any community.

2. There seems to be more and more violence in films and on TV these days such as beating, murdering, gun fighting, blood shedding, among others. As I see it, the excessive exposure to these violent scenes will greatly affect the theater-goers and TV viewers, thus increasing the likelihood of their committing the same violent crimes in real life, so I would strongly suggest that the amount of violence in films and TV be controlled in order to decrease the crime rate in society.

我们现在又回到第2段：

Modern city life has made the car an indispensable means of transport. Though most cities today have fairly advanced transportation systems like the bus and metro, they tend to be extremely crowded, especially in rush hours. This means you might come to your office late or miss some important appointments. If you drive your own car, these problems may well be avoided. At the same time, when you plan to take your family for a trip out of town, you may also enjoy the flexibility of when to start off and when to return, rather than spending time waiting for the bus to arrive.

唐老雅老师点评：

本段讨论使用自己的汽车可能带来的好处，分两个方面讨论：一是自己开车可以避免上班迟到或错误重要约会，而是自己开车和家人外出时也更方便。那么如何才能清晰地论证这两层意思呢？请各位烤鸭先看本段的结构：第一句从总体上提炼“现代城市生活使得汽车成为一种不可或缺的交通手段”，接下来先讲一个方面，然后用at the same time引出另外一个方面，这样的结构可从整体上确保逻辑连贯。

然后，我们再深入看老雅对第一层意思的论述：“虽然多数城市多有很发达的公交和地铁系统，但它们非常拥挤，尤其是在高峰拥堵时刻。这就意味着你可能上班迟到或者错误重要约会。如果你开自己的车，这些问题就可以避免。”这三句话环环相扣，自然接续。第二层论述则从自己开车可以灵活安排出发时间和回家时间，不必浪费时间等车来论证。

语言方面，烤鸭们可以重点看看这些词汇：indispensable（不可或缺的）; advanced（高级的）; appointment（约会）; flexibility（灵活性）; start off（出发）。从句子长度安排来看，本段共5个句子，分别为短句-长句-短句-短句-长句，显得错落有致。在论证第二层意思时，老雅使用了一个长句，其原因是之前的两个句子都属于短句，这里写一个长句可以起到改变行文节奏的作用。但若仔细看，这个长句的结构其实一点也不复杂：when you..., you may also enjoy..., rather than...。大家平时在段落写作中，也可以有意识地练习混合长短句来表达思想。

第3段：

However, the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment. Many experts, for instance, attribute the worsening air quality in big cities to the cars’ exhaust gas emission and the st that rises after them. This accusation is perhaps well-grounded if you make a little comparison between the air quality 50 years ago and that now. In addition to the waste gas and st, cars also make unbearable noises, which is a headache to all city dwellers. Just imagine a time you are shocked awake from your cozy dream by the sharp braking screech of a car passing by your house!

唐老雅老师点评：

本段论证私家车的增多对环境带来的压力，还是从两个方面来展开论述：一是汽车尾气带来的空气污染，二是汽车噪音给城市居民带来的困扰。本段从一个统领的主题句the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment开始，然后讨论空气污染问题（共2句），最后讨论噪音问题（共2句）。这样，本段共5句话，结构非常均衡。其中，在讨论噪音问题时，使用了一个想象的情境（“想象一下，某次一辆汽车从你屋前经过，刺耳的刹车声把你从美梦中惊醒！”），让整篇论文摆脱了枯燥无味的说理，有相当浓厚的个性化特色。这种论述方法被称为“以情动人”，很多时候可以作为“以理服人”的补充。在雅思作文中，如果交替使用“道理”和“感情”，文章就会显得更加灵活生动。

语言方面，烤鸭们可重点学习consequence（后果）; attribute...to...（把......归咎于......）; worsening（不断恶化的）; accusation（指责，指控）; well-grounded（有根据的）等。在Many experts attribute the worsening air quality in big cities to the cars’ exhaust gas emission and the st that rises after them一句中，如果不用attribute...to...或相似的结构，我们可能会这样写：Now, the air quality in big cities is becoming worse and worse. Many experts believe this is because of the exhaust gas the cars emit and the st that rises after them.这样写当然也是不错的，但从句型紧凑的角度就做得不够。烤鸭们可以经常做做这样的思维练习，即：如果不用范文中的某个句子结构，我怎样写才能表达出范文中的意思？

第4段：

In my view, it is unrealistic for the government to put a ban on the car ownership or use since the cars have been so important in our daily life, yet we cannot overlook the negative effects they have on the environment. To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options, the first being to develop car technology and proce cars that burn less fuel and the second, encourage the car owners to use public transportation whenever possible.

唐老雅老师点评：

本段表达自己的观点。对于这类双边讨论的话题，结尾段一定要鲜明地提出自己的观点。本范文是这样构思的：政府出面来限制私人汽车的购买和使用是不现实的，但私家车的负面后果又不可忽视，那怎么办呢？有两个办法，一是开发新的汽车技术，少用燃料，二是鼓励私人多用公共交通服务。

语言方面，烤鸭可关注这些词汇：unrealistic（不现实的）; put a ban on...（限制......）；overlook（忽视）; dilemma（困境）; option（选择）等。在To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options, the first being to develop car technology...一句中，注意being的正确形式，这里使用的是独立主格结构，being不能替换为is。这个结构很多同学难以掌握，可以改写如下，以确保正确性：To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are two options. The first is to develop car technology..., and the second is to encourage...

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