Ⅰ 怎么写一篇优秀的英语作文
想要写好英语来作文,一定要掌握其技巧自和方法,切忌靠死记硬背,具体的方法与步骤如下:
1、读懂题目,英语作文的题目不会像语文的一样较为复杂,但读懂题目是写作的前提。英语作文就像是小学生作文,只不过要用英文来写。可以先用中文写下一些内容,再做简单的汉译英。
2、确定一句中心句,围绕着它展开论述。层次要分明,多使用一些above all、secondly、next、finally之类的词。要有意识地使用一些从句(定语从句、名词性从句、同位语等等)给文章增色。
3、最后有总结或是自己的看法的段落,使用in a word、in my view之类的词组开头。
4、其中,遇到不会写的单词或没有把握的,就用有相近意思的已掌握的词代替。另外,书写也是很重要的,做不到优美至少也要工整一些,要让老师看得懂。平时可以有意识地记一些不同的表达,学习英语积累是很重要的。要是想得高分,文章里不要全是情态动词。
Ⅱ 高一的优秀英语作文
奥运火炬作文
Olympic Flame
Now the 26th Centennial World Olympic Games are in full swing in Altanda. The Olympic flame is burning red and bright in the torch at the center of the Olympic square. Earlier before the official opening of the games it had been relayed one by one through the hands of runners, among them, students supported by the Chinese hope project. Thousands of people lined the struts to watch the relay.
The relay of the Olympic Flame is the symbol of the continuity between the ancient and modern Games. During the ancient Olympics a sacred flame burned at the altar of Zeus. A modern version of the flame was adopted for the Berlin Games in 1936, and the tradition has been observed ever since. The torch used to kindle the flame is first lit by the sun's rays at Olympia in Greece, and then carried to the site of the Games by relays of runners. Ships and planes are used when necessary.
The runners are specially chosen, All of them are hard working and as a result become overacbievers. The flame kindles the fire in everyone's heart to encourage people to go on and on and bring the Olympic spirit into full play.
翻译
奥运圣火
第26届世界百年奥运盛会正在亚特兰大举行。奥运圣火火炬在奥运广场的中心燃烧得火红明亮。在奥运会正式开幕之前,火炬通过长跑运动员的手一个一个往下传,传递者中有受中国希望工程资助的学生。成千上万的人排在街道两旁观看。
奥运火炬的传递象征着古代和现代奥运的继续。古代奥运圣火在宙斯圣坛点燃。现代奥运圣火于l936年在柏林开始采用,其传统一直延续至今。火炬在希腊奥林匹亚用阳光点燃,然后由运动员传递到会场。必要时用船或飞机运送。
传递者通过精心挑选,都是些艰苦奋斗且卓有成就者。圣火点燃了每一个人的心,鼓励人们发扬奥运精神永远前进。
夏日的农村
【内容提示】
夏日的农村,郁郁葱葱,繁花盛开,莺歌燕舞,一派美景。请你用英语将这样一幅夏日图描写一番。内容要点如下:
①夏天伴着它那温暖的明媚阳光而来,使我们想起了各种美好的事情:在农村的度假,野餐活动,还有那翻晒干草时节的聚会……
②春天到来的时候,乍暧还寒,大地空旷,草木未长;而夏季到来之时,世界成了另一番景象:是一片绿的世界——绿的树叶,绿的草地,树篱间植物葱郁,鲜花到处盛开。
③白天长了,夜晚短了;在明媚的六月里,太阳早早起床,很晚才入睡。这是一年里最美好最有生机的一个月。鸟儿从太阳升起一直唱到太阳落山以后才停息。
④当别的鸟儿静下来之后,传来一阵柔和的叫声;再过一会,声音大了起来,很快,夜莺尽情地唱起它那奇妙的歌。
【作文示范】
The Countryside in Summer
Summer has come, with its warm sunny days, making us thing of all sorts of nice things, such as holidays in the country, picnics and haymaking①parties.
When Spring came, she found the earth cold and bare, but she soon changed all that, and by the time Summer arrives, the world is a very different place. It is a green world now, green leaves on the trees, green grass in the fields, green plants crowding in the hedges②, and flowers opening everywhere.
The days are long and the nights are short, for the sun gets up early and goes to bed late in sunny June. It is one of the best and brightest months in the year. Birds sing from sunrise till long after sunset.
As night falls, one after another the birds stop their singing, and after a few last sleepy sounds, put their heads under their wings to rest for an hour or two before beginning again. They do not all sleep, however. When other birds are silent, comes a soft cry, then, after a few moments, another, louder this time; and soon the nightingale③ pouring out his wonderful song.
Not only at night does the nightingale sing. On almost every warm day in early June, the little brown bird sings away in the roads and woods, but, as all the other birds are also singing at the same time, we do not notice his voice so much. It is at night, when he has the field all to himself, that we hear the nightingale at his best.
(选自《英语学习》1984年第7期)
【词语解释】
①haymaking [’hei?meikiR] n.制备干草
②hedge [hedN] n.(矮树的)树篱
③nightingale [’naitiRgeil] n.夜莺
【写作指要】
1)本文作者抓住“绿的世界”和“歌的昼夜”从视觉描写到听觉描写给读者描绘了一幅生机勃勃的夏日农村的美景。
2)第二段里“green”一词的多次重复使“绿的世界”深深留在人们的心里。在第三、四、五段里,作者把“歌声”这一概念用不同的词表达出来,如“sing”,“song”,“sounds”,“cry”,“pouring out”,“singing”,“voice”等,如此同义照应,使语义上下连贯,同时也加强和突出了“夜莺歌唱”的主题。
3)本文作者使用了拟人(personification)手法,文章显得格外生动:第二段Spring和Summer两个词首字母大写,用“she”指代“Spring”;第三段中的“gets up”和“goes to bed”,“birds sing”;第四段中的“sleep”,“cry”;第五段中的“his voice”,“he”和“himself”都是拟人用法。
4)为了使描写生动优美,作者使用了分词短语“making us think of…”,独产主格结构“green leaves on the trees…flowers opening everywhere”,省略句法“then, after a few moments, (comes) another (cry),(which is) louder this time”,以及传神的短语“all to himself”和“at hisbest”等。
Ⅲ 优秀的英语作文,最好有翻译,
My family
There are four people in my family.Is my mother my father,my sister and me.My mother is fat she likes singing.My father is kind he likes play football.My sister is very lovely she likes singing and dancing.I am a happy girl.I like drawing picture very much.
I love them and they love me!
翻译:在我的家里有4个人。有我的妈妈、爸爸、妹妹和我。我的妈妈胖胖的,她喜欢唱歌。我的爸爸很和蔼,他喜欢打篮球。我的妹妹非常可爱,她非常喜欢唱歌和跳舞。我是一个活泼的女孩,我非常喜欢画画。
他们爱我,我也很爱他们!
My teacher
Mr Black is our teacher, who is strict with us .But we like he best.Because his class is very fun and he is a funny men. Mr Black teaches us English.And his English is very good.He often helps me with English.A funny thing is that Mr Black is an English, but he likes watching Beijing Opera,he often goes to see Beijing Opera on weekends.
布莱克先生是我们的老师对我们要求很严格。但是我们喜欢他最好的因为他的课非常有趣,他是一个有趣的人。布莱克先生教我们英语. 和他的英语很好他经常帮助我用英语. 一个有趣的事情是布莱克先生是一位英语,但他喜欢看京剧,他经常去看京剧在周末的时候。
【希望采纳】
Ⅳ 怎么写一篇优秀的英语作文
!!!!要完整 有开头 正文 结尾【尤其不要漏掉这个尾巴】
1开头最好开门见山 点明中心
2正文内部分运用容到所学知识 要善用连词 不要死板 全文都是一种句式结构 I am……之类的
3结尾 有时可以和开头一样 首尾呼应嘛 也可以用情感强烈的反问句!
【以上是我们老师每次分析作文讲到的
还要说一点 平时做作业遇到的作文可以利用起来
分析它的结构 积累能用得上的句子】
Ⅳ 英语作文写的好加分
“ABCDEFG……”自从我开始学英语起,我就特别厌烦英语,每当听到跟英语有关的字母或者是单词,就心想:“我是一名中国人,我为什么要学英语?英语好有什么用?我不一定会出国外,而且中国是我的家!”爱国之心是中国人必须拥有的品质精神,那时候,我总是觉得,我爱国,我不学英语!
可是,就是因为我从小有这样的心理,加上学校一个星期才两节英语课,我的英语只能勉强及格。自从转学后,我意识到了一些学英语的重要性,但是我并没有完全领悟,为什么中国人要学英语?我的语文和数学成绩在班上也算是优秀的,但是因为每次英语只有60到70分,庆幸的时候也就是80分左右,但是同学们的成绩,四分之一都是80分以上,虽然人数很少,就因为这样,我的英语成绩远远落后于一些同学,每次总分加起来,我顶多也是个第二名,这让我特别恼火,我没有去好好学习英语,而是更加厌烦英语,对于英语,只能用一个字形容——烦!
我尊敬老师,但是唯独不尊敬英语老师。这学期,新来了一名英语老师,我无所谓,心想:“教英语都不是中国人,都一样,一种人,我何必去理他。”我这种态度似乎被老师一眼就看出开了,老师从容地说:“同学们,说实话,你们喜不喜欢英语呢?”同学们哑口无言,“实话要实说,我知道你们都讨厌英语,成绩都是勉强提上来的,但只是以前你们死打死背单词,没掌握好方法。而且你们都有叛逆心理。”老师稍停了一会儿,说道:“也许你们以为学英语是觉得对不起国家、对不起父母,但是你们错了,你们知道吗?以前的英国统治了世界,即便是现在,连美国也比不上英国,如果你们想让中国的孩子不再学习英语,不是在这里叛逆,而是好好学习!要知道英语是主课,会加到总分里面,英语不好的同学,即便你语文数学再好,总分也是稍逊一筹……”
英语老师给我们讲了很多很多,
Ⅵ 小学生优秀英语作文精选(5篇)
英语作文是学好英语关键,小学阶段是培养英语写作能力的关键期。因此,小编为大家准备了10篇小学英语的范文,大家要记得收藏哦!
1
My dog 我的狗
I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years.(简单介绍) DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth.(外观)My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?(表明态度,反问)
【参考翻译】
我有一只狗。我的狗的名字叫嘟嘟。嘟嘟9岁。嘟嘟胖。它穿着一件白色外套。嘟嘟有两个大眼睛和两个小耳朵。它有一个短嘴。我的狗是聪明的。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢吗?
2
City 城市
This is Beijing .It’s in the north of china .It’s got fourteen million people .It’s very big .There is a very famous wall in Beijing .The Great Wall.
It’s about six thousand seven hundred kilometers. And there is a famous square in the middle of Beijing it’s beautiful .(There be 句型,需记忆)It’s Tian’an men square .
I like Beijing .I want to go to Beijing one day.(I want to句型,需记忆)
【参考翻译】
北京,在中国的北方,它拥有一千四百万人口。它是一个大城市。有一个非常有名的墙,是长城。
它有六千七百公里。在北京的中心有一个非常漂亮的广场,它是天安门广场。
我喜欢北京,希望有一天我可以去那里。
3
My home 我的家
My home is on the first floor. There are two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living room. I’m a child. I have a nice bedroom. In my bedroom, there is bedroom, a closet, an air- conditioner and so on. My closet is green. My bed is blue. I love my bedroom very much.(总分的结构,先写大环境再写小环境)
【参考翻译】
我家是在一楼。有两间卧室,一间厨房和一间客厅。我是一个孩子。我有一个很好的卧室。在我的卧室里有衣柜,空调机等。我的衣柜是绿色的。我的床是蓝色的。我非常喜欢我的卧室。
4
My Classroom 我的教室
My classroom is nice and big . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What color are the fans? (设问句形式好)They are blue. At the corner, there is a shelf, many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.
This is my classroom, it is very nice.(首尾呼应) I like my classroom very much. Do you have a nice classroom, too?
【参考翻译】
我的教室很舒适很大。有40套课桌椅在教室里。墙壁上的两块黑板。并有两张图片。我的教室有11盏灯和12个风扇。是什么颜色的风扇?他们是蓝色的。在角落,有一个架子,很多书都在架子上。我喜欢的书非常多。
这是我的课堂,这是非常好的。我喜欢我的课堂非常多。你是否也有一个很好的教室呢?
5
My bedroom 我的小卧室
I have a small bedroom, it's on the third floor in my house. There is a small bed, a nice wardrobe and a small table in my room. The bed is on the left side of the table. The wardrobe is on the right, it is very beautiful. there is a lamp and a clock on the table, the lamp is green, the clock looks like an orange, it’s smart.(注意空间的描述)
My bedroom is small, but it’s very comfortable.
【参考翻译】
我有一个小卧室,它在我家的三楼。房间里有一张小床,一个非常好的衣柜和一个小桌子。床在桌子的左边。衣柜在房间的右边。房间非常的漂亮。桌子上有一个台灯和一个闹钟。台灯是绿色的,闹钟是橘黄色的,非常时尚。
我的房间很小,但是它很舒适。