『壹』 求一篇英语作文，是看漫画写一个连贯的英语故事的那种，120字左右就行了，急求，我在线等啊各位！可以加分
我很好奇那张漫画啊。给你写没有问题。就是想看看看那张漫画。回 毕竟这是你们老师答为了锻炼你的思维跟英语才有的一个作文题目。我想最起码你给我写一篇汉语的我给你翻译可以吗？
If you failed to discrible the details of the cartoon, I would write a bad paper.
I think you know I know that what I want to say.
『贰』 如何做好英语写作时的连贯性研究 博客
写作的四项评分标准中，大部分考生关注的是词汇的替换、拼写的准确以及句法的多样性这几个比较基础的方面，对于连贯和衔接这一项的要求因为和我们的母语产出是一样的，所以很多考生往往觉得不必要重视，顺其自然地写下去就好。但分析认为，实际上不论图表分析还是议论文，在这一项上失分的情况都比较多，而只要理解并引起足够的重视这种原因造成的失分比词汇和句法方面的更容易纠正。
连贯和衔接这一评分标准中我们一般所提到的只是衔接，也就是说前后两个句子或者段落之间要有如but, and, therefore 等信号词反映出内容之间的逻辑关系，常见的有顺接、转折、并列、递进、因果等等。而连贯体现在语域和逻辑两个方面。前者指的是全文的措辞、文风、句式等应保持一致；后者指的是文章应该有合理的组织和合理的主位化，相邻的句子应围绕一定的核心概念来表达，使得全篇行文通畅。
语域方面的连贯问题在议论文中比较严重，也就是所谓的模板句式太多或者Memorized的词汇或短语太多，与全文文风不符，学员反馈最低压到4.5到5分。逻辑方面的连贯主要是在图表作文中问题较多。主位(theme)不完全等同于主语，因为主语一般是动作的发出者或者评价的对象，而主位是侧重于每个句子由什么开始，可以是名词充当的主语，也可以是时间或地点状语。适当的调整主位是为了服务于行文的连贯性。如：
It can be seen from the figure quoted that Brisbane and Perth consumed the same water when it was under 125 kl, with 0.42 per kilometer. Sydney took the leading position at this level, with $0.98, comparing to Adelaide and Melbourne ranged from $0.78 to $0.84 per kilometer.
Things changed a little bit when the consumption over 125 kl. Sydney remained its first position($0.98 per kl). Meanwhile Adelaide ($0.78) and Melbourne ($0.84) ranked the least.
这两个段落有明显的单词和句式的重复，而且有句法错误，所以得分不会高于6分。但上述问题不是短时间内可以纠正过来的，而连贯方面的问题则不同，这实际上是读图时的要求。
两段联系起来可以看出作者分段是按照耗水量是否超过125kl来分段的，所以大于或小于125kl就应该作为每段突出强调的部分提前，即将其主位化。第一段明显安排欠妥。
此外第一段中开始写的是Brisbane and Perth用水的数量相同，而后面写的是Sydney和另外两个城市的水价比较，这段的主线就游移不定，也就是说前后不是围绕同一点来的，所以不够连贯。此外，如果我们要从用水量低于125kl这个图开始分析，一般也应该分成两类：用水量和单价，并且视情况分别写出极值、排序、比较等。
分析认为，很多考生觉得图表作文不怎么出彩，所以将主要精力放在应付议论文上，对于读图分析根本不重视才造成上述问题。而段落的划分是最基本的分析图表要求，如果分得不清楚，或者明明分段但是段首句主位处理不当，将肯定会失分。
『叁』 如何保证雅思写作的文章连贯性
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。每个人的情况不同，也可以登录文都国际教育官网进行一对一的咨询。
1、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was
obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew
the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then,
when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours ----- it
must have been close to noon ---- the heat nearly hid us in; the
radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to
cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was four o'clock
and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the
tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in
the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very
nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.
By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we
knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky
day.
本段从"rose"(起床)写起，然后是吃早餐("not to miss breakfast", "closing at nine o'clock")，然后是"close to noon"，一直写到这一天结束("By nine--")。
B.按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)
例如：From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got
closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all
right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were
also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a
pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten
feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of
glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was
made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had
four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a
steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light
changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and
we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近，从远处("from a distance")写起，然后"get closer"，再到(" ten feet
away")，最后是"inside the pagoda"……当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要，也可以由近及远，由表及里等等。
C.按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a.按重要性顺序排列(arrangement insgroupsof importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much
skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine,
your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as
soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends
on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word.
And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the
organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be
that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In
the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the
large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is
perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力，它的重要性与职业，身份有关，从"not need much skill"或"of little importance"到"more important"，最后是"most important"。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been
careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any
number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the
reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what
it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the
reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has
switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader
loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps
sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- the writer, in whose
head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing
link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not
taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and
"sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big
one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness，先给出一个general statement作为主题句，然后通过5个"perhaps"加以例证。
c.由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with
the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in
breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not
possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her
independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff
unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed,
perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand,
loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till
night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who
saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually
offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable,
on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds,
drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is
imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句，它仅提出一个问题：为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较，末句才下结论。
2、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First,
though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his
efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math.
Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient
in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects
besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of
high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had
to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on
schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward
realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种，一种是转换词语(transitional words or
phrases)，另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有：first, though, so, in
particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and,
consequently, and, finally.后者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he,
those, his, he, these,
his.本段1有词汇105个，所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词，约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见，掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流畅(smoothness)有益，而且对于学生在规定时间内写足所要求的字数也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000
years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented
only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word
choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent
often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are
ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in
the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture,
loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture,
loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and
writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的"it"之外，没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样，文中出现许多重复的词语，全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话，这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was
developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent
development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is
usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is
often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell
where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard
diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies
on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing
lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the
differences.
有损连贯性的几种情况：
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误：
1)不必要的改变时态，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where
he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes
refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to
die down, but they come after him anyway.
2)不必要的改变单复数，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy.
But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run
out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the
deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3)不必要的改变人称，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's
activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in
the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members
will do things together and know one another. You need to give up
isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of
obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中，一定要注意时态，人称以及数的变化是否正确，要注意保持一致。
『肆』 12个带“when”和“while”的英语作文，需要有连贯性……哪位大虾能帮帮忙啊，急用……
i had a dog when i was 9 years old. i got the dog while i was eating my birthday cake. It was very cute.i always play with it while my mom was cooking in the afternoon. but it so naughty when we didn't notice it. one day, the dog came to my room when i was doing my homework. the dog jumped on my bed while i was drinking water. when i noticed that, the dog had already gone. and my bed was so dirty. i thought i had to tell my mom. so i go downstairs while my mom was watching TV. i told my mom when she began to prepare dinner. she heard that very angry. my mom was yelling at my dog while the dog came into kitchen. we started to cleaned my room. after cleaned my bedroom. my mom began to cook and i played with my dod. while my mom was cooking, someone knocked the door. i opened the door and my dad came in. at that moment, my dog drop down from stairs. i run to my dog when my dog was crying. and our family sent my dog to pet hospital immediately.
12个。故事很烂但是请勉强接受吧，重复用这个句子还要连贯真是不怎么容易。
『伍』 写英语作文的时候，怎样才能将文章写的连贯一些
石家庄新东方来的老师说，想要将文源章段落、句子写的连贯，只要还是在于平时多积累、多练习，只有这样，上了考场才能发挥出应有的水平。
另外在写作文的时候要注意两点，一是要注意句子的顺序。写文章的时候最忌颠三倒四，所以同学们在写文章的时候要先想好先写什么，再写什么，最好的是在下笔之前先列一个提纲，提纲是整个文章的骨架部分，列好提纲，再下笔就快多啦。第二个要注意的是句子之间的过渡。一段话中层与层之间，一部分内容与另一部分内容之间，要用恰当的词语把它们连接起来，使表达的意思前后连贯。不要让句子看起来前后不搭，这样的话你的文章你自己看着都会很头疼，更不用说阅卷老师了，所以一定要注意条理清晰、前后连贯。
建议各位同学在平时的时候可以听一些英文广播，或者外文杂志，“平时多积累，下笔如有神”。给大家推荐一些好的内容，广播可以听bbc，voa，英文杂志推荐《经济学人》。另外，新概念系列也是学习英语的一个蓝本。平时没事的时候翻翻看，背一些经典文章，培养了语感，上了考场就轻松自如了，文章不仅会连贯，更会让你得高分哦。
『陆』 英语作文 用6至8个意思连贯的英文句子介绍你们家是如何过春节.
there are many traditional festivals in our country.
to our chinese ,the most important is the spring festival.
we have our spring festival ring the winter holidays.
sometimes it is in january.
sometimes it is in february.
usually people are on leave for seven days.
ring the spring festival ,children alaways put on new clothes.
the whole family have the traditional dishes such as mplings,and fish for the dinner together.
there is much delicious food.
people often visit friends or relatives.
we often get many nice presents,too.
every evening we are allowed to stay up and play with fireworks.
we all have a good time.
因为是从纸张上打到电脑里,为了快点我什么大写都没弄,你如果觉得这篇文章好的话来问我吧.
『柒』 求英语作文中的连贯词
1)表层次:
first,firstly, to begin with, further, in the first place
second,secondly, to start with, still, furthermore
third,thirdly, what is more, last, last but not least
also, and then, next, besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addtion finally
2)表转折；
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despitethe fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contarary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3)表因果；
therfore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence e to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4）表让步：
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5)表递近：
furthermore moreover likewise what is more
besides also not only...but also...
too in addtion
6)表举例：
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7)表解释：
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words
8)表总结：
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
namely in all therefore to summarize
递进: then(然后)， besides， furthermore(而且)，moreover (此外), what’s more，even ;in addition ；What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse等。
what’s worse, above all, not only …but also
转折: however(然而)，but，on the contrary(相反)，after all(毕竟) ，although; in spite of ;On the other hand； instead ; yet, while, though,
总结: finally，at last，in brief(总之)，in conclusion(最后)， in short ; in general ; generally speaking,at last, in a word,
强调: indeed，certainly(一定)，surely(确定)，above all(尤其)等.
『捌』 英语文章的连贯性如何更好的保持
有一些词联系前后文，比如first,second,third;at first,next,finally:last but not least等短语，你可以找一些英语文章的模板看看，或者找一些这样的回词答记一些，用到作文中会添彩不少。