A. 英语写作建议信
建议信 Letter of Suggestion
Dear editor,
I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs and learning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
B. 用英语写建议信
My dear friend,How are you all these days?I'm writing to you to make sure whether you still think me of best friend. Frankly speaking, I prefer you not to smoke. I don't like to tell you the harm of smoking because I believe you know it clearly. Give it up, my dear friend!I also notice that you spend too much time into internet games. Do you still remember that once you asked me to be active when I was in grey. But how could you be so addicted to these unreal games? You are so crazy about them. Oh, come on,gay! Get away from them and be ambitious!Wish you smart and health.Your trust friend,(署名)
C. 怎样写 建议信 英语作文
建议信例题:假如你是李明,你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:
焦虑症状建议
头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等
1.考前制定好合适的复习计划
2.考试期间正常作息
3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠
范文:
Dear editor,
I m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Li Ming
(One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, ring the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and ring an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
D. 英语作文 建议信
dear li ming :
welcome to our class
I know you haven't adapted to us from the term start, I want to help you ,because I believe you will become one of us .
in the first place ,the trues that you don't communcate with us I think it's that you afraid talk to others . you should cantact us as much as you can . in this way we can know more about you ,such as what you like and what you want . what's more ,be confident of yourself , I think it's have an good effect on yourself
in my opinion ,most of us are willing to help you ,however ,you must depend on yourself ,so,please be happy accept us ,especially our teacher,she is very knid !
in fact ,we really want to make good friends with you ! we can help you whatever you want ! come on !
best wishes !
yours
zhanghua
E. 英文建议信的例子
建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出建议和忠告。建议信有可能写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务质量提出建议或忠告:也可能是写给个人,就其人生的某个重大决定提出自己的建议。 内容要点: + 写信的目的以及所谈事情的简介,包括背景、现状、存在的问题和可能的发展;
+ 提出建议的原因;
+ 建议的内容;
+ 客气话或感谢注意事项:+ 语气要诚恳,有礼貌;
+ 建议内容要具体;
+ 可提供不止一个解决方案供选择或一个问题的不同方面提出建议。建议信-范例:Dear Sir or Madam,
As someone who has travelled throughout Asia on business and holiday I would like to give my opinion on its environmental impact. Having visited Indonesia, Thailand and Malaysia I understand that tourism can bring money to developing countries. However, this money often goes into the pockets of foreign investors, and only rarely benefits local people. Multinational hotel chains also have little regard for the surrounding wildlife when they build new resorts. This can cause many problems.
In view of these facts we, as tourists, can directly affect these countries in a positive way if we are thoughtful. When we visit these countries we can visit restaurants, bars and even hotels that are owned by local people. In addition, we can refuse to give Iuxury resorts our patronage and therefore prevent them from becoming even larger. Most importantly we should check that any tours or excursions we take have minimal effect on the natural surroundings. Finally, we can even attempt to change the behaviour of other tourists by sharing our opinions.
If we follow these simple steps we can be sure that our pleasure is not causing any harm to people or places that we visit.
Sincerely yours 建议信-开头段常用句子:* I am writing to express my views concerning…
* I would like to suggest that…
* I am writing in reply to …
* I am writing with my suggestion about…
* May I suggest that…
* In my opinion, I would say…建议信-结尾段常用句子:* I would be more happy to see improvements in this regard.
* I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
* I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
* I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations are helpful/practical/useful/beneficial. 建议信常用词汇:arrange concern condition
consider for the sake of improve
in my opinion matter out of the question
prevent propose regard
schele suggest unsatisfactory
F. 高中英语作文建议信万能开头
一天,老师带领同学们去植树。路上,同学们排着整齐的队伍。天气很好,蓝天上飘着朵朵白云,春天真美啊。老师给我们分了工,我们大家就分头干了起来。
同学们先挖树坑,挖完后把小树苗放进去,再填上土,最后再给小树苗浇点水,一棵小树就种好了。大家干得兴高采烈。小刚和小红干得特别认真。小红扶着小树苗,小刚给小树苗填土,小树苗种好了,他们都高兴地笑了。经过一个上午紧张愉快的劳动,同学们在小土坡上种了几十棵小树苗。看着自己的劳动成果,同学们心里高兴极了,在老师的带领下,满意地回去了。
评改意见:从文章中我们可以看出,小作者没有认真审题,弄清题意。题目要求在观察中看看图上画的是什么季节,都有谁,他们在干什么,特别强调要注意近处两个人的动作,因此文章的重点应写图画上近处两个学生植树时的动作,分几步写清楚植树的过程,这些在文章中并没有具体地介绍,对人物动作的描写只是“小红扶着小树苗,小刚给小树苗填土。”怎样扶,怎样填,以及他们是怎样挖坑,怎样互相配合,小作者都没有写清楚。观察的不细致,反映在文章中,就让人感到语言简单,内容空洞。因而在人物的语言,神态等方面,小作者缺乏想象。描写主要人物的神态,只有一句“他们都高兴地笑了”,没有一句对话,使图画的内容并没有在读者的眼前像放电影一样活起来,显得死板。文章内容松散,有时与主题脱节。开头部分老师带同学们去植树,具体的时间,地点,原因都没有写。“同学们排着整齐的队伍”一句更显得突兀,对天气的描写与赞美,本来可以与植树联系起来,但又被作者忽视了。对劳动过程的描写,作者用“先怎样,再怎样,最后怎样”一笔带过。没有劳动的场面,没有具体的人物活动。图中的学生们从他们手里的工具以及动作可以看出,他们有的在挖坑,有的在浇水,有的扛来小树苗,有的自己干,有的两三个人一起干。文章中没有描述。主要人物的描写中,也让我们不能了解植树的步骤,过程是怎样的。
文章结尾没有起到点明中心,深化主题的作用。“在老师的带领下,满意地回家了。”满意什么,为什么满意?劳动的结果只是种了几十棵树,植树的意义何在?读后并没有使人受到教育,明白植树对保护环境,对人类生存的重要性。这是文章的一大不足。