㈠ 如何上好高中英语写作课
1、开门见山,揭示主题文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
㈡ 高一英语写作课教案中的教学目标怎么写
Teaching Aims
1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.
2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.
Teaching Proceres
Step 1 Discussion
Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy’s pocket. Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says ‘yes’, someone says ‘no’. If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn’t steal the money, what should I do?
Discuss it in groups of four .
Collect answers from students. Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same. Because we’re friends. Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.
In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends. And what do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.
Suggested answers:
Good qualities:
hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature
Bad qualities:
dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy careless pessimistic Brainstorming:
Step 2 Writing
Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends.
Suggested expressions:
close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest,
一些有关友谊的名言警句如:
On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
Sample:
Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life. I have a good friend. Sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, once we discussed a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot. However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once. No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.
My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don’t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time. When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way. When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.
So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious. Getting along with friends is just like growing plants. We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger. And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends. Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.
Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get . Remember, the key is your sincere heart.
Step 3 Promotion and Homework
1)Assign another writing task based on the following information:
What do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?
2) Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.
3) Let the students hand in their final copies.
4) Select some good samples to read to the whole class.
Suggested sample:
Friendship is the most important things in life. Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles. Real good friends could put each other in their hearts. Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently. Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.
How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree. You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow. Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base. Maybe fight also will happen. How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other. Try your best to keep friendship forever. It is necessary to tell the truth and respect each other.
教学实施过程:
针对学生这样的实际情况,并受任务型教学法启示“任务型教学理论实际上就是建立在讨论或交流教学思路的基础上的,是交流教学思路的一种发展形态,英语教学要以学生为中心,教师要为学生设计运用语言的环境,通过大量的交流活动总结和掌握语言的规律,并在交流活动中实践,从而达到目的.”我对每模块后的书面表达内容的教学作了调整,这样处理:即把写作课变成讨论和写作并存的活动课,并在活动课中备有相关的多媒体内容或音乐,使学生在真切愉快的情景中搜集写作素材,完成写作内容,最后达到激发学生写作兴趣,提高写作技能并促进其他几种技能的效果。具体教学过程如下:
第一步,确定题目后,教师启发学生思考,回忆写作中所需要的相关词汇,必要时通过多媒体展示相关内容,然后教师在黑板上进行总结或借助多媒体把关键词语呈现给学生.例如外研版教材Book6 Mole3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,该模块的写作任务讲述朋友之间所产生的矛盾问题,并提出建议如何保持友谊:Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教师可先展示一些有关友谊或本班同学相处的图片、幻灯片、音乐等,以激发学生的学习兴趣。然后教师可引导学生说说自己的好朋友,尽可能用到本模块所学过的词汇:close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。
第二步,分组讨论(均匀分配不同程度的学生),要求学生围绕写作话题借助有关词汇,人人动口,积极思维:1.Who is your good friend? 2. How do you become good friends? 3. Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What’s the problem? 5. Have you made up? 6. What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 并让学生各抒己见,提供出不同的词语句型,如1.I’ve known him/her for ... 2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common. 4. I not only...but also... 5.I suggest that... 6.Why not...? 7.Can’t we ...? 8. What about...? 9. Friendship is both... and... 10. If we... , we can...等也可提供一些有关友谊的名言警句如:On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. (---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship. (---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
同时教师提醒学生在讨论中尽量使用正确的时态、语态并用英语交流。这一步也是学生英文写作收集写作素材的过程。教师可参考与到各个组中,帮助学生解决疑难问题,并根据不同的写作内容和各小组的实际水平适当给他们提供一些新的词汇,同时鼓励那些平时不善于言谈的学生开口交流和帮助基础较差的学生。通过不断的教学实践,我发现:在这种活动或情景之下,学生无拘无束,大胆热烈讨论,加之教师的指导,写作的素材自然获得不少。最后每组选一位代表执笔完成书面表达,并在时间允许内在全班朗读;
第三步,教师进行总结归纳: Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. .Long live friendship! 同时再次强调写作中所需的时态、语态和学生写作过程中容易犯的错误等关键问题。而后要求学生课后完成各自的写作内容并上交作业。
第四步,作文评价是个意义重大的环节,可采用以下评价机制,包括学生自评→学生互评→教师评价→全班反馈→范文共赏五个环节。
学生参与情况:
运用这种教学方式,我所教的班级学生普遍反映:这种讨论和写作的方式更适合他们,因为气氛活跃,让人觉得轻松,通过小组的讨论、互相帮助和老师的指引,较容易搜集到写作素材,而且参考小组素材再结合自己的观点,就更容易下手写作了。每个小组都能写出较为优秀的文章,而且,学生完成作业情况非常好,能充分运用课上所讲的相关词汇和表达方式,有些同学的文章写得相当好,可以作为范文展示学习。总而言之,这种写作教学法既激发了学生的写作兴趣,又提高了他们的口语表达能力,同时还培养了他们的群体合作精神,而且也达到了师生互动交流。
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㈥ 怎样优化课堂教学环节提高英语写作能力:让学生的写作
写是一种综合能力的训练,它是一个系统工程,应贯穿于教学活动的全过程。每一种有效的教学方法,贵在坚持,作为教师,必须长期坚持不懈对学生的写进行训练,使学生的写作水平能在有条理、有秩序的学习过程中得以发展,逐步提高他们的英语应用能力。
随着新课标对写作能力要求的提高,高考写作在高考试卷中所占分值也在逐步增加。许多高中英语教师也意识到了高中英语写作的重要性,并且对如何提高学生的写作水平做了一些尝试,但是我们必须承认高中英语写作教学还相对滞后,对学生的写作水平的提高效果甚微。学生习作中存在着众多问题,主要集中于以下几个方面:(1)句子中的谓语动词把握不好,忽视动词形式变化及动词在中英文意义上的差别;(2)内容表达中式化,结构混乱,语意含糊;(3)内容空洞,语篇不连贯。如果我们认真反思平时课堂教学,我们不难发现,教师对于学生语言表达基本功的训练不够,写作起点过高;不注重培养英语思维习惯;而且忽视对写作立意,思想内容表达方面的指导。针对以上问题,笔者在教学中尝试了从以下四个方面对学生进行英语写作基本功训练,力求能在平时的教学活动中逐步提高学生的英语写作能力。
2 英语写作能力的培养过程
2.1 立足文本,遣词造句,培养英语思维习惯
在上课过程中,我们经常会采用一些blank- filling 等形式考查学生对于新词汇或文章内容的掌握情况,却很少使用从词到句方式复习课文,提高学生的语言表达能力。而从词到句的复习方法有助于增进学生对语句构成过程的认识,强化他们对英语语言结构的感知,培养英语思维习惯。下面以m3 u4 howlife began on earth 阅读课为例,在学习课文的基础上,教师给出课文出现的一些关键词动词作为提示,让后让学生根据课文内容完成一些简单句,对所写的句子再进行改进,联句到文。具体如下:
根据所学的课文内容,和已给的动词的提示,分别在这词的左右两边空格处填写适当的内容,使语意完整。下面是一些学生写的例句。
proce: the explosion of the earth proced water vapour.turn into:water vapour turned into water when the earth cooleddown.
allow:water allowed the earth to dissolve harmful gases into theoceans and seas.
develop:life began to develop on earth.
长期以来,中学英语教学中,教师只注重语言知识的教授,而淡化了英语思维的培养。很多学生平时所吸收的知识量大都是零散的单词、词组,而对于英语句型结构知之甚少,读文写作时没有养成用英语语言思维的习惯。下笔写作时,母语思维自然就占上风,中文式句型频频出现就不足为奇了。
2.2 汉英翻译,巧设空格,规范英语句型表达
汉英翻译是多数老师采用的提高学生书面表达能力的有效策略。但是它也有自身的弊端,特别是对于英语水平中等及偏下的学生来说,还需要改进。因为翻译练习的考查是以结果为中心,而没有以过程为中心,即在翻译过程中,练习本身没有体现对学生思维过程的引导,规范学生英语句型表达。当教师用红笔更正学生习作中多处错误后,学生虽知错误的地方和原因,但他们可能下次还会犯同意的毛病,因为那些错误是老师更正的。为了解决这一问题,在教学实践中,我尝试在设计汉英翻译时,增设一些规定数量的空格,目的是为了引导他们能用英语正确思维,规范句型表达。如:根据所给的关键词和原句已给的提示语,翻译中文,补全英文句子,每空一词。
(1)这张照片让我想起了我的童年时代。(remind)the photo reminds me ofmy childhood.(巩固重点词汇remind..of 的用法)
(2)自从他大学毕业后,他一直从事农业工作。(work on)he has been working on the land since he graated fromcollege.(现在完成进行时的巩固)
(3)由于她沉迷于小说,她没有意识到外面下雨了。(be lost in)lost in the novel , she didn’t realize that it was raining outside.(非谓语用法的巩固)
练习过程中,由于关键词的提示及空格的引导,学生会感到目标更明确,避免不知所措,无从下手。而且为了按要求完成句型,学生在翻译过程中会进行积极思考,尝试不同的词汇、时态、结构等,思维就会更严密,自主学习能力也会增强。同时老师的批改和分析也会变得简单,清晰多了,学生也更容易更正自己的错误。教师也可以避免面对学生翻译的错误百出的句型而无从下手批改的局面。
3 结语
写是一种综合能力的训练,它是一个系统工程,应贯穿于教学活动的全过程。首先,在平时的教学活动中,教师应该注重培养学生的英语思维习惯,不断尝试新的有效的教学方法引导学生掌握英语句型基本结构,强抓语言表达基本功,为写作能力的提高奠定坚实基础。其次,教师还应不断给学生展示结构丰富、词汇优美的佳句美文,并且逐步引导他们从不同的角度,用不同句型表达自己的思想,让学生体会到英语语言的魅力。要提高学生的作文水平,讲评也是很重要的教学环节。我们知道一篇好的文章应该是词汇、语法、内容的完美结合。点评学生文章时不仅要考虑到文章的词汇、句型、结构,还要顾及文章的中心思想、语言内容等方面是否明确、充实。总而言之,每一种有效的教学方法,贵在坚持,作为教师,必须长期坚持不懈对学生的写进行训练,使学生的写作水平能在有条理、有秩序的学习过程中得以发展,逐步提高他们的英语运用能力