英语写作高分作文

『壹』 中考十大英语满分作文，

第一篇：
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
【优秀满分范文】
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and rece pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can rece air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇：
【写作要求】
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。
【优秀满分范文】
Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.

『贰』 英语作文怎样写可以得高分

一．
正确讨巧的审题思路：
写好作文必先审题，
明确所给的提示或图表的内容要
求，
确定写什么，
怎么写，
怎样在适当的地方提出所写文章的健康积极的中心论
点；思路讨巧和视角新颖也可使文章增色不少。
二．不受干扰的英语思维：在进行英文写作时，切断思维和中文的连接，让思维
（而不是表述思维的中文）
留在脑海中，
排除汉语思维定势是进行英语写作的第
一步。
三．
符合内容的段落结构：
要考虑好文章的体裁和布局，
文章的布局应围绕着主
题进行叙述、议论。要确定行文是采用时间顺序、因果顺序，还是采用论述、对
比等方式。
行文时要做到内容切题，
能完整表达题意。
了解段落写作的特点对提
高写作水平是十分必要的，一般来说,
段落包括三个组成部分：主题句点出段落
的主旨，发展部分用事实、例子、理由、数据等来发挥阐明主题，说明或支持主
旨，结尾句起总结、归纳或概括全段中心的作用（见学生习作）。
四．
正确地道的表达方式：
选词造句应选用已掌握的固定搭配和各种基本表达法，
而不要杜撰臆造。要积累词语，整理背诵记忆词汇要分块，如表达情感，衣食住
行，科技教育，娱乐旅游，网络电脑各成一组。文章中不要总用同一个太常用的
词，如，
important
，可换为
essential, vital, critical, crucial, of great value
等；
many
可换用
millions of
，
a number of
等词。作文的文采是对语言运用的综合能力的表
现。因此，可适当加入一些高级词汇及复杂句型，引入从句、各种语态、语气，
或谚语来为作文的亮点，
但要注意，
所有这些都应以正确使用为前提，
谚语也不
宜用过
“熟”
的；
也不要一味用难词，
结果会适得其反，
语言是
“约定俗成”
的，
使用外语就得符合外国人的习惯。
五．通顺流畅的上下连动：条理要清楚，句型有一定变化，可用不同的从句，虚
拟等，使用恰当的连词、插入语，使文章有较强的连贯性，适当地注意文章的开
头和结尾的文采，尽量做到前后呼应。
六．
恰如其分的修辞运用：
英文写作和汉语写作在修辞方面还是存在许多共同之
处的。
要使自己的英语作文显得有文采，
就要在英语写作中适当尝试采用有效的
修辞手法。
七．认真谨慎的复查修改：整篇作文写完后，一定要仔细检查，查看有无遗漏的
要点和标点符号，并检查字母的大小写、单词拼写，特别要注意文中的动词（主
谓一致、时态、语态）使用的正确性以及字数是否符合要求。

『叁』 英语作文怎样才能得高分

一、紧握一条时态主线
时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点，有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态，将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句：
This great loss had kill Mrs. white,but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)
This great loss had killed Mrs. white,but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)
建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中，尽量紧握一条时态主线，一是来写起来操作性强，二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是：一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。
二、增强语言说服力
在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候，考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服，那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力，如何增强呢?有两个好方法，一是引用名人话语，二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力，使文章不再“徒有其表”。
“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University's businesss chool.(2007年阅读理解Text4)试题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则，从侧面说明作者观点，同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。
被动句也是一个很好的法宝，将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述，我们看下面的例子：
We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)
Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)
可以看出，被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是，不要过多使用，每篇出现两至三个比较合适，过犹不及。多使用被动句，让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。
三、书写规范书面语
还有一点，考生千万要注意，这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误，那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知，书面英语和口语有很大区别，有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语，所以需要引起考生的注意。
四、闪光词汇必不可少
在考场作文中，but、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神，直接将文章打为C类，而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮，尤其是试题中文章的精彩表述方式，考生要勤加总结。

『肆』 英语参考范文是满分作文

参考范文：
Would you want a doctor to operate on you who has only learned about operations from a textbook? The answer to this is obviously a resounding “No!” Knowledge gained from books must always be complemented by knowledge gained from actual experience, to be of real value。
For me actually practicing a particular action or experiment myself and experiencing the result, leaves a much deeper and lasting impression than what I get from simply reading or listening. If I read about how to write an essay or listened to someone talk about writing an essay, I still wouldn’t feel that I knew how to write an essay until I wrote one for myself. It is the case, however, that writing the essay would be based on the methods I learned intellectually. The same can be said for other skills, like sports, for example. A person can know all the rules of a game, associated skills and strategies, but until that person gets on a court with a ball in motion, the theory remains flat, useless。
To sum up, as to theoretical knowledge and practical skills, the latter is certainly more important. Just as British churchman Thomas Fuller put it, “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。”
参考译文
一个大夫只学过课本上的手术知识，叫他给你主刀你是否愿意？显然，这个问题的答案是一声响亮的“不”。书本知识要有实际价值，就必须同实践经验相结合。
对我来说，实践某件事，或者说亲自去尝试某项活动并感受最后的结果，要比读书听课给我留下的印象更深刻，更持久。如果只是读到如何写作，或是听别人讲解写作方法，我觉得自己还是不会写，非得亲自写一篇才行。当然，实际写作中也会用到以前学过的写作方法。掌握其他技能也是一个道理。以体育为例，一个人可以通晓所有的比赛规则和相关战术技巧，但除非这个人上场打球，否则那堆理论就是呆板无用的。
总之，对于理论知识和实践技能，相比之下，实践经验当然更重要。正如英国教士托马斯 富勒所说：“知识是一种财富，但实践是打开财富的钥匙。”

『伍』 写作 （英语作文）

A happy day
I have a great time today.
I get up at seven and I do morning exercises with my parents at home.
After breakfast, I do my homework.
I like the homework because I can learn a lot.
At about ten, we go to the theatre to watch the Three-D movie"Kongfu Panda".
I like the movie very much because the Panda is very funny.
After the movie, we go to the KFC for lunch.
Then we go to the park for some fun.
At about four, we go back home.
My parents ask me to do some homework if I want to play computer games.
We have dinner at six.
After dinner I help my mother with some housework.
Then I watch Mr. Bean with my parents. We laugh a lot.
I have a happy time today.

『陆』 求一篇英语作文。高分急求

I have been to the beautiful Jinjiang Dandong where the clear mountain Yalu River, the Yalu River on the bridge watching the river from the bridge there is a very impressive memorial commemorating the Korean War was still the fallen heroes who are very busy pedestrian street still has a lot of delicious Great fun Dandong is the northernmost point, and I went to Tiger Mountain Great Wall and the Phoenix Mountains high into the cloud really very happy.
下次得作文要靠自己写哦。 看看行不行吧

『柒』 考研英语高分作文怎么写

考研英语强化阶段的复习中，阅读和写作排在首位。作文作为考研英语分值第二大的板块，也是我们复习的重点。

除了平时对素材的积累以及写作的练习，充分掌握阅卷人的阅读和评分心理，了解写作规范和评分规则也是提高写作分数的重要途径。

作文评分五个档，你是哪个档？

考研英语作文分为A节和B节两个部分：A节考察应用文（小作文）。英语一、英语二满分均为10分；B节考察话题作文（大作文）。英语一满分20分，英语二满分15分。

掌握英语写作的评分档次、原则和标准，有针对性地进行训练和提升，有助于我们从自身实际出发，更好地准备复习。

书写是个小细节，卷面整洁的同学非常占优势。所以字迹要干净，字体规范，各个单词之间要留有空隙。不用追求字写得多漂亮，最重要的是让阅卷老师看清楚内容。

在阅卷老师感到疲惫的时候，看见干净整洁的卷面，心情好了，印象分自然也就上去了。如果出现写错的情况，可以轻轻用横线划去，不要涂画得乱七八糟。

以上就是对考研英语写作评分标准和提分途径的总结啦，希望能够帮助大家更好地了解作文的评分要求，更有针对性地进行复习。当然，如果你还是没有自信写出优秀高分作文，不如加入恋练有辞写作宝典的课堂，让杨凡达老师带你突破英语作文，练就高分技巧！

『捌』 求两篇英语作文 ！ 符合要求！ 高分悬赏！！！符合初二写作水平！！

第一篇

Dear Lucy.
I am very happy to receive your letter in which you ask about Chinese Moon Festival. Let me tell you briefly about it.
It is on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. At this time of the year, it is just in the middle of the autumn that is why it is also translated as the Mid-Autumn Festival. On the 15th day, there is a full moon. Chinese people always consider that the moon is the most perfect than any other days of the year.
The Moon Festival is an occasion for family reunions. The full moon the symbol of the happiness for the whole family. When the moon rises, families get together and watch the moon, eat moon cakes and fruits that are in season.
Moon cake is the traditional food for the occasion. They are normal round in shape which ensemble the shape of the moon.
My family celebrates the Moon Festival each year with my parents, grandparents and my sister. When we watch the moon, we eat the moon cake and my sister and I would recite some classic poems and my grandma would tell the legendry story of the beautiful woman called Chang Er who flew to the moon.
I hope that one day you come to China and the time of the Moon Festival and I believe that you will have a great time to experience Chinese culture.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

第二篇 :这是标准答案，你可以参照着稍微修改一下 O(∩_∩)O~

January9，2009 Sunny
Now．it's the year of 2009．I have a little plan for the New Year．I am going to study hard and get good grades．I am going to read more books and practice spoken English more．As for health．I am going to eat healthy food．I am also going to do more exercise．I want to help my mom to do more chores at home．I will cook meals on weekends．I love traveling．I am going summer camping if possible．But I am too shy and too quiet to be good at conversations，so I am going to make more friends this year．