① 求一篇英语作文。高分急求
I have been to the beautiful Jinjiang Dandong where the clear mountain Yalu River, the Yalu River on the bridge watching the river from the bridge there is a very impressive memorial commemorating the Korean War was still the fallen heroes who are very busy pedestrian street still has a lot of delicious Great fun Dandong is the northernmost point, and I went to Tiger Mountain Great Wall and the Phoenix Mountains high into the cloud really very happy.
下次得作文要靠自己写哦。 看看行不行吧
② 如何写出一篇高分的大学英语作文
如何写出一篇高分的大学英语作文？
在听、说、读、写四项英语技能中,写作对于中国大学生来讲可能是困难最大的一项.因为听、读属于接受性技能（receptive skills）,只要学生将贮存在大脑中的语言知识在听或读的过程中进行及时提取,理解就可以产生.因此,这些语言知识可以静止地储存在我们的记忆里,以便必要时提取.而作为产出性的（proctive skills）说、写技能则不然,它要求学习者不但要有丰富的语言知识储备,还要求能够将这些知识变为自己语言的一部分.大学生要写出优秀的英语作文,首先需要打下牢固的语言基础,即相当程度的语言造诣、良好的语言修养和敏锐的语言感知能力.而且必须懂得写作的具体步骤,了解写作的性质,掌握写作的技巧.更为重要的是,中国学生还必须解决用英语思维的问题.不懂得英美人思维方式的人,无论语言功底有多深,是写不出地道的英语文章的.这里我向大家具体谈谈写好英语作文的几个重要环节. 首先我们谈谈语言.任何学过几年英语的人,他可能自己写不出好的英语作文,但当读到一篇漂亮的英语作文时,他能感觉到.产生这种感觉的又是什么?这就是语言.文章语言是重要的.我们赞叹一篇汉语文章,往往是因为我们被文章的语言所吸引、所征服：语汇丰富,句式整齐,语言或精炼或华丽,四字成语和句式安排均熟练自如,自然流畅.英语文章也同样如此.我们说这篇英语作文漂亮,主要还是因为它的语言丰富、老练和地道.那么怎样才能做到这一点呢？基本功训练！还是回到了听说读写中的写。尤其是经常默写一些选段。
其次是广泛阅读，知识面要尽可能广，这样就不会像很多学生说的“让我用中文也写不出来”。
③ 英语作文如何拿高分 一些常用的高级英语作文
一、作文得分标准分成四个部分～ 1、【内容分】（分），内容分也叫要点分，也就是题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点，没有反社会言论，就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和优秀的孩子千万不要漏点！！！一定要检查再检查，内容分扣分是很夸张的，漏一个大要点直接扣10分，也就是降两档处理（阅卷老师会怀疑我们提前背了与考试无关的作文去考场写），漏一个小要点也要扣2分了】 2、【结构分】（6分），结构分包括（1）段落分配和（2）连词的运用。我们平时背的那些模板，其实就是在帮我们梳理结构，背下模板，拿到结构分满6分是非常非常正常的～～所以，我非常鼓励大家背模板～～（结构写的灰常棒，比模板还好的娃请折叠我）后面结构分我会重点说。 3、【词句分】（6分），词句分，顾名思义，是指运用‘’准确的单词+优秀多变的句型‘’得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分，考察的是学生的基本功，6分满分非常难得，但是拿2～4分还是相当容易的。优秀和高分的分水岭就在词句分上～ 4、【卷面分】（6分），卷面一是字迹工整美观，二是不能涂改（所以一定要打草稿啊）。这两个都达到了，卷面满分6分妥妥拿到～ ［我对大家的要求就是，想拿高分，卷面请不要扣分！！！在这里扣分非常不划算，要用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。］二、【结构分】提分方法（一）完美的段落分配前文已经说过，全国卷是提纲类作文，当拿到一个提纲作文时，我们首先要干嘛呢？对咯，就是要根据背景和提示内容分段。我和其他老师一致认为，高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间，我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。三段式作文请按照下图结构来写～
④ 怎么写好中考英语表达观点类高分作文
八、表达观点类 书面表达旨在测试学生的英语书面表达能力。中考的书面表达是一种指导性写作。试题对写作的目的、对象、体裁及字数都有明确的规定。在近几年的中考写作中，表达观点类文章的比重占得越来越多，出题形式也多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等多种类型，但文章实际上都是议论文，有时是夹叙夹议类文章。写好该类书面表达同学们要注意以下要点： 1、观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。 2、层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。 3、最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4、通常采用一般现在时。 5、语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。 技巧点拨 一般来说，这类文章内在的逻辑关系十分清晰。它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。过渡性词和短语如下：first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately…. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。过渡性词和短语如下：second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what's more, what is worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt… 用于"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。过渡性的词和短语如下：but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of… 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语如下：in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, eventually….. 总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。 写作摸板 对于表达观点类作文，文章的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点一一比较着来写。 对比观点作文写作摸板： The topic of主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What's more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides),理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former(later)is surely a wise choice. 1、学校作业多，学生嫌负担重；学校作业少，家长又担心得不得了。参考表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对这一现象的看法或态度，并明确阐述你的观点。 家长/老师 学生 多做习题 巩固所学知识 作业多 没时间运动，身体弱 多做练习 提高成绩 作业太多，厌学 如果作业少，学生贪玩（电脑游戏，电视等） 特别是周末作业多，没时间培养兴趣爱好 这是一篇图表议论文。 一、 题目要点： 1、本文的中心论题是：学校作业多，学生嫌负担重；学校作业少，家长又担心。所以首先要提出中心论题并点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题，可以分成两段，先分析家长/老师的观点及理由。然后过渡到学生的观点及理由。 3、讲述自己的选择，要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。 二、语言组织： 在组织语言的过程中，先用地道的英语句式将所列要点表达清楚，例如：do more work…review what they have learned…improve grades…spend time in playing…not enough time to do sports…poor health…get bored with study…..have no time to develop interests… Model 1 Many people think the more time you spend, the more work you'll do. So it is common to see students struggling in a sea of schoolwork, both at school and at home. Modern students usually have many interests. They love music, sports, reading and watching TV. But they have no time to enjoy themselves. Students are really tired of their weekend homework. They usually don't do it until Sunday night. Sometimes there is not enough time and students have to finish it carelessly. Too much homework makes students lose their interest in learning. It's also bad for their health. A horse runs faster after a rest. But for students rest alone is not enough. Such a situation should be changed to give students both pleasure and knowledge. Please give students less homework but leave them more free time. 2、随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。"网购"成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。 优点1、足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤；劳累 2、价格通常较便宜； 3、可供选择的范围广，品种多。 缺点1、只看到图片，看不到商品本身 2、容易购买大量不太需要的东西；造成浪费。 一、题目要点： 1、本文的中心论题是：网上购物的优势与劣势。所以首先要提出中心论点，点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题，可以分做两段，先写网上购物的优势，足不出户；节省时间；避免拥挤、劳累；价格便宜；可供选择的范围广，品种多，然后很自然地过渡到网上购物的缺点及理由，只看到图片，看不到商品本身；容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。 3、讲述自己的选择，要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。 Model 1 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. There are at least three good points of shopping online. First, people can buy what they want without going outside, which helps them avoid crowds and heavy traffic. Second, the prices of goods online are usually reasonable. Third, it offers different varieties of goods for people to choose. But there are also some bad points. The most serious one is that people can not see the goods in person. Instead, they get the information only from the pictures and the description. If they want to buy a pair of shoes, they can't try them on. Sometimes, the goods they buy are totally different from what they have expected. To make things worse, shopping online makes it easy for people to buy what they don't really need. It is a waste of money. In my opinion, I prefer going shopping to shopping online, because going shopping is a kind of enjoying life for me and I can also get what I really want. 3、假设你班上周就"Is it OK to tell white lies?"开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。 陈述方 主要观点 赞成者 1、善意的谎言是出于好意，说了不为过； 2、善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处； 3、善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。 反对者 1、善意的谎言也是谎； 2、谎言会伤害友情； 3、谎言终究不能持久。 你的观点 至少两点 一、 题目要点： 1、本文的中心论题是："Is it OK to tell white lies?"所以首先要提出中心论点，点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题，可以分成两段，先写赞成者的观点及理由，即善意的谎言是出于好意，说了不为过；可以帮助人们友好相处；有时候能使人增强自信。然后很自然地过渡到反对者的观点及理由，即善意的谎言也是谎；会伤害友情；终究不能持久。 Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. The students have many opinions. Some students support the opinion. They hold the view that telling white lies doesn't matter much as long as it is out of kindness, especially when a friend is facing failure. Sometimes, white lies can encourage people to stick to what they are doing. However, every coin has two sides. Other students oppose the opinion. They believe white lies are always lies. They also convey the meaning of cheating. To make things worse, white lies hurt people's feelings, so they do harm to friendship. Meanwhile, lies never go far. In my opinion, although white lies are lies, they are necessary in our daily life. After all, not everyone dares to face reality bravely. 4、目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史，有人选择读史书来了解历史。你的选择及理由是什么？请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。 选择 理由 看历史剧 情节有趣，通俗易懂 读历史书 资料真实，引人深思 你的选择 ？ 这是一篇议论文。 一、题目要点：1、本文的中心论题是：通过什么样的方式了解历史。所以首先要提出中心论题，点题。2、从两方面来讨论这个问题，可以分成两段，先通过看历史剧来了解历史的方式及理由，然后很自然地过渡到通过读历史书来了解历史的方式及理由。3、讲述自己的选择，要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。
⑤ 英语类问题 写作高手进 高分悬赏！
写这个要靠自己，如果你总是喜欢在网上找的话，时间长了你会更加不会写这类文章了，建议你只在网上找找写该类作文的方法，而不是直接照抄
⑥ 如何写出高分英语作文
1. 内容切题
内容切题是命题作文的基本要求，考生可从以下几个方面入手：
第一要认真审题。根据题目类别，弄清文体的要求，并判明文章的种类(议论文、说明文、记叙文)，同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想，若题目已经提供了提纲，还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后，切勿惟恐时间不够，提笔就写。一旦跑题，发现了再改就来不及了，常言道：“磨刀不误砍柴工”。
第二要注意设计安排段落。根据文章的中心思想，确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文，一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑，首先是某观点的合理成分或某物的长处，然后是该观点的不合理成分或该物的短处，最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目提供了提纲，只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。
第三要避免将记忆里较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地搬进作文，使作文结构松散，意思不明确，甚至会偏离主题。
2. 表达清楚，文字连贯
文章要做到表达清楚，文字连贯，文章各段落就必须根据提纲所确立的不同主题来展开，而且各段落的主题句要将段落的各个部分凝聚在一起，流利地表达段落大意，使段落中各部分以及段落之间的联系一目了然。下面，我们来看一篇99年CET-4考试范文：
Reading Selectively Or Extensively
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published every day. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books, and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it used to be. If you want to be successful, you must read widely and acquire knowledge in both natural sciences and humanities. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who’s right? There is a lot to be said for both sides of the argument. However, I think we should read extensively first and then learn deeply about the subject we are interested in.
在上面的作文中，考生采用了明确的主题句，各段落都紧紧围绕主题句写作而成。文章上下文衔接紧凑、连贯，例如第二段开头用Some people think…， 第三段开头用Others may not agree…， 而最后一段用一个问句Who’s right?作为连接，都显得相当自然。另外，英语中常见的一些连接手段，如what’s more, and, since, but, one (field)…others, however, first, then等，也都用的很恰当。
3. 句式有变化
有些考生对写作没信心，不敢大胆地使用所掌握的语言基础知识，包括英语句法知识，结果整篇文章都是以主、谓、宾句式为主的简单句子，文章显得刻板无生气。实际上，同汉语一样，英语的句子结构也是丰富多彩，变化多样的。阅读下面的段落，注意句式的变化：
Clearly our schools and society face the same problems. It has become necessary for all people, not just ecators, to be more aware of the problems. Although some intervention programs have been implemented and in some cases are very successful, it is becoming more obvious that these problems are going to continue and will have a direct consequence on our future in this country. Unfortunately, we as a society tend to look for the “quick fix” to our problems without realizing the consequences for the future. Our society needs to understand that the schools are not responsible for the cause of these problems or the solutions, but rather, all aspects of society, including schools, are involved and need to collectively work together if we are ever to make progress toward resolving these problems in the long run.
在这一段落中既有长短句子的交插运用，又有语序的变化，既有简单句又有复合句，不失为在句式变化方面的一个典范。
4. 句子结构和用词正确
要在写作中选择恰当的词汇，使用正确的句子结构，首先要勤学多练，背记常用词和短语，扩大词汇量，拓展知识面。要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义，并了解它们所使用的语言环境。为了备考应试，要熟记一些常用的过渡词和英语句型，切忌自己编造汉语式的句子和词组。尽量使用学习过的、比较熟悉的、有把握的句式和词汇。
In the world, millions of people believe that some things can bring good luck for them. They make their spirit to depend on these things. We say they have a religion.
Some of these people have a strange religion. They believe in “Luck number”, they believe luck number would bring good luck. When they do sth. with relation to numbers, they usually choose the number they believe.
In fact, many people said that they don’t believe it, but most of them can tell a number they like. Many people like the number 8 or 6 in China. They believe 8 can make them succeded in business and make them uhealth. They also believe six bring the good luck, and things is smooth without a hitch. In fact, many people couldn’t explain why the number can bring good luck and How he know just the number is his luck number. Sometimes, people decide one things depended on their feeling, because they usually couldn’t know whole the thing. Maybe, One day, Sb. Can tell the reason and truth.
这是一篇得8分的试卷，内容切题，并有所发挥，但有些地方的表达不够清楚;结构还算符合要求，文字勉强连贯，但是语言方面的错误多，尤其是在主谓搭配、动词的时态、名词的单复数、词性、语序等方面。此外有的拼写也不规范，如：sb, sth。 画线部分可作以下修改：
to depend → depend
They believe in “ Luck number”, they → They believe in “ lucky numbers ”, so they
sth. → something
said → say
succeded → succeed
uhealth → wealthy
bring the good luck → brings good luck
things is → the things are
How he know → how he knows
people decide one things → people’s decision on one thing
depended → depends
usually couldn’t → couldn’t usually
One day → one day
Sb. Can → someone can
另外，考生还要注意卷面印象分这一问题。卷面要力求整洁，答题纸四周都要留空边，正确使用标点符号。短文要避免使用令阅卷老师反感的词句，如“Do you know…? Let me tell you”之类的过分口语化的表达方式。
最后，写作考试过程中合理分配时间，对提高成绩，稳定发挥起着重要作用。
⑦ 英语作文怎样才能得高分
一、紧握一条时态主线
时态问题一直是英语备考中的难点，有些考生经常在一篇文章中出现两种或两种以上的时态，将这些时态混合使用的同时也增加了语法错误出现的频率。我们来看下面的例句：
This great loss had kill Mrs. white,but actually this free her from her husband.(错误)
This great loss had killed Mrs. white,but actually this freed her from her husband.(正确)
建议考生在考场上作文的写作过程中，尽量紧握一条时态主线，一是来写起来操作性强，二来让阅卷老师看的“明明白白”。写作时经常使用的语法依次是：一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时、一般过去时和现在进行时。
二、增强语言说服力
在阐述某种观点、说明某项情况的时候，考生要通过自己的语言让阅读者信服，那么就要通过文中的句子来增强自己的说服力，如何增强呢?有两个好方法，一是引用名人话语，二是使用被动句。增强文章说服力，使文章不再“徒有其表”。
“Data is becoming an asset which needs to be guarded as much as any other asset”says Haim Mendelson of Stanford University's businesss chool.(2007年阅读理解Text4)试题的文章中出现引用名家话语是十分常见的成文规则，从侧面说明作者观点，同时经常是命题老师命题的高频出题点。
被动句也是一个很好的法宝，将被动句视为对客观事实的陈述，我们看下面的例子：
We find some use of computers in various fields.(主动句)
Computers have been widely used in various fields.(被动句)
可以看出，被动句更像是对时事的陈述。但是需要注意的是，不要过多使用，每篇出现两至三个比较合适，过犹不及。多使用被动句，让文章论点更容易“站住脚”。
三、书写规范书面语
还有一点，考生千万要注意，这也是一些英语底子好的考生经常犯的错误，那就是在书面语中运用口语化的语言。众所周知，书面英语和口语有很大区别，有一些缩略语不是正确的书面语，所以需要引起考生的注意。
四、闪光词汇必不可少
在考场作文中，but、because之类词汇使得阅卷老师打不起精神，直接将文章打为C类，而高级词汇的使用使得阅卷老师眼前一亮，尤其是试题中文章的精彩表述方式，考生要勤加总结。