① 关于人物介绍的 英语作文
(一)人物简介的写作步骤
1. Birthday and birth place
2. Family background
3. Ecation
4. Big events in his or her life ( in order of time )
5. Evaluation
(二)人物简介写作中常用的词组及句子
1. Birthday and birth place ——was / were born on…in… ,
2. Family background ——
1) a poor / rich family
2) his (her) family was so poor that……,
3) with the help of his parents ,
4) his father was very strict with him……,
5) the son of a poor family ,
6) when he was a small boy ,
7) as a child ,
8) ring his (her) childhood ,
9) spend his childhood in……,
10) live a happy (hard ) life ,
11) a boy of 15
3. Ecation——
1) graate from……department of ……university ,
2) When at college , he majored in……,
3) receive a doctor’s degree .
4) get higher ecation
5) go abroad for further studies
4. Big events in his life——
1) be interested in … , 2) work hard at … , 3) devote his lifetime to … , 4) do research about / into … 5) make a big decision . make up one’s mind to do sth. 6) do sth with great determination and perseverance . 7) be fond of… , 8) be strict in sth. 9) have a … way of doing sth. 10) try one’s best to do sth. 11) encourage sb to do sth. 12) fight for , give up one’s life for sb / sth. 13) win a prize in … competi
ition . 14) be good at . 15) make rapid progress in … , 16) set a new world record of … 17) become a member of … 18) study hard . train hard . 19) win a gold medal . 20) work so hard as to improve… 21) have a gift for…
5. Evaluation——
1) one of the best (most important) … 2) set sb a good example . 3) a model teacher . 4) be respected by everyone . 5) sing high praise for… speak (think) highly of… 6) his hard work brought him great success . 7) his heroic story spread all over the city . 8) remember sb forever . 9) be honored as … 10) be famous as … , 11) be regarded as … , 12) become a world champion at … Championships . 13) He became famous for his new theory . 14) The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader . 15) Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit . 16) People spoke highly of him and all respected him .
6. 高考中描写人常用表达方式
(1)介词人物的姓名、出身
She was born in Poland on Nov. 7 , 1867 .
(她于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。)
a great scientist with the name Einstein
(一个叫爱因斯坦的伟大科学家)
Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kentucky on February 12 , 1809 .
(亚伯拉汗•林肯,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日出生于肯他基州。)
Born of a poor clerk’s family . Charles Dickens had little schooling .
(出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中,查儿斯•狄更生接受了很少学校教育)
(2)描述人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语
good - looking (长得好看的) funny - looking (长相滑稽的)
ugly - loking (长得难看的) ordinary looking (长相一般的)
white - haired (白头发的) warm - hearted (热心肠的)
kind - hearted(好心的) absent - minded (心不在焉的)
bad - tempered (脾气不好的) near - sighted (近视眼的)
far - sighted (远视的) tall (个高的)
short (个矮的) pretty (漂亮的)
naughty (淘气的) lovely (可爱的)
easy - going (温和宽容的) smart (精明的)
wise (明智的) bright (聪明的)
diligent (勤奋的) lazy (懒惰的)
clever (聪明的) healthy (健康的)
humorous (幽默的) funny (滑稽的)
silent (沉默的) attractive (有吸引力的)
talkative (多话的)
(3)表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语
like … very much (非常喜欢…) love (喜爱)
be interested in (对…感兴趣)
be fond of (喜欢…)
hate (憎恨)
be tired of (对…厌倦)
be crazy about (对…极度喜欢)
enjoy (喜欢…)
lose interest in (对…失去兴趣)
(4)描述人物心情的常用词语:
sad (难过的) happy (高兴的)
excited (兴奋的) pleased (高兴的)
satisfied (满意的) angry (生气的)
worried (担心的) disappointed (失望的)
terrified (恐惧的) friendly (友好的)
anxious (焦虑的) curious (好奇的)
eager (急切的)
(三)实例分析
1. 说明:
上海出版的《学生英文报》,对象是我国的学生,请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍,介绍少年体育明星孙淑伟。内容要点如下:
1)简况:孙淑伟(Sun Shuwei):男,14岁,广东人(Guangdong)
2)训练项目:跳水(diving)
3)取得成绩:第十一届亚运会冠军,第六届世界游泳锦标赛冠军(亚运会:the Asia Games 冠军:Champion 游泳锦标赛:Swimming Championships)
4)其他情况:从小就喜欢游泳,8岁进广东省跳水队;在学校里认真学习,在跳水队时认真训练,13岁进入国家队,一年后(1990)夺得十一届亚运会金牌;今年年初获第六届游泳锦标赛冠军。
注意:
1)要有标题。
2)介绍须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
3)介绍的长度为80~120个词。
2. 题解:
这是一篇人物报道,根据所提供的材料组织文章。首先应确定标题。如:Sun Shuwei - A World Champion in Diving . 其次应介绍人物的姓名、性别、年龄、籍贯,随后介绍他的成长过程,最后介绍他取得的成就。
3. 91高考书面表达范文:
Sun Shuwei - A World Champion in Diving
Sun Shuwei , a world champion in diving , is a boy of 14 from Guangdong . He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province . He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team . A year later in 1990 , he won a gold medal at the 11th Asia Games and became a world champion at the 6th world Swimming Championships early this years .
② 初中英语作文《人物描写》
你可以参考下仁爱英语七年级上册的第二单元,那单元的重点就是人版物描写。下面是权我自己写的,水平有限哈,仅供参考。Tony is my good friend.He is a nice boy.He has a round face,like a apple.And his eyes are big and bright.He has a small nose.But his mouth is very wide.We are in the same class,and he is the tallest boy in our class.He likes playing basketball very much,so do I.So we often play basketball together after class.I hope we can be good friends forever.
③ 初中英语介绍人物 作文
示范作文如下:
Hi, everbody! Let's welcome a new student to our class! Look, this is Jenny Brown, the new student. She is twelve years old. She comes from England. She can dance well because she likes dancing very much. She only knows a little Chinese, so she need your help. We may learn from each other and help each other. Her telephone number is 535-2375. Do you have any questions to ask her? ...
(DAVID编写提专供属)
④ 如何用过程性写作的方法进行初中英语写作教学
创造一个快乐、高效的英语写作课堂,一直是广大英语教师所关注的问题。过程性写作教学流程分四阶段:写前准备阶段(prewriting),写作阶段(composing/drafting),修改阶段(revising),编辑阶段(editing)。
(一)写前准备阶段(pre-writing)
这个过程有时伴随着阅读资料和调查人物及分组讨论的活动,作者要对题目进行探索,调动自己原有知识并认识自己的缺口和不足, 从而吸纳新的知识,从而在活动中深化主题,聚集素材,打好腹稿,为下一步写作做好准备。此阶段通常分两步进行,即“热身活动”与阅读欣赏范文活动。
1.“热身活动”。
“热身”时,师可采取一些激活学生思维的策略与技巧,在知识和情意上为学生写作做好铺垫。常见的方法有头脑风暴法(brain storming)、集束法(clustering)、快速自由写作法(rapid freewriting)、“5W1H”提问法(questioning)等。
(1)头脑风暴法
头脑风暴法: 即全体组员将所有与主题(topic)相关的观点和盘托出, 不必考虑流露出的思想正误与否。先从具体、熟悉的信息源入手,然后转向抽象、陌生的信息源。如: 要让学生写Should students beallowed to use mobile phone? 可以让学生以头脑风暴的形式讨论what can mobile phone do for you? 鼓励他们表达自己的观点,下一步的写作训练理清思路,列出提纲。
(2)快速自由写作
要求每位学生在一两分钟内自由而快速地写下与主题有关的单词和短语。对时间加以限制,目的在于促使学生的大脑快速运转和思维。如:让学生介绍一个熟悉的人。可以问:Who do you like to writeabout? What do you like to write about? 要求每位学生在一两分钟内自由而快速地写下与这个人物介绍有关的单词和短语。比如hobby,appearance,personality,habits 等,并能够就每个方面写一两句,并给以及时的鼓励。
(3)集束法
即以主题为主轴, 将与之相关的词汇缀集在一起。这是一种简单而有效的方法。因为“可视词汇”可以刺激学生的“联想流”,这对那些有话说不出的学生来说极为奏效。如:让学生写school rules,可以以school rules 为主轴来提供与之相关的词汇。比如:school uniform,in class,homework,in the library,classmates,然后让学生由单词联想相关的规则。
(4)“5W1H”提问法
即要求学生根据主题就who,what,where,when,why,how 等进行提问。问题的大小详略视需要而定,不能千篇一律。如:让学生an unforgettabletrip 就可以围绕这么五个问题:Who did you gowith? What did you do there? Where did you go?When did leave? Why did you go there? How did you go there? 让学生把这些问题串在一起就是一篇短文。
除了以上所述四种技巧外,还可借助多媒体(如印刷物、电脑、录像和影视)、人物专访、谈话、考察和问卷等手段搜集素材。如果在写作前准备阶段给学生提供较多获取信息或材料的途径,他们就会表现出更高的积极性、主动性和创造性。
2.阅读欣赏范文。
先读后写,为发挥“范文”的“示范”作用,不能满足于对文章内容和形式的一般掌握,而是要深入理解文章表达的思想内容以及谋篇布局,写作手法和技巧。然后让学生运用范文的框架,写出自己所要表达的内容。
(二)写作阶段
写作阶段是学生独立把自己的思想用语言完整地表达出来的过程。教师最好结合课堂活动和具体的写作话题,当堂找出写作的切人点,列出提纲。若有可能可即时进行口头作文。另外,还要提醒学生需注意的问题,为其提供必要的语言素材。例如,教师可针对本次写作的具体内容,给出一些相关词汇(如:写作常见的表示启、承、转、合的习惯用语和套话)并配合图片和示例。这样,在实施写作的过程中,学生多多少少会有一些信手拈来的成就感。
(三)修改阶段
1.自我纠错:制定基本批改标准
在一开始让学生写短文,就制定评分标准,并让学生熟知这个标准:①作文长度100-120单词;②作文结构:是否有开头与结尾;③作文内容;是否覆盖所有要求的要点;④语言表达:是否运用丰富的词汇与句型结构;⑤语法:是否有语法错误;⑥书写规范:注意拼写、大小写符号、标点。
比如, 在模仿上述案例中的范文写一篇My favorite school day 的小短文,就可以针对欣赏范文中总结的三点写作特点确定修改的标准: ①是否有主题句;②是否按时间先后顺序写;③是否添加丰富内容的句子。
2.组内互改。
教师轮流与每个小组一起重点讨论一篇文章。分组时宜将好、中、差生混合编排,以便学生互评互学。评价活动中通过对他人文章的评论,强化写作知识,发现他人的长处与不足,便于在自己的作文中借鉴,从而提高写作能力。
3.教师点评。
教师利用实物投影仪或黑板选择不同层次代表性的文章或句子当堂点评。点评时,教师要先让学生找出这篇短文“闪光点”, 打开写作的情感关,再让学生找出文章的欠缺之处。标出精彩的词、句、思想的亮点等可以激发学生的进取精神,增强学生学习英语的动力。
(四)编辑阶段(editing)
编辑阶段是写作的最后整理和润色阶段,指学生在多次反馈、自我反思的基础上,对文稿进行反复修改最终成稿的过程。在此阶段,教师可选择优秀习作打印上作者的名字并利用投影或张贴方式呈现给全体同学,以表示对习作作者的鼓励和为其他同学提供学习借鉴,也可以选择每位学生最好的一句合成一篇范文供大家互相学习参考。
实践证明:“过程写作法”有助于充分发掘学生的积极性,有利于阅读以及听说能力的培养,养成良好的语言学习习惯;“过程写作法”重视学生的写作过程,鼓励学生在不断地修改练习中进步提高,有利于树立学生的自信;“过程写作法”将写作过程视为一个循环往复的、复杂的心理认知、思维创造和社会交际过程,符合写作教学的实质,能够有效地提高学生的写作水平。
⑤ 急求关于人物描写的初中英语作文,最好是名著里的,词汇适于初中阅读,谢谢哈!
你可以参考下复仁爱英语七年级上册的制第二单元,那单元的重点就是人物描写。下面是我自己写的,水平有限哈,仅供参考。Tony is my good friend.He is a nice boy.He has a round face,like a apple.And his eyes are big and bright.He has a small nose.But his mouth is very wide.We are in the same class,and he is the tallest boy in our class.He likes playing basketball very much,so do I.So we often play basketball together after class.I hope we can be good friends forever.
⑥ 求一篇介绍人物的英语作文,要求文笔为初中水平
...现在初中作文这么难,词汇我都不认回识。大概是答He is MoJun,borns on july 30th 1980 in hunan province.He works as a famous writer 、planner and publisher ....
⑦ 初中英语作文范文20篇。谢谢
【篇一】
Two days ago, a heavy snow came. And now, the snow stopped and it’s time for fun. This morning, I go to outside door and make snowman with my friends. We prepare some tools and then we start. We did it many times before, so it’s easy. We pull snow together and shape it. Last, we make a face for it, eyes, nose, ears and mouth. It’s very funny and we are happy.
前两天,一场大雪来了。现在,雪停了,是玩的时候了它。今天早上,我走出门外,和我的朋友一起堆雪人。我们准备了一些工具,然后我们就开始了。我们以前做过很多次了,所以很容易。我们把雪弄在一起和做成形状。最后,我们做出了一个脸,眼睛,鼻子,耳朵和嘴。这是非常有趣的,我们是快乐的。
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⑧ 写一篇关于人物介绍的英语作文。(初中)
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LEO SMITH 是我最好的朋友和同学。现在让我向大家介绍一下。他和我一样大,今年已经岁了。他是外国人。他来自美国。所以他的英语特棒。真羡慕他!除了英语,他最喜欢美术和体育了。而且他学得很好。在上学的时候,他常常去游泳和working。而在星期六的时候他就开派对,在星期天的时候,他就习惯一个人在家看电视了。哈哈!他挺幽默的,常常都我们笑个不停,这就是了哦Leo Smith。
LEO SMITH is my best friend and classmate. Let me introce to you. He,has been 15 years old.me ,too。 He is a foreigner. He came from America . So he's English wonderfully. I really envy him! In addition to English, his favorite art and sport of. And he learned well. In school, he often went swimming and working. In Saturday when he was a party, in the Sunday, he got used to a person at home watching TV. Haha! He is kind of humorous, and often let we laugh, this is Leo Smith.
⑨ 求一初中人物描写英语作文!字数要多!
My father is a gentle man
My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy's hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair", does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long.
He usually ecate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.
This is my father, I love him forever