❶ 初中英语作文修改以下出错的语法和句型
1,But now with others, get along very harmoniously 改为来 but now he gets along very harmoniously with others；自
2，now care for the environment 改为 but now he cares for the environment；
3，Now he actively participated in various activities,改为 Now participates in variious activities actively
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❷ 初中英语作文常见句型
初中英语作文常见句型
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如：
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmfulto us.
例如：
However，everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important(necessary，difficult，convenient， possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business.Soon， computers will be found in every home，too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如：
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示变化
1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be proced in the world’s communications.
3)The computer has brought about many changes in ecation.
例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事实、现状
1)We cannot ignore the fact that...
2)No one can deny the fact that...
3)There is no denying the fact that...
4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5)However，that’s not the case.
例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems， we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比较
1)Compared with A，B...
2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3)There is a striking contrast between them.
例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them e physical exercise.
9.表示数量
1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...
2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800，000.
3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.
例如：
With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased.
再如：
From the graph listed above，itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
注：“From the graph listed above，it can be seen that”见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起，便可较好地写出2002年6月CET -4、6短文写作的第一段。
10.表示看法
1)People have(take，adopt，assume)different attitudes towards sth.
2)People have different opinions on this problem.
3)People take different views of(on)the question.
4)Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如：
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However， others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如：
Do“lucky numbers?really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it.
注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11.表示结论
1)In short，it can be said that ...
2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ...
例如：
From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved.
注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12.套语
1)It’s well known to us that ...
2)As is known to us，...
3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that ...
5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.?
例如：
As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an“ivory tower?.As college students，we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graate.
再如：
Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
❸ 初中生英语写作存在哪些问题
在初中阶段学生基本上没有进行正规系统的写作训练。英语语言的基础也比较差，主要表现在以下几个方面: （一）词汇贫乏且运用能力差
词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素，要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想，必须以足够的词汇量为基础，但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求，因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误，影响理解，词语误用，表
达不准确；某一词语反复使用，语言表达缺乏变式，文章显得单调乏味；文章中出现大量自己的“造词”，让人看了啼笑皆非等。显然词汇量不足已成为制约学生写作的瓶颈。 （二）句式单一枯燥
文章的内容固然重要，但是形式也不容忽视。然而很多同学作文中的句子都是同一句式，长短相近，所用句型也多是些there be类的句子，而且全都是主语、谓语、宾语、的单一顺序，缺少变化，读起来乏味、枯燥；平时学到的很多语法、句法，比如从句 、强调句型、感叹句、虚拟语气等等在单项选择题中很顺手的东西这时却派不上用场，仿佛它们只是用来对付选择题的。 （三）段落、文章的逻辑性差
传统的英语教学把语言知识放在首位，忽视了文章的篇章结构和段落，因此学生写出来的东西往往是信息感不强，逻辑性差，很少有主题句，学生们大多想的是：我尽量多写，写够字数就算完成任务了。偶尔有了主题句，下面的支持细节也不能很好地说明主题句。文章整体内容缺乏一致性，连贯性，内容安排上也无主次之分，所以读完之后有时甚至全然不知所云，仅仅是句子的堆砌，意思的重复。 （四）中英句式差异分辨不清
学生们在完成写作题时，总是按照汉语的习惯来思考这个句子怎么写，写出来的句子大部分都是单词的堆砌，有的句子甚至错的都有点离谱，所以英语语言的特点也是学生们写作需要克服的一个难点。
❹ 如何克服中学英语写作中容易犯的语法错误
主谓不一致，人称与动词不符。例如：
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
上面例句中，主语是My sister ，为第三人称，所以谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式goes才正确，这种主谓不一致的错误在写作中是很常见的问题，稍一疏忽就会犯，考生需要更加细心才行。
句子成分残缺不全，语句不通。例如：
We should read books may be useful to us. (误)
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
这是一个定语从句的例句，其中which在从句中做的是主语，所以不能省略，一旦省略就会造成句子成分残缺，考试中大家在写完一句话时要记得读一遍看看通不通顺。
句子成分多余，累赘复杂。例如：
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
这一句的错误有点中式英语(课程)的味道，逐字逐句对应翻译，there is 放在这里，累赘而又繁琐。
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❺ 七年级英语常见错误
1.第三人称单数
2.like后忘记加doing的形式
还有庄家分析：
七年级英语，属于中学英语的入门阶段，对于刚接触英语的学生来说，犯错是在所难免的。因此，教师在这个教学阶段，应特别注意对学生的纠错工作，尤其是在正音和培养书写习惯方面，为学生打下扎实的英语学习基础。其任务是艰巨的，其作用是关键的。
我在教学的过程中，不断总结出学生学习中常见的以下问题，并加以小议：
一、汉语拼音到英语字母，学生难过渡
刚升入初中的新生，在小学学过的汉语拼音依然深深地刻在脑海里。见到另一门外语，尤其是英语，其字母书写与汉语拼音书写基本相同，自然会造成学生拼读的误区。比如：字母“a”就会读成汉语拼音“ā” ；字母o读成汉语拼音“ō” ；字母“e”读成汉语拼音“ē”等等。这需要教师在教学的过程中，随时对学生进行必要的引导和纠正，使学生能尽快完成从汉语到英语的观念和习惯转变。
二、 拼写不够重视，学习方法有待完善
人教版新目标英语教材的编排，注重联系实际情景，紧贴学生生活，因此，学生的口语能力在所创设的情境下得到了锻炼和提高。但是问题在于，当在默写、测试等练习的时候，学生却写不出来，特别是一些较长、较难的单词或句子。课后经原因调查，学生大部分是因为没有对学习英语做好充分准备，缺少识记英语知识的方法，不知从何去记，怎样去记。因此，对于刚开始接触英语的学生，教师应教给他们一些简单实用的方法，“对付”英语这门学科，并在今后的教学过程中，根据不同的教学内容，介绍给学生更多更新的学习方法，使学生在英语的学习中能轻松应对，找到自信。
三、 字母书写易犯错
(1) 大小写用法未弄清
这种问题有三种情况：①句子的首字母应该大写却没有大写。②某些特殊单词（如：I，English，August,Monday等）的首字母应该大写却没有大写。③某些缩写单词（如：UFO，NBA，CCTV，CD，BBC等）应该大写却没有大写。
(2) 字母书写习惯有所歪曲
这种问题是由于英文字母有书写体和印刷体之分而引起的。教材中，除了三个预备单元（Starter Unit1--- Unit3）内标有四线格字母书写外，其余单元的字母和单词均是以印刷体的形式出现。学生的书写往往会受到字母印刷体的误导，普遍将字母写成为印刷体，而忽略了书写体的运用。学生容易搞错的字母如：a；i；k；l；p；v；x；y等。
在字母的教学中，教师的板书应始终坚持以书写体的形式出现，准确无误地授予学生字母的正确书写格式，并时刻督促学生养成利用书写体书写字母的习惯，及时帮助学生走出利用印刷体书写字母的误区。
(3) 句中单词无间距，漏点、乱点标点符号
假设一列队伍之间没有一点缝隙，水泄不通；假设一句话没有一个可以停顿的标点符号，让人不能喘息；假设写作、说话时该停不停，不停偏停……假设这种假设成立，将是多么可怕。学生在书写英语句子时，总会出现单词之间没有间距，看起来乱成一团。如；What’sthisinEnglish?It’samap.；或者句子中没有一个标点符号，让人一口气难以读完整个句子。如How are you I’m fine thanks How are you I’m OK；再者，一句话中乱点标点符号，如：Good,morning,Dale.这种情况不是没有，而且较多。教师在碰到这种问题时，应该及早地着手解决。拿10分钟来讲授英语中标点符号的应用，或鼓励、敦促学生正确使用英语中的标点符号等等，都无一不是当务之急。
英语教学是一项长期而艰巨的工作，需要随时更新知识，更新方法，不断总结，方能进步。无论如何，我在教学中，不忍看到任何一个学生有任何一个不懂之处。
一旦发现学生存在某种问题，教师就应及时为之讲解，不能纵容学生犯错，更不能不闻不问，任其蔓延，使教师与学生之间的教与学达到彼此共融，教学相长。
❻ 英语写作常见语法错误，比如run on sentence,misplaced/dangling modifier,wordy expression等
英语写作常见语法错误
1.主谓不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
2.句子成分残缺不全
We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
We should read books may be useful to us. (误)
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
3.句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
4.词类混淆
It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
5.动词时态、语态的误用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
❼ 考研英语写作常见错误，你中招了吗
1、词汇和语法错误
考研英语写作让很多同学都很头痛，有两点原因：一为词汇，二为语法。因为英语与汉语的区别是一词多义，非常讲究用词准确而且正式。同时，英语的词汇非常丰富，一个词语通常都有许多同义词和近义词。考生如果平时注意积累并加以练习，就能够在考试中熟练地加以运用。
英文写作也同样非常讲究语法，尤其是考研作文作为正式文体，需要注意以下几点小细节：
1、尽量少用缩写形式。如don't, can't, won't应写为do not, cannot, will not等。
2、用更加正式的否定形式。如not…any应写为no, not…much写为little, not many写做few等。
3、尽量少用"etc.", "and so on" 等表达方式。如：Activities included dancing, singing, etc。Activities included dancing, singing, and other fun stuff。
2、中文思维模式
很多考生在考试过程中把一些中文的成语、谚语翻译成英文，这种做法导致的结果就是文章不仅行文不符合英文的规律，读起来也让人觉得非常不舒服。纠正中文思维习惯的关键依然在于培养英文语感，同时考生在平时的练习中也要尽量让自己用英文来思考。
如果考生需要用到谚语，名句等，好的办法是直接掌握英文的谚语、名句，并灵活运用到文章中。
还有一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来，然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。
在这样的作文里，我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：“When I was a child, my parents very love me。”(正确表达：When I was a child, my parents loved me very much)。
3、不注意字数与标点
不管是大作文还是小作文，都有字数的要求，以大作文为例，中等大小一行15字，起码写到12，13位置,因为阅卷人做的第一件事情就是看你的字数，就看你的位置到没有到。如果你的字数没写够，他就认为你连起码的写够字数的能力都不具备。但是这不是说写得越多就会得到高分。一是时间不允许，二是写得越长，越容易暴露你的缺点。所以临考前要掐表练习字数。
4、忽视优秀范文的背诵
通过范文的背诵，我们可以有针对性的了解高分范文的写作特点，积累写作常用的词语表达，和闪光句型，解决考生在进行写作训练时，心中有千言万语，笔下无一言的困境。
但是，考生一定要谨记，高分范文的背诵在精不在多，20篇足够，但是一定要背的滚瓜烂熟，张口就能说，提笔就能写。很多考生抱怨过，我背了很多范文，可还是什么也写不出来，根本原因就是这些范文背诵不够熟练，根本没有深化成自己的东西。
5、写作训练量不足
很多时候，考生容易高估自己的写作水平，或者说，意识不到自己的经常会犯下的语法错误。这些问题只有通过实战才能发现并解决。
但是在这个过程中，考生练习时写的作文，必须英语水平好的同学或是老师，有条件的同学可以请专业的认识进行批改，只有这样，训练的作用才能大化。
6、准备不足，匆忙下笔
任何一篇作文出题都是有它独特的道理的，所以提前审题和构思就显得必不可少了。很多考生目前存在一个情况，想到哪写到哪，使作文杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现写错单词和用错句型的情况。
以上信息可以参考
❽ 常见英语写作错误
1.结构不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长，不分段主语与动词一致问题She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can't，don't，it's，we'll，they've等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
6.关联词语重复Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
9.书写难以辨认信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。
10.介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me ring yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
11.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与文章的主题无关。
12.陈词滥调It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。
13.标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
14.重复冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。
15.单数/复数Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
16.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
17.语气与文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他部分不相符可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
18.代词指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。
19.过于笼统We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。
20.动词时态错误Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.动词时态不正确检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。
21.选词不恰当I was late getting home because I lost my way.在这种情况下不应该使用该词可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。
22.单词形式不当I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的单词的形式不正确检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。
23.用词错误Even I don't speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds ring vacation.用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。
❾ 英语写作要注意的几种情况：常见的10个句子错误
Incomplete Sentence - Sentence Fragment
句子不完整——残缺句
One common mistake many students make is the use of incomplete sentences. Each sentence in English must contain at least a subject and a verb, and should be an independent clause. Examples of incomplete sentences without a subject or a verb might include an instruction or a prepositional phrase.
许多学生都会犯一个常见的错误，就是写出来的句子不完整。英语中，每个句子都必须至少有一个主语，一个动词，并单独成句。没有主语或动词的残缺句子可能就只有表示指令的句子或者介词短语了。
For example:
例如：
Through the door.
穿过大门。
In the other room.
在另一个房间。
Over there.
在那里。
These are phrases we may use in spoken English, but that should not be used in written English as they are incomplete.
在英语口语中，你可能会用到这些短语，但是因为它们毕竟不是完整的英语句子，所以在书面语言中，我们一般不会使用。
Sentence fragments caused by dependent clauses used without an independent clause are more common. Remember that subordinating conjunctions introce dependent clauses. In other words, if you use a subordinating clause beginning with a word such as 'because, though, if, etc.' there must be an independent clause to complete the thought. This mistake is often made on tests asking a question with 'Why'.
由于缺乏独立分句的从属子句导致的句子残缺很常见。记住，从属连词引出了从属子句。也就是说，如果你用一些词语来引出从句，例如because，though，if等等，就必须要有一个独立分句来使句子完整。我们在考试中，使用why来提出问题时，经常会犯这样的错误。
For example, the sentences:
例如，下面这个句子：
Because Tom is the boss.
因为汤姆就是老板。
Since he left work early without permission.
自从他不经允许就早退。
We might answer the question: "Why did he lose his job?" However, these are sentence fragments. The correct answer would be:
我们可能会问：“他为什么丢掉工作?”但是，这些句子都是不完整的。正确用法应该是：
He lost his job because Tom is the boss.
因为汤姆就是老板，所以他丢掉了工作。
He lost his job since he left work early without permission.
他因为不经允许就早退而丢掉了工作。
Other examples of incomplete sentences introced by subordinating clauses include:
其他关于从属子句的残缺句还包括下面内容：
Even though he needs help.
虽然他需要帮助
If they study enough.
如果他们好好学习
As they had invested in the company.
因为他们投资了这家公司
Run-on Sentences
句子不连贯
Run-on sentences are sentences that:
不连贯句子指的是：
1) are not connected by appropriate linking language such as conjunctions
缺乏合适的连接词，例如连词。
2) use too many clauses rather than using periods and linking language such as conjunctive adverbs
使用过多的从句，而非句号和连接语，例如连接副词
The first type leaves out a word - usually a conjunction - that is required to connect a dependent and independent clause. For example:
第一种是漏掉了一个词——通常是连接词——用于连接非独立子句和独立子句。
The students did well on the test they didn't study very much.
学生们考得很好他们没有下多少功夫。
Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car dealerships.
安娜想买辆新车她整个周末都在约见代理商。
The first sentence should use either a conjunction 'but', or 'yet' or a subordinating conjunction 'although, even though, or though' to connect the sentence. In the second sentence, the conjunction 'so' or the subordinating conjunction 'since, as, or because' would connect the two clauses.
第一句话要么应该加上一个连词but，要么加上yet，或者一个从属连词although, even though或though来连接前后两句。
The students did well, yet they didn't study very much.
学生们考得很好，但他们并没有下多少功夫。
Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a new car.
因为想买辆新车，安娜整个周末都在约见代理商。
Another common run on sentence occurs when using too many clauses. This often occurs using the word 'and'.
另一种句子不连贯发生在使用太多从句的时候。常常是由于and一词导致。
We went to the store and bought some fruit, and we went to the mall to get some clothes, and we had lunch at McDonald's, and we visited some friends.
我们去商店买了一些水果，去购物商城买了一些衣服，在麦当劳吃的午饭，又见了一些朋友。
The continuous chain of clauses using 'and' should be avoided. In general, do not write sentences that contain more than three clauses to ensure that your sentences do not become run-on sentences.
我们应该避免使用and来连接一大串的从句。一般来说，从句不要超过三个，以确保句子的连贯性。
Duplicate Subjects
两个主语
Sometimes students use a pronoun as a plicate subject.
有时候，学生们会将代词作为第二个主语。
Remember that each clause takes only one sentence. If you have mentioned the subject of a sentence by name, there is no need to repeat with a pronoun.
记住，每个从句只需要一句话。如果之前你已经提到主语的名字，就不需要再用代词重复了。
Example 1:
例一：
Tom lives in Los Angeles.
汤姆住在洛杉矶。
NOT
而不是
Tom, he lives in Lost Angeles.
汤姆，他住在旧金山。
Example 2:
例二：
The students come from Vietnam.
学生们来自越南。
NOT
而不是
The students they come from Vietnam.
学生们他们来自越南。
Incorrect Tense
时态错误
Tense usage is a common mistake in student writing. Make sure that the tense used corresponds to the situation. In other words, if you are speaking about something that happened in the past do not use include a tense that refers to the present. For example:
时态错误在学生写作中很常见。你要确保时态与事情发生的情况一致。也就是说，如果你要表达的是发生在过去的事，就不要使用现在时态。例如：
They fly to visit their parents in Toronto last week.
上周他们坐飞机去看望父母。
Alex bought a new car and drives it to her home in Los Angeles.
亚历克斯买了一辆新车，并把它开进了洛杉矶的家。
Incorrect Verb Form
动词形式错误
Another common mistake is the use of an incorrect verb form when combining with another verb. Certain verbs in English take the infinitive and others take the gerund (ing form).
另一个常见的错误就是在与其他动词连用时，动词形式的错误。英语中的动词既有不定式形式，又有动名词形式。
It's important to learn these verb combinations. Also, when using the verb as a noun, use the gerund form of the verb.
学习这些动词的连用很重要。当动词作为名词使用时，就要使用动名词形式。
He hopes finding a new job. / Correct -> He hopes to find a new job.
他想找一个新工作。
Peter avoided to invest in the project. / Correct -> Peter avoided investing in the project.
皮特没有在这个项目上投资。
Parallel Verb Form
动词复数形式
A related issue is the use of parallel verb forms when using a list of verbs. If you are writing in the present continuous tense, use the 'ing' form in your list. If you are using the present perfect, use the past participle, etc.
在使用多个动词时，有一个问题就是动词复数形式的使用。如果你是在用现在进行时进行写作，就应该使用动词ing形式。如果你使用的是现在完成时，就应该使用过去分词形式。
She enjoys watching TV, play tennis, and cook. / Correct -> She enjoys watching TV, playing tennis, and cooking.
她喜欢看电视，打网球和烹饪。
I've lived in Italy, working in Germany and study in New York. / Correct -> I've lived in Italy, worked in Germany, and studied in New York.
我住在意大利，在德国工作，在纽约读书。
Use of Time Clauses
时间从句的使用
Time clauses are introced by the time words 'when', 'before', 'after' and so on. When speaking about the present or future use the present simple tense in time clauses. If using a past tense, we usually use the past simple in a time clause.
时间从句由时间词语引导，例如when，before，after等等。当我们表达现在或将来的事时，可以使用一般现在时的时间从句。如果使用过去时态，通常会使用过去时的时间从句。
We'll visit you when we will come next week. / Correct -> We'll visit you when we come next week.
下周我们会来看你。
She cooked dinner after he was arriving. / Correct -> She cooked dinner after he arrived.
他到了之后，她才开始煮饭。
Subject - Verb Agreement
主谓一致
Another common mistake is to use incorrect subject - verb agreement. The most common of these mistakes is the missing 's' in the present simple tense. However, there are other types of mistakes. Always look for these mistakes in the helping verb.
另一个常见的错误就是主谓不一致。最常见的就是一般现在时中漏掉了-s。但是，还有其他类型的错误。这些错误常发生在助动词的使用上。
Tom play guitar in a band. / Correct -> Tom plays guitar in a band.
汤姆在乐队里是弹吉他的。
They was sleeping when she telephoned. / Correct -> They were sleeping when she telephoned.
他打电话过来时，他们都睡着了。
Pronoun Agreement
代词一致
Pronoun agreement mistakes take place when using a pronoun to replace a proper noun. Often this mistake is a mistake of use of a singular form rather than a plural or vice versa. However, pronoun agreement mistakes can occur in object or possessive pronouns, as well as in subject pronouns.
代词不一致发生在用代词来替代专有名词的情况下。通常是使用了单复数形式的错误使用。但是，代词不一致也会发生在宾语或物主代词，和主格代名词上。
Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job. / Correct -> Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job.
汤姆在汉堡一家公司工作。他热爱这份工作。
Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. He thought they were very difficult.Correct -> Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. They thought it was very difficult.
(正确)安德里亚和皮特在学校里学习了俄语。他们觉得俄语很难。
Missing Commas After Linking Language
连接语言后漏掉了逗号
When using an introctory phrase as linking language such as a conjunctive adverb or sequencing word, use a comma after the phrase to continue the sentence.
当我们使用介绍性短语，例如连接副词或表示顺序的词语，通常会在短语后面打上逗号来连接下文。
❿ 初中英语书面表达常见错误有哪些
1．时态误用
主要表现在两方面：1）学生写作之前没有判断整篇文章主要用哪种时态，常出现该用一般现在时的句子，用了一般过去时；而该用将来时的句子，用了完成时。2）时态构成表达错误。由于学生对各种时态掌握不好，常常将所学的各种时态混淆，以致出现如下的错误如，I‘m go to school by bike. He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing.
2. 汉语式英语
由于受汉语的影响，再加上对英语句子结构掌握不好，导致学常常按汉语的词序来翻译句子，在学生的作文中常常见到这样的句子： You can be bus. In china have different places of interest. In autumn is best season for traveling.
3. 逻辑错误
在做书面表达的过程中，有的学生一拿到考题慌慌张张开始写，在写作之前没有构思好先写什么后写什么，哪些内容应该详写，哪些内容应该略写，而是一边写一边构思，从而导致整个文章逻辑不清，层次感不强，整篇文章不知所云。
4．单词拼写错误
由于部分学生平时不注意记忆单词，基础知识掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出现单词拼写错误如，September 写为 septber because 写为 beacause
5. 缺少衔接
有些学生虽然在词汇运用书面表达方面能够达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，使句子之间和文段之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。
6．文体不对
中学阶段要求学生掌握的文体主要有说明文、记叙文、议论文和应用文，其中应用文又包括通知、请假条、书信和电子邮件等，由于一些学忽视了各种体裁的写作特点，从而导致文章体裁格式不正确如：将写信的日期写在信末；写请假条不写署名等。