㈠ 如何指导高中学生的英语写作
何指导高中英语基础差的学生写英语作文 崔花丽 写作是高中英语教学中一项十分重要的内容,在高考试卷中占有较高的分值。然而, 从高中英语考试的结果来看,学生的写作成绩一直不理想,成为失分最多的题型之一。特别 是对于英语基础薄弱的学生, 可能会失去信心, 甚至产生了畏惧心理。 结合自己的教学经验, 谈谈怎样有意识地指导学生掌握写作方法和技巧。 我认为在教学过程中, 教师应结合新教材 的特点,大致应注意以下几点: 一、循序渐进,注重基本训练 英语属于结构语言,它有自己的基本句型、固定搭配、固定短语等,这些都是不可变 的,要想在写作中用上它们,用好它们,必须加强这方面的基本训练,加强五种基本句型结 构教学。几乎所有的英语句型都是五种句型的扩大、延伸或变化,因此训练学生“写”就要抓 住五种基本句型的训练,让他们把这五种基本句型记牢,不断运用。五种基本句型是: (1)S+V; (2)S+V+O; (3)S+V+O+O; (4)S+V+P; (5)S+V+O+C. 英语写作能力必须由浅入深、由简到繁、由易到难、循序渐进、一环紧扣一环地进行 训练。因此,教师应注重抓基本功训练,严格要求学生正确、端正、熟练地书写字母、单词 和句子,注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句、组句成段练习时,要求学生写出最简单的 短句。其次,在加强简单句训练的成熟之际,适当鼓励学生尝试写一些复合句,以此增强文 章色彩。 二、常抓听写和翻译 听写能促使学生掌握单词和短语拼写。该法简单有效,易操作。每天坚持让学生听写, 不过关者重复听写, 直至过关为止。 汉译英练习能够帮助学生熟悉和运用教材每单元的重点 短语,但机械、呆板的翻译练习往往使学生厌烦。教师在布置翻译练习时,不妨创造性地利 用教材,以学生的兴趣、爱好或熟知的事物为出发点来设计练习。 三、多读多背 学生写作能力,不是老师讲出来的而是学生练出来的。课堂上的训练、讲评很重要但 学生基本功和课外知识的积累却是重中之重。 我认为要求学生平时多读多背好文章、 好句子、 谚语、俗语,会对书面表达的提高起到画龙点睛的作用,而这些句子、文章往往就在我们身 边。例如: 1、经典谚语( Proverbs): Do inRomeas Romans do. 入乡随俗。 East or west, home is best. 东方或西方,家是最好的 Romewas not built in a day. 冰冻三尺,非一日之寒。 Where there is a will,there is a way!有志者,事竞成。 2、常用的英语句子结构: I think that she/he is fond of… It is + adj. + to do sth. It is + 强调成分 + that…. 3、经典句子 Best wishes for Teachers' Day. We don't think there is anything of interest in your picture. The problem is that 300 people are dying each day from illness caused by smoking. 四、范文示例、树立信心 教师的范文不仅要在格式、内容要点、语法修辞与语言习惯上给学生树立样版,而且 要考虑到英语的多种表达方法。 学生在经过紧张的思维与写作之后, 及时听到一篇比较规范 的答卷,比较一下自己的作业,可初步衡量出自己的答题的准确度,找出差距,及时查出作 业中的毛病。实践证明这种练习可调动学生积极性,且效果非常明显。 五、找出症结,帮助学生克服母语干扰 在英语写作教学实践中,我们不难发现学生有以下几种通病:1、认为英语中存在与汉 语完全对应的词。实际上,除了一些专业术语外,英汉两种语言中几乎没有完全对应的词。 比如,开发中国西部是很重要的。It’s very important to develop the western China.翻译这 个句子偏爱使用形式主语 it 来翻译,真正的主语---动词不定式短语则放在后面。2、在写英 语作文时, 大部分学生往往会用汉语思维构思篇章, 然后再按照汉语的意思逐词逐句译成英 语。 有些中式英语妨碍了交流思想, 如: 世上没有后悔药。 There is no regret medicine in the world.我们应引导学生用简单的英语表达来克服母语的干扰,可向学生讲解如何将上述句子 转化为正确的英语表达,如:It is no use regretting it.我们也可以给学生提供一个与此相关 的谚语,如:覆水难收。It’s no use crying over spilt milk. 六、注重教师的指导作用 教师批改是写作教学的有机组成部分,批改过程中,教师的指导作用就在于肯定学生 的成绩,指出错误,给学生以恰当的评价。但在批改过程中,如果抓住学生的错误不放,有 错必纠, 改到最后, 就变成了教师自己的作品; 如果对错误视而不见, 写得再多也收效甚微。 我根据教学实践,对于新教材中的“有指导的写”的写作训练,是规定学生限时写完,同桌、 前后桌互相批改,重新行文,再上交。这样批改起来就非常轻松,而且典型错误,很容易找 出,有利于讲评。对于新教材中的“自由写作”训练,我指导学生弄清主题,抓住要点,组词 造句,安排好顺序,过渡到段落形成短文,多用熟悉的单词和句型,多用五种基本型表达。 然后让学生共同研究,互相评论写好的草稿,以便最后写出修改的稿子来,这就有助于减轻 教师修改作业的负担,也有利于学生写作的提高。 总之,只要注意采取适当的形式来训练英语基础差的学生英文写作,他们的写作能力 定能得到极大的提高。
㈡ 浅谈如何做好高中英语写作教学
创设趣味教来学情境自,营造轻松教学氛围在新课改的教学背景下,传统高中英语写作教学的方式已经不能满足学生的学习需求了,现阶段,随着信息技术的快速发展以及素质教育要求的不断提升,我国高中英语写作教学已开始向趣味性教学发展,逐渐摆脱了“一刀切”、“满堂灌”这些教学模式的影响。为了更好的提高实际教学的趣味性,教师就可以在写作教学的过程中积极创设极具趣味的教学情境,让学生在轻松和谐的教学氛围中产生对写作学习的兴趣,进而实现高效学习、快乐学习
㈢ 高中英语作文,带翻译
During the winner holiday of this year,I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home ,watching TV and so on.So I got a job at a restawrant and worked there as a waiter.Every day I went to work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. The job was hard,boring.It made me so tired that I almost quit half way.But I went on doing with my determination.
在今年的寒假期间,我想我应该做一些有意义的事情,而不是呆在家里,看电视等等。所以,我在餐馆里得到了一份工作,在那里当服务员。每天早晨我早早地去工作,晚上很晚回到家。这份工作非常累人和无聊。这使我几乎半途而废。但是我用我的决心坚持了下来。
Health Is More Important
There are many people who think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was an American billionaire who got everything he wanted. However, in the last twenty years of his life,his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurses. However, he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do what you want to do. So I would like to say don‘t hurt yourself and try to make money.Instead, take care of your body and be happy at what you do. Health is more important.
健康更重要
很多人都认为财富比健康更重要。在读到Howard Hughes的故事之前,我也是这么认为的。Howard Hughes是美国的一个亿万富翁,能得到他想得到的任何东西。但是在他生命最后的二十年中,他的身体变得糟糕,他很悲惨。他有最好的医生和护士,但仍得不到解脱。我意识到在这个世界上,好的身体抵得上所有的金钱。因为即使你有百万美元但身体糟糕,也不能做你想做的事情。因此我想说的是关心你的身体,对你所拥有的一切感到高兴,不要为挣损害你的身体,健康更重要。
㈣ 求一篇关于高中英语教学的外文文献翻译(中英),最好是关于语法的,3000字左右。
参考答案: 争渡,争渡,惊起一滩鸥鹭。
㈤ 求十篇高中英语作文,带翻译
——如何选择朋友 how to choose Friends
As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. Friends play a very essential role in our daily life. However, how to make goods friends is a problem for most of us. As for me, I have three principles to choose friends.
正如谚语所说的那样,患难见真情。朋友在我们日常生活中扮演着非常重要的角色。然而,如何交到一个好朋友是我们大多数人都遇到过的问题。
In the first place, good friends should have their own principles. We should take into account the fact that people who insist on their principles have high quality. Therefore, it is worth making friends with them.
首先,好朋友应该是有他们自己的处事原则。我们应该认识到这样一个事实,坚持自己原则的人一般都是具有高尚的品格。因此,这样的人值得我们去交朋友。
Then, I want to point out that good friends should be full of trust. This kind of person has a pure heart, so we can communicate with each other by heart.
然后,我想说的是,好的朋友应该是充满真诚的。这样的朋友有一颗赤子之心,我们能用心来彼此交流。
Finally, active friends are just like beautiful sunshine. They can light up our blue mood, drive away the dark clouds and give us courage.
最后,拥有积极心态的朋友就像美丽的阳光。他们能够照亮我们忧郁的心情,驱走乌云,给我们鼓励。
Friends who have above three characteristics will be great wealth for us.
能交到有以上三个特征的朋友将会是我们巨大的财富。
——关于环保的演讲 The Speech About Environmental Protection
Ladies and gentlemen,
女士们和先生们,
I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about the haze weather, which causes lots of bad effects on our health and life. We breathe polluted air, making us suffer from lung and liver diseases. Besides, because of it, the flights have to be canceled. All kind of transports may run into each other, resulting in much damages and lots of injuries.
我很荣幸能有机会在这里做演讲,和大家谈谈这给我们健康和生活带来不好影响的灰霾天气。我们呼吸这被污染过的空气,让我们遭受肺、肝疾病。另外,由于这天气,航班被迫取消。各种交通工具相撞在一起,造成很大的毁灭和伤害。
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we did something. As indivials, we should ride the underground or buses instead of cars to rece carbon dioxide. As government, more measures should be taken by carrying out the related law on pollution.
我觉得是时候我们该做些什么了。我们应该乘坐地铁或公共汽车而不是汽车来减少二氧化碳。政府应该实施更多针对污染的相关法律的。
In summary, we’re all looking forward to breathe fresher air and live a happier life. Everyone should be a part of this job.
总之,我们都盼望着能呼吸到更新鲜的空气,过着更快乐的生活。每个人都应该参与进来。
Thank you for your listening.
谢谢大家的聆听。
——自信的重要性 The Importance of Self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has become the order of our life, which improves the theory that nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
如今,自信已经融入了我们的生活中了,这也就证明了没有什么能够比自信更有价值。
It is obvious that self-confidence means trust in one’s ability. If we are full of self-confidence, we’ll have creative power to live and work, helping us success or dreams come true. On the contrary, if we have no confidence in ourselves, there will be little possibilities for us to win. We’ll always face failure.
很明显,自信意味着对一个人能力的信任。如果我们充满自信,我们在生活和工作中就会有创造力,帮助我们成功或者实现我们的梦想。相反,如果我们对自己没有信心,我们取胜的可能性就很小。我们总是要面对失败。
What’s more, no one can deny another fact that self-confidence gives us light when we walk in the dark and courage when we face stumbling blocks. With self-confidence, we can achieve goals in our life.
再者,没有人能否认这样一个事实,当我们游走在黑暗时,自信能能给予我们光明,当我们遭遇不顺时,自信能给予我们勇气。有了自信我们可以实现生活中的目标。
——学习历史的重要性 The Importance of Learning History
学习历史的重要性 The Importance of Learning History
作者:adreep 来源:互联网 时间:2013-06-28
Any subject of study needs justification: its advocates must explain why it is worth attention. Most popular subjects like technology and economics attract lots of people, simply because they make it much easier for students to land a job while majors like history are not that lucky in job hunting. However, learning history is indeed beneficial for everyone.
任何学习的科目都需要解释:它的倡导者必须得解释为什么是值得关注的。最受欢迎的学科像技术和经济吸引了许多人,仅仅是因为他们可以更容易地找到一份工作而不像历史专业那样不好找专业。然而,学习历史对每个人真的是有益的。
To start with, learning history is also very practical,simply because history reflects itself. If you encounter problems in reality, you can probably look for solutions from history. Moreover, learning history can get us acquainted with all kinds of heroes and heroines, teaching us to be brave and persevere. Last but not the least, reading classical works of history is conctive to our acquisition of the Chinese language.
首先,学习历史是很实用的,因为历史反映了它自己。如果你在现实中遇到问题,你可能可以从历史中找到解决方案。此外,学习历史可以让我们了解各种英雄,教导我们要勇敢和不屈不挠。最后但并非最不重要的,阅读经典历史作品有助于我们的汉语的习得。
——微笑的力量 The Power of Smile
微笑的力量 The Power of Smile
作者:adreep 来源:互联网 时间:2013-06-24
As time goes by, people are being busier and busier with working, such as signing their contracts, meeting their customers, drawing up the balance sheets of their companies and so on. In this circumstance, people forget our most excellent skill--smile.
随着时间的推移,人们在工作上越来越忙,如签订合同,见客户,制定企业资产负债表等。在这种情况下,人们忘记了我们最优秀的技能——微笑。
There are a great many kinds of power of smile. First of all, common touch can be showed by a kind smile. Imagine that you go to a company to attend an audition. With a confident smile, you are more likely to answer the question better. Furthermore, smile can eliminate angry. As a philosopher said, smile before you begin to get angry. The last but not the least, it reflects calm of a person when he is in danger or in trouble.
微笑的力量很多。首先,微笑可以作为平易近人的一种表现。想象一下,你去一个公司参加面试。带着自信的微笑,你有可能会更好地回答问题。此外,微笑可以消除愤怒。一个哲学家说过,在你开始生气之前微笑。最后但并非最不重要的,当一个人处于危险或者麻烦的时候,微笑反映了一个人的镇定。
The beneficial aspects cannot be stated completely in this passage. But you can understand its power when you smile.
微笑的好处在这里是无法一一列举的。但是,在你微笑的时候你可以理解它的力量。
——我的宠物狗 My House Dog
I’m a dog lover, because dogs are tame, friendly and easy to communicate with. I have kept one in my house, whose name is Chocolate. She is covered with brown curly hair and looks like a Teddy Bear. Now we have been living together for two years, so I’m very familiar with her characteristics. When she is hungry, she often barks loudly. At that time, I begin to realize that it’s time to feed her. She is keen on beef and fish. Sometimes, she also eats some rice.
我是一个爱狗的人,因为狗是很温顺,友好,也很容易交流。我在我家养了一只,它的名字叫巧克力。她的毛是棕色的卷毛,看起来就像泰迪熊。现在我们已经一起生活了两年了,所以我很熟悉她的性格。她饿了,她经常会大声吠。那个时候,我就会开始意识到是时候喂她了。她喜爱吃牛肉和鱼。有时候,她也吃一些米饭。
Every day when I come home, she always jumps up to me happily, with her tail moving. She seems to be my best friend. As time goes by, the relationship between us becomes closer and closer. Therefore, I think her as an important member in my family. I really have the pleasure of her company.
每天我回到家的时候,她都会用她的尾巴开心地跑向我。她就像是我最好的朋友一样。随着时间的流逝,我们两个的关系变得越来越亲密。因此,我觉得她是我们家里很重要的一员。有她在我真的很开心。
——感谢父母的爱 Be Grateful to Our Parents
Last week our music teacher taught us a song, named Indebted Heart. Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart. At that time, I think of my parents. I think they are the first people I should thank. It’s them who give me life. It’s them who give me home. It’s them who bring me up. It’s them who look after me. It’s them who teach me knowledge and live happily. I should thank my parents giving me so much. Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me. But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.
上周我们的音乐老师教了我们一首歌,叫感恩的心。通过这首歌我知道我们应该怀着一颗感恩的心去生活。在那时,我想起了我的父母。我认为他们是我最应该感谢的人。是他们给了我生命。是他们给我一个家。是他们抚养我长大。是他们在照顾我。是他们教给我知识,给了我幸福快乐的生活。我要感谢我的父母给了我这么多。也许我应该考虑如何回报父母给我的一切。但现在我觉得感谢我父母的最好的方法就是好好学习,长大后做一个对社会有用的人。
——关于生活 About Life
Do you think what is the most important in your life? Maybe some answers are dreams. I may directly answer “lovers”.
你认为你的生活中最重要的是什么?也许有些人的答案是梦想。我可以坦率地回答“爱人”。
In my opinion, lovers not simply mean your partner of life, but the people you love: your parents, husband or wife, children and friends. I have a happy life because of their company. I even can’t imagine the life without them.
在我看来,爱人不仅仅指你的生活伴侣,而是你所爱的人:你的父母,丈夫或妻子,孩子和朋友。我拥有幸福的生活,因为有他们的陪伴。我甚至无法想象没有他们的生活。
My mum told me” money is not as important as you think, you needn't think too highly of it. Don’t be greedy, my girl.” I got it. Person around us is the most important. If they are unhappy, you won’t be happy. There is many beautiful scenery in our life, however, the most important thing we should notice is that, without the people we love, they worth nothing.
我妈妈告诉我,“钱不是像你想像中的那么重要,你不要把它看得太重要。不要贪心,我的女孩。“我记住了。我们身边的人是最重要的。如果他们不开心,你也会不开心。在我们的生活中有很多美丽的风景,但是我们应该注意到最重要的是没有我们所爱的人,那些东西就是毫无价值。
In reality, many people are chasing wealth which results to the ignorance of people around them. Obviously, it's not a brilliant choice. Don’t’ be controlled by wealth or money. About life , this is my idea, what’s about yours?
在现实中,许多人因追逐财富而忽略了身边的人。很显然的,这不是明智的选择。不要被财富或金钱控制。这就是我对生活的看法,你的呢?
——我的生活态度 My Attitude towards Life
Life is an endless voyage, as there's no destination in our life. Life is also very fickle, since anything may happen in our life. We may be successful or defeated at any time.
生活是一段漫长的旅程,因为我们的生活是没有目的地的。生活也很善变,因为在我们的生活中任何事情都有可能发生。我们随时都可能成功或失败。
Sometimes, I have the feeling that I was successful, but that happiest time has already passed away. Sometimes, I feel as if I went to the end of my life, but after a long tour, I find I have a long way to go. I always miss myself in this endless road and I feel very lonely. But in this loneliness, there's nothing to fear. So I have learned to grow up. I have learned to hold back my tears. I have learned to smile to others.
有时候,我感觉我要成功了,但那快乐的时光却消逝了。有时,我觉得我已经到生命的尽头了,但经过长时间的旅行,我发现我还有很长的路要走。在这漫长的道路上,我总是想自己,觉得很孤独。但在这孤独中,没有什么好怕的。所以我已经学会了长大。我已经学会了忍住我的眼泪。我已经学会了对他人微笑。
I'm not defeated. However hard the situation is, I will never give up! However hard the situation is, I will never say I can't! However hard the situation is, I will never stop running! Never!
我不会被打败的。不管处境有多么艰难,我都不会放弃!不管处境有多么艰难,我绝不会说我不行!不管处境多么困难,我永远不会停止奔跑!绝对不会!
貌似字数限制,只能九篇
㈥ 高一英语作文翻译,要人工语法正确,句子通顺的,不要机器翻译,跪谢,十万火急!!
你好,my name is LI Hua,one of your students,alllow me to describe the conditions of my recent englishi study for i love englishi very much, to be frank,englishi was really hard for me when in middle school,and i often failed in the english tests,写不下去了,自回己写吧答
㈦ 高中英语作文范文 要带翻译
Dream and Reality
The beautiful legeng ,Chang'e flying to zhe moon, implies the dream of Chinese to explore the Moon . For thousands of years ,we Chinese have been working hard for it one generation after another . The moon orbiter ,Chang’e One,is named after the fairy . And the successful launch marks the nation's first step towards realizing its dream of exploring the Moon.
Indeed,I've got to learn a lot from this historycal event . First of all ,we need dreams in our life ,for they are the primitive drive to everything .Then we should follow our dreams and nevergive up.At the same time we have to be aware that the path to any success may not be easy to go though .Yet whatever we do ,we should believe “Where there is a will ,there is a way ." And then try our best to make our dreams come true.
梦想和现实
嫦娥奔月的美丽传说暗示着中国人民探索月球的梦想。几千年来,我们中国人一代又一代地 为这个梦想努力着。嫦娥一号月球探测器就是以这个神话故事命名的。嫦娥一号的成功发射标志着中华民族实现探月梦想的第一步。
的确,我从这个历史事件中学到了很多。首先,我们的生活需要梦想,因为梦想是一切事情的原动力。然后我们要坚持梦想,永远不要放弃。同时我们必须认识到通往任何成功的路并不是平坦的。然而,不论我们做什么,我们应该相信“有志者,事竟成”,进我们所能使我们的梦想成为现实。
Please Give up Smoking
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parents'pockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
请戒烟吧
现在我们经常会看到年轻人在公共场所抽烟。他们认为抽烟是一种乐趣。他们多么愚蠢呀!
报道显示全世界每年有几百万人死于吸烟。抽烟会引起许多疾病。
抽烟还会让年轻人的情况更糟糕。为了得到抽烟所需的钱,一些学生从自己父母的口袋里拿钱;一些同学甚至会偷别人的钱。
众所周知,抽烟的人没有烟就不能继续他们的工作。而且他们抽的越多,他们的身体九月不好。
抽烟是我们危险的敌人,请尽快戒烟吧!
㈧ 高中英语作文翻译 急 跪求大神解答
我们中国的农历八月十五是中秋节,作为中国传统节日之一,它使我们国家的大部分人都非常开心。通常,无论我们离家多远,或者多么繁忙,我们都会回家庆祝。在那整个农历月中,那天的月亮都是最明亮的。我们最喜爱的能一起欣赏圆月。美丽的月亮在天空中悬挂,我们围坐一起,吃着月饼和水果,分享我们的故事。除了这些传统活动之外,我们有更广泛的选择,比如去旅行,去看亲朋好友。
㈨ 高中英语作文范文 要翻译
What Is Success?
什么是成功?
What is success? Different people hold different views on This question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different opinions on success.
什么是成功?不同的人对此问题有不同的看法。有些人认为,如果一个人能挣许多的钱,他就是成功者。另一些人则争辩说,成功意味着高居政府要职。还有些人则认为,谁有高级职称,谁就是成功者。可见,对成功有截然不同的看法。
In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverance and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and instry is the key to it. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.
要成为成功者,首先,你必须有毅力并且勤奋。正如你所知道的,不管你做什么事,总有两种可能的结果:成功或失败。当你失败时,你不应丧失信心。相反,你应该增强信心,并加倍努力。你应始终牢记,毅力是成功之母,勤奋则是成功的关键。此外,你应多注意工作方法。你应不断总结经验,提高工作效率。最后,你应该和你的同事友好相处,互相帮助,互相关心。如果你遵循这些原则,你将来一定能取得成功。
In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people. So my conclusion is that even if one has made great progress in what he does, I don’t think there’s any reasons for him to be conceited.
我认为,成功就是在一个人的工作中取得成就,也就是说,为国家的发展做出卓越贡献、给人们带来幸福。因此,我的结论是,即使你在工作中取得了巨大的进步,你也没有任何理由妄自尊大
㈩ 高中英语作文带翻译
英语作文:要求:假设你是李华,你希望通过你的外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请给他写一封信,描述一下你理想中笔友的条件,包括年龄、性别、爱好(旅游、运动、宠物等),并说明原因。
Dear Peter,
As you known,I want a English pen pal.So I need your help.
Fisrt,I hope my pen pal is a kind person ,we can help each other in the future.Then,if he or she has the same hobby as me,such as football and basketball,it can't be better.By the way,boy and girl both can be my pen pal,but he or she can't be too old,I want a student
to be my pen pal.
If you can find a people like this,I think we will have lots of thing
to talk about with.Happy things will be around us all the time.
Finally,thank for helping me.
Yours,
LiHua
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亲爱的彼得,
你知道,我想要一个英语笔友。所以我需要你的帮助。
首先,我希望我的笔友是一个善良的人,在未来我们能够互相帮助。然后,如果他或她有相同的爱好为我,如足球和篮球,不能更好的。顺便说一下,男孩和女孩都可以成为我的笔友,但他或她不能太老了,我要一个学生
是我的笔友。
如果你能找到一个这样的人,我想我们会有很多的事情
谈。快乐的事情会在我们周围所有的时间。
最后,谢谢你帮助我。
你的,
李华
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Dear teacher:
I 'm Li Hua, I need to improve my English and I think finding a penpals can help me with this problem.If I own a penpal who is a native English,that would be nice! Having a penpal can help me practice reading and writting.I also can learn some grammar while I am reading the letters,Then,as I reply to the letter,I can use the gammar I am learning so that I can get a lot of practice. In a word,I can not only make much progress in English ,but also get much fun,I really want to find a penpal,Could you please help me?
Yours Li Hua
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亲爱的老师:
我是李华,我需要提高我的英语,我想找一个笔友可以帮助我解决问题。如果我有一个笔友母语为英语,那就太好了!有个笔友可以帮助我练习阅读和写作。我也可以学习一些语法,我读的信件,然后,当我的回信,我可以用我的学习,我可以获得很多实践语法。总之,我不仅能在英语上取得很大的进步,但也很有趣,我真的想找一个笔友,你能帮我吗?
你的李华
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07年高考英语作文全国卷Ⅰ假定你是李华,希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信,描述一下你理想中笔友的条件,并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括:
年龄;
性别;
爱好(旅游、运动、宠物等)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
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亲爱的彼得,
我写信是想问你能否帮我一个忙。
我想有一个笔友,希望二十多岁的姑娘,和我有相同的兴趣。在我看来,她是喜欢旅游,游泳,打乒乓球。此外,它会为她有一个宠物狗,因为我一直在家一段时间。有这样一个笔友,我认为我可以和她一起分享我的旅游经历,照顾宠物,或无论我们有共同点。我相信我可以提高我的英语这么做并了解自己的国家。
我期待很快收到你的来信。
诚挚的问候,
李华
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