❶ 16年英语高考全国卷1.2的满分作文
【全国卷:(贵州、云南、甘肃、内蒙古、青海、西藏、河北、广西)】阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)周末,我从学校回家帮着干农活。今春雨多,道路泥泞,我挑着一担秧苗,在溜滑的田埂上走了没几步,就心跳加速,双腿发抖,担子直晃,只好放下,不知所措地站在那里。妈妈在田里插秧,看到我的窘态,大声地喊:“孩子,外衣脱了,鞋子脱子,再试试!”我脱了外衣和鞋袜,卷起裤脚,重新挑起担子。咦,一下子就觉得脚底下稳当了,担子轻了,很快就把秧苗挑到妈妈跟前。妈妈说:“你不是没能力挑这个担子,你是担心摔倒,弄脏衣服,注意力不集中。脱掉外衣和鞋袜,就甩掉了多余的顾虑。要求选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题:不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。【新课标卷:(河南、黑龙江、吉林、宁夏、山西、新疆、海南)】给材料作文:船主让漆工给船涂漆。漆工涂好船后,顺便将漏洞补好了。过了不久,船主给漆工送了一大笔钱。漆工说:“工钱已给过了”。船主说“这是感谢补漏洞的钱。”漆工说:“那是顺便补的。”船主说:“当得知我的孩子们驾船出海,我就知道他们回不来了。现在他们却平安归来,所以我感谢你!”考生根据材料自拟题目,写800字作文。【天津卷】材料作文:两条鱼在河里游泳,老鱼问小鱼:河里的水质如何?小鱼说:我不知道水质是清澈还是浑浊。生活中有很多这样的小事情体现大道理。根据你对这段材料的理解,写一篇作文,体裁不限,800以上。【浙江卷】作文话题为《站在路边鼓掌的人》,话题后附有一段材料。该话题可能从我国台湾女作家刘继荣“坐在路边鼓掌的人”延伸开来。此前网络上不断有传言,高考作文题为生命的意义。延伸阅读:坐在路边鼓掌的人话题故事讲述了作家上中学的女儿,因为成绩平平,女儿同学都管她叫“23号”。她的班里总共有50个人,每每考试,女儿都排名23。久而久之,便有了这个雅号,她也就成了名副其实的中等生。但在父亲刘继荣眼里,女儿是个快要成为英雄的人。但女儿歪着头想了想,认真地告诉父亲说,老师曾讲过一句格言:当英雄路过的时候,总要有人坐在路边鼓掌。她轻轻地说:“妈妈,我不想成为英雄,我想成为坐在路边鼓掌的人。”【湖北卷】作文自选角度,一个话题引起讨论:科技的利与弊。书信可不可以替代?是改变还是不改变。【江西卷】围绕“你不要想着你没有拥有什么,而要想着你拥有什么”、“你不要想着你现在拥有什么,而要想着你没有拥有什么”两个主题,选择议论,写一篇700字左右的议论文;小作文的主题跟音乐有关,字数200字左右。【辽宁卷】材料作文:一个音乐家登台穿的非常朴素,有人问他为什么不穿的华丽些,他说人要隐没于音乐之后。根据以上材料写一篇作文。【安徽省】阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)某公司车间角落放置了一架工作使用的梯子。为了防止梯子倒下伤着人,工作人员特意在旁边写了条幅“注意安全”。这事谁也没有放在心上,几年过去了,也没发生梯子倒下伤人的事件。有一次,一位客户来洽谈合作事宜,他留意到条幅并驻足很久,最后建议将条幅改成“不用时请将梯子横放”。要求选好角度,确定立意,明确文体(诗歌除外),自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文;不要套作,不得抄袭,不得透露个人相关信息;书写规范,正确使用标点符号。【重庆卷】这是一个发生在肉类加工厂的真实故事。下班前,一名工人进入冷库检查,冷库门突然关上,他被困在了里面,并在死亡边缘挣扎了5个小时。突然,门打开了,工厂保安走进来救了他。事后有人问保安:“你为什么会想起打开这扇门,这不是你日常工作的一部分啊!”保安说:“我在这家企业工作了35年,每天数以百计的工人从我面前进进出出,他是唯一一个每天早上向我问好并下午跟我道别的人。”“今天,他进门时跟我说过‘你好’但一直没有听到他说‘明天见’。”“我每天都在等待他的‘你好’和‘明天见’,我知道他还没有跟我道别,我想他应该还在这栋建筑的某个地方,所以我开始寻找并找到了他。”根据这篇材料考生自拟题目,写一则文章,题材不限,字数800字。据了解,自2005年起,我市一直采取命题作文的形式,这是多年以来再度出现非命题式材料作文。【北京卷】讲述火车巡逻员老计的故事,老计每天在深山里走几十里路守护铁路,清理碎石,防止巨石滑落,每有火车经过都会敬礼,火车都会鸣笛回应。请自拟题目写篇不少于八百字的文章。【湖北卷】作文自选角度,一个话题引起讨论:科技的利与弊。书信可不可以替代?是改变还是不改变。【广东卷】醉心于古文化研究的英国历史学家汤固比曾经说过,如果可以选择出生的时代与地点,他愿意出生在公元一世纪的中国新疆,因为当时那里处于佛教文化、印度文化、希腊文化、波斯文化和中国文化等多种文化的交汇地带。居里夫人在写给外甥女涵娜的信上说:“你写信对我说,你愿意生在一世纪以前……伊雷娜则对我肯定地说过,她宁可生得晚些,生在未来的世纪里。我以为,人们在每一个时期都可以过有趣而且有用的生活。”上面的材料引发了你怎样的思考?请结合自己的体验与感悟,写一篇文章。要求:①自选角度,自拟题目,自定文体。②不少于800字。③不得套作,不得抄袭。【上海卷】根据以下材料,选取一个角度,自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章(不要写成诗歌)。人们对自己的心灵中闪过的微光,往往会将它舍弃,只因为这是自己的东西。而从天才的作品中,人们却认出了曾被自己舍弃的微光。【山东卷】阅读下面的材料,根据自己的感悟和联想,写一篇不少于800字的文章。惟我辈既以担当中国改革发展为己任,虽石烂海枯,而此身尚存,此心不死。既不可以失败而灰心,亦不能以困难而缩步,精神贯注,猛力向前,应乎世界进步之潮流,合乎善长恶消之天理,则终有最后成功之一日。——孙中山要求:1、选准角度,自定立意;2、自拟题目;3、除诗歌外,文体不限;4、文体特征鲜明。【江苏卷】忧与爱【湖南卷】一幅图片加四句话。图片的内容为一只伸出的手,四句话分别是:伸出是温暖的服务,摊开是放飞的想象,张开是创造的力量,捧起是收获的希望。【河北卷】把握方向【海南卷】船主让漆工给船涂漆。漆工涂好船后,顺便将漏洞补好了。过了不久,船主给漆工送了一大笔钱。漆工说:“工钱已给过了”。船主说“这是感谢补漏洞的钱。”漆工说:“那是顺便补的。”船主说:“当得知我的孩子们驾船出海,我就知道他们回不来了。现在他们却平安归来,所以我感谢你!”考生根据材料自拟题目,写800字作文。【陕西卷】材料作文:船主让漆工给船涂漆。漆工涂好船后,顺便将漏洞补好了。过了不久,船主给漆工送了一大笔钱。漆工说:“工钱已给过了”。船主说“这是感谢补漏洞的钱。”漆工说:“那是顺便补的。”船主说:“当得知我的孩子们驾船出海,我就知道他们回不来了。现在他们却平安归来,所以我感谢你!”考生根据材料自拟题目,写800字作文。【内蒙古卷】变味的善良【四川卷】根据诗歌《手握一滴水》,以“水”为话题,进行800字作文。【福建卷】冯骥才说“运动中的赛跑,是在有限的路程内看你使用了多少时间;人生中的赛跑,是在有限的时间内看你跑了多少路程。”根据以上材料写一篇800字的作文。该材料内容源自《全国优秀作文选》2011年第07期冯骥才《对称美》以下为原文内容:恨有两种形式:默默的恨为了记住,喊出的恨为了排遣。蚊子咬了狮子一口,从此以为自己成了英雄。今天让位于明天,明天又被后天夺取。这便是政治历史的全部内容。胜利是把句号变为一朵花,失败是把句号变为一片药。自由好比白云。当你把它作为目标时,它清晰又具体;当你拥有它之后,就变成一片美丽的虚无了。雪山带着亮闪闪的皇冠,尊严地凌驾在它亿万万绿色的臣民上。人在被迫的情况下强迫自己。记住眼镜告诉你的一个真理:在去纠正世界之前,先去纠正好自己的眼睛。所有相爱的人都证实了天文学家的一个论断:太阳的一部分光辉必须在月亮中发现。对称美到了天平上,就是平等。一个成功的人身上的枪洞比一个失败的人身上的枪洞还多。人的苦恼,都是为了那些得不到的东西。千万不要做石子儿-别人的脚把你踢到哪儿,你就在哪儿。窗子是雨的小鼓,篱笆是风的排萧。酒杯说:“人在吻我的时候,把我拥有的酒全部都掠夺去了。”只要你站着,就一定有阴影;如果你害怕阴影,那就只有躺下。真理经常失败,但真理不怕失败。世界上就是这两种生存方式:兔子吃草和老虎吃兔子。运动中的赛跑,是在有限的路程内看你使用了多少时间;人生中的赛跑,是在有限的时间内看你跑了多少路程。
❷ 怎样通过英语阅读提高英语写作能力 毕业论文
我的经验是多多阅读英语文章和报刊,
熟记几个你觉得可以套用的格式句或词专组,很多词组都是常用的,通属常老外写东西也不会变化太大,有些语义表达是共通的,所以必须得下功夫背一背。这样会逐步提高你的语感和写作能力。
❸ 高考英语作文题目及范文
下面是2006年的高考英语作文。图片无法显示,请到www.yingyufeng.com查看。上面还有100多篇高考英语作文。
2006年高考英语作文,基本上都从实用的角度出发。其中,写信和写邮件还是考试的主流。下面是今年的高考英语作文题目。大家可以进行一下对比。
2006高考英语作文全国卷I
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求, 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:
1、字数100左右
2、可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯
3、开头语已为你写好
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.______________________
_________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
(注:上面的小字是:借阅须知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:开放时间:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末闭馆。)
2006高考英语作文北京卷
第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)
第一节:情景作文(20分)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平,友谊”夏令营活动,要求报名者提前交英文个人简历。假设你是王珊,请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。
姓名:王珊
性别:女
年龄:16岁
学校:北京阳光中学
其它:爱好音乐、摄影、善于与人交流,乐于助人,热爱自然,热爱和平
参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化
注意:1、词数不少于60
2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown below. You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say. Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so.
提示词:雕塑sculpture 笔记本电脑 laptop
2006高考英语作文广东卷
Ⅵ.书面表达(满分25分)
根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意:1.词数:100左右
2.生词:通讯:communicate(with sb.)vi.
communication n.
互联网:the Internet n.
2006高考英语作文浙江卷
第三节:书面表达 (满分30分)
当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文:
1、 看电影:省时、有趣、易懂
2、 读原著:细节更多、语言优美
3、 我的看法及理由
注意:1、词数:100-120 文章题目和开头已给出(不计入词数)。
2、参考词汇: original work 或 book in the original (原著)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
2006高考英语作文重庆卷
加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice,希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言,文化culture。
假设你是李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给David发一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
你怎样得知David的愿望
你愿意成为他的朋友
你打算如何帮助他
你盼望他的回复
注意:
1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好
2、字数:100词左右
3、在答题卡上作答
2006高考英语作文湖北卷
受某英文报的委托,你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息,用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
调查内容:在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中,学生最喜欢哪一种。
调查范围:湖北省的10所中学
调查对象:高中生
调查人数:1000
调查方式: 访谈
调查结果:见下图
Reading Interests of Senior School Students
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
One Possible Version
Reading Interests of Senior School Students
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles:news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most inerested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
2006高考英语作文湖南卷
第二节 写作(满分25分)
请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。
标题为:My Teacher Mr Moore
There's a teacher Mr .Moore.
Who is lovely and therty-four.
Always dncouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of why.
We all admire him more and more.
注意:
1. 不得照抄短诗原文。
2. 必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开。
3. 必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语意连贯。
4. 短文不能写成诗歌形式。
5. 词数:120左右。
One possible version:
Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for hes age.And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of tenching .He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting .In his opinion,we should not only know what, but also understand why. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourage us to thenk by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help.we've learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of why he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.
2006高考英语作文安徽卷
假设你是李华,作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年,寄住在Mr. Brown家里,刚回到国内。回国后,你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家,因此给他写了一封信,请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下:
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助
一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的,非常珍贵
词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上
邮资自己付
注意:
1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
2、参考词汇:邮资-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
One Possible Version
Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm now safely back home. Thank you very much for all the kindness I got from you ring my stay. Hope everything is fine with you there.
Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favour. When I came back, I suddently realizes that I had left my English dictionary behind at your place. It is a precious gift from mu American teacher. Would you please be so kind as to send it back to me?I'll pay for the postage. The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom. It is the one with a red cover.
Thanks and all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
2006高考英语作文山东卷
请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,简要描述漫画内容,并结合生活实际,就漫画的主题发表感想,题目自拟。
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2006高考英语作文天津卷
假设你是李华,在出国交流学习期间,到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影,但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。
1、因广告过多,影片放映晚点
2、影片播放音量过大
3、安全出口标识不明,存在安全隐患
3、适当结尾
注意:1、词数:80-120
2、可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯
3、信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)
参考词汇:安全出口-exit
安全隐患-potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I'm an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but
2006高考英语作文江西卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
请用中秋节的等待为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述下图的内容,并就此发表你的评论。
要求:1.文章必须包括描述和评论两部分;
2.词数为100左右。
2006高考英语作文陕西卷
书面表达(满分30分)
暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
优 点 缺 点
呆在家中 花费少、适方便 不能亲身了解外界
外出旅游 增长知识、开阔眼界 花费多、旅途不便
注意:1.短文写在答题卡上的指定区域,词数80-120(不含已写好部分)。
2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述。
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.参考词汇:眼界―horizon(或view)
The summer holiday is corning.Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday.
One Possible Version
The summer holiday is corning.Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
❹ 论文<高中英语写作策略>请高手帮忙(要中\英文对照)谢谢了
一、滴水穿石
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面的表达能力的形成不是一日之功,也不是一周两月之功,必须从平时的课堂教学一点一滴抓起,持之以恒,滴水穿石,才有可能最后解决英语书面表达的难题。
高中英语课堂以课文教学为主,结合课文教学抓住学生英语书面表达的难点和关键——谓语动词语义比较语法形式变化,采取多种形式进行写作的基本训练,是培养学生英语书面表达能力的主要手段之一。具体做法是:①课文的词汇教学,不局限于照本宣章,而是结合英语的构词,同义反义比较,名词的可数与不可数词义的区别,加强学生对英语词形变化的理解,扩充他们的词汇量,鼓励他们口笔头造句,借此培养学生用完整句子表意的能力。②课文教学的过程读、写、听、说交替。一般听说在先,读写在后。针对写作训练的听、说、读、写要注意材料内容的语言形式和课文内容的语言形式要有适当的变化和整体的系统性,以课文内容的提问为例,教师提问用的词语结构和课文内容相关,但和课文语言所用词语要有适当的差异,使学生稍加思考能够理解,为学生同样意思多种英语近似表达形式添砖加瓦,积累材料,在不知不觉中了解掌握更多的英语语句表达。③指导学生就课文内容进行长句短写,短句详写的口笔头练习,帮助学生熟练掌握英语中常用动词句子的结构变化,单句和复句的异同关键所在。使用频率高,结构变化较多的英语常用动词如Wishhopeexpect之类的动词要经常反复采用不同形式练习,帮助学生熟练掌握常用动词句子结构和词义区别,逐步在心理上树立用英语造句达意的信心和习惯。④有时结合课文,有时另外补充材料,采用各种形式指导学生改写、缩写或连词完成短文或填词完成短文。
然而英语课文教学中所进行的以上写作训练指导并不解决英语书面表达的全部,这一过程主要抓住英语动词和单复句的变化,少而精地进行英语书面表达的基础训练,为培养学生扎实的语言书面表达能力还需要广泛的多而杂的英文阅读。
二、蓄势待发
“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”。这句话生动说明了书面表达和广泛阅读的关系。世界著名的外语教学家美国人StephenKrashen在其1993年出版的教学理论力作《Power of Reading——Insight from the research》中指出外语过程中①外语书读的多的人,其读写能力比读书量少的人强。②第二语言的阅读量和语言的习得之间有肯定的关系。表明,正确指导学生阅读是解决词汇和迅速提高第二语言的有效必由之路。读书和写作就好比输入和输出,没有足够的输入吸收是不可能有大量的输出的。
高中学生词汇量有限,各科作业负担沉重,英语阅读必须考虑、难易适当,时间上尽可能不给他们加重额外负担。经过比较选择,采用省高校出版社发行的“高中英语泛读教程”为主,国家级刊物“高中英语画刊”和全国发行的“中学生报”和“英语辅导报”为辅。这几种阅读材料内容广泛,语言生动,体裁多样,文章长短适宜,很受学生们的欢迎。时间安排平时利用早自习限时完成,以每分钟50到100个单词阅读量,高三年级每周用两节课的时间专门用于学生自己自由阅读英文杂志和报刊,老师个别指导解答问题,一般经过两学期到三学期的坚持阅读,学生们就会感到英语常用词的基本词义和情景有很大提高。动词的结构和变换也比较熟悉和习惯了,实际上学生已在不知不觉充满乐趣地完成了英语词汇的巩固强化这个艰巨任务,为用英语进行书面表达积累了必需的词语、句式和背景方面的材料。学生进行英语阅读时是否积极主动,满怀热情,对于语言材料的理解和吸收极大,若是抱着完成老师作业的态度读书,就可能出现和尚念经有口无心,前面看过,后面忘光的现象。因此,仅仅为学生选择适宜有趣的读物和安排一定的时间还不够,教师要想法在指导学生阅读的过程中激发培养学生主动学习外语的兴趣,增强学生学外语的自信心,形成良好正确阅读外文材料的习惯,基本的做法是经常让学生个别地在自己的同学面前理解,成功地完成有适当难度的英语阅读问题,老师及时给以鼓励。
三、提纲挈领
英语书面表达的综合训练要提纲挈领是相对省时有效的。尤其高三毕业班时间紧,复习量大,更是如此。这里的“纲”指的是教学大纲和纲要说明要求学生掌握的重要语法概念和书面表达各种不同文体及要求。这里的“领”是说书面表达训练过程要先口头训练,后笔头训练,贯穿始终。
以考纲加大纲要求的各种书面表达形式为顺序,在高三英语总复习的过程中分别进行专门的写作训练指导,目的明确,便于安排;针对性强,容易归纳。每个专项,结合文体,进行先口头,后笔头的写作训练,可以使学生相互交流,取长补短,集思广益,
更好地掌握同一话题,文体的多种表达形式和不同的连贯组合。也有利于增强学生书面表达的自信心和准确性,减少不必要的简单错误,实际上等于一种话题和文体进行两次以上语篇表达训练,无形中起到巩固强化作用。以考纲和大纲要求掌握的文体写通知为例,来说明一下如何进行总复习的写作训练:①用投影仪打出同一内容的口头通知和书面通知比较其格式和句式特点。②让学生口头复述同一内容的两种通知。③教师提供另一内容通知的要求和必要的词语。④由学生准备个别发言,口头表达通知要求尽可能用不同的英语句子结构和语序表达类似的内容。⑤教师组织比较学生口头表达中不同结构和语序的异同和效果。⑥归纳口头和笔头通知常用的各种开头语;中间内容的动词结构;结尾要求的套话和基本格式。⑦布置口头笔头通知的书面练习。⑧收回练习,即时批改,在课堂上交流学生写的有特色或基本正确的通知。⑨集体或个别翻译复习通知的开头、中间和结尾的常用句式。以上具体步骤是学生进行书面表达训练时采用的基本程序,由此可大概看出书面表达是如何提纲挈领进行训练的。
First, power of perseverance
As the saying goes "line of beginning the great distance toyou". English written expression ability formation is not merit of thefirst, also is not week two months merit, must grasp bit by bit fromthe usual classroom instruction, perseveres, the power ofperseverance, only then has the possibility finally to solve Englishwritten expression difficult problem.
The high school English classroom by the text teaching primarily, theunion text teaching holds the student English written expression thedifficulty and the key - predicate verb semantics comparisongrammatical form change, adopts the many kinds of forms to carry onwriting the basic training, raises one of student English writtenexpression ability main methods. The concrete procere is: (1) Thetext glossary teaching, does not limit to according to the textproclaims the chapter, but is unifies English the construction word,the synonymy counter- righteousness comparison, the noun may countwith cannot count the word meaning the difference, strengthens thestudent to English morphological changes understanding, expands theirvocabulary, encourages their mouth writing skill to create sentences,to borrow this to train the student to use complete sentence 子表Italy the ability. (2) The text teaching process reads, writes,listens, to say takes turn. Generally hears in first, read-write inafter. Listens in view of the writing training, to say, to read,writes must pay attention to the material content the language formand the text content language form must have the suitable change andthe whole systematic characteristic, take the text content inquiry asthe example, the teacher inquires the words and expressions structureand the text content which uses is related, but uses the words andexpressions with the text language to have to have the suitabledifference, causes the student slightly to ponder can understand,contributes labor and materials for the student similar meaning manykinds of English approximate expression form, the accumulationmaterial, in unconsciously center understood grasps the more Englishsentence expression. (3) Instructs the student to carry on the longverse on the text content short to write, the short phrase detailedwrites the mouth writing skill practice, helps the student skilled tograsp in English the commonly used verb sentence structural change,the sentence and the plicate sentence similarities and differenceskey is at. The frequency of use is high, structural change moreEnglish commonly used verb like W i s h h o p e e x p e c the t and soon verb must frequently repeatedly use the different form practice,helps the student skilled to grasp the commonly used verb sentencestructure and the word meaning difference, graally has theconfidence and the custom in the psychology which creates sentenceswith English to express one's ideas. (4) Sometimes unifies the text,sometimes other supplement material, uses each kind of form toinstruct the student to rewrite, the abbreviation either theconjunction completes the short written work or completes theshort written work.
However in English text teaching carries on above writes the traininginstruction certainly not to solve the English written expressioncomplete, this process mainly holds English verb and Shan Fuju change,carries on the English written expression the fundamentaltraining, for raises the student solid language written expressionability also to need widespread many and mixed English reading.
Second,
"Studies the broken ten thousand volumes, starts writing liketo be bright". This speech vividly showed the written expression andthe widespread reading relations. The world famous foreign languageteaches the scientist American S t e p h e n K r a s h e n theteaching theory strength which published in its in 1993 to make "P o we r o f R e a d i n g - I n s i g h t f r o m t h e r e s e a r c h"center to point out in the foreign language process (1) foreignlanguage book read many people, its read-write ability studied thequantity few people to be stronger than. (2) The second languagereading quantity and the language custom between has the firmlyrelations. Indicated that, correctly instructs student reading issolves the glossary and rapidly enhances the second language theeffective way that must be taken. Studies and writing is just like theinput and the output, not the enough input absorption is impossible tohave the massive outputs.
High school student vocabulary limited, various branches work burdenheavy, English reading must consider, the difficulty is suitable, inthe time does not aggravate the extra burden as far as possible tothem. After the comparison choice, uses the province universitiespublishing house to distribute "the high school Englishgeneral-comprehension reading course" primarily, the national levelpublication "the high school English periodical" and the nationalrelease "the middle-school student reports" and "English auxiliary导报" for auxiliary. These kind of reading material contentwidespread, language vivid, the literature style is diverse, thearticle length is suitable, gains the students popularity very much.The time arrangement usually uses early studies by oneself the timelimit to complete, by each minute 50 to 100 words reading quantity,high three grades each week specially uses in with two classes timestudent freely to read English magazine and the publication, teacherthe particular guidance explanation question, persist reading thegeneral process two semesters to three semesters, the students willfeel the English commonly used word the basic word meaning and thescene have the very big enhancement. The verb structure and thetransformation quite was also familiar and be used to it, in fact thestudent unconsciously feature fun has been completing English glossaryconsolidated strengthened this arous task, for used English to carryon the written expression to accumulate the essential words andexpressions, the sentence type and the background aspect material. Thestudent carries on when English reading whether positive initiative,fills with the enthusiasm, is enormous regarding the language materialunderstanding and the absorption, if hugs is completing teacher thework the manner to study, possibly appears the buddhist priest tochant scripture the lip-service, front has looked, behind forgets thelight the phenomenon. Therefore, merely chooses for the student issuitable the interesting reading material and the arrangement certaintime is also insufficient, the teacher wants the idea in to instructin the process which the student reads to stimulate to train thestudent to study the foreign language on own initiative the interest,strengthens the student study foreign language the self-confidence,forms the good correct reading foreign language material the custom,the essential procere is frequently lets the student indiviallyunderstand in front of own schoolmate, successfully completes has thesuitable difficulty English reading question, teacher promptly givesthe encouragement.
Third, concentrates on the main points
English written expression integrated training needs toconcentrate on the main points is relatively time-saving effective.Especially high three graating classes time tight, the reviewquantity is big, is so. Here "the outline" refers is the program ofinstruction and the summary explained requests important grammarconcept and written expression each kind of different literary styleand request which the student grasps. Here "the collar" is said thewritten expression training process needs first oral to train, thelatter writing skill training, passes through throughout.
Take tests the outline to enlarge the outline request each kind ofwritten expression form as the order, always reviews in the high threeEnglish in the process separately carries on the special writingtraining instruction, the goal is clear about, is advantageous for thearrangement; Pointed strong, is easy to ince. Each special, theunion literary style, carries on first orally, the latter writingskill writing training, may cause the student mutually to exchange,makes up for one's deficiency by learning from others' strong points,profits by opinions from various sources,
Grasps the identical topic well, the literary style many kindsof expressions form and different links up the combination. Also isadvantageous to strengthening the student written expression theself-confidence and the accuracy, reces the nonessential simplemistake, is actual superior carries on two times of above languagesexpressions training to one kind of topic and the literary style,imperceptibly plays the consolidated strengthened role. Take tests theliterary style which the outline and the program request grasps towrite the notice as the example, explained how carries on the writingtraining which always reviews: (1) Splits out the identical contentwith the projecting apparatus the oral notification and the writtennotification compares its form and the sentence type characteristic.(2) Orally let the student repeat the identical content two kind ofnotices. (3) The teacher provides another content notice the requestand the essential words and expressions. (4) Prepares by the studentindivially to speak, the oral expression notice request uses thedifferent English sentence structure and the word order as far aspossible expresses the similar content. (5) The teacher organizes tocompare in the student oral expression the different structure and theword order similarities and differences and the effect. (6) Incesoral and writing skill notice commonly used each kind of 开头语;Middle content verb structure; Ending request polite talk and basicform. (7) Arranges the oral writing skill notice the written practice.(8) Takes back the practice, revises immediately, exchanges thestudent in the classroom to write has the characteristic or the basiccorrect notice. (9) Collective or indivial translation review noticeopening, middle and ending commonly used sentence type. The mainroutine which above the concrete step is the student carries on whenwritten expression training uses, how from this can probably see thewritten expression is concentrates on the main points carries on thetraining.
❺ 高考英语作文是不是一般以议论文为主
高考英语作文是不是一般以议论文为主
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❻ 高考英语怎么提高作文分全国卷2
在多年教学过程中,英语辅导老师总结出内容、语言、结构是快速提升高中英语作文成绩的三大发力点,只要在这三个方面上有所提升,英语作文分数就能明显提高。
在多年教学过程中,英语辅导老师总结出内容、语言、结构是快速提升高中英语作文成绩的三大发力点。内容是我们表达的思想、讲的故事、抒发的感受;语言是我们在表达内容时涉及到的遣词、造句;结构,就是文中内容和语言的组织形式,即如何分段、每段写什么。语言是内容的载体,内容是语言所表达的内涵,而合理的结构体现着你清晰的写作思路。实践表明,只要在这三个方面上有所提升,英语作文分数就能明显提高。
一、关于作文的内容
英语作文属于“限制性写作”。所谓的“限制”,就是通过内容要点、提纲、图画、图表等形式,对作文的内容进行限制.。也就是说,大家写的内容都是大同小异的。
比如2011年新课标全国卷,大家都是李华,都在国外上学,都在写求助信——这个大前提是固定的。区别只在于,到底在那几个方面求助而已。
这里,我们要谈到,英语作文和语文作文的考察方向是不一样的。语文作文会考察同学们的思想深刻性、知识丰富性、心态积极性等纯“内容”层面的东西;而英语作文主要考察的是你“对英语这门语言的运用能力”——这是英语应试作文命题的本质特征。
也就是说,同样在写“感谢老师”这个话题(2008陕西卷),某同学写的感谢理由是“老师为祖国做出贡献”,而他的同桌写的是“老师教得好”,此时,阅卷老师并不会因为前者所表达的思想更加高尚而为其额外加分。阅卷老师给分的主要依据是:看谁能够把自己的想法表达得更加清楚!
请试着用英语造句:
1、老师,我感谢你,因为你为祖国做出了巨大的贡献。
2、老师,我感谢你,因为你教得好。
请问,这两个句子中,那个更好造?
显然,第二个句子是容易得多的。因为很少有同学能够准确地翻译出“你为祖国做了巨大的贡献”这个句子!(You have been making great devotion to our motherland.)
为什么高分同学写作文如行云流水般一气呵成,而你磨磨蹭蹭半天写不出东西,整天抱怨自己“单词量不够”?这是因为——你想得太难了,你的表达能力驾驭不了你想写的内容!
老师认为:
1、高考英语作文不应存在“单词不会写”问题,初二水平的孩子照样能写。
2、之所以“单词不会写”,是因为在构思内容的时候,选取了自己表达能力驾驭不了的内容。
那么,到底要写什么样的内容?
关于作文的内容,老师提出两个观点:
1、对于题目要求的内容:要写得全面。
2、对于需要自己发挥的内容:要想得简单。
如2008年山东卷,让你给班上一位新同学提建议,帮助他尽快融入班集体。试题给出三个内容要点:
1、分析他无法融入班集体的原因;
2、给出建议;
3、谈谈你帮助他融入班集体的具体措施。
注意,这三点都是题目要求你写的内容,你都要写进文章里去,只要有一点没写,不管其它写的多么精彩,都将被认为是“没有完成试题规定的写作任务”,将大大被减分!这个就叫做对题目要求的内容:要写得全面。
同时我们看到,这三点内容都需要自己进行一定的发挥:到底写什么原因呢?有哪些建议?有什么具体措施?
在思考这三个问题时,就要用到第二个观点:对于需要自己发挥的内容:要想得简单。
以第一段为例,我们可以想到的内容有:
1、害羞;
2、太爱学习;
3、不爱跟同学聊天;
4、没有找到共同兴趣爱好...
5、不懂方言(dialect);
6、不参加学校活动(school activities);
这几个内容都非常的简单好写,很容易上手,直接解决了“单词不会”这个写作文的老大难问题。这样看来,只要注意到了“对题目要求的内容写的全面”和“对需要自己发挥的内容想得简单”两个事项,内容方面则再无大碍了。
二、关于作文的语言
在全省同学的作文内容差不多的情况下,老师阅卷主要靠什么依据来判分呢?其中一个依据,就是语言,也就是,你用什么样的语言来表达你的意思。
比如跟朋友分别时,同意表达“再见”这个意思,一般人只会说“再见”二字,而语言水平高的诗人们则会说:
“孤帆远影碧空尽,唯见长江天际流。”
“莫愁前路无知己,天下谁人不识君。”
“桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦赠我情。”
看到了吗?同样的内容(再见),只要用不同水平的语言表达出来,给人的感觉就大不一样!
大多数考生写作文,都是以“写够字数”作为自己的努力方向,因此习惯性地用初一、初二的单词和语法知识来堆砌自己的命运;而真正的“高手”应该努力尝试使用较高级的语言知识来打造自己的高分作文。这方面的技巧包括:简单词替换、主语替换、句式替换等非常容易操作的技巧。
1、简单词替换:将good等简单词替换为excellent 等高级词汇。注意,在学习使用高级词汇时,应该首先尝试把一些常用词汇进行替换,如good,happy,tired,think about,important等。本文先列举这几个词的高级替换词如下,更详细的“简单词替换”技巧将另外撰文讲解。
good——excellent;
例句:It's an excellent idea for you to make a foreign pen-pal.
你想交个外国笔友,这是个很棒的注意。
happy——joyful;
例句:We felt joyful and excited to see so many trees and flowers in the countryside.
在乡下看到这么多花和树,让我们感到很开心和激动。
tired——exhausted;
例句:Exhausted as we were, we felt our time and effort worthwhile.
虽然很累,我们仍感觉自己的时间和精力花的很值。
think about —— take into consideration / take into account(考虑到);
例句:We should take into consideration other people's opinion.
我们应该考虑其他人的意见。
important —— vital (至关重要的);
例句:It is vital for us to be brave enough to face challenges in our life.
勇于面对人生挑战,对我们来说是至关重要的。
上面这些句子本身都在高考作文里很常用,大家可以马上结合例句,掌握这几个常见词汇的“换词”,并思考和感受“换词”技巧的神奇作用。
2、主语替换:
a. 将习惯使用的“用人作主语”换成“用物作主语”(亦称“无灵主语”),如把“I like English.”变成“English is my favourite subject.”或者“English attracts me a lot.”
b. 用动名词作主语:把“You should communicate more with your classmates.”改写为“Communicating more with your classmates would be beneficial for you.”
3、句式替换:
a. 使用“不完全倒装句”:遇到否定词、形容词这两种常见的“升级标志词”时,可以将句子变成倒装句来表达。如:“I don't believe it.”变成“By no means do I believe it.”或者把“This is a beautiful flower.”变成“So beautiful is the flower that we all like it.”
b. 使用“强调句”:用“It is + 被强调部分 + that +句子剩余部分”句型,来强调一个句子中的某个成分。事实上,只要是个现成的英语句子,都能拿出某个成分出来强调一下。如:把“I like English most.”改写为“It is English that I like most.”可以看出,强调句型是用起来最方便的高考高级句型。
需要注意,再厉害的句型,一旦重复次数过多,也会显得低俗。因而大家进考场前可以多掌握几种高级句型,就像战士上战场前多带几发子弹一样,在最关键的地方一发一发地用到作文里去。
三、关于作文的结构
刚才,我们其实分析了高考英语作文的前两个重要的方面,那么,只要注意了内容和语言就够了吗?不是的!除了考虑内容(表达什么)和语言(怎样表达),我们还要注意用什么样的顺序把整篇文章里的一个个段落、每个段落里的一个个句子组织起来,也就是第三点需要注意的东西:作文的结构。
作文结构研究的是下面两个问题:1、文章分几段;2、每段写什么。
高考属于“标准化考试”,在历年真题中,我们发现高考英语作文主要就这么几种:
1、提纲作文;
2、书信等应用文;
3、图画作文1:情景小故事;
4、图画作文2:看图议论文;
5、图表作文;
每年,每份试题,都是拿这五种命题形式中的一种或几种结合起来出题。学员经常问的“某种作文该怎么写?”这样的问题,往往指的就是某种作文应该满足什么样的结构。
在研究每年的高分试卷过程中,我们发现,阅卷老师偏爱的文章往往都是用某些特定的结构组织起来的。如书信作文一般分成三类段落:
1、开头段:
2、中间段;
3、结尾段。
其中,开头段要写出问候、自我介绍、写信缘由、写信目的四种内容;中间段要按照题目的要求进行“具体问题,具体分析”,一般要写原因、建议等内容;结尾段往往是感谢、祝愿、期待回信等客套话。了解了这样的结构,将大大提高作文构思的速度。
书信是很多省份年年必考的题型,关于书信及其他作文类型的具体写法,老师将另外撰文详解。
总结与顿悟
综上所述,高考作文的发力点在于以下三个:内容、语言、结构。
在长期研究过程中,我们发现,高分作文往往满足以下三个特点:
1、内容切题;
2、语言精彩;
3、结构清晰;
针对这三个发力点,老师建议大家有的放矢地进行以下三方面的工作:
第一,内容方面:了解高考作文常考的话题,结合高中教材,整理背诵一些常考的话题以及这些话题中常见的单词和句子,考试时便可信手拈来,这将大大提高备考的针对性和答题的速度。这样的话题包括:环境保护、身体健康、优良品质、成功智慧、家庭关系、同学关系(合作)、与老师的关系、外出活动、校园生活、社会问题、科技、文化与跨文化交流等等。各地试卷和全国卷对这些话题各有侧重,在高考最后复习阶段,应根据本地高考真题和当年的模拟题有针对性地加以准备。
第二,语言方面:掌握最容易操作的单词、句子、段落三个层次上的写作技巧,每学到一个新知识点,想想能否在作文中将它使用出来。
第三,结构方面:我们坚决反对“模板式”地生搬硬套,但提倡用合乎英语语言习惯和阅卷教师喜好的“套路”自己打造针对每篇文章的个性化模板。
❼ 毕业论文英语作文80字
My dear father,Today is Father Day,I want to say to you:"I love you !"Because you gave me life and love me.You have to in order to our home to work hard every day.I also want to say to you:"I'm sorry!"because I often make you feel angry.I know I shouldn't do it.I promise I won't in the future.Do you remember you teach me play basketball?I want to play basketball with you.Who is winner?I think you can and I compare.Finally,I hope you have a happy Father Day.I love you forever.