『壹』 命题中 英语写作的期望值
“The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstance they want, and if they cannot find them, make them.” Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer.This view has been shared now by more and more people.I’m very glad to receive college ecation and i reached the conclusion that i have come to college not for one single reason, but for many.
“这世上的成功之士，是那些奋力寻觅自己想要得到机遇的人们， 倘使找不着机会，他们就自己创造机会。”这句名言是一个伟大的作家萧伯纳写的。被原来越多的人分享着。我很高兴能够接受大学教育，我总结出我想上大学不单单是为了一个原因，而是很多个。
First, university is such an ideal place to broaden my horizon and make more friends.The youth of 21stcentury should be open-minded, instead of being a person with a tunnel vision.I’m ready to meet more challenges and make more friends ring the four years.
第一，大学是能开阔我眼界和结交更多朋友的理想之地。作为21世纪的年轻人，我们应该开拓思维，而不是目光狭隘。我已经做好在这四年内接受挑战和认识更多朋友的准备了。
Second, I’m unwilling to step into the society straight after high school.I’m afraid I’m not fully prepared for the working environment: complicated interpersonal problems, jockeying for position, a tremendous amount of pressure and etc. I have to face various kinds of major conflicts as well as trivial things.I seem to be over-pessimistic, but that actually accounts for part of my choice.
第二，我不愿意在高中之后就直接进入社会。我害怕我没有完全做好踏入工作环境的准备：复杂的人际问题，用手段谋取职位，巨大的压力等等。 我必须面对各种重大冲突还有琐碎事情。我也许是过度悲观了，但是事实上这也是我做出选择的一个原因。
Finally, thanks to the all-out support from my parents, i am able to further my study in university.I’ll spare no efforts to live up to th
『贰』 如何提高商务英语的写作水平
想要提高商务英语写作水平，首先书写要正确
(1)恰当的语言风格
我们在撰写正式专的商务英语写作属时，应尽量使用正规的语言;而当起草非正式的商务便条、商务便函及商务书信时，可使用较通俗的口语。
(2)准确的措词和信息
商务写作离不开商务术语，一般常用的商业术语用字简洁。商务英语写作应该特别注意措词和信息的正确性。
同时商务英语写作要求内容书写得具体和明确，因此，尽量使用确定、具体的语言，直接了当地传递信息，说明问题，切忌笼统模糊。
『叁』 英语写作：商务邮件开头如何写
It is always better to use somebody’s name if you know it. If it is the first time you are writing to someone, use either of the following:如果知道对方姓名，邮件中写上总是好的。如果这是你第一次写信给某人，可以用下面任意一种方式开头：For men: Dear Mr XXXX,写给男士：尊敬的XXX先生For women: Dear Ms XXXX,写给女士：尊敬的XXX女士Once you get to know someone, i.e. after exchanging one or two emails or if you meet them in person, it is usually OK to use their first name.一旦你认识了对方，比如在往来一两封邮件或见过面以后，可以在邮件中称呼名字。Use Dear Sirs, if you are writing to more than one person even if the group of people includes women.如果你写邮件给两个或以上的人，即使这些人里有女士，请写“尊敬的先生们”Dear Ladies and Gentlemen, is wrong. “Ladies and Gentleman” is only used in formal speech."尊敬的女士们先生们”是错误的，这种用法只用在正式演讲中。The word Dear may be omitted in less formal emails. Instead, you may just open with the person’s first name/people’s first names.“dear”在不是特别正式的邮件中可以省去。你可以直接以对方（个人或群组）的名字开头。 查看原帖>>
『肆』 急求商务英语写作文章例文
The Internet has changed a lot of things within the business world, including business correspondence. here once traditional, formal business letters were normal, quick business e-mails now rule the day. The ease and informality of the Internet often makes it seem we can write business e-mails poorly and get away with it; yet, it’s actually the contrary. Because e-mail is so accessible, people receive that much more of it and disregard anything less than perfect. Your business e-mails must stand out from the junk. The following tips will help you to create concise, engaging business e-mails for any purpose.
网络改变了商务世界的很多方面，商务信函便是其中之一。曾经，传统且正式的商务信件很常见，而今，快捷的商务电邮成为主流。网络的便捷性和随意性常常让我们觉得，似乎商务电邮写得糟糕没什么大不了的。然而，事实恰好相反。因为写一封电子邮件太轻而易举了，所以人们收到那么多之后，便只处理那些写得好的——你的商务电邮必须从电邮堆中脱颖而出才行。以下要点能帮助你写出适用于任何目的的简洁、抢眼的商务电邮。
STYLE
The human eye reacts differently to a computer screen than a piece of paper, so how you format your e-mail is vital. Use short, succinct sentences that get to the point immediately; remember, your goal here is to dispense important information, so give that to the reader right up front. Always include a greeting and a signature, and use as many line and paragraph breaks as possible; this makes the e-mail easier to read. And resist the urge to write a book. Business e-mails are better off short; the equivalent of a page or so is sufficient.
风格
人眼对电脑屏幕和纸张的反应不同，所以如何安排电邮的格式非常重要。使用短小简洁的句子直奔主题；记住，写电邮的目的是为了传达重要信息，所以要让读邮件的人首先看到要点。不管什么情况都要包含问候语和署名，并且尽量多折行多分段——这能使邮件更易读。还有，要抑制长篇大论的冲动：商务电邮最好简短；相当于一页纸左右的量就足够了。
TONE
For better or worse, the Internet breeds a nasty habit of informality. It’s okay to be slightly informal with your e-mail (people tend to expect it lately), but don’t write as if you’re talking to your mother or best friend. You need to strike a balance between traditional formality and e-mail informality. Think about your recipient and how they’d most likely write an e-mail. What words would they use? Would slang or jargon offend your readers? Use these considerations to create a concise, customized e-mail.
语气
暂不论其好坏，网络滋生了“非正式”交流的恶习。电邮稍微非正式一点没有关系（人们最近开始接受了），但是不要写得好像是在跟妈妈或最好的朋友谈话一样。你需要在传统意义上的正式和电邮的非正式中找到平衡。想想收件人的风格，以及他们最可能怎样写电邮。他们会使用什么词汇？俚语或行话会不会冒犯到读邮件的人？将这些因素考虑在内，才能写出一封有针对性的简洁邮件。
GRAMMAR
Informality, whatever its root, does not excuse grammatical errors, and these can damage your e-mail. Grammatical errors show that you didn’t put much time into your business e-mail and you probably don’t care much about your message. Go through your e-mail carefully to make sure you have spelled correctly, and you have fixed all grammar and punctuation mistakes. Remove all rendancies and get rid of any clichés. Recipients, especially professional business people, will appreciate your attention to details and they will respond better to your message when no errors exist in your e-mail.
语法
不管“非正式”如何发展而来，这都不意味着允许犯语法错误—这些错误会毁了你的电邮。语法错误说明你没有在商务电邮上下多少功夫，而且你很可能不太在乎你所传达的信息。仔细通读电邮，以确定拼写正确，并且修订了所有的语法和标点错误。删除所有的多余信息和陈词滥调。收件人—尤其是那些职业商人—会很欣赏你注重细节，而且，如果你发给他们的电邮里没有错误的话，他们会态度更好地回复你的消息。
RESPONSE
Since e-mail is an immediate medium, and a highly accessible one at that, it’s far easier than in paper letters to request a response – and far more likely that you’ll get one! Before signing off with your signature, be clear about what you want the recipient to do. Need a response via phone or with certain information attached? Say so! Your recipient will have a difficult time responding if they have no idea what you want from them. But remember: be polite when requesting action. There’s little worse than an overly forward or pushy ending.
回复
电邮是即时媒体， 也因此是一个高度普及的媒体。和纸质邮件相比，通过电邮要求对方回复更便捷—而且，你更有可能收到回复！在落款之前，一定要清楚你期望收件人做什么。需要电话回复还是附上特定的信息？ 说出来！ 如果收件人不知道你想要什么，他们答复你的时候就会很费神。但要记住：要求回复时一定要客气。几乎没有什么比在邮件结束时过度催促或强求更糟糕了。
『伍』 我期望通过这个课程学到简单的商务英语对话用英文
.能够写出高水准的形容词
.提高想象能力
.写出一流的华语作文
谢谢
『陆』 英语作文期望
Parents’ Expectation 26
It is said that Chinese parents are the world’s most responsible parents, since the kids are born, they start to plan everything for the children, they choose the school, the kids’ hobby even the kids’ partners. Chinese parents want to raise their kids to be the excellent ones, they put so much hope on the kids. While it is also said the Chinese kids are the world’s most unhappy kids, because they live as what the parents tell them, they don’t have their own thinking. Both sides reflect Chinese family situation that the parents give the children too much pressure, the children feel unhappy about their parents’ expectation. Indeed, I feel the way, my parents always want me to be the No.1, they tell me I should get the highest score, I feel tired, I tell them how I feel, then they begin to realize their expectation has become a burden for me. parents should give space to their kids.
『柒』 怎样写一封正式的商务英语感谢信例如访问了某个企业，感谢企业给予的热情接待，期待下次合作
February 20-------------左上角先写日期
Marketing Manager ------------------收信人职位，公司地址
HPR Proction
96 Broad Street
Paris, L19 7HJ
Thank you for your hospitality. We benefit a lot from this visit. Your company culture , design and management set an example for us. We sincerely look forward to next coorperation.
Yours faithfully
Julie ventnor---------------发信人姓名
这是最常用的格式，完全齐内头式，还有很多方式可以参考剑容桥商务英语写作书。
『捌』 希望和对方开展商务合作 英语作文 100字
HowtolearnEnglishwell?.Englishisveryimportant.?...Ifyouarenotgoodatspeaking,..,.Ithinkifyouworkhard,you'llgetgradesinEnglish.（共102个单词。皆为原创。因我本人也是初二的，所以在这里用的都是初二内学的单词，希望能帮到你。）
『玖』 英语商务写作高手进！！！
太狠了，写200词作文悬赏分才0...
『拾』 英语商务信件结尾常用的祝福语
典型的英语商务信件结尾常用的祝福语有Yours sincerely（熟人或知道对方姓名），Best wishes, kind regards 和yours faithfully。
[jɔ:z sɪnˈsɪəlɪ]
n. 谨上（书信结尾用语）; 敬启（书信结尾用语）; 鄙人，我;
Yours sincerely
双语例句
1. Waiting to hear from you, Yours sincerely, William Faulkner.
盼复，您的诚挚的，威廉·福克纳
2. Indicate precisely what you mean to say , yours sincerely, wasting away.
明确的表达出你的意思, 不用写“你真诚的”.
3. Yours sincerely [ S - yours ]
谨启(信的结尾语 )
最美好的祝愿、祝福;
双语例句
1. Lina is fine and sends you her love and best wishes.
莉娜身体很好，还让我转达她对你的爱和祝福。
2. She sends her best wishes — you've obviously made a hit there.
她向你问好——看得出来你在那里大受欢迎。
3. I found George's story very sad. Please give him my best wishes.
我觉得乔治的经历很悲惨，请向他转达我最诚挚的祝福。
亲切的问候
双语例句
1. By the way, Sergeant Chevalier sends you his kind regards.
顺便说一下, 谢瓦利埃警官向你问候.
2. If you ever see George, give him my kind regards.
如果你见到乔治, 请代我向他致以亲切的问候.
3. Give my kind regards to your brother.
请代向令兄问候.
英 [jɔ:z ˈfeɪθfʊlɪ] 美 [jʊrz ˈfeɪθfəli]
（主英）[给不知姓名者的正式信件的结尾客套语];
双语例句
1、Yoursfaithfully,r.h.thomas,editorialdirector.
你的忠实的r.h.托马斯，编辑部主任。
2、Yoursfaithfully,P.Mandal,,Bangalorebranch.
您忠实的P曼达尔（P.Mandal），班加罗尔分行客户存款部助理经理。