A. 英语作文修改，主要在句子文章结构和语法上，更高级一点。（电脑自动评分，应付电脑就行）
改了改当中不太对的地方
When facing work, we may have such a question--why we work. Some people think that work is to earn a living. Nonetheless, the rich are still working. So, I think we work to realize our self-value and prove ourselves fundamentally.
For one thing, work makes us valuable to society. When we work, we can not only support our families, but also create social value. In addition, we also benefit others at the same time. And finally we gain the inner validation.
For another thing, work gives us a chance to prove our abilities. If we do a good job, we are telling others that we have strong ability and others will approve and respect us, which means that we gain the endorsement of others.
No matter waht inner validation or endorsement of others is, they are all for proving our existence is meaningful. So everyone ought to try his best to make contributions to the society positively.
B. 英文写作中常用的基本句式有哪些
上面各位的回答都不错，我给你找的是专门针对考研用的，因为看你的年纪应该不是为了考四六级这么简单了吧。
写作是语言的重要环节，看看英语考试中对作文的重视就明白了。在考研中，写作意义极其重大，其性价比（即投入的时间和提高的幅度）非常高，在我看来，如果你的阅读水平还可以的话，写作将是你的突破口。
提高写作只有一个字——“恒”，绝对的熟能生巧。我在网上看过高手写的文章，简直可以用恐怖来形容，完全是阅读理解的水平，而作者的诀窍就是每天写每天练！只要不断的写不断的改，你的文章会让你自己吃惊。套用一句：写作恒久远，练习永流传。
然而备考的时间是很紧的，不可能每天保持大量的练习，好在其要求也不高，从现在开始，到考前完全可以达到要求，但千万不要间断！很多同学都有一个情况，越不写，越怕写；越怕写，越不写。万事开头难，所以开始的练习尤为重要，而练习应以词句为主+阅读好文章，我就有一本记录本，专门收集好的词句，效果很好。这里列其中一些较简单实用的，希望能对大家有所帮助（不过，建议同学们最好自己写，自己收集，印象会深很多，每天花10分钟过过，绝对值得。另外，我列的句子很有限，多半是骨架，大家要学会扩展，并且在记忆的时候多联想一下。举例来说，一篇你的文章，用心改一下，好好套用几个句式，改些档次较高的词和词组，可以提高不少哦）：
一． 总结句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二． 开首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I’m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三． 并列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what’s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四． 转折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***’s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(尽管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn’t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五． 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六． 强调句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It’s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七． 图表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短语：made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外，文章结尾也很重要，它的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：
1．首尾呼应，画龙点睛
在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的结尾：
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2．重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾：
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然结尾
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾：
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4．含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾：
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5．用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?
6．指明方向，激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“Let’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾：
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.
文章的结尾没有一定的模式，可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是，一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。
C. 如何让英语写作句式多样化
句式就是句子的结构方式,也就是句子的式样或格式.不同的思想内容要用不同的句式来表达；而同一思想内容也可以用不同的句式来表达.句式不同,表达效果也就不同.只有句式多样化,文章才会生动有趣,充满活力.可是,在实际写作中,初学写作的学生往往一篇文章都是千篇一律的简单句,文章单调乏味,毫无生气.笔者认为,恰当地使用某些方法或手段有助于实际表达形式的多样化,增强表达效果.兹将常用方法简单介绍如下.
一、改变句子开头许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词性,用名词和代词作为句子的开头,如 People,We,I,He,They,She等.但这种开头见多了,难免让人厌倦.试比较：
A．People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food．B．There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food．第一句改用非人称名词作为主语开头,第二句则用there ＋be句型开头.这样既改变了主语＋谓语＋宾语单调句型,又把想强调的意思突出出来.实际上,为了把文章写得生动活泼,除了用主语开头外,还可以用句子的其他成分开头.
1．用副词开头Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests．2．用同位语开头Air,water and oxygen,everything that is necessary for life．3．用状语开头Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it．4．用表语开头Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort．5．用宾语开头My advice you would not listen to；my helps you laughed at．Now you will have what you asked for．6．以短语修饰语开头1）以介词短语开头To me the news was very interesting,but to my wife very boring．2）以分词短语开头Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,Manchester四十三 took flight for the pacific islands．3）以不定式短语开头To pass the exam,you should work very hard．二、巧用连接词有的学生在作文中使用过多简单句,成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时,动辄用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的,反而使句子结构松散、呆板.为了避免这种现象,可以通过使用连接词,尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词,如 who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if,unless,as if等,不仅能够丰富句型,而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚,意义更连贯.例如：
Natural resources are very limited．They will be exhausted in the near future．It is not true．But it becomes a major concern around the world．This is a widely accepted fact．这段文字用简单句表达,它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清,意思支离破碎.如果使用连接词,将单句与其前后合并,形成主次关系,就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨.例如：
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true．再如：
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endangered．此句用and把三个分句一贯到底,既乏味又可笑.如果使用了关系代词which,语义就会更连贯,语言也会更流畅：
The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people．三、长短句交插长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的.长句和短句各有其优点和缺点.长句,因为使用的定语、状语较多,限制了概念的外延,增大了概念的内涵,所以比较精确、严密,但使用起来不够活泼简便.短句,由于字数少,直截了当,一般比较简洁、明快、有力,但不利于表达复杂的语义内容.在具体语言活动中,最好长短句交替使用.这既体现了节奏上的要求,也是意义上的需要.例如：
（1）We can imagine the beautiful surroundings．（2）There are many trees along the streets．（3）There is a clean river in the city．（4） There are many fishes in the river．（5）There are willow trees on the one side．（6）There are some pieces of grassland on the other side．（7）There are many flowers on them．文中七个句子都是简单句,句型结构单一,而且句子长短同一,都在七、八词左右,十分单调.下面是修改后的段落：
（1）Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener．（2）Green trees line the streets．（3）A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound．（4）On the one side stand rows of willow trees．（5）On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers．改写后的这段文字,有长句（1）、（3）、（5）,也有短句（2）和（4）,一长一短,抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了.不仅句子长短交插,而且句型结构变化也很大,使文章流畅自然,生动活泼.
四、利用倒装结构英语的基本句型是S＋V＋O,如果偶尔打破常规,改变某一成分的位置,不仅可以丰富句型,而且能强调、突出被倒装的部分,收到意想不到的表达效果.例如：
1）In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games．2）Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose．总之,英语的句式是多种多样的,只要从要表达的内容出发合理选用,文章的句式就会富于变化.同时,在学习写作的过程中,学生应不断练习构造各种各样句式,以提高语言表达能力.
D. 我想要知道英语的常用句型有哪些，还有各种各样的英语写作格式，Thangs！
满意回答 上面各位的回答都不错，我给你找的是专门针对考研用的，因为看你的年纪应该不是为了考四六级这么简单了吧。
写作是语言的重要环节，看看英语考试中对作文的重视就明白了。在考研中，写作意义极其重大，其性价比（即投入的时间和提高的幅度）非常高，在我看来，如果你的阅读水平还可以的话，写作将是你的突破口。
提高写作只有一个字——“恒”，绝对的熟能生巧。我在网上看过高手写的文章，简直可以用恐怖来形容，完全是阅读理解的水平，而作者的诀窍就是每天写每天练！只要不断的写不断的改，你的文章会让你自己吃惊。套用一句：写作恒久远，练习永流传。
然而备考的时间是很紧的，不可能每天保持大量的练习，好在其要求也不高，从现在开始，到考前完全可以达到要求，但千万不要间断！很多同学都有一个情况，越不写，越怕写；越怕写，越不写。万事开头难，所以开始的练习尤为重要，而练习应以词句为主+阅读好文章，我就有一本记录本，专门收集好的词句，效果很好。这里列其中一些较简单实用的，希望能对大家有所帮助（不过，建议同学们最好自己写，自己收集，印象会深很多，每天花10分钟过过，绝对值得。另外，我列的句子很有限，多半是骨架，大家要学会扩展，并且在记忆的时候多联想一下。举例来说，一篇你的文章，用心改一下，好好套用几个句式，改些档次较高的词和词组，可以提高不少哦）：
一． 总结句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二． 开首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I’m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三． 并列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what’s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四． 转折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***’s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(尽管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn’t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五． 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六． 强调句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It’s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七． 图表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短语：made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外，文章结尾也很重要，它的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：
1．首尾呼应，画龙点睛
在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的结尾：
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2．重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾：
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然结尾
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾：
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4．含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾：
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5．用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?
6．指明方向，激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“Let’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾：
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.
文章的结尾没有一定的模式，可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是，一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。
E. 英语改变句式
Miss Liang isn't is my English teacher
i am behind the door
I can't see a cat under the table
My pencil is in my backpack
are those his brother
no .it isn't
F. 英语作文改写
作文的改写其实就是句子的改写，意思不变，那么改的肯定是他的表达，一般从词语的替换回入手，尤其是一答些关联词，同意词组，例如文章中如果有lead
to
那么我们就可以改成give
rise
to
,result
in
等等表示导致意思的词语。有些我们就要改写句子的结构。例如有些时候我们可以改成形式宾语的形式，例如文章中有这么一句话English
is
so
hard
for
me.我们就可以改成I
find
it
hard
to
learn
English.当然我们不能为了改写而改写，改的时候要保证句子正确与漂亮，尽量避免相同的句式，也不要出现很多I
,I
,I什么的。你可以先从改写句子着手。希望对你有所帮助
G. 英语作文句式
句式就是句子的结构方式，也就是句子的式样或格式。不同的思想内容要用不同的句式来表达；而同一思想内容也可以用不同的句式来表达。句式不同，表达效果也就不同。
一、改变句子开头
许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词性，用名词和代词作为句子的开头，如 People，We，I，He，They，She等。但这种开头见多了，难免让人厌倦。试比较：
A．People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food．
B．There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food．
第一句改用非人称名词作为主语开头，第二句则用there ＋be句型开头。这样既改变了主语＋谓语＋宾语单调句型，又把想强调的意思突出出来。实际上，为了把文章写得生动活泼，除了用主语开头外，还可以用句子的其他成分开头。
1．用副词开头
Too often，students stray into the habit of cheating on tests．
2．用同位语开头
Air，water and oxygen，everything that is necessary for life．
3．用状语开头
Dark and empty，the house looked very different from the way I remembered it．
4．用表语开头
Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort．
5．用宾语开头
My advice you would not listen to；my helps you laughed at．Now you will have what you asked for．
6．以短语修饰语开头
1）以介词短语开头
To me the news was very interesting，but to my wife very boring．
2）以分词短语开头
Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades，Menchester took flight for the pacific islands．
3）以不定式短语开头
To pass the exam，you should work very hard．
二、巧用连接词
有的学生在作文中
使用过多简单句，成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄用so，
and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用连
接词，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如 who，which，that，because，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，as if等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。例如：
Natural resources are very limited．They will be exhausted in the near
future．It is not true．But it becomes a major concern around the
world．This is a widely accepted fact．
这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用连接词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。例如：
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the
world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near
future，though it is unlikely to be true．
再如：
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world，and in
spring time it often overflows its banks，and the lives of many people
are endangered．
此句用and把三个分句一贯到底，既乏味又可笑。如果使用了关系代词which，语义就会更连贯，语言也会更流畅：
The Mississippi River，which is one of the longest rivers in the
world，often overflows its banks in the spring time，endangering the lives
of many people．
三、长短句交插
长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句，因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，所
以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼简便。短句，由于字数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。在具体语言活动中，最
好长短句交替使用。这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。例如：
（1）We can imagine the beautiful surroundings．（2）There are many trees
along the streets．（3）There is a clean river in the city．（4） There are
many fishes in the river．（5）There are willow trees on the one
side．（6）There are some pieces of grassland on the other side．（7）There
are many flowers on them．
文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。下面是修改后的段落：
（1）Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities
greener．（2）Green trees line the streets．（3）A clean river winds through
the city，in which a lot of fishes abound．（4）On the one side stand rows
of willow trees．（5）On the other side lies a stretch of grassland
sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers．
改写后的这段文字，有长句（1）、（3）、（5），也有短句（2）和（4），一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。
四、利用倒装结构
英语的基本句型是S＋V＋O，如果偶尔打破常规，改变某一成分的位置，不仅可以丰富句型，而且能强调、突出被倒装的部分，收到意想不到的表达效果。例如：
1）In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games．
2）Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose．
总之，英语的句式是多种多样的，只要从要表达的内容出发合理选用，文章的句式就会富于变化。同时，在学习写作的过程中，学生应不断练习构造各种各样句式，以提高语言表达能力。
H. 急求英语大神帮我修改作文句型，老师说我句式太简单。在线等！今晚要交
Nowadays, it is more and more common to study abroad, which is not only simple on the surface but also has a lot of challenges. I believe that studying abroad has more disadvantages than advantages, which are listed below.
Firstly, the cost of studying abroad is higher than that at home. If the family's financial condition is not good enough, it's hard for them to afford the cost. Secondly, most people need to live alone after going abroad. As we know, there are dormitories in domestic universities, but none in foreign countries. Young people need to rent a house outside school alone. How lonely and insecure! Thirdly, they have to suffer spiritual loneliness. Different environments and cultures make people miss their hometown. A case in point is Chinatown. It's a sign of homesickness.
It goes without saying that studying abroad is expensive and it is very difficult to overcome the differences arisen from living alone and the cultural environment. In conclusion, studying abroad is full of challenges, but I still wish all international students can finish their studies smoothly.
有几点需要指出，第一段你用了difficulty和advantage做对比，不恰当，你面临的困难多于带给你的好处。你认为出国留学的弊大于利，第二段三条都在写弊，但是应该适当的描述出国留学的好处。第二段里你说外国大学没有宿舍，也比较片面。我在法国一年，有专门的大学城，就像留学生公寓一样。申请美国大学的时候，住宿也有选项，可以选择学校公寓或者租房。第三点，Chinatown跟留学的劣势没有任何联系。如果所在的城市有唐人街，那对于留学生而言是一件好事。最后一段，第一句是goes without saying，第二句是there is no doubt.两者意思一样，直接用and连接多好。最后一句你希望所有留学生顺利毕业，跟你反对出国留学相矛盾。所以，前面加点东西。
I. 英语写作改写句子
I am Xiao Hui. I come from Hegang, Hei Long Jiang Province, a small town in northeast China. I'm 28 years old, but still want to go to school because I did not go to college. It is never too late to learn, so it's neither too late to go to college. I'm trying to learn English recently. Up to now I can only speak a few words in English, but I am sure through continuous study I shall be able to speak it well. Soon I will leave for Korea to go to school. It's a good learning experience for me. I will appreciate this opportunity to study harder for good chance is few and far between.
J. 英语作文句式杂糅怎么办
句式杂糅就是两种句式糅合在一起，判断的关键是找句子的主干，可找到两套交叉的主干。当然从语意上分析，这种语病也可粗略地看作语意重复。
生态环境改善取得了显着的成绩的关键是与政府采取多种措施调动了农民退耕还林的积极性分不开的。
该句包含两个句子：一是“生态环境改善取得了显着的成绩的关键是政府采取多种措施调动了农民退耕还林的积极性”；二是“生态环境改善取得了显着的成绩与政府采取多种措施调动了农民退耕还林的积极性分不开的”。“关键是……”与“……是与……分不开的”两种句式杂糅在一起。
为什么火上舞蹈者的脚掌不会烧伤呢？原因之一是因为舞蹈者不停在跳跃。
后一句子包含两个句子：（这）是因为舞蹈者不停在跳跃；原因之一是舞蹈者不停在跳跃。“原因之一是……”和“（这）是因为……”两种句式杂糅在一起。
高速磁悬浮列车的悬浮、导向、驱动和制动都靠的是利用电磁力来实现的。
包括两个句子：高速磁悬浮列车的悬浮、导向、驱动和制动都靠的是电磁力；高速磁悬浮列车的悬浮、导向、驱动和制动都是利用电磁力来实现的。“……靠的是……”和“……是利用……来实现的”两种句式杂糅在一起。
常见的杂糅格式（括号内为正确形式）：
本着……为原则（本着……原则，以……为原则）
是为了……为目的的（是为了……，……为目的