英语写作句子扩张的几种方式

❶ 六种基本的句子类型（英语的）都是什么最好

三大句型。也可以看作六种基本句型。
1主系表
2（1）主谓 （即 主语 加不及物动词）
（2）谓版主 （即主权谓结构的特殊形式，there 加不及物动词加主语）
3 主谓宾 包括
（1）主谓单宾
（2）主谓双宾（即主语加间接宾语加直接宾语）
（3）主谓复合宾（即 主语加宾语加宾补）

❷ 英语作文要求用三种句型,是那三种句型

我们都知道学任何东西，基础都是最重要的。如果你们把这篇文章学会了，后面会越学越轻松，而且能帮助你一生的道路都轻松。如果你今天这篇文章没学会，将来你会很受罪的。你们累那么一段时间，跟我学好了，如果你是学生，你绝对是你们班的前几名，甚至对英语的概念比你们的老师还要清晰。
这是你们要学习的第一篇文章，这篇文章非常非常重要。本人始终告诉大家，英语只有三个句子（句型），无论你将来学英语学到什么程度，英语就只有这三个句子（句型），你们要把基础打得扎扎实实的。到以后你会发现，无论多么复杂的句子都是这三个句子（句型）变出来的。
看下面的句子。
●The man is a teacher. 名词 这个人是一个老师。 ●He is busy. 形容词 这个人很忙。
●She is in the classroom. 介词+名词
第一个句子（你们一定要注意，它虽然简单，但是你们不要站在我们中国人的角度去看，要用英国人的思维。）
这个人是一个老师。——The man is a teacher.在我们学英语的第一天，老师就告诉你：“man”是“人”，“is”是“是”，“teacher”是“老师”。这就坏啦！！为什么？问题就出在这个“是(is)”上。英文中只有三个句子。那么“is”它并不是中文的“是”。它（is）就是我们说的，英文中的第一面“旗子”。它跟中文的“是”毫无关系。为什么？
你再看第二个句子，中国人说“他很忙”,中国人不说“他是很忙”,而是说 “他很忙”。
英文是“He is busy”.“is”后面跟的是形容词。
第三句“她在教室里”怎么变成英文？——She is in the classroom. 可见，中文经常没有“是”，而英文非要这个“is”不可。那么它非常非常重要！！！它是英文中第一个句型的“标记”。就像我们的国家标记是五星红旗一样。认识这个标记非常重要。

❸ 英语写作(用三种句型,五个以上句子描述一种水果)

The fruit is the good thing!Is very beneficial to our health.Looks like the apple,everybody said that one day of apple doctor is far away from you.Looks like the banana,not only long lovable,eats the flavor is also wonderful!Looks like the watermelon,the burning hot summer eats a watermelon ratio to eat 3 icicles also to solve the hot weather.I like eating grapes,fragrant pear,watermelon,litchi chinensis,because their delicacy is delicious

❹ 求详解英语语法里改写句子中的几种句子的改写方法

虚拟语气（using subjunctive mood）、
He suggested us going out for a walk.
=He suggested that we should go out for a walk.

非限定形式（using a non-finite verbaform）
Tom is a teenage boy and he has run away from his home
=Tom,(who is)a teenage boy,has runaway from his home.
修饰性状语（combining the tow sentenses by using a Adjunct)
Jack sat under a tree.He was reading a book.
=Jack sat under a tree,reading a book.
连接性状语从句（combining the tow sentenses by using a Conjunct)
Tom and his companion are sailing down the river.Suddenly ,they see something ahead in the water.
=Tom and his companion are sailing down the river when they see something ahead in the water.
祝你开心如意！

❺ 英语中句子改写总共有多少种类型是哪几种呢

句子的种类 （一）按使用目的可分为陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。
1） 陈述句（Declarative Sentences）：说明一个事实或陈述一种看法。
Light travels faster than sound.光比声速度快。（说明事实）
The film is rather boring.这部电影很乏味。
（说明看法）

2） 疑问句（Interrogative Sentences）：提出问题。有以下四种：
a.一般疑问句（General Questions）：
Can you finish the work in time?
你能按时完成工作吗？
b.特殊疑问句（W Questions; H Questions）：
Where do you live?你住那儿？
How do you know that? 你怎么知道那件事？
c.选择疑问句（Alternative Questions）：
Do you want tea or coffee?
你是要茶还是要咖啡？
d.反意疑问句（Tag-Questions）：
He doesn't know her, does he?
他不认识她，对不对？

3） 祈使句（Imperative Sentences）：提出请求，建议或发出命令，例如：
Sit down, please.请坐。
Don't be nervous!别紧张！

4） 感叹句（Exclamatory Sentences）：表示说话人惊奇、喜悦、愤怒等情绪，例如：
What good news it is!多好的消息啊！

❻ 什么是高考英语写作内容的扩展方向

满意回答 上面各位的回答都不错，我给你找的是专门针对考研用的，因为看你的年纪应该不是为了考四六级这么简单了吧。

写作是语言的重要环节，看看英语考试中对作文的重视就明白了。在考研中，写作意义极其重大，其性价比（即投入的时间和提高的幅度）非常高，在我看来，如果你的阅读水平还可以的话，写作将是你的突破口。
提高写作只有一个字——“恒”，绝对的熟能生巧。我在网上看过高手写的文章，简直可以用恐怖来形容，完全是阅读理解的水平，而作者的诀窍就是每天写每天练！只要不断的写不断的改，你的文章会让你自己吃惊。套用一句：写作恒久远，练习永流传。

然而备考的时间是很紧的，不可能每天保持大量的练习，好在其要求也不高，从现在开始，到考前完全可以达到要求，但千万不要间断！很多同学都有一个情况，越不写，越怕写；越怕写，越不写。万事开头难，所以开始的练习尤为重要，而练习应以词句为主+阅读好文章，我就有一本记录本，专门收集好的词句，效果很好。这里列其中一些较简单实用的，希望能对大家有所帮助（不过，建议同学们最好自己写，自己收集，印象会深很多，每天花10分钟过过，绝对值得。另外，我列的句子很有限，多半是骨架，大家要学会扩展，并且在记忆的时候多联想一下。举例来说，一篇你的文章，用心改一下，好好套用几个句式，改些档次较高的词和词组，可以提高不少哦）：

一． 总结句型

1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***

2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***

3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.

4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.

5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.

6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.

7) There is no doubt that***

8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***

9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***

10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***

11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.

12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.

13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.

二． 开首句型

1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no

experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.

2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.

3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.

4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***

5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)

6) What A to B, that C to D

7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***

8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***

9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I’m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.

10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.

11) There are intimate relations between the two.

三． 并列句型

1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.

2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.

3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.

4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***

5) First***besides, in addition***what’s more***

6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***

四． 转折句型

1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***

2) Except for ***’s sake only.

3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.

4) First***last but not least***

5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.

6) ***, and vice versa indeed .

7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***

8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***

9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.

10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***

11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***

12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***

13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***

14) ***, but this was not always the case.

15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***

16) None the less(尽管如此)***

17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.

18) ***, sometimes it isn’t totally the case, however.

19) Do some A else but B.

五． 名理句型

1) It is usually the case that ***

2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***

3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson

: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.

4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***

5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***

6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***

六． 强调句型

1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***

2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.

3) The same thing is true with***

4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.

5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!

6) It’s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.

7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.

七． 图表句型

1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***

2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.

3) As show in the chart/by the graph***

4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.

5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.

6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?

7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.

8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***

9) 短语：made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that

另外，文章结尾也很重要，它的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：
1．首尾呼应，画龙点睛
在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的结尾：
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2．重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾：
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然结尾
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾：
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4．含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾：
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5．用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don’t you agree, boys and girls?
6．指明方向，激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“Let’s Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾：
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let’s go in for sports.
文章的结尾没有一定的模式，可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是，一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。赞同9| 评论

❼ 高中英语写作句子的5种类型是

❽ 英语写作中常见的几种句型

英语写作中常见的十二种句型
such+名词性词组+that…
so+形容词/副词+that…——如此……以致……
例如：(1)she is such a good teacher that we all love her.她是一个好老师，我们都爱她。
(2)it was such a hot day that they didn’t go out for a walk as usual.这么热的天气，他们没有像往常一样去散步。
注意点：
1.such+a+形容词+名词+that…，可以改写成：so+形容词+a+名词+that…，例句(1)可以改写成：she is so good a teacher that we all love her.
2.在such+形容词+名词复数或不可数名词+that…结构中，形容词如果是many/few或much/little时，用so不用such，即：so+many/few+可数名词复数+that…，so+much/little+不可数名词+that…
(1)there are so many people in the room that i can’t get in.房间里人太多，我进不去。
(2)the man has so much money that he can buy a car.那人很有钱，他能买一辆小汽车。
句型(二)there be…，either…or…，neither…nor…，not only…but also…
例如：(1)there is a pen and two pencils in his pencil-box.他的铅笔盒里有一支钢笔和两支铅笔。
(2)not only you but also i have been to the great wall.你和我都没有去过长城。
(3)either you or i am leaving for shanghai.要么你去上海，要么我去上海。
(4)neither you nor he is right.你和他都不对。
(5)both jack and tim are english.
jack和tim是英国人。
注意点：当这几个句型连接主语时，谓语动词的人称和数要考虑“就近原则”，对比both…and… 来记忆，both…and…连接主语时视为复数。
句型(三)enough+名词+to do…——有足够的……做某事
形容词/副词+enough+to do …——足够……做某事
例如：(1)there is enough room to hold these people to have a meeting.有足够的地方容下这些人开会。
(2)the boy is strong enough to carry the heavy box.这个男孩力气够大，能搬动这只箱子。
注意点：enough做副词修饰形容词或副词时，放在所修饰词的后面，句子可以用so…that…句型改写。例句(2)可以改写为：the boy is so strong that he can carry the heavy box.这个男孩力气很大，能搬动这只箱子。
句型(四)too+形容词/副词+to do…——太……以致不能……
例如：(1)i was too excited to say a word.我激动得一个字也说不出来。

❾ 英语写作方法

英语写作方法六大原则：
1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)
2. adverbial advanceed (状语提前原则)
3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)
4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)
5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)
6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)
高分作文的五大特性
1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整，层次分明）
2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确，用词精当）
3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰，行文连贯）
4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁，不重复）
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）

过渡词的使用
过渡词是一种关系指引词，一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外，代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”，在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用，学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑，启、承、转、合，过渡自然，融会贯通，连成一体。
1、根据意思和作用的不同，过渡词可以分为以下十六类：
（1）表并列关系的过渡词：
and, also， as well, as well as， or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。
（2）表递进关系的过渡词：
besides, in addition（加之，除……之外）, moreover(此外，而且), what’s more， what’s worse等。
（3）表转折对比的过渡词：
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。
（4）表原因的过渡词：
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, e to（由于）, for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。
（5）表结果的过渡词：
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that?, accordingly等。??
（6）表条件的过渡词：
if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。
（7）表时间的过渡词：
when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。
（8）表特定的顺序关系的过渡词：
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)（后来）, meanwhile（几乎同时）, thereafter（在那以后）, last, finally, eventually（终于）等。
（9）表换一种方式表达的过渡词：
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。
（10）表进行举例说明的过渡词：
for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。
（11）表陈述事实的过渡词：
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。
（12）表强调的过渡词：
certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。
（13）表比较、对比的过渡词：
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。
（14）表目的的过渡词：
for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。
（15）表总结的过渡词：
in a word(总之，简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
（16）表增补的过渡词：in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what’s more, similarly, next, finally 等。
2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成，在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接，“转”是转折，“合”是综合或总结。
（1） “启”。
用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头：
过渡词： first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,
过渡句：It is often said that…,
As the proverb says…,
It goes without saying that…,
It is clear/obvious that…,
Many people often ask …
（2） “承”。
表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中：
过渡词： second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what
is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt，
过渡句：It is true that…,
Everybody knows that…,
It can be easily proved that…,
No one can deny that…
The reason why …is that …,
There is no doubt that…,
To take…for an example (instance) …,
We know that…,
What is more serious is that…
（3）“转”。
用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中：
过渡词：but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,
过渡句：I do not believe that…,
Perhaps you’ll ask why…
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,
Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found,
That’s why i feel that…
（4） “合”。
用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中：
过渡词： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking，to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus，after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up
过渡句：From this point of view …
On account of this we can find that …
The result is dependent on …
Thus, this is the reason why we must…

长短句结合
（1）句子既要生动，又要简明扼要。
（2）在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、复杂句和复合句并用，还可以使用简化句等，一些较复杂的结构如独立结构，分词结构等也可以使用。
（3）可以使用一些特殊句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力，以增加文章“亮点”。强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。(这是我上初中时英语老师给我的，帮助了我，希望也能帮助你。。)

❿ 英语写作要注意的几种情况：常见的10个句子错误

Incomplete Sentence - Sentence Fragment
句子不完整——残缺句
One common mistake many students make is the use of incomplete sentences. Each sentence in English must contain at least a subject and a verb, and should be an independent clause. Examples of incomplete sentences without a subject or a verb might include an instruction or a prepositional phrase.
许多学生都会犯一个常见的错误，就是写出来的句子不完整。英语中，每个句子都必须至少有一个主语，一个动词，并单独成句。没有主语或动词的残缺句子可能就只有表示指令的句子或者介词短语了。
For example:
例如：
Through the door.
穿过大门。
In the other room.
在另一个房间。
Over there.
在那里。
These are phrases we may use in spoken English, but that should not be used in written English as they are incomplete.
在英语口语中，你可能会用到这些短语，但是因为它们毕竟不是完整的英语句子，所以在书面语言中，我们一般不会使用。
Sentence fragments caused by dependent clauses used without an independent clause are more common. Remember that subordinating conjunctions introce dependent clauses. In other words, if you use a subordinating clause beginning with a word such as 'because, though, if, etc.' there must be an independent clause to complete the thought. This mistake is often made on tests asking a question with 'Why'.
由于缺乏独立分句的从属子句导致的句子残缺很常见。记住，从属连词引出了从属子句。也就是说，如果你用一些词语来引出从句，例如because，though，if等等，就必须要有一个独立分句来使句子完整。我们在考试中，使用why来提出问题时，经常会犯这样的错误。
For example, the sentences:
例如，下面这个句子：
Because Tom is the boss.
因为汤姆就是老板。
Since he left work early without permission.
自从他不经允许就早退。
We might answer the question: "Why did he lose his job?" However, these are sentence fragments. The correct answer would be:
我们可能会问：“他为什么丢掉工作?”但是，这些句子都是不完整的。正确用法应该是：
He lost his job because Tom is the boss.
因为汤姆就是老板，所以他丢掉了工作。
He lost his job since he left work early without permission.
他因为不经允许就早退而丢掉了工作。
Other examples of incomplete sentences introced by subordinating clauses include:
其他关于从属子句的残缺句还包括下面内容：
Even though he needs help.
虽然他需要帮助
If they study enough.
如果他们好好学习
As they had invested in the company.
因为他们投资了这家公司
Run-on Sentences
句子不连贯
Run-on sentences are sentences that:
不连贯句子指的是：
1) are not connected by appropriate linking language such as conjunctions
缺乏合适的连接词，例如连词。
2) use too many clauses rather than using periods and linking language such as conjunctive adverbs
使用过多的从句，而非句号和连接语，例如连接副词
The first type leaves out a word - usually a conjunction - that is required to connect a dependent and independent clause. For example:
第一种是漏掉了一个词——通常是连接词——用于连接非独立子句和独立子句。
The students did well on the test they didn't study very much.
学生们考得很好他们没有下多少功夫。
Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car dealerships.
安娜想买辆新车她整个周末都在约见代理商。
The first sentence should use either a conjunction 'but', or 'yet' or a subordinating conjunction 'although, even though, or though' to connect the sentence. In the second sentence, the conjunction 'so' or the subordinating conjunction 'since, as, or because' would connect the two clauses.
第一句话要么应该加上一个连词but，要么加上yet，或者一个从属连词although, even though或though来连接前后两句。
The students did well, yet they didn't study very much.
学生们考得很好，但他们并没有下多少功夫。
Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a new car.
因为想买辆新车，安娜整个周末都在约见代理商。
Another common run on sentence occurs when using too many clauses. This often occurs using the word 'and'.
另一种句子不连贯发生在使用太多从句的时候。常常是由于and一词导致。
We went to the store and bought some fruit, and we went to the mall to get some clothes, and we had lunch at McDonald's, and we visited some friends.
我们去商店买了一些水果，去购物商城买了一些衣服，在麦当劳吃的午饭，又见了一些朋友。
The continuous chain of clauses using 'and' should be avoided. In general, do not write sentences that contain more than three clauses to ensure that your sentences do not become run-on sentences.
我们应该避免使用and来连接一大串的从句。一般来说，从句不要超过三个，以确保句子的连贯性。
Duplicate Subjects
两个主语
Sometimes students use a pronoun as a plicate subject.
有时候，学生们会将代词作为第二个主语。
Remember that each clause takes only one sentence. If you have mentioned the subject of a sentence by name, there is no need to repeat with a pronoun.
记住，每个从句只需要一句话。如果之前你已经提到主语的名字，就不需要再用代词重复了。
Example 1:
例一：
Tom lives in Los Angeles.
汤姆住在洛杉矶。
NOT
而不是
Tom, he lives in Lost Angeles.
汤姆，他住在旧金山。
Example 2:
例二：
The students come from Vietnam.
学生们来自越南。
NOT
而不是
The students they come from Vietnam.
学生们他们来自越南。
Incorrect Tense
时态错误
Tense usage is a common mistake in student writing. Make sure that the tense used corresponds to the situation. In other words, if you are speaking about something that happened in the past do not use include a tense that refers to the present. For example:
时态错误在学生写作中很常见。你要确保时态与事情发生的情况一致。也就是说，如果你要表达的是发生在过去的事，就不要使用现在时态。例如：
They fly to visit their parents in Toronto last week.
上周他们坐飞机去看望父母。
Alex bought a new car and drives it to her home in Los Angeles.
亚历克斯买了一辆新车，并把它开进了洛杉矶的家。
Incorrect Verb Form
动词形式错误
Another common mistake is the use of an incorrect verb form when combining with another verb. Certain verbs in English take the infinitive and others take the gerund (ing form).
另一个常见的错误就是在与其他动词连用时，动词形式的错误。英语中的动词既有不定式形式，又有动名词形式。
It's important to learn these verb combinations. Also, when using the verb as a noun, use the gerund form of the verb.
学习这些动词的连用很重要。当动词作为名词使用时，就要使用动名词形式。
He hopes finding a new job. / Correct -> He hopes to find a new job.
他想找一个新工作。
Peter avoided to invest in the project. / Correct -> Peter avoided investing in the project.
皮特没有在这个项目上投资。
Parallel Verb Form
动词复数形式
A related issue is the use of parallel verb forms when using a list of verbs. If you are writing in the present continuous tense, use the 'ing' form in your list. If you are using the present perfect, use the past participle, etc.
在使用多个动词时，有一个问题就是动词复数形式的使用。如果你是在用现在进行时进行写作，就应该使用动词ing形式。如果你使用的是现在完成时，就应该使用过去分词形式。
She enjoys watching TV, play tennis, and cook. / Correct -> She enjoys watching TV, playing tennis, and cooking.
她喜欢看电视，打网球和烹饪。
I've lived in Italy, working in Germany and study in New York. / Correct -> I've lived in Italy, worked in Germany, and studied in New York.
我住在意大利，在德国工作，在纽约读书。
Use of Time Clauses
时间从句的使用
Time clauses are introced by the time words 'when', 'before', 'after' and so on. When speaking about the present or future use the present simple tense in time clauses. If using a past tense, we usually use the past simple in a time clause.
时间从句由时间词语引导，例如when，before，after等等。当我们表达现在或将来的事时，可以使用一般现在时的时间从句。如果使用过去时态，通常会使用过去时的时间从句。
We'll visit you when we will come next week. / Correct -> We'll visit you when we come next week.
下周我们会来看你。
She cooked dinner after he was arriving. / Correct -> She cooked dinner after he arrived.
他到了之后，她才开始煮饭。
Subject - Verb Agreement
主谓一致
Another common mistake is to use incorrect subject - verb agreement. The most common of these mistakes is the missing 's' in the present simple tense. However, there are other types of mistakes. Always look for these mistakes in the helping verb.
另一个常见的错误就是主谓不一致。最常见的就是一般现在时中漏掉了-s。但是，还有其他类型的错误。这些错误常发生在助动词的使用上。
Tom play guitar in a band. / Correct -> Tom plays guitar in a band.
汤姆在乐队里是弹吉他的。
They was sleeping when she telephoned. / Correct -> They were sleeping when she telephoned.
他打电话过来时，他们都睡着了。
Pronoun Agreement
代词一致
Pronoun agreement mistakes take place when using a pronoun to replace a proper noun. Often this mistake is a mistake of use of a singular form rather than a plural or vice versa. However, pronoun agreement mistakes can occur in object or possessive pronouns, as well as in subject pronouns.
代词不一致发生在用代词来替代专有名词的情况下。通常是使用了单复数形式的错误使用。但是，代词不一致也会发生在宾语或物主代词，和主格代名词上。
Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job. / Correct -> Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job.
汤姆在汉堡一家公司工作。他热爱这份工作。
Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. He thought they were very difficult.Correct -> Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. They thought it was very difficult.
(正确)安德里亚和皮特在学校里学习了俄语。他们觉得俄语很难。
Missing Commas After Linking Language
连接语言后漏掉了逗号
When using an introctory phrase as linking language such as a conjunctive adverb or sequencing word, use a comma after the phrase to continue the sentence.
当我们使用介绍性短语，例如连接副词或表示顺序的词语，通常会在短语后面打上逗号来连接下文。