1. 如何保证雅思写作的文章连贯性
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。每个人的情况不同,也可以登录文都国际教育官网进行一对一的咨询。
1、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was
obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew
the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then,
when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours ----- it
must have been close to noon ---- the heat nearly hid us in; the
radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to
cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was four o'clock
and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the
tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in
the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very
nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.
By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we
knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky
day.
本段从"rose"(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐("not to miss breakfast", "closing at nine o'clock"),然后是"close to noon",一直写到这一天结束("By nine--")。
B.按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)
例如:From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got
closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all
right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were
also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a
pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten
feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of
glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was
made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had
four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a
steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light
changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and
we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处("from a distance")写起,然后"get closer",再到(" ten feet
away"),最后是"inside the pagoda"……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C.按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a.按重要性顺序排列(arrangement insgroupsof importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much
skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine,
your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as
soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends
on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word.
And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the
organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be
that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In
the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the
large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is
perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从"not need much skill"或"of little importance"到"more important",最后是"most important"。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been
careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any
number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the
reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what
it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the
reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has
switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader
loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps
sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- the writer, in whose
head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing
link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not
taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and
"sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big
one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个"perhaps"加以例证。
c.由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with
the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in
breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not
possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her
independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff
unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed,
perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand,
loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till
night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who
saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually
offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable,
on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds,
drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is
imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。
2、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First,
though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his
efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math.
Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient
in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects
besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of
high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had
to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on
schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward
realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or
phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in
particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and,
consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he,
those, his, he, these,
his.本段1有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流畅(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在规定时间内写足所要求的字数也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000
years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented
only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word
choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent
often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are
ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in
the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture,
loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture,
loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and
writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的"it"之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was
developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent
development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is
usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is
often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell
where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard
diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies
on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing
lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the
differences.
有损连贯性的几种情况:
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:
1)不必要的改变时态,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where
he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes
refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to
die down, but they come after him anyway.
2)不必要的改变单复数,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy.
But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run
out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the
deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3)不必要的改变人称,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's
activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in
the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members
will do things together and know one another. You need to give up
isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of
obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。
2. 帮忙修改下英语作文 特别是语法,是连贯性
One day ,a little boy and his mother were sitting on the bus.An old woman got on the bus.
There were no seat left for the old woman .A young man smoking on the chair pretended to haven't seen the old woman .''hi ,sit here!'',by saying this , All passengers took a look at the litlle boy ,when he pulling the old woman to his seat .
All passengers smiled at the little boy, and the little boy felt happy
3. 如何写好英语作文啊
英语写作能力也是灵活运用知识的一种综合能力。
1.中国有句古话,叫"熟读唐诗三百首,不会吟诗也会作"。同样,要使自己具有较强的写作能力,首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯,相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯,不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法,同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里,自己写起文段来,就可以做到脱口而出,或是模仿、套用,甚至发挥。
2.可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始,到写单句,然后到写几句话,最后到写流利的文段。
3.尝试多种形式的写作,如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
4.在练习时,要充分了解所提供的情景素材,注意使用常见的连接词来表示顺序和逻辑关系,使句意表达
连贯、语法正确、符合逻辑。还要注意字母的大小写和标点符号。
怎样写好英语作文
1.认真审题立意,定文章之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题,对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题,必须具备4个条件:准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。
2.草拟提纲,打造文章之骨架审好题,立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句,还要从提示句的关键词出发,围绕关键词开拓思路,发挥联想,记录下联想到的东西,可以是句子或单词词组,可以是英语或汉语。
3.写出段落主题句,理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要,是作者思维的起点,切题的准绳,阐述的对象。看到段落主题句,读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头,可使文章结构更清晰,有说服力。
4.参照提纲,紧扣主题句,完成各段落,充文章之血肉
有了段落主题句后,还需要顺着段落主题句的方向,参照提纲中的思路,从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣,为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法,和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
5.进行这一步骤还需注意三方面问题: 1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不偏题,不跑题。 2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。 3)用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯,就需要在句与句之间,段与段之间架起一座座桥梁,而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。
增加文采小窍门:
如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思,第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了,用词是否贴切,文法是否正确,句式是否多变,文采是否有生气,关系到写作者的语言功底和水平,但也有些窍门,以下这几点可以供你参考。
1.在整篇文章中,避免只是用一两个句式,要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。
2.使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
3.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词短语等。
4.学会使用过渡词。如: 1)递进:furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,thenetc. 2)转折:however,but,nevertheless,afteralletc. 3)总结:finally,atlast,inbrief,toconclude 4)强调:really,indeed,certainly,surely,abovealletc. 5)对比:inthesameway,justas,ontheotherhand,etc.
5.避免重复使用同一单词或词组。
6.注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思,以增加文采。
把好检查最后一关
1.是否切题分三点看:一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求;二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致;三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题,应该尽可能弥补,删除那些多余的或不切题的地方,但切忌动“大手术”。
2.是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅,检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅,该用连词的地方用了没有,所用的连词是否合适。
3.是否有语法错误主谓是否一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确,词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例,根据此标题,文章肯定用第一人称“I”写,一般性的描述用现在时,举过去的事例用过去时。
4.是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误,注意卷面整洁要提高写作水平,最根本是要大量实践,必须多读多写,注意博览和精读相结合,甚至可以适当背诵一些名句名篇。另外,还可选些范文,悉心领悟,多加模仿,以逐步达到运用自如。
4. 英语作文写作的技巧谁能告诉我啊
1 简单句型一定得全对
2 背几个高级句型,像什么定语从句,独立主格结构,争取每次写作都用上
3 开头和结尾一定要精简
就基本有高分了
5. 英语作文怎么写(比如语法的基本连接之类的)
很多同学想寻求一个在短时间内提高英语写作水平的方法,但据专家分析很难实现。英语学习是一个长期积累的过程,短时间内只能会舍本逐末、杯水车薪。但是我们可以通过掌握考试规律来调整临考状态、提高应考能力。
首先要休息好。很多同学都会在临考前进入临考状态,经常的表现就是夜不能寐。通宵达旦的熬夜,其实这对于像四六级考试这样的考试而言是百害而无一益的。因为四六级考试对于每个学生来说,不仅是一次英语水平的综合测试,也是一种意志力、甚至是体力的考验。没有良好的休息,考生很难笑到最后。所以,保证充足的睡眠是必要的。
然后是营养。参加四级考试的同学,早餐要定时定量,不可或缺。对于那些体质虚弱的同学可以服用一些营养品,不过,安眠药等有副作用的药物要慎用,否则过有不及。
心理因素也很重要。随着四六级考试的改革的深入,会有更多、更新的题目,包括作文题目的出现,这就要求我们处惊不变。即使出现未料到的题型,考生也要及时调整好心态、从容不迫地应答。事实和经验表明:题目要求越高,难度越大,考生发挥的余地也越大。
要熟悉老师的评分习惯,考生可以正常甚至超常发挥自身水平。评分重点在于文章的结构和语言水平。除此以外,有“两个基本点”即闪光点和语法点。比较好的范文中,我们可以看到像提问法、谚语总结法、从句、并列句、理由段公式、理由词汇、路线句型、插入语、名词化以及被动语态等闪光点,而在一篇低分例文中,基本的语言错误则多的数不胜数。
审题。在落笔前花费三分钟时间进行思考,可以利于理清行文思路,避免差之毫厘、失之千里。尤其在应对图表累作文,要看清图表,把握好各个数据的变化和相互关系。
卷面。作为作文这种主观题来讲,考生与阅卷老师是彼此互动、相互影响的一个考生可以做的,首先是通过卷面给阅卷老师下意识地传达这个信息。用笔的颜色(深蓝色使人心情放松愉快)、粗细(粗线条给人以安全感),整齐划一的格式(段首或一律顶格或一律空两格),明了的段落感(每段空一行),清晰的字数感(一行以十字位宜),工整的字迹都会给任何阅读者留下深刻的正面印象,从而使考生先发制人、取得先机。
表达。言之无文,行而不远。语言作为评分原则中的基本要素之一,在四六级作文评分的整个过程中具有决定性作用。有评分老师甚至断言: “It is not what you say, it is the way that you say it.”(重要的并不在于考生写了些什么,而在于考生是怎么表达的。)虽然这种说法本身似乎有失偏颇,可是参加过国际标准化英语考试的同学应该也听说过那么一句话,叫做: “Give the monkey exactly what he wants.”(给阅卷老师最想要的。),不是吗?譬如同样是描述数据,一些同学拘泥于图表本身,动辄按部就班地引用图表上现成的数字和年代,其实这都是图表作文的忌讳。聪明的同学引而不用,他们常喜欢用倍数、分数、小数、百分比、或者一些动词(double / triple / quadruple)来表现极端数据,动态数据以及他们的相异之处。
检查。行百里者半九十。一篇成功的作文少不了反复推敲、一再修改。然而,由于考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制,考生绝对需要慎重对待作文的检查和修改。这里,我不得不提考生检查作文时的三大“通病”,即,数字数、孤芳自赏、和做结构与内容上的修改。我们必须明确:考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的即可:1. 拼写正确,看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错别字;2. 搭配正确;和3. 语法正确,特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三"一致"。我们在实践中要学会善于发现、总结和运用规律,这样才可以复习中事半功倍
6. 英语作文的写作方法及技巧
您好!
一般应做到
内容切题:不能走题、偏题
表达清楚:要让别人知道你想说什么,不要用你认为能看懂的汉语式英文句子
意义连贯:中英文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事实,所以写英语作文不要过多的进行心理、环境描写,120个字的作文结构要缜密,理由和例子要简洁有力,说明问题,不要东拉西扯。
句法多变:为避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:强调句、倒装句、否定句等等
语言正确:不要犯低级的语法错误
英语作文其实不难,如果你的英语底子不好,不太擅长使用比较复杂的语法,词汇量也比较有限的话。建议用最简单的句子表达意思,句式越简单越好,能表达意思就好,一些生辟的单词如果不会不需要直译,可以用些词组。能表达意思就好,如果不会用用多了反而容易出错,平时作业时可以慢慢积累,可以试着用些当作练习,考试时就不必了,原因就不多说了。我觉得要写好英语作文还是平时多积累些,加上一些练习,比如平时可以多看些英语美文,如果有时间也可以刻意记些,时间长了语感自然就出来了,考试时有可能不知不觉的就闪出了平时的记忆。
多用连接词!
递进型:besides
;what's
more
;let
alone解释型:that
is
(to
say);in
other
words转折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列举型:for
example;such
as
;on
the
other
hand因果型:since;therefore;as
a
result并列型:and;or;also;as
well
as总结型:in
a
word
;in
short;
on
the
whole;in
conclusion见解型:in
my
opinion;speaking;as
far
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concerned
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7. 英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文高分秘诀 1. 动笔之前,认真审题 《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲 书面表达评分原则有四条: (1)内容要点; (2)运用词汇和结构的数量; (3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性; (4)上下文的连贯性。 由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。 3. 语言通顺,表达准确 (1) 避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。 (2) 多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3).注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1) 语态、时态要准确无误。 2) 主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4) 注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如: 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 …… … C. 顿号 、 无 (4) 描写人物时,要生动具体,例如: 1) 外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2) 服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3) 内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4) 感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5) 动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5) 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法: 1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or … 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however … 3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside … 5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as … 6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though … 7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again … 8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result… 9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually … 10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important … 11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, … 12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as … 13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking … 4. 不会表达,另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (1) 迂回而行 当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。 (2) 小词大用 汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 (3) 借花献佛 有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。 5. 锦上添花,量力而行 如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点: (1) 句型多样化,不要I(We)……到底,使人觉得乏味。 (2) 适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。 (3) 进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。 (4) 适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。 (5) 偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。 (6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。 (7) 上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。 6. 书写工整,卷面整洁 字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。 7. 写完之后,勿忘检查 中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手: (1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。 【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。 总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。