A. 怎样赏析诗歌/英语写作入门/罗扎基斯
还有就是 我目前上的ABC天丅英语中心的外教和我们说过,事实上想将英语学好是轻松的。坚持具有符合的学习空间以及进修口语对象,最关键就是外教水平 最好欧美母语 口语纯正很重要,保持逐日口语学习 1 on 1针对性教学就有很.好.的学习成效!上完课仍要重复温习课后录音反馈,好巩固知识点 不过实在无对象可练习的状况下 可以去听力室或沪江得到课外学习资料阅读,多说多练迅速的口语就加强起来 学习效果是必定迅速明显的;There is another sky by Emily DickinsonThere is another sky,Ever serene and fair,And there is another sunsne,Though it be darkness there;Never mind faded forests, Austin,Never mind silent fields -Here is a little forest,Whose leaf is ever green;Here is a brighter garden,Where not a frost has been;In its unfading flowersI hear the bright bee hum:Prithee, my brother,Into my garden come! Ts poem is meaningful yet simplistic and easy to understand. Literally, Emily Dickinson wrote about a peaceful garden, where there were always warm sunsne, beautiful flowers and evergreen trees; a garden full of bliss. She offered Austin, her elder brother to come into her garden to enjoy the happiness together in the end of the poem.However, in my opinion, Emily Dickinson did not merely write about a beautiful garden in ts poem. The peaceful garden here represents a beautiful life that all people are yearning for, totally different from their life with sadness and hopelessness. The poem hence portrays Emily's faith and optimism in the beauty of life.Writing for her brother, Austin, an attorney, Emily might want to show m that although there is always misery and unhappiness in the world, there is beauty as well. Through her words, Emily wanted to turn her brother away from the hectic life he was leading, to escape into a surreal forest of purity. She offered m insight by sharing her optimism, hoping that he would find hope and peace in the future, even in the rough times of s life.The garden in ts poem is the symbol of happiness. As Emily Dickinson was a religious and spiritual poet, she might be referring to the Garden of Eden, the garden of bliss. And in the Garden of Eden, unlike in our world, everytng is supposed to be perfect. She, as a believer, knew that very well.这个长一点:Walking the Skyby Shari AndrewsOberon Press, 00Reviewed by Joanna M. WestonMemory and links with the past are Andrews’ main concerns. She reflects on the past through the lens of the present and uses the past to illuminate the present. She has a keen appreciation of the minutae of daily life and its relevance to the human psyche. Andrews’ prose poems in ‘The Hour’ tell a straightforward story of an old man’s death and funeral woven round s daughter’s memories of her family and insights. The language is clear, adding to the working life depicted in the poems. Upstairs, her father lay slack-jawed and dreaming. The mid-afternoon light fell across the bed. The suilts moved gently up and down on s chest. s hair lay in tn wte strands against s scalp. s skin was pale as the porcelain teacups hanging from their hooks. (A field she buried her face in, p.)The dying man is clearly drawn but the last image brings the reader back to the kitchen where the daughter stands. There is a sense of the man having been in the kitchen, having used the porcelain cups, and of having withdrawn from them. Later in the sesuence, Andrews depicts the daughter:As she dries the cups, she admires their gilded edges, the part they will play later in the day, her lips sipping on bands of light to hold back the delicate verge of tears. (Morning has spread itself p.)The daughter’s anticipation of the funeral, mixed with grief, is poignantly shown in the simple act of drying the cups. The more complex free verse poems occasionally reveal difficulties with grammar and particularly with commas, wch Andrews uses eccentrically and occasionally in ways wch cause confusion. Short of getting into a discussion of Lynne Truss’ ‘Eats, Shoots Leaves’, the meaning of a phrase can be greatly clarified by the use of the humble comma, as ‘Her skirt, petals close around her newborn legs.’ (p.1) Do the petals close or is the skirt being likened to petals? Most likely the latter, but a comma would clarify the line. Or ‘My arms and legs, lullabies slice the water’ (p.11). It must be presumed that the lullabies arenot knives to cut water, but rather the arms and legs resemble lullabies. Again, a comma would eliminate the problem. There are, unfortunately, several other poems where a missing comma muddies the poetry. Wle Andrews’ imagery can be strong, as ‘The sky with the sun blazing in it was like s lungs filled with light.’ (p.0) even without commas there are times when the grammar is confused and meaning lost.I stride the spinefrom river bank to river bank, a stoneengraving the walls of a cave. (The old train bridge p.1)Either the stone or the poet appears to be carving the cave-walls, but the reference is unclear.If only the rhythm of ts seacould calm the distant shores,limbs on the same bodythat refuse to reconcile. (Limbs on the same body, p.)The limbs and shores appear to be one and the same, yet ‘limbs’ appears to refer to ‘ts sea’. A period after ‘shores’ would help, followed by a re-writing of the last two lines. Andrews’ prose poems have real merit, a depth of insight and reflection that illuminates memory and the human condition.
B. 谁能教我怎么写HAIKU诗(英文)/Diamante poem
源于日本的俳句
俳句
日本古典短诗,由17字音组成。原称俳谐(也写为诽谐)。俳谐一语来源于中国,大致与滑稽同义。它在日本,最初出现于《古今和歌集》(收有“俳谐歌”58首),至江户时代(1600~1867)则有从“俳谐连歌”产生的俳句、连句、俳文等。
俳谐连歌同中国近体诗联句相仿。它的第1句为5、7、5句式的17音,称为发句(起句),胁句(配句)为7、7句式,第3、第4句以后为前两种句式轮流反复,最后一句以7、7句式结束,称为结句。俳句,即取其发句(起句),加上“季题”(表现写作俳句季节的词语)和“切字”(一定的断句助词或助动词),使之成为独立的17字音的短诗。日本著名俳句家,室町时代(1392~1573) 后期有宗鉴、荒木田守武,二人是俳谐连歌作者;江户时代有松永贞德,他提倡俳谐的娱乐性和教养性,号称“贞门”,可谓倾向于古典的一派。当时俳谐尚处于进入俳谐连歌的阶段。另一方面又有西山宗因,主张俳谐的滑稽性,强调创作上的自由奔放,称为“谈林”派。具有这一派特色的还有著名俳句家井原西鹤。一般被称为俳圣的松尾芭蕉,把松永贞德的古典式技巧和西山宗因的自由奔放的散文风格熔铸一炉,并加以发展,摒弃滑稽、娱乐等文字游戏成分,使俳谐成为具有艺术价值的庶民生活诗。17世纪日本俳谐曾一度中落,至18世纪下半叶,与谢芜村号召“回到芭蕉去”,再度呈现繁荣景象。江户时代胁句(配句)以下各句逐渐失去生色,但小林一茶在发句(起句)的创作上表现了突出成就。正冈子规作为明治时代(1868~1912)的俳谐复兴者,明确提出连句(即俳谐连歌)非属于文学的主张,提倡以连句的发句(起句)为“俳句”文学,依然保存了发句的格律,使它发展成为日本民族最短的诗歌。此后,俳谐连歌逐步衰落,现代虽有少数人加以提倡,依然未见复兴。后来曾有人主张废除“季题”(称为“无季俳句”),否定定型(称为“自由律俳句”),但未成为主导力量。
俳句较多地采取象征和比喻手法,崇尚简洁、含蓄、雅淡,比和歌更为精练。由于诗短,容易背诵和随时随地吟咏,日本从事业余创作的人很多。现代俳句也很发达。
haikui诗的规则是第一行5个音节,第2行7个音节,第3行5个音节(音节:好像a/pple有两个音节,beau/ti/ful/有三个),如此类推。
Diamante poem 就是ine 1:
one word(一个字)
(subject/noun that is contrasting to line 7)
Line 2:(两个字)
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 1
Line 3:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 1
Line 4:
four words (nouns)
first 2 words relate to line 1
last 2 words relate to line 7
Line 5:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 7
Line 6:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 7
Line 7:
one word
( subject/noun that is contrasting to line 1)
C. 英语诗歌的书写形式
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D. 英语诗歌的书写形式,是怎么样的
英文诗歌抄由于时代的不同所以诗袭歌体裁都有所不同,就像中国的古诗词在各个时代流行的都不一样,长短不一,形式也不一样。英文诗歌也一样,就拿十四行诗来说,同样是十四行诗,莎士比亚的押韵形式是ABAB CDCD EFEF GG,可是也有诗人押ABAB BCBC CDCD EE。你可以买一本关于研究英文诗歌的书籍看一下
E. 英文诗歌写作技巧
注意音标的押韵,字词的准确~~~
F. 英语诗创作与翻译
三年前来,我遇见了你,源给了你一个承诺;
three year ago, i run into you, and left you a promise
三年后,你会忘记我吗?会忘记那个承诺吗?
three years past, will you still keep me on your mind, also that promise?
三年后,世界将会变成什么样子......
three years later, what is the world going to be?
三年,看似遥远,却又近在咫尺......
three years never been far away, they're beside you and me ..
给点背景资料,你们要离别了,以后再不见了;还是有转机什么的...
G. 英语诗歌的写作格式是怎么样的
去中国教育网问一下好了
H. 英语诗歌有何特点有没有写英语是个的技巧
写作技巧是写作理论和写作教学中的重要组成部分。写作实践中,无论选材立意,布局运笔,语言表达,都有“技巧”可循。技巧,是写作经验带规律性的总结,也是作者写作素材的集中表现,它标志着一个人的写作能力和写作水平。精通写作必须依赖写作技巧的通晓。
一 措词。
词汇是语言的建筑材料,我们写文章总离不开措辞,文章写的好不好都于用词有密切关系。可以说,选词是写好文章的基础。要想做到用词正确,必须注意下面几个问题。
1 措辞具体明确。词语的选择是谴词造句的基础。在写作中,我们应避免一种通病,那就是该用具体词的地方却误用了抽象词。“具体”和“抽象”是相对而言的。一个单词在这一语境中是具体的,而在另一语境中也许就是抽象的。在写作中我们应多用具体明确的表达,少用抽象含糊不清的词语。使用抽象,概括的词语最省事,但也最容易使思想变得不清。在写作中词的意义越具体,越能给读者鲜明的印象。具体生动的表达源于对事物的观察,不过光是观察还不够,还需要掌握足够的词汇量。这样词汇量增大了,才能在写作中左右逢源,随时能用上所需要的词。
2 用词适当得体。词汇虽有抽象与具体,正式与非正式,高雅与通俗,褒扬与贬抑等区别,但孤立地看,一个词语本身并无好坏之分,关键在于使用适当得体。词汇用得是否适当取决于该词是否与作者所写的内容,对象,目的等吻合。例如我们不宜说Our teacher is fat.(应用strong,plumpy,etc)。从这个例子中我们可以看出,选词必须得当,必须适合文章的题材和风格。严格的题材,正式的文体用词要相应地严肃庄重些,而非正式的文体要亲切自然些。
3 措辞简洁精练。为避免句子过长,乏味,措词必须简洁精练,文句必须直接了当,力求意赅文简,辞约事丰。用词简练不仅能接省篇幅,更重要的是为了准确清晰的表达意思。废话不仅使文章过长,而且多余的词语会掩盖思想内容,使文章变得朦胧含糊,令人难以捉摸理解。因此,我们要尽量选用简洁精练,读者容易理解的词语,避免用浮夸的或者所谓的高级词语。一般来说,在写作中,尤其是普通的叙述文或短问,更应该选择简洁,朴实,准确的大从化词语,避免使用复杂,故弄玄虚的词语,并且尽可能挑选积极的动词。
4 巧用转折词。从语言内部来说,语句或篇章都是一些意义相关的句子通过一定的承接手段合乎逻辑地组织起来的语义整体。如果一组意义相关的句子不通过一定的转折词语合乎逻辑的联系起来,这组句子就难以构成篇章。有了适当的转折词语能帮助读者理解文章的思路。
5 巧用总括语。有些学生在写作时不会用总括语来代替写不完的细目词或者列举不完的例子,结果写出来的文章又长又散。
二 句子的写作
1 句式选择的原则。首先,句式选择与文章体裁关系密切。如论说文中长句较多,叙述文中短句教多。其次句式选择必须与语体相风格协调。第三,句式选择要于语体风格相协调。
2 把句子开头写得多样化一些。初学英语的学生,常习惯于采用所谓“规范的”句式来表达思想,不是主谓宾,就是主系表,总是以主语开头,结果文章写得很幼气,读起来相当别扭。
3 交错使用松散句和圆周句。在写作中需要松散句和圆周句并用,因为它们不存在优劣,更不存在正误问题。
4 交错使用长句和短句。长句有长句的特长,短句有短句的妙处。为了达到既简捷明快,生动有力,又严密周详,细腻委婉的目的,往往是长短句并用。要根据内容表达的需要,该长则长,宜短则短,不能随意拉长或截短。
三 段落写作
在英语写作总段落是文章的基本单位。许多主要的写作技巧都可以体现在一个结构合理,安排有序的段落中。因此学习英语写作,首先学好一个段落开始,可以说是一条简便而有效的捷径。一般来说,一个段落由三部分组成,也就是主题句,扩展句和结论句。主题句概括段落的主要内内容,它不仅确定段落的主题,而且限制该主题在本段落详细讨论的范围。因此主题句是整个段落的纲领。扩展句是对主题做进一步的阐述,通过给出一些例子,原因,事实来对主题句进行解释说明。这是段落的主体部分,通常包含若个句子置于段落中间。在文章写作中,扩展句的多少,长短要适中。既要把思想内容表达清楚,叙述翔实,又要注意简明扼要,重点突出。句与句之间应脉络清晰,相辅相成。结论句是用来标志段落的结束,同时向读者提供记忆的要点。但并非所有的段落句都是总结句。
四 作文要旨
1 如何写好文章的首尾段。首尾段写得好坏直接影响到全文的成败,在应试写作中更是如此。因此有必要研究首尾段的写作。我认为首段有利与表达文章的主题句和扩展作者的思路,着样才有利吸收和引导读者阅读。好的开头犹如精心布置的风景区的门票,让旅游者一开始就被吸引住。首段要能引人入胜,并帮助读者抓住要领,易于领会全文。结尾段与首段一样重要。怎样写好结尾段也无定法,也要根据内容和写作意图设计各种各样的结尾。例如,可以总结所述,点明主题,展望未来等。
2如何构思。构思是文章写作过程的一个重要阶段。我认为写作中构思主要包括酝酿、构想、成型三个方面。在构思的整个过程中,作者要调动多种类型和形式的思维进行思考,让大脑处于异常活跃、兴奋状态。
3 如何列提纲。提纲是文章写作的计划,也是一篇文章的基本框架,是执笔行文的依靠,它直接关系到文章的质量。常见的三种提纲是潦草提纲、标题式提和句子式提纲。潦草提纲不仅字迹潦草,而且很不仔细,往往是只言片语。标题式提纲的特点是简洁醒目,每一部分的内容以短语列为标题。句子式提纲的每一个部分的内容用完整的句子列出,能较详尽地体现出实质内容和各种部分之间的逻辑关系,因此它对议论性强的严密文章更为适合。
五 如何掌握写作的书面技巧
写作是一项审美的实践活动,人们在写作中灌注了自己的美学思想,也提高自己的审美境界和审美能力。优秀作文不仅以其思想美、意境美而且还以其布局、书写美对读者产生感染熏陶作用,并保证写作的其他功能得以实现。因此,从教学的开始阶段就要严格要求学生按规定进行书写练习,使学生写得一手好字。目前大多数学生的书写是“龙飞凤舞”糊涂不堪。为改变这种情况,我们必须注意写作的书面技巧。
1 书写要讲究姿势。书写时,要坐直、直腰。眼睛正视纸面并保持适当距离。2 书写要正确。包括英文字母笔顺规则、大小写规则、连字符规则等。3 书写要美观。4 书写要快速。
以上就是我在英语技巧写作方面的一些看法,肯定会有不成熟的地方,本人希望能和各位同仁共同探讨。
I. 英文诗歌创作 要押韵~
The Swing秋千
(1)How do you like to go up in a swing, 你喜欢荡一趟秋千,
Up in the air so blue? 置身于蓝蓝的晴空吗?
Oh, I do think it the pleasantest thing 啊,我认为这是小孩所能做到的
Ever a child can do. 最愉快的玩耍。
(2)Up in the air and over the wall, 越过墙外高踞天空,
Till I can see so wide, 直到我能望见如此广大的世界,
River and trees and cattle and all 河流、树木、牛群,
Over the countryside---- 还有整个的乡村。
(3)Till I look down on the garden green 直到我俯瞰着翠绿的花园
Down on the roof so brown---- 以及棕色的屋顶
Up in the air I go flying again 我又飞上天去,
Up in the air and down! 在天地间上下穿梭!
1. Love is more than a word 爱不单是一个字,
it says so much. 它还代表了许多意涵,
When I see these four letters, 当我看到这四个字母的时候
I almost feel your touch. 我几乎能感受到你内心的感动
This is only happened since 但是这只是发生在,
I fell in love with you. 我爱上你之后,
Why this word does this, 为何这个字有如此的魔力,
I haven't got a clue. 我也不清楚
2.Thank you for comfotting me when I'm sad 感谢你在伤心时安慰我,
Loving me when I'm mad 当我生气时感谢你护着我,
Picking me up when I'm down 当我沮丧时你拉拔我,
Thank you for being my friend and being around 感谢你作为我的朋友并且在我身旁,
Teaching me the meaning of love 告诉我爱的意义是什么,
Encouraging me when I need a shove 当我需要动力时你鼓励我,
But most of all thank you for 但我最想感谢你的是,
Loving me for who I am. 爱上像我这样的一个人。
J. 怎样写英文诗歌赏析
一楼的已经答得很完美了,在此做点补充。
1.把诗“泡开”:通读内全文,尤其英文诗容,要反复读。
2.结合作者经历: 诗歌之美是不分古今中外的,对诗的格律、诗的押韵、诗的体式的鉴赏仅仅停留在表面,任何诗歌必须结合作者的经历及背景深层次挖掘。
3.以己度人:你需要一种假象,假如你是作者,这时会想什么?情感又是怎样变化的?感同身受。