⑴ 在这篇英语作文中插入一些修辞手法在这篇英语作文中加入一些修辞手法，比如比喻、拟人等等，使这篇作文更
Analogy
The function of analogy differs from that of simile or metaphor. While the latter figures serve to heighten effect with vivid imagery, analogy is chiefly used for the purpose of persuasion or for the explanation or exposition o fan idea.
The analogy can be developed through as many parallel similarities as the writer can think of, to convince the reader that because the things are alike in so many respects, a conclusion drawn from one suggests a similar conclusion from the other.
There is one thing about an analogy that we must bear in mind. And that is, while an analogy sets out to persuade or to explain, it does not necessarily set out to prove. Sometimes an analogy can be carried too far, and mislead rather than convince. In reading an analogy, we should be clear about the implications drawn from parallel comparisons, but we should guard against unreserved acceptance of the argument.
⑵ 求一篇英语作文 400词以上 一定要用上比喻
To Whom It May Concern,
, there are more and more people planning to buy their own cars. The following is my opinions regarding this issue.
First of all, car provide us with great convenience so that people can drive every where they want and save a lot of time. Car is also a very suitable transportation tool for travel. Furthermore, driving car is much safer than riding bicycles.
On the other hand, the increasing number of personal cars causes severe problems, such as air pollution, traffic congestion and more accidents.
Therefore, I suggest that maybe the government can control the number of cars by regulations.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
⑶ 英语作文人比作一物
一个普通的圆柱体，披上了红色的外衣，头上长着一根“天线”，这就是蜡烛。
蜡烛是一种非常普通的物品，相信大家都见过蜡烛吧！它非常便宜，满世界到处都是。看到这，你一定会感到奇怪吧，蜡烛这么普通，我为什么要大费周章的介绍它呢？的确，蜡烛很普通，但是它那种默默为他人付出的精神却深深吸引了我。它点亮了自己，照亮了他人，不求一丝回报。想到这儿，我情不自禁地想起了祖国花朵的培育者、祖国栋梁的支柱、为我们默默付出的老师。每天，老师早早地回到学校，教我们做人的道理，传授我们丰富的知识。大家都说老师是园丁，是茫茫人海中的指明灯。可我却要说老师是一支蜡烛。“一日为师，终生为父。”老师用辛勤和汗水培育我们这些祖国的花朵，使我们成为祖国的贡献者，对自己从来没有一点儿私心，不求一点儿回报。如果生活中没有了老师，就如停电时没有蜡烛，人生会陷入一片黑暗。这时，我想起了上学期背的一句古诗：春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。这句话用在老师身上再适合不过了。老师直到白发苍苍，也还在坚持上课，就如蜡烛一样，为照亮别人牺牲自己。
蜡烛，它是那么平凡，又是那么伟大。以后，我也要像蜡烛一样，为社会默默付出，无私奉献！
A simple cylinder, a red cloak, with a long "antenna", this is a candle.
The candle is a very common items, I believe you have seen the candle! It is very cheap, is everywhere in the world. See this, you will be surprised, candles so ordinary, why should I struggle to introce it? Indeed, the candle is very ordinary, but it is the spirit of silently pay for others is deeply attracted me. It lit up the oneself, illuminates the others, a little in return. Thought of here, I can't help thinking the flowers of the motherland at the trainers, the pillar of the motherland beams, we silently to pay for the teacher. Every day, the teacher to go back to school early on, teach us to be the truth, teach us abundant knowledge. Everybody says the teacher is the gardener, is a beacon in the boundless and indistinct. But I want to say the teacher is a candle. "A day for the teacher, lifelong for the father." The teacher with hard work and cultivate the flowers of the motherland, we make our motherland contributors, never a little self to himself, a little in return. If nothing in life is to be a teacher, as no candles if the electricity fails, the life into a dark. At this moment, I remembered last semester back a verse: try to dead silk, ended.candles burn. In the sentence and your teacher. Teacher until the white-haired, and still adhere to the class, like a candle, sacrifice himself to give light to others.
The candle, it is so ordinary, is so great. Later, I also want to like a candle, in silence to pay for the society, selfless dedication!
⑷ 英语作文中比喻句
compare Ato B(把A比作B)
⑸ 关于英语作文的描写手法，希望有例子
一、比喻(the figures of speech) 比喻是语言艺术的升华。英语中常见的比喻方法有三种：明喻、隐喻和借喻。 1.明喻(the simile) 格式：本体 + 显著比喻词(like/as/as if---) + 喻体 常用介词like 、连词as，as if，as---so、动词seem等以及句型A---to B as C---to D等等表示“好像”意思的比喻说法就叫明喻。 例如： （1）Teacher, you are like the sun, but more magnificent, and more brillant. 老师，您像太阳，又比太阳更灿烂更辉煌。 （2）Your soul is as pure as snow, your personality is as noble as pine trees! All praise to you, our beloved teacher. 您的心灵像雪一样纯净，您的人格像青松一般高洁！赞美您，敬爱的老师。 英语中除上述的用介词、连词或句型等的明喻表达方式外，还有许多常用的明喻习语。例如： (1)as clear as crystal清如水晶 (2)as weak as water软弱无力 这类利用类似汉语的押韵和叠声增加语言的美感。与此同时，又可以使语言短小精悍，表达生动、形象。 2.隐喻(the metaphor) 格是：本体 + is/are + 喻体 例如： （1）Time is a river, of which memory is the water. Oh my friend, what I scoop up from the river is all yearning of you. 时间是河、记忆如水，朋友，我从河里捧起来的都是对你的思念。 （2）Time is money. 时间就是金钱。 注意：英语中存在着许多数词习语和俚语，用作隐喻（也有个别用作明喻）。例如 ： (1)You are one in a million.你真是人见人爱。 (2)He has one over the eight.他酩酊大醉。 （3）This film star is a nine days' wonder; I doubt whether anyone will remember her in a year's time.这位电影明星现在红极一时（也指昙花一现），但我认为一年以后人们不见得还记得她。 注意：英语中还有许多隐喻成语。例如： （1）to teach fish to swim 班门弄斧 （2）to plough the sand 白费力气 （3）up the tree骑虎难下；lame ck强弩之末；above board光明正大
英语六级写作中常见的强调手法
一、用形容词“very”，“single”等表示强调
Red Army fought a battle on this very spot. 红军就在此地打过一仗。
Not a single person has been in the office this afternoon. 今天下午竟然没有一个人来过办公室。
二、用反身代词表示强调
I myself will see her off at the station. 我将亲自到车站为她送行。
You can do it well yourself. 你自己能做好这件事情。
三、用助词“do”表示强调
The baby is generally healthy， but every now and then she does catch a cold. 那孩子的健康状况尚好，但就是偶尔患感冒。
Do be quiet. I told you I had a headache. 务必安静，我告诉过你，我头疼。
四、用副词“very”，“only”，“even”，“too”，“just”等表示强调
He drank it to the very last drop.他把它喝得一干二净。
Only in this way can we wipe out the enemy troops. 只有用这样的方法我们才能消灭敌军。
He didn’t answer even my letter.他甚至连我的信都不回。
I will too go! 我要去的!
The scenery is just superb. 风景真是美极了。
五、用“...and that”，“...and those”，“not...too much”，“否定加否定”等结构表示强调
They fulfilled the task， and that in a few days. 他们在几天内完成的就是那项任务。
I gave her some presents， and those the day before yesterday. 前天我送给她的就是那些礼物。
I can’t thank you too much. 我无论怎样感谢你都不过份。
I am not unfaithful to you. 我对你无比忠诚。
六、用短语“in every way”，“in no way”，“by all means”，“by no means”，“only too”，“all too”，“but too”，“in heaven”，“in the world”，“in hell”，“on earth”，“under the sun”等表示强调
His behaviour was in every way perfect. 他的举止确实无可挑剔。
By all means take your son with you. 你一定要把儿子带来。
The news was only too true. 这消息确实是事实。
It was over all too soon! 此事的确了结得很快!
Where in heaven were you then?当时你到底在哪里?
Nobody under the sun would buy that car. 确实没有人会买那辆车。
七、用倒装句表示强调
Dishonest he is! 他的确不诚实!
In wine is the truth. 酒后吐真言。
八、用强调句型表示强调
It was the headmaster who opened the door for me. 正是校长为我开的门。
It was yesterday that we carried out that experiment. 就是在昨天我们做了那个实验。
⑹ 英语作文中的比喻句型有哪些
应该是what A to B is what C to D
⑺ 英语作文开头的比喻句和排比句
No pain , no palm; no thorns , no throne ; no gall, no glory; no cross, no crown. (William Penn, British admiral)
没有播种，何来收获；没有辛劳，何来成功；没有磨难，何来荣耀；没有挫专折，何来辉属煌。(英国海军上将 佩恩 W)
⑻ 修辞手法在英语作文中的应用
一、比喻(the figures of speech)
比喻是语言艺术的升华。
英语中常见的比喻方法有三种：明喻、隐喻和借喻。
1.明喻(the simile)
格式：本体 + 显著比喻词(like/as/as if) + 喻体
常用介词like 、连词as，as if，asso、动词seem等以及句型Ato B asCtoD等等表示“好像”意思的比喻说法就叫明喻。
例如：
（1）Teacher, you are like the sun, but more magnificent, andmorebrillant. 老师，您像太阳，又比太阳更灿烂更辉煌。
（2）Your soul is as pure as snow, your personality is as nobleaspine trees! All praise to you, our belovedteacher.您的心灵像雪一样纯净，您的人格像青松一般高洁！赞美您，敬爱的老师。
英语中除上述的用介词、连词或句型等的明喻表达方式外，还有许多常用的明喻习语。例如：
(1)as clear as crystal清如水晶
(2)as weak as water软弱无力
这类利用类似汉语的押韵和叠声增加语言的美感。与此同时，又可以使语言短小精悍，表达生动、形象。
2.隐喻(the metaphor)
格是：本体 + is/are + 喻体
例如：
（1）Time is a river, of which memory is the water. Oh myfriend,what I scoop up from the river is all yearning ofyou.时间是河、记忆如水，朋友，我从河里捧起来的都是对你的思念。
（2）Time is money. 时间就是金钱。
注意：英语中存在着许多数词习语和俚语，用作隐喻（也有个别用作明喻）。例如 ：
(1)You are one in a million.你真是人见人爱。
(2)He has one over the eight.他酩酊大醉。
（3）This film star is a nine days wonder; I doubt whetheranyonewill remr her in ayearstime.这位电影明星现在红极一时（也指昙花一现），但我认为一年以后人们不见得还记得她。
注意：英语中还有许多隐喻成语。例如：
（1）to teach fish to swim 班门弄斧
（2）to plough the sand 白费力气
（3）up the tree骑虎难下；lame ck强弩之末；above board光明正大
3.借喻(the metonymy)
格式：直接用比喻事物代替本体事物
例如：
(1)The buses in America are on strikenow.美国的公共汽车司机正在罢工（这里buses喻指司机drivers)。
(2)The pen is mightier thanthesword.文人胜于武士（以pen，sword喻指使用这物的人）。英语中一些鸟兽鱼虫的名字，除本义外，常可转借喻人，形象生动，意味隽永。例如：
(1)She is a social butterfly.她是一个交际花（以虫喻人）。 （接下页）
二、借代(the synecdoche)
借用一个名称来代替另一事物。替代的方式可以是人、物互代，部分和全体互代，单数代复数，描象代替具体或具体代替抽象等等。例如：
(1)Uncle Sam will not help us.美国人不会帮助我们。（用Uncle Sam代替船美国人本身）
(2)You can depend on him for help whenever youre in tourble.Hesa true blue.你遇到麻烦时尽管去找他帮忙，他是一个靠得住的忠实朋友。（用trueblue代替真金烈火，忠诚可靠的）
使用借代修辞方式要选用最突出最明显的事物特征来代替事物名称。借代运用得好，能使语言表达简洁明快、具体、形象，以避免重复、累赘，并给人以新鲜感。
三、夸张(the exaggeration)
把事物的特征，有意地加以夸大或缩小，就叫夸张。
例如：
(1)Thank you a thousand.千恩万谢。
英语中夸张修辞格，应用极为频繁。夸张的功能是突出事物的本质特征，因而给人强烈印象或警悟、启发 。
四、拟人(the personifjcation)
就是把无生命的事物人格化。
例如：
(1)Books are a guide in youth and an entertainment for age.Theysupport us under solitude, and keep us from being a burdentoourselves.书籍是青年人的指南、老年人的娱乐。孤寂时，书籍给我们力量，使我们摆脱精神负担。
（2）Love is the master key that opens the gatesofhappiness.爱是开启幸福之门的万能钥匙。
拟人用法在英语写作中运用得好，不仅使语言表达得生动、有力，而且给人以亲切、实在、耳目一新的感受。
五、排比
把结构相同或相似、语气一致、意思密切相关联的句子或句子成分排列起来，使句式得到增强，感情得到加深，这种修辞叫排比。
例如：
（1）You are overwhelming jade, as white as snow, as smoothandmoist as grease, as brilliant as candles, and as firmasrock.你洁白如雪，润泽如脂，你光辉如烛，坚贞如磐，你是令人倾心的美玉。
（2）You are in my mind and in my heart. You are in the very airIbreathe. You are part ofme.Forever.你占据了我整个思绪和心灵；你在我呼吸的空气里；你永远是我的一部分。
此外，在英语的具体写作过程当中，我们可以运用恰当的抒情手法来进行写作，达到以情动人的效果。下面就以2005年6月份四级考试作文为例，进行写作。
提纲要求：
In honor of teachers on the occasion of Teacher’s Day
向老师致以节日祝贺
从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献
我如何回报老师的关爱
范文：Dear Miss Zhang,I’m not the best student of yours, butyou’rethe most respected teacher of mine. On this special occasionforyou, what I can dedicate is my highest consideration andearnestblessings. May you be happy; may all of your life be fullofhappiness, joy as well as sweetness.I still remred clearly thattheday I was crying with a heavy heart because I failed to passtheexamination. I didn’t know what to do and where to go, just likeabird lost its way. Teacher, it was you who lighted the beaconofhope in my heart in the dark night. Your warm words,affectionateeyes, which dispelled the cold winter from my heart andkindled theflame of hope as well. And I still remred that theplatform, thedesks, the springs and autumns, all witness the flowerpetals ofyour heart. The buds, the seedlings, the spring flowersand fallfruits, all owe to your sincere devotion.In my view, all Iwant todo is to make the best of every day, and come a littlecloser towhat I dream of. Furthermore, I must not relax my effortsto be thebest I can be and do the best I can do.Bestwishes,Andy.
⑼ 怎么写英语作文比喻句
给你举两个例子：
1、这只离群的小鸟孤单地飞翔在天空中，仿佛汪洋中的内小舟。
The seperated bird is flying in the sky, like a canoe on the vast of ocean
2、荒漠化象容饥饿的野狼无情的吞噬着森林，草地和我们的生存空间。
Desertification, as a hungry wild wolf, is ruthlessly engulfing forests, lawns and our living space.
其实英语中的比喻句，主要是用as...as...的句型或单用as、like等词。