1. 如何实现高中学生英语作文思维深度和 语言地
一、英语作文立意
众所周知，对于任何语言的写作，立意是首重，英语写作虽然应重视语言的运用能力，但是写作的本质，即表意是不能忽视的。而在我们所看到的大多数的学生作文中，即便是在高分作文中，立意却被放到了最不被重视的地方，虽然大堆的高级语言结构堆砌在一起，却不能反映出高中学生的思维深度和思维逻辑，如翻译成中文，会发现其思想内容的空泛性让人惊异。不要说立意巧妙新颖的作文，就是能紧扣作文题目主题，体现作文题目中英文提示(湖北卷)的核心观点的作文都不在多数。这种现状反映了我们的作文教学中存在着一些指向性的问题。我认为可从以下方面去改善：
1. 利用各种资源和机会使学生接触和了解英语语言国家的核心文化，如责任、诚信、平等、博爱、勇于认错、包容、务实、法治、公德等，拓宽学生视野，达到提升学生思维深度的目的。这可以通过在教材中单元话题教学以及完型阅读训练素材中适时点拨或组织讨论，以达到目的。
2. 在平时的英语写作中引领学生学会审题和如何找到关键信息点和突破口，以达到使其作文切题的目的。在写作教学中，我们可以在写作文之前组织学生对作文题目进行讨论，在讨论中激发多方向思维。
3. 合理利用作文范文。现阶段各种考试范文中，最值得借鉴的不是其语言，而是其立意。大多数范文，其语言可能比较平淡，但立意方面却是很科学的。带领学生去体会什么样的立意才是切题的，才是能反映高中生思维深度和逻辑思维能力的立意。
4. 鼓励学生将语文写作中的立意运用于英语作文中。语言虽不同，人们的思维却是相通的，殊途同归！
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案例一、请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
We all know that “Chances favor the prepared mind”. Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.
参考立意（首段）：
There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.
案例二、请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Never be afraid of making mistakes. In fact, making mistakes is making progress.
参考立意（首段）：
We always make mistakes in our daily life. Since mistakes are unavoidable, we shouldn’t be afraid of them. What we should do is to make good use of mistakes to improve ourselves.
两个案例的立意都使用了“以退为进”、“ 先抑后扬”的立意方式，体现了英语文化中的“包容，不绝对化”的特点，表现了高中生应有的逻辑思维能力，使作文更具说服力。但需跟学生强调“退”“抑”不可太过，以免弱化主题。
二、英语作文结构
对于作文结构，大多数老师的是这样做的：高一高二的学生一般是要求作文三段式；高三时，大多数同学仍然要求三段式，但是对于作文水平已达到较高层次的学生，不做强行要求，学生可根据作文题目和自己的思路决定作文结构，不再受到模式的束缚。这样做应该是比较科学的。
对于三段式作文，要引领学生学会合理分配篇幅和段落内容：
1. 首段点题，要求开门见山，点出作文核心观点，复议自己对于核心观点的理解。篇幅以两三句为宜。
2. 中段为中心段落，一般是讲述一次自身经历。要求事例典型，紧扣主题，内容丰满(字数必须多于首段和末端)。段落篇幅应当主要放在与主题相关的事实上，不可铺垫太多，切忌顾左言它，偏离主旨。
3. 末段应包括两个部分。一是总结，强化主题。二是强调主题对自己以后生活的指导或帮助，或者对人们提出与主题相关的呼吁和倡导。
在主题和段落受到限制的前提下，能够体现学生个性化思维的部分就只有中间段落的事例部分了，所以我认为在这部分我们大有可为。如何让学生在中间段落呈现个性化鲜明的事例和逻辑思维，可以从以下几个方面入手。
1. 指导学生在平时的学习过程中积累事例。如英语甚至语文课文中的典型人物事例，完型阅读中事例，学生优秀作文中的新颖事例等。以避免作文时事例千篇一律，也可以减少学生在考场上的思考时间。
2. 指导学生平时多针对第二段进行练笔。在练习的过程中，了解如何运用简洁的语言将事实叙述清楚，体现自己的逻辑思维。
3. 指导学生多借鉴高考题中的叙事性完形填空的叙事手法，灵活运用各种状语形式来使自己的作文富有逻辑性。
案例三：请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Unity is the soul of a class as well as a society. United, we stand;divided, we fall. We can accomplish anything if united. What on earth is unity?
参考事例（中间段）：
Sample A：
Team work exists everywhere in schools or companies. Last month, our school hosted a singing contest. we made varieties of preparations. Every class must pick out their conctor and suitable costumes. What’ more, we must pracise it well within 3 weeks. Tough as the work is, all the teachers and students were aware of our responsibility and the power of unity, so we all devoted ourselves to the practice. At last, our effort paid off and we won.
Sample B:
It was not until the earthquake happened in 2008 that I was really aware of the importance of unity. No sooner had the earthquake happened then many soldiers were sent to the disaster areas. Regardless of their own safety, they risked saving people who were buried under the ruins. Meanwhile, all the people in Asia tried their best to donate money, food and clothes, and many new houses were constructed with the donated money. With all these assistance arriving, people in
Wen chuan gained warmth and strength. But for the help of all the people, they wouldn’t have gone through the hard times.
比较即可发现，事例B（2008汶川地震后国人万众一心，援助灾区人民）更具有典型性和说服力，避免了事例的一般性和平淡无味。
三、英语作文语言
在立意和结构都达到科学化的前提下，能够体现作文特色和魅力的当然是英语作文语言
了。多数老师都会重视学生句式使用的高级性和丰富性上，我们会指导学生留心完成句子中的高级语法结构，提示他们将高级句型运用到作文中去，以达到为作文加分的目的，这是毋庸置疑的。
作为高中学生，掌握丰富的句式结构是必要的，对作文也有极大帮助。但是我认为这还不足够。语言的简洁（作文有字数控制，要使用有限的语言准确表达意思）和地道性也应当受到重视。我认为以下几点做法值得借鉴：
1. 引导学生（尤其是高三学生）注重语言表达的简洁，准确和地道。
应要求学生作文语句简单明了，句意清楚。告诉他们高考英语作文不是作文大奖赛，考察的不是你的文学功底，而是基本的表意能力。建议学生使用常用或熟练句式，不提倡自造怪句难句。
2. 指导学生在学习的过程中积累地道的表达方式和语句。主要有两种渠道，一是从高考题中的单选，完型和阅读中积累素材，二是自主阅读英文原著。
3. 指导学生从朗读中获得语感，达到作文的地道性。每天大声朗读单选句子和完形填空语篇，关注其中的地道表达方式。
4. 指导学生以说带写。经常性组织学生对与作文相关话题进行讨论，为学生提供地道的口语表达方式，鼓励他们将其运用于作文当中。因为任何语言最具生命力的部分都存在与口语中。
5. 鼓励学生通过练笔来形成自己的独特文风，或简洁有力，或优美流畅，或新颖巧妙，或幽默生动。语言是用来表现自我的，激发学生利用英语作文来表现自身魅力的兴趣。
案例四：请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Constant dropping wears the stone.
参考范文（学生习作）：
Just as the saying goes, constant dropping wears the stone. Whatever challenges we may face, our persistence and great determination can help us overcome them and obtain the final victory.
Elizebeath, the well-known character in my fairy lady, used to be a shabby girl whose life might be condemned to the gutter as the professor once said, making her living by selling flowers along the street. Apart from her ugly accent, she didn’t develop a good life habit, which may resulted from the poor life or less ecation. However, she made up her mind to change all that. Dreaming of becoming an assistant in a flower shop, she turned to the professor, the person who changed her track of life. Having failed many times and worked day and night, Elizebeath finally coverted her accent into standard London Voice. In addition, she transformed herself into a fair lady, behaving politely and properly. It was her constant efforts that made her what she was.
As you can see, where there is a will, there is a way. You are bound to succeed so long as you are willing to cultivate persistently.
虽然这篇习作还有些瑕疵，如语言不够简洁，中段事例铺垫过多，事例人物努力过程涉文不足。
但是从划线部分看，该学生已初步达到了灵活自如地运用英语语言表达的水平，语言地道流畅。只要坚持训练，假以时日，满分作文手到擒来。
2. 高中英语阅读写作目的词汇汇总
一、关于英语高考写作，针对目前我国英语高考写作的现状，笔者收集了一些有关提高英语写作分数的词组，期望对您有所帮助 1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy 2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention8.不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument12.一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,14.就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons16.双方的论点 argument on both sides17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…18.对…必不可少 be indispensable to …19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:20.…也不例外 …be no exception21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts33. 对…有益 be beneficial / concive to…34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…36.综合素质 comprehensive quality37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…40. 应当承认 Admittedly,41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable ty42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice56. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest59.长远利益. interest in the long run60.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth67.…的健康发展 the healthy development of …68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。No garden without weeds。69.对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person。70.重视 attach great importance to…71.社会地位 social status72.把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal77. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden79.优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth。80.与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of
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3. 一篇高中英语作文：上网目的调查
“After Shenzhou seven” the man-carrying rocket lift-off, south central the elementary school organized to hold "“Shenzhou Seven” three after the sixth grade student Man-carrying rocket Lift-off" the view the feeling thesis competition.After the language section and the Young Pioneers battalion headquarters evaluation, selected: First award 8, second prize 14, third prize 7, and in the morning “wrote the expert” in October 14 to these to issue the certificate. On September 5, 2008, is makes the world China children's unforgettable great happiness day, also is our Chinese feels the arrogant time, because of our testimony “Shenzhou seven” a lift-off historical quarter.From September 25 to 28th, in these days, schoolmates all pays attention the television direct seeding, watches “the god attentively seven” the lift-off and the grand scene which roams through in the outer space, specially proud was spaceman Zhai Zhigang strolls for the first time in the outer space, he was wielding the Chinese national flag, beckoned to the world people.This indicated our Chinese in the science and technology a leap development, the Chinese may announce once again to the world person: “The Chinese is really good!”Many after very schoolmates watch have the experience deeply, writes own feelings, for example: Six (2) class of schoolmate Long Fei is writes like this: Saw this victory a quarter, I thought: “If I will later be able to become an outstanding scientist, I will certainly have to invent more advanced ` rocket', not only will enable each person to be possible on the outer space, moreover will enable each person to come back safely.That, we now must grasp more knowledge, studies well, future will realize own ideal.” This has ideal schoolmate! This activity is carries on the patriotic ecation to schoolmates good source material, also stimulated them to have to deeply love the science, to learn the science since childhood, future will make the contribution with the scientific knowledge for the motherland!
4. 高中英语阅读写作目的词汇汇总
第一.
我们已经把英语阅读当成了语文课阅读，试问，我们的学生真正能向内语文课一容样理解课文吗？
第二.
尽量让学生读懂：1.
理解句子，2.
抄写其中的长句难句；
3.
掌握一些词的多义性；4.
后设置一些问题检测理解程度。5.
让学生朗读，欣赏文章。
第三.
请不要过分的解读其中的词的用法；不要过分的讲英语语法；不要过分地分析句子结构。
5. 如何上好高中英语写作课
1、开门见山，揭示主题文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是：
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头：
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary， one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired， but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是：
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头：
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else， because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是：
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy， the temperature was low， and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly， a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头：
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
6. 高中英语写作有效教学策略的实践与研究 如何有效地
（一）教师以自己为中心， 将自己视为知识的权威和传授者。
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没有把写作看做是交际活动。教师没有站在读者的角度去看待学生的作文 ， 不去指出学生表达不清或欠妥之处 ， 不能明确提出修改建议。
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批改作文时只是订正学生所犯的语法错误。可是写作并不仅仅是语法练习 ， 好的文章并不只是一些语法正确的句子堆砌的产物。教师应当从两个角度来批改作文 ：先从语篇层次上看文章内容是否达到表情达意的目的 ， 再在语法层次上进行必要的修改。
3.
没有把写作视为认知活动。许多教师在指导作文时只给学生分析一篇范文
， 却并没有意识到在向学生提供范文的同时， 必须引导学生注意理解范文中可以为我所用的那些知识或语法 ；引导学生剖析自己的文章 ，
发现存在的问题 ， 然后改正， 并注意在以后的写作中扬长避短 ， 学以致用。
（二）教学方法不合理。长期以来，
结果教学法在英语写作课的教学中占据统治地位 ， 教师以讲授传统技法和作品为中心， 片面地强调语言理论知识的输入 ， 过于注重写作结果，
轻视写作过程中的诸多环节。这种教学法的理论基础是行为主义理论，认为教学过程就是老师给予刺激—学生作出反应的过程， 因而教师主宰了课堂教学 ，
从运用“教师提问 -学生回答”的单一教学模式 ， 到学生参照范文仿写 ， 再到教师面面俱到地评讲那些注满红批的作文 ，
学生始终处于思维被束缚、被动接受知识的尴尬境地。建构主义认为 ， 知识昀主要是由学习者个体建构的 ， 而不是由他人传授的 ，
而且这种建构总是在具体环境中通过互动产生的。语言学习中 ， 学习者不应该被简单地视为被动接受者 ， 而应积极参与学习活动的计划和学习效率的评估 ，
否则学生就没有机会主动地创造和探索。
二、改善当前高中英语写作教学现状的方法
1.注重对学生写作过程的指导
在英语的教学过程中既要注重对学生的语言输入，
也要注重对学生的语言输出 ， 这两个过程都非常的重要 ，
对提高学生综合语言运用能力都起着重要的作用。而写作能力正是这种综合语言运用能力的体现。因此， 在“重结果”之时 ，
更要“重过程”。写作应包括语言知识、语境知识、写作目的和写作技巧等要素。写作目的、语言知识和语境知识可以为写作者提供足够多的输入 ，
使学习者有话说而写作技巧的训练是使学习者知道怎么说。所以 ， 写作既是语言输入的过程，
也是学生按一定技巧建构体裁、内化知识的过程。他们强调的是教师在教学写作时要注意情景 ， 并帮助学生了解某一体裁的词汇、语法、篇章结构的特点 ，
然后再运用到具体的写作中。从图中可以看出 ， 写作过程不是单一的个人行为 ，
而是个人与个人、个人与他人、个人与范文、个人与社会多方位的互动过程。
希望能帮助到你，望采纳！
7. 高一英语写作课教案中的教学目标怎么写
Teaching Aims
1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.
2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.
Teaching Proceres
Step 1 Discussion
Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy’s pocket. Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says ‘yes’, someone says ‘no’. If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn’t steal the money, what should I do?
Discuss it in groups of four .
Collect answers from students. Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same. Because we’re friends. Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.
In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends. And what do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.
Suggested answers:
Good qualities:
hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature
Bad qualities:
dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy careless pessimistic Brainstorming:
Step 2 Writing
Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends.
Suggested expressions:
close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest,
一些有关友谊的名言警句如：
On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
Sample:
Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life. I have a good friend. Sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, once we discussed a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot. However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once. No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.
My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don’t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time. When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way. When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.
So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious. Getting along with friends is just like growing plants. We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger. And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends. Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.
Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get . Remember, the key is your sincere heart.
Step 3 Promotion and Homework
1)Assign another writing task based on the following information:
What do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?
2） Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.
3) Let the students hand in their final copies.
4) Select some good samples to read to the whole class.
Suggested sample:
Friendship is the most important things in life. Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles. Real good friends could put each other in their hearts. Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently. Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.
How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree. You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow. Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base. Maybe fight also will happen. How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other. Try your best to keep friendship forever. It is necessary to tell the truth and respect each other.
教学实施过程：
针对学生这样的实际情况，并受任务型教学法启示“任务型教学理论实际上就是建立在讨论或交流教学思路的基础上的,是交流教学思路的一种发展形态,英语教学要以学生为中心,教师要为学生设计运用语言的环境,通过大量的交流活动总结和掌握语言的规律,并在交流活动中实践,从而达到目的.”我对每模块后的书面表达内容的教学作了调整，这样处理：即把写作课变成讨论和写作并存的活动课，并在活动课中备有相关的多媒体内容或音乐，使学生在真切愉快的情景中搜集写作素材，完成写作内容，最后达到激发学生写作兴趣，提高写作技能并促进其他几种技能的效果。具体教学过程如下：
第一步，确定题目后，教师启发学生思考，回忆写作中所需要的相关词汇，必要时通过多媒体展示相关内容，然后教师在黑板上进行总结或借助多媒体把关键词语呈现给学生.例如外研版教材Book6 Mole3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,该模块的写作任务讲述朋友之间所产生的矛盾问题，并提出建议如何保持友谊：Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教师可先展示一些有关友谊或本班同学相处的图片、幻灯片、音乐等,以激发学生的学习兴趣。然后教师可引导学生说说自己的好朋友，尽可能用到本模块所学过的词汇：close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。
第二步，分组讨论（均匀分配不同程度的学生），要求学生围绕写作话题借助有关词汇，人人动口，积极思维:1.Who is your good friend? 2. How do you become good friends? 3. Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What’s the problem? 5. Have you made up? 6. What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 并让学生各抒己见,提供出不同的词语句型，如1.I’ve known him/her for ... 2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common. 4. I not only...but also... 5.I suggest that... 6.Why not...? 7.Can’t we ...? 8. What about...? 9. Friendship is both... and... 10. If we... , we can...等也可提供一些有关友谊的名言警句如：On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. (---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship. (---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
同时教师提醒学生在讨论中尽量使用正确的时态、语态并用英语交流。这一步也是学生英文写作收集写作素材的过程。教师可参考与到各个组中，帮助学生解决疑难问题，并根据不同的写作内容和各小组的实际水平适当给他们提供一些新的词汇，同时鼓励那些平时不善于言谈的学生开口交流和帮助基础较差的学生。通过不断的教学实践，我发现：在这种活动或情景之下，学生无拘无束，大胆热烈讨论，加之教师的指导，写作的素材自然获得不少。最后每组选一位代表执笔完成书面表达，并在时间允许内在全班朗读；
第三步，教师进行总结归纳： Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. .Long live friendship! 同时再次强调写作中所需的时态、语态和学生写作过程中容易犯的错误等关键问题。而后要求学生课后完成各自的写作内容并上交作业。
第四步，作文评价是个意义重大的环节，可采用以下评价机制，包括学生自评→学生互评→教师评价→全班反馈→范文共赏五个环节。
学生参与情况：
运用这种教学方式，我所教的班级学生普遍反映：这种讨论和写作的方式更适合他们，因为气氛活跃，让人觉得轻松，通过小组的讨论、互相帮助和老师的指引，较容易搜集到写作素材,而且参考小组素材再结合自己的观点，就更容易下手写作了。每个小组都能写出较为优秀的文章，而且，学生完成作业情况非常好，能充分运用课上所讲的相关词汇和表达方式，有些同学的文章写得相当好，可以作为范文展示学习。总而言之，这种写作教学法既激发了学生的写作兴趣，又提高了他们的口语表达能力，同时还培养了他们的群体合作精神，而且也达到了师生互动交流。
8. 高一英语写作课教案中的教学目标怎么写
Teaching Aims
1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.
2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.
Teaching Proceres
Step 1 Discussion
Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy’s pocket. Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says ‘yes’, someone says ‘no’. If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn’t steal the money, what should I do?
Discuss it in groups of four .
Collect answers from students. Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same. Because we’re friends. Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.
In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends. And what do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.
Suggested answers:
Good qualities:
outgoing hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature
Bad qualities:
dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy careless pessimistic Brainstorming:
Step 2 Writing
Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends.
Suggested expressions:
close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest,
一些有关友谊的名言警句如：
On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
Sample:
Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life. I have a good friend. Sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, once we discussed a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot. However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once. No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.
My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don’t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time. When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way. When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.
So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious. Getting along with friends is just like growing plants. We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger. And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends. Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.
Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get . Remember, the key is your sincere heart.
Step 3 Promotion and Homework
1)Assign another writing task based on the following information:
What do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?
2） Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.
3) Let the students hand in their final copies.
4) Select some good samples to read to the whole class.
Suggested sample:
Friendship is the most important things in life. Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles. Real good friends could put each other in their hearts. Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently. Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.
How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree. You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow. Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base. Maybe fight also will happen. How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other. Try your best to keep friendship forever. It is necessary to tell the truth and respect each other.
教学实施过程：
针对学生这样的实际情况，并受任务型教学法启示“任务型教学理论实际上就是建立在讨论或交流教学思路的基础上的,是交流教学思路的一种发展形态,英语教学要以学生为中心,教师要为学生设计运用语言的环境,通过大量的交流活动总结和掌握语言的规律,并在交流活动中实践,从而达到目的.”我对每模块后的书面表达内容的教学作了调整，这样处理：即把写作课变成讨论和写作并存的活动课，并在活动课中备有相关的多媒体内容或音乐，使学生在真切愉快的情景中搜集写作素材，完成写作内容，最后达到激发学生写作兴趣，提高写作技能并促进其他几种技能的效果。具体教学过程如下：
第一步，确定题目后，教师启发学生思考，回忆写作中所需要的相关词汇，必要时通过多媒体展示相关内容，然后教师在黑板上进行总结或借助多媒体把关键词语呈现给学生.例如外研版教材Book6 Mole3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,该模块的写作任务讲述朋友之间所产生的矛盾问题，并提出建议如何保持友谊：Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教师可先展示一些有关友谊或本班同学相处的图片、幻灯片、音乐等,以激发学生的学习兴趣。然后教师可引导学生说说自己的好朋友，尽可能用到本模块所学过的词汇：close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。
第二步，分组讨论（均匀分配不同程度的学生），要求学生围绕写作话题借助有关词汇，人人动口，积极思维:1.Who is your good friend? 2. How do you become good friends? 3. Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What’s the problem? 5. Have you made up? 6. What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 并让学生各抒己见,提供出不同的词语句型，如1.I’ve known him/her for ... 2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common. 4. I not only...but also... 5.I suggest that... 6.Why not...? 7.Can’t we ...? 8. What about...? 9. Friendship is both... and... 10. If we... , we can...等也可提供一些有关友谊的名言警句如：On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. (---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship. (---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
同时教师提醒学生在讨论中尽量使用正确的时态、语态并用英语交流。这一步也是学生英文写作收集写作素材的过程。教师可参考与到各个组中，帮助学生解决疑难问题，并根据不同的写作内容和各小组的实际水平适当给他们提供一些新的词汇，同时鼓励那些平时不善于言谈的学生开口交流和帮助基础较差的学生。通过不断的教学实践，我发现：在这种活动或情景之下，学生无拘无束，大胆热烈讨论，加之教师的指导，写作的素材自然获得不少。最后每组选一位代表执笔完成书面表达，并在时间允许内在全班朗读；
第三步，教师进行总结归纳： Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. .Long live friendship! 同时再次强调写作中所需的时态、语态和学生写作过程中容易犯的错误等关键问题。而后要求学生课后完成各自的写作内容并上交作业。
第四步，作文评价是个意义重大的环节，可采用以下评价机制，包括学生自评→学生互评→教师评价→全班反馈→范文共赏五个环节。
学生参与情况：
运用这种教学方式，我所教的班级学生普遍反映：这种讨论和写作的方式更适合他们，因为气氛活跃，让人觉得轻松，通过小组的讨论、互相帮助和老师的指引，较容易搜集到写作素材,而且参考小组素材再结合自己的观点，就更容易下手写作了。每个小组都能写出较为优秀的文章，而且，学生完成作业情况非常好，能充分运用课上所讲的相关词汇和表达方式，有些同学的文章写得相当好，可以作为范文展示学习。总而言之，这种写作教学法既激发了学生的写作兴趣，又提高了他们的口语表达能力，同时还培养了他们的群体合作精神，而且也达到了师生互动交流。
9. 关于高中英语写作
1用非谓语动词
2用with结构
3用连接词
4用从句
5同位语
还有注意相同意思的词语多记几个 ，尽量在一篇文章中不要重复使用同一个单词
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