高考英语写作亮点词汇

A. 求一些高中英语写作句型，简单点！

写作常用句型总结
1.as an old saying goes,....正如一句古老的谚语所说
2....be nothing but... ....不过就是...
3.from where i stand.... 从我的立场来说
4.give oneself a chance to.....给某人一个机会去...
5.i feel sure that...我坚信...
6....is the best way to make sure that....确保...的最好办法是...
7.we must do our absolute best to....我们必须竭尽全力做...
8.there is no denying the fect that...无可否认....
9.nothing is more+adj.+than to+v.没有比...更重要的了
10.主语+cannot emphasize the importance of....too much 再怎么强调..的重要性也不为过
11....pose a great threat to... ...对..造成了一大威胁（eg.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.)
12.stole the spotlight from...从...获得大众的瞩目
13....touch sb. on the raw ....触到某人的痛处
14.it is not uncommon that... 这是常有的事儿。。
15it is almost impossible to do.. 。。。是很困难的
16the recent research has shown that..最近研究表明。。
17...has/have no alternative but to...除...外别无选择
18....between the devil and the deep blue sea 进退维谷，左右为难
19.content in the thought that...满足于...的想法
20(重磅出击，一般老师都会感动，这个句子可以千变万化，可以替换其中的一些词）The long,(costly strike) proved to be the last nail in the coffin for (the company),with( its history of financial problems).长时期的罢工损失巨大，再加上一直以来的财政问题，使得该公祠一蹶不振。 注：（...)都是可替换的

写作亮点（因为我是英语科代表，同学们的考卷批完之后都由我统计，我翻阅了所有同学的作文，总结了一些写作亮点）
1.分层次。Firstly, Secondly.....Finally
2.祈使句+and/or
3.if i were ...i would have done 虚拟语气的运用
4.with复合结构的运用
5.the more...the more结构
6.should=ought to
7.in terms of mine以我来看
8.May you success!祝你成功。
9.My mother always tell me :Everything is possible if you put your heart into thing.
10.Faith will more mountains!
11.There is a will,there is a way.
暂时这么多，不求多，只求精，愿你熟练运用，考取高分。

B. 高考英语写作中的高级词汇有哪些呢

①词汇篇 单词可以说一个人单词量的展现，如果总停留在使用very good等小学词汇，那老师把你当成发育不完全也正常.所以要使用一些高级词汇（就象是给文章穿上了成人内衣），我不建议大家用考纲以外的词汇（当然你能用更好），夏哥可以教你用高级替换简单词汇~~ severe 替换掉serious（严重的） a severe water shortage严重缺水 needy替换掉 ppor（ 贫穷的） wealthy 替换掉 rich （ 富裕的） benificial 替换掉 good （有益的） undesirable 替换掉 bad （不好的，不受欢迎的） nevertheless 替换掉 however（然而，不过） fundamental / significant 替换掉 important（ 重要的） relevant 替换掉 related （有关的） ....is highly relevant to....... extraodinary 替换掉 surprising （惊人的，非凡的） provided/providing （that）替换掉 if （如果.....） promote /strengthen 替换掉 improve （提高，加强） More should be done to strengthen instry's links with universities. 应该做更多的事情加强工业界和大学的联系. cope with 替换掉 solve（ 解决） motivate 替换掉 encourage（ 激励） We are looking for someone who will be able to motivate the staff to work hard.我们在寻找能激励职员们努力工作的人. jeopardize 替换掉 be bad to （损害，危及） Failing exams could jeopardize her future. 考试不及格危及她的前程. ease 替换掉 relieve （减轻，缓解） To ease the problem of ..... 为了缓解....的问题.....
well-being 替换掉 happiness （幸福，安康） pros and cons 替换掉 advantages and disadvantages（好处和坏处） You must consider all the pros and cons of the matter before you make a decision.在你做决定之前，必须考虑这个问题的正反两个方面. approach / method 替换掉 way（方法，方案） adopt 替换掉 use （采用，采取） the aged 替换掉 old people（老人） adolescents 替换掉 the young （青少年） employment 替换掉 job（就业） affair 替换掉 thing （事情，东西） bent 替换掉 gift （天赋，爱好） catastrophe 替换掉（ disaster 灾难） subscribe to 替换掉 agree with（ 同意） tend 替换掉 want（趋向于..想要.....） I am tending to another customer at he moment. acquire 替换掉 gain （获得（尤指知识上的）） administration 替换掉 government （政府部门） contribute to 替换掉 cause （引起） extremely 替换掉 very （非常的） frown on sth 替换 disagree with sth （ 不同意） for instance 替换掉 for example （例如） advocate 倡导 compensate for 弥补..... Spare no efforts for努力 In contemporary society 在当今社会 A vast amount of 大量的 be abundant in 富有... on ones own account 为了某人自己的利益
at ones own risk 自行负责 on account of 由于 On no account绝不要 arise from 由....引起 Are these any matters arising from the last meeting？ 这些事情都是由上次的会议引起的吗？ assess 评估，评价 Examinations are not the only means of assessing ones ability. 考试不是评价一个人能力的唯一方法. authentic 真实的，可信的 graal 逐渐的 There has been a graal improvment in ...over the last two years. 过去的两年中...逐渐改善. ....multiply rapidly ...迅速增加. ripe 时候成熟的 The country is ripe for change. 国家已是时候改变. trend 趋势，趋向，潮流 The trend at the moment is that .... 现在..是一个趋势..... emphrasize 强调，重视 I’d like to emphrasize how important it is to .... sustainable development 可持续发展
②句型篇 英语里面常用的句型也就那么几个，尽量往里套。能用到以下句型的千万别用一般陈述句，能用长句千万别用短句，最好一句话老长.每个句型我都弄个例句~~ 倒装：
Not only di he speak correctly，but he spoke easily. Here comes a bus. Seldom have we felt as comfortable as here . 双否： The postman never fails to come on time . 被动： Many things can be done to solve this problem . 非限定： The man is from the UK，which we can tell from his accent. 定从： This is the reason why he came late. This is the reason for which he came late. The school (that/which) he once studied in is very famous 让步： Child as he is ，he can speak many foreaign languages. 独立主格： （With）There being no bus, we had to go home on foot. The men moved slowly forward, neck deep in the water, with their officers guiding them.
③常用句子篇——起到一个首饰的作用，让文章更销魂~~~~ 这个有点头疼，多背一背吧~~~ Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 在过去的5年中这里发生的一些变化. A great change will certainly be proced in the world’s communications． 在世界的沟通与交流方面产生了巨大的变化. This is a phenomenon that ..... 有一个...的现象........ It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
...从...增加到了........... People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth． 人们对..有不同的态度. When it comes to ..., some think ... 当谈到...一些人认为.......... There is a public debate today that ... 当今有一个公共的争论关于........... Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 最近这个问题得到了关注. Now there is a growing awareness that... 现在....的意识增强了. Many indivials, if not most, harbor the idea that…. 有许多人，不是特别多，怀有这样的想法..... it is universally acknowledged that..... ....是一个社会的共识..... Just imagine what would be like if... 设想一下如果...... It is of great benefit to us. ...对我们是有很大的好处的. It has more disadvantages than advantages． 它有很多的优点和缺点. It plays an important role in our life． 它在我们的人生中扮演了很重要的角色. ... this story is not rare. 这样的故事不少见. ..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life. 这样的事情我们在生活中经常遇到. ..., the story still has a realistic significance.这个故事很有现实意义. But some others have just the opposite opinion. 一些人有相反的意见. But every coin has two sides. 每个硬币都有两面.（即每件事情都有两
As for me, I'm in favour of the latter opinion.我支持后者. promote the public awareness of 增强了...的公共认识 The government should take effective measures and immediate actions. 政府应该采取及时有效的措施. To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see... 为了理解...的真相......，认识到....也是重要的. A study of ... will make this point clear .一项研究使这个观点更清楚了. There is no point(use) in doing.....做...是没有意义的. Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years. (很优美的句子,值得借鉴) from the …point of view 从…角度来看 最近, XXXXX现象引起了人们的广泛关注 Recently, the phenomenon of (that) …… has aroused wide public concern 随着社会(科技)的发展,人们开始注意到XXXX的重要性 Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to …… Take ... for an example, it is a very obvious case . 拿..来说，这是个很明显的案例. Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that…. 一些人争论.....另一些人支持....观点. 就我个人而言(老实说), 我全力支持前者(后者) As for me, I am in high favor of the former (latter) Personally, I side with the former (latter) Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it is the former (latter) that I approve of 我认为(在我看来,就我看来,我的观点是, 我想….) I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. To my point of view, ….. From where I stand, …… We should take some effective meas

C. 高考英语作文，用怎样的单词才算新颖用怎样的结构才能出彩若用了一些高级词汇，但不常用算不算亮点

主要是注意三点：
1. 不能有结构错误，结构错误在高考英语作文中是硬伤，出现过多的结构错误不可能拿高分。
2. 行文要流畅，语言要地道，读起来要上口。
3.文章要有层性。

D. 求高考英语写作常用的高级形容词和副词（一定要阅卷老师看得懂的）

advanced adj.高级的，先进的
determined adj.有决心的
concerned adj.担心的
enthusiastic adj.热情的，很感兴趣的
aggressive adj.好斗的，有进取心的
approximately adv.近似的，大约的
practical adj.实践的，实用的
automatic adj.自动的
incredible adj.难以置信的
current adj.当前的，现在的
political adj.政治的
widespread adj.广泛的
delighted adj.高兴的
self-employed adj.自己经营的
visual adj.视力的，视觉的
contemporary adj.当代的
innocent adj.单纯的
faithfully adv.忠诚地
environmental adj.自然环境的
naughty adj.淘气的
curiously adv.好奇地
splendid adj.极好的，壮观，
cautious adj.谨慎的
competitive adj.竞争的
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E. 高考英语作文中关于复杂句型和高级词汇

1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。
如：Great changes have taken place in our life．
There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties．
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．
例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Thereforewe must take some effective measures to solve it．
6．表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be proced in the world’s communications．
3）The computer has brought about many changes in ecation．
例如：Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and morepeople are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．
7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．
2）No one can deny the fact that．．．
3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．
5）However，that’s not the case．
例如：We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment．
8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．
3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them e physical exercise．
9．表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．
例如：With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased．
再如：From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000．
10．表示看法
1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth．
2）People have different opinions on this problem．
3）People take different views of（on）the question．
4）Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．．
例如：People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers．
再如：Do “lucky numbers really bring good luck？Different people have different views on it．
注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11．表示结论
1）In short，it can be said that ．．．
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows．
3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ．．．
例如：From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that
examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved．
注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句；例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12．套语
1）It’s well known to us that ．．．
2）As is known to us，．．．
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about．
4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that ．．．
5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way．
例如：As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus． The reason for this is obvious．Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower

F. 怎么写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

字迹，短语，词汇，从句，句式。
短语词汇背点逼格高的，虚拟语气最好用用一句，定语从句基本每句话都可以用适当用两句就行了，句式去网上扒然后背，最后就是字迹流畅，整体美观。

G. 高考英语写作，如何提升文章亮点

要想把一篇文章写好，不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，以增加文章的亮点，给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧设开头和结尾

1．开头

常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各异，但又有其共同遵循的原则：

开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要

开头常能展示文章的主题

开头应能抓住读者的注意力，引导读者读下去。

用于文章开头的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．结尾

结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。

用于文章结尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准确地道的英美式表达

1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异

a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)

a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)

2．恰当使用限定词

用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意词语的习惯搭配

用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义，还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配，一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口语化

高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体，因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免赘言啰嗦

赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只需要一两个词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表达结构

1．变简单句为并列句或复合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．语态互换

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．语序调整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．强调句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感叹及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．语气虚拟

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非谓语动词的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入语

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)No pains，no gains.不劳无获。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

11．句式调换

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

H. 怎样使英语作文有亮点

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。

I. 求高考英语写作加分词汇

我没有在网上下载到这方面的资料，我觉得网上的资料用的人多了，就沦为平庸了，这样也不好，写作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23这个级别，大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文！！
对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！
要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）
首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！
其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！
再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。