⑴ 麻烦问下这篇英语作文的写作思路
给你个例文你参考一下
游记写作框架:
第一段,就是引子,要交代时间,地点内,人物
还有你为什么来这容里旅游.比如暑假和父母,暑假和同学等等.
第二段,进入正文,要交代你的第一印象
就是你原先想象的这个地方,和你现在看到的有什么区别.尽量详细,要给读者一个清晰认识.
第三段,写游玩过程,可以分游点写,也可以分时间写,这个看你的习惯了.这个详细的写景
写物,写当地的风光特色
第四段,写下几天的总结,再写一下你不舍得的心情.
⑵ 如何写英语作文课评课稿
写作思路:不要平铺直叙地进行,要注意及时地、不断地变化描写的角度,使描写更加具体,回给读者主体化之感。做答到条理清楚、自然、明白,不杂乱,要倾注自己的思想感情。
一、教育理念新:
1、 体现了任务性教学以学生为主体,以人的发展为本的教育理念。从这堂课的题目来看,老师与学生的训练很默契,
2、 通过各种各样的课堂活动,注重对学生动机、兴趣、意志、信心等非智力因素的培养。
二、授课方法活
1、 运用现代化的教学手段,给学生创设了良好的语言交际环境。
2、 学生参与面广。据我统计,整堂课有30位左右的同学站起来发言。
3、 课堂互动频繁。师生之间的一问一答,生生之间的pair work、group work使课堂动了起来,活了起来。
三、组织能力强
1、 运用多种教学手段。能用不同手段完成不同任务。
2、 有亲和力。上课时老师始终面带笑容,平等待人,对学生耐心启发,循循诱导,课堂气氛轻松和谐。在这种氛围下能充分发挥学生的积极性和能动性。
3、 应变能力强。能妥善解决课堂上出现的随机问题,并与教师设计的课堂进程以及提出的各项要求同步。
⑶ 2013年关于what make it difficult for graates to find job 的英语作文
It is reported that simply in 2013 there are over 6 million fresh graates looking for a job,which has arouse
First,since the expansion of higher ecation,the number of college students is increasing at an unprecendented pace,which led to the difficulty for students in seeking for a job.A growing number of students aggravates the job market
Second,what the graates study in classroom has not caught up with the society development.Some knowledge has become obsolete so that they cant find application to the job.
Third,owing to the financial crisis,many companys have cut down their job plans in order to face credit crunch .Meanwhile ,for the sake of economic interest to its highest level,they begin to give preference to fresh graates who have some experiences .
At last ,the students contribute the puzzle partly.They tend to set a high bar for themselves with high expectation so that they dont be willing to do the job in the grassroots.Instead they prefer to stay the limited big cities like Beijing,ShanghaI..
Those above are main causes for the gloomy job market.and difficulties for fresh graactes to find a job.Anyway,we should keep on improving ourselves so that we can find an ideal job down the road.
⑷ 求适用于中学生的英语作文和语文作文开头` 结尾
凤头
——例谈如何打造文章的开头
引子:俗话说,“良好的开头是成功的一半。”万事开头难,做事如此,写文章也是如此。我国古代作家对文章的开头都很讲究,所以有“凤头、猪肚、豹尾”的说法。“凤头”是传说中的凤凰的头,这种鸟谁也没有见过,但在画家的笔下,我们可以看到小小的凤凰头上的羽毛,色彩斑斓,引人注目,给人以美的感觉。说文章的开头要像“凤头”,是说文章的开头要写得好,写得漂亮,让人愿看、要看、想看下去。
技巧分析:
技巧一:巧用修辞,妙笔生花。
作用:巧用比喻,排比,拟人,设问等修辞手法,可使文章开头生动形象,富有气势,情景交融,如诗如画。
示例:
(1)几年的学习生活弹指一挥,如云似水,已无法追回。回首望之,我们总以奋斗为舵,而今,初三了,我们要以拼搏扬帆。
初三的生活以拼搏为开端,我想你会铸就钢铁般的性格,打造不服输的你我。
初三的生活以拼搏为开端,我想你会翠竹拔节,创造一份新的成绩,迎接一个新的喜悦。
初三的生活以拼搏为开端,我想你会大鹏展翅,飞向胜利的蓝天。
(2)三月的晨光把窗子推开,第一缕阳光便照到人们的身上,就这样,春天从窗口走近了我们。春天,是四季的开端,它给我们带来了新的希望。
(3)“砰!”随着一声锤子的敲打声,问号先生清了清嗓子说,“时空讨论会现在正式开始,今天我们的主题是‘什么才是美’,请各位来自不同时代、不同国度的学者们积极发言。”
⑸ 大学英语作文 brainstorm一下思路
主要讲舍己救人是否可取。建议从某个新闻时间入手,比如某地大学生为救一位落版入粪池的老农而牺权牲,某地一年轻小伙子为救落水儿童而牺牲等等,这些时间简单叙述作为引子。然后陈述自己观点,进一步力争自己的观点。比如说不可取:每个生命都有自己的价值,一命换一命是否明智,自己有无能力救人,是否存在盲目乐观莽撞救人的情况。如果说可取:从小我们就被教育要见义勇为,是一种人性和勇敢的表现。
不知能否帮到您?
⑹ 英语专业论文“Introction”和Abstract要怎么写,二种论文具体的区别是什么
abstract是论文正文前面的摘要,是用简洁的语言指出论文的主要内容、研究方法和成果发现,行文简洁,逻辑性强,具有程式化的特点。
introction是论文主体部分的开端词,用较为详细的语言指出论文写作所涉及的内容或者要着力解决的问题,是论文正文的引论部分,起到提纲挈领的作用。
英语论文的写作,主要用于参加国际学术研讨会,促进中外学术文化交流;在国际学术刊物上发表,在国际上共享科研成果,英语论文也是达到学术交流的目的;另外英语论文还包括英语相关专业人员必要地用英语撰写学术报告或毕业论文等等。
不同的学科或专业领域、不同的刊物对英语论文的内容、格式等有不同的要求,不同领域的研究论文在文体和语言特点上既有许多共性,也不乏各自特点。
选择语言学的毕业论文选题可以在两个大的方向进行:普通语言学和应用语言学。普通语言学的研究就是对于英语语言的任何一个方面的研究,如对一种词性、或一种时态、或拼写、语调等等方面的研究(如“一般现在时及其交际功能”)。
应用语言学包括教学法的研究和其它一些新兴的应用语言学分支的研究。师范专业或本身从事教师职业的学生选择教学法方向的较多。
在这个方向选题,也要避免过大范围的选题,而应对一个具体问题进行研究,最重要的是要结合教学实践或实验。这个方向的好的选题有:“个性与英语教学”,“方言对英语学习的影响”等。
⑺ 初中英语作文各种写作框架(思路)
给你个例文你参考一下
游记写作框架:
第一段,就是引子,要交代时间,地点,人物
还有内你为什么容来这里旅游.比如暑假和父母,暑假和同学等等.
第二段,进入正文,要交代你的第一印象
就是你原先想象的这个地方,和你现在看到的有什么区别.尽量详细,要给读者一个清晰认识.
第三段,写游玩过程,可以分游点写,也可以分时间写,这个看你的习惯了.这个详细的写景
写物,写当地的风光特色
第四段,写下几天的总结,再写一下你不舍得的心情.
⑻ 适合大多数英语作文的句子
哪有如此适用的东西?!如果有那就是个引子.
中国古代用“话说……”,英文中用“long long ago……”
⑼ 以My college life 为题写一篇英语作文
这太简单了,120字而已。你的大学生活怎样,就怎么写。但注意一点一点的写明内,要有层次和逻辑。容开头第一段写个引子,第一段最后一句总结写下要写的几点,那是主题句(thesis
statement).下面把要写的几点详细分段写清楚,但最好每一段第一句就写主旨句,然后再详写。最后一段再总结一下,搞定!
⑽ 一篇1000字的英语作文
实际上淡水是非常紧缺的。(人口增加、工业用水增加) 3) 我们应该怎么办? Global Shortage of Fresh Water Generally, people think that fresh water is inexhaustible. Every year there is enough rain. And there is plenty of fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What's more, we have a lot of underground water. Actually, fresh water is in a short supply. Due to the rapid population increase, fresh water consumption remains great. Besides, with the development of instry, more water is needed. Moreover, a lot of our rivers and lakes have been so polluted that water from them is undrinkable. We must take some measures to solve the problem of water shortage. First, population growth should be slowed down to rece fresh water demand. Second, pollution should be controlled to purify fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What is most important, we should cherish every drip of water in our daily life. 再如:95年1 月份试题: 提纲:1) 有人认为钱是幸福之本(source of happiness) 2) 有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of evil) 3) 我的看法。 Some think that money is the source of happiness. Once they have money, they will enjoy everything. They can use the money they have to buy, a beautiful house or even a wife. Some others think that money is the root of all evil. Due to the greed for money, people will do various kinds of evil things, such as stealing, robbing or even murder. Money can easily change a kind, honest man into a cruel, cunning woe. In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned viewpoints go to an extreme. Money itself is neither good nor evil. It all depends on how we look at it. We can not deny the importance of money in the modern society. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the fact that something can not be bought by money, such as friendship, true love and so on. 这两例都是采用了对应写作方式,将提示中的三句分别扩展成三段,三段之间相互衔接,构成一个完整的篇章。 2.调整法 尽管是提纲式写作,提纲所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要内容,却不是文章的结构模式,一般情况下,同学们应根据英语文章的类型,重新安排文章。如上面有关钱的一个写作,按照英语的表达习惯,最好是加上一个引子。 What is money? To this question, different people hold differently. Some thing money is the source of happiness, while some regard it as the root of all evils. As far as I am concerned, they both have their reasons Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house, beautiful clothes, or luxurious cars, and can enable them and their families live comfortably. They even believe that money can bring power, friendship, and love. But e to the temptation of money, there are many people who become thieves, robbers, or murderers. It is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their ty and cause enormous losses to the country, so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money. In fact, money is merely a medium of exchange. It may bring you happiness; it may lead you to a life of crime. Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used. 二、 首段和尾段的写作 上一讲中我们介绍了段落的扩展模式,也就是说,我们已经了解了文章中间一部分的叙述模式。根据四六级写作的特点,一般首段和尾段都要自己补上,那么怎么才能写好首尾段呢,下面我介绍一下,首尾段的写作方式。 1.首段的写作 首段的写作方式一般为: 运用事实性信息、调查或故事等引出话题,2)导入主题,然后提出自己的观点,也就是文章的论点 首段开篇的方式常见的有: 1) 谚语法 由于谚语一般已经被大家所接受,用谚语提出自己的观点也容易被读者所接受。 As the saying goes, Money makes the mare go, but there are many things we can't buy with money, such as time and true love. … 2) 定义法 定义法是通过对文章中的关键词做一些简单或正面或反面的解释,限定其范围,这样比较有利于引出主题。 Practice makes perfect is an old saying. It tells us that it does not matter if we are clumsy at doing something. As long as we keep on trying and practicing, we will do a good job in the end. 3) 提问法 通过提问一个或一连串的问题,可以激发读者的兴趣,从而引出主题。 a. Do you have many friends? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer? b. What is a good student? Different people may have different answers to this question. 4) 概括法 概括法指先总结文章内容所涉及的现状,然后引出主题。 In recent years, with the development of science and technology, the Internet has come into more and more homes and is playing a more and more important role in our work and daily life. It has become a must to us, but at the same time, Internet has also brought with it a lot of problems. 5) 故事法 故事法指用简单有趣的故事激发读者的兴趣,从而提出自己的观点。如下面Is Stress a Bad Thing? 6) 引语法 Just as eating without liking harms the health, learning without interest harms the memory and can't be retained. From Vinci's words we can see how important it is to motivate the students in language learning. 7) 调查法 为了得到读者的认可,文章的开始可以引出调查数据等,借以提出主题,如下面Is Stress a Bad Thing?的1)和Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet?的4)。 8) 假设法 假设法是指通过假设提出一种选择,交代文章要涉及的问题,从而提出文章的主题。 Suppose you were offered two jobs, one is highly-paid but rather demanding, the other is less demanding, but poorly-paid, which would you prefer? … 9) 综合法 具体写作时,同学们没有必要拘泥于一种方式,可以将上述方法总和起来。 首段示例1: 题目:Is Stress a Bad Thing? 提纲:1)有人害怕压力 2) 有人认为压力并不是一件坏事 3) 我的看法 I can't stand the pressure and competition, explained one friend of mine when asked why he decided to quit his highly-paid but demanding position in his company recently. My friend may have his own reasons, but I don't think his decision is wise in reality. It is true that my friend's case is not unique. In the last few years quite a number of men and women have chosen to do something less competitive at the cost of a comfortable, easy life a highly-paid job can obtain. They are afraid that the stresses and strains of work will rob them of joy and happiness and do them harm both physically and mentally. In fact, however, stress isn't the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Unless it gets out of control, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and challenge, and to give purpose and significance to an otherwise meaningless, idle life. People under stress tend to express their full range of potential and to actualize their own personal worth - the very aim of a human life. Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to develop our adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape from it. 就这一标题而言,根据所提示的提纲,首段的写作还可以采用下列方式: 1) According to a recent survey, in the last few years, quite a number of young people have chosen to quit their demanding but highly-paid jobs. Although they may have their own respective reasons, I don't think their decision is wise in reality. 2) Which job do you prefer, a highly-paid but very competitive position or a poorly-paid but also less demanding job? You may choose the latter and have your own reasons, but I don't think this choice is wise enough whatever reasons. 3) Faced with a hard and demanding task, people's attitude varies widely: some try to avoid it and others regard it as a challenge to their abilities. In fact the choice we make between flight or fight make the difference between leaders and mediocrities(平庸之辈). 首段示例2: 标题:Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet? 提纲: 1)随着科技的发展,网络越来越普及; 2)网络有其优点但也有缺点; 3)我的观点 根据上面的提示,首段可有下列几种方式: 1) Nowadays, using the Internet has become a fashion. Many parents begin to teach their children to use the Internet. However, there are diverse opinions on this. Some think it wise, but I don't agree with them. 2) Today, the Internet is becoming more and more common. It begins to play a more and more important role in our society and life. It's so useful that most alts are learning how to use it. What about children? Of course they can start using it. 3) Today, with the development of science and technology, the Internet is beginning to play a more and more important role in our life. More and more people are starting to use the Internet, including schoolchildren. However, I think schoolchildren are too young to start using the Internet. 4) According to a recent survey, Internet users are becoming younger and younger, and Internet bars have become a resort for schoolchildren who log in to chat or play games. Faced with this phenomenon, many people argue for measures to prevent schoolchildren from using the Internet, and I think they have their reasons. 2. 结论段的写作 结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。 常见的方式有: 1) 重述或总结主题 重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题,与首段照应。 Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life. 2) 提出建议 Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards. 3) 概括总结 As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city. 4) 引用名人名言 In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability. 5)综合法 与首段一样,结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来,