『壹』 英文记叙文开头应该怎麼写
如何进行英语记叙文写作训练
下面从三个方面来分析记叙文的写作训练:
(—)叙述的人称:
(1)第一人称叙述(First—person narrator):写作者以当事人的口气,即第一人称来叙述,把文章中的事情以“我”的所见所闻来告诉读者,用主观的表现手法,给读者一种亲切自然的感觉,如同亲身经历一样,加强了事件的可信性,直接抒发作者的思想情感,从而引起读者的共鸣。
(2)第三人称叙述(Third—person narrator):写作者从旁观者的角度来叙述事件,以客观的写作方法,能够充分反映事件中各人的感受及见解,以全知的视角来叙述。
(二)叙述的内容:
一篇记叙文应注意交代清楚事情的始末及细节,即何时、何地、何事、何人及何因(when,where,what,who and why/how),做到有条有理,使读者易于明白。
1.事件:为了引起读者的注意,可以从一些纠纷或交叉事件中展开,直到高潮出现,再将问题解决。
2.人物:集中主要人物的描写,记叙人物遇到的事情及人物有什么影响。
3.时态:一般多采用一般过去时。
(三)叙述的方法:
一般叙述的线索可分为以下几种:
(1)以时间为线索,按时间的顺序来展开。
(2)以地点为线索,以地点的转移为顺序来展开。
(3)以事件发展的过程为线索,或以人物出现的先后次序来展开。
(4)以事物的象征意义为线索来展开。
(5)以人物的思想行为及认知的过程为线索来展开。
总之,英文写作是一个学生综合能力的书面体现,是一个长期复杂的训练过程。因此,培养学生的写作能力不是一蹴而就的,而要在平时就从学生的实际水平出发,有目的、有计划、有要求、有检查、有反馈地进行,由易至难,循序渐进。只有这样,学生到高时考才能做到厚积薄发,思如泉涌、下笔如有神。
练习:
1.请将下面对话改写成一篇记叙文。
“Do you believe in life after death?”Jack‘s boss asked Jack.
“Yes,sir.”
“Well,then,that makes everything just fine,”the boss went on.“About an hour after you left yesterday to go to your grandpa‘s funeral,he dropped into see you.”
文中应该说明:(1)Jack向老板请假一天的理由是什么? (2)Jack回来后,老板向他提出什么问题?(3)老板举出什么事实?(4)当时Jack的表情如何?词数大约100.
2.请根据下面的提示写一篇词数为120左右的记叙文:(1)昨天你第一次跟着妈妈去你家附近新开设的市场,你妈妈经常去那里买东西。(2)市场里人很多,各类商品随处可见,叫卖声此起彼伏,人们在谈论着商品和价格。(3)你曾要妈妈买点鲜鱼。虽然到处都在卖冻鱼,但你们没费什么劲也买到了鲜鱼。(4)妈妈还买了一些别的东西。(5)市场上的一切给你留下了深刻的印象。
『贰』 英语写作手法
英文与中文的写作手洁及修辞手法是大体相似,下面是英文常见修辞手法:
01
Simile
明喻:标志词常用:like, as, seem, as if, as though, similar to, such as 等。
例如: I wandered lonely as a stay dog.
我像一只流浪狗一样孤独地四处漂泊。
02
metaphor
隐喻,暗喻
例如:
Hope is a good breakfast, but it is a bad supper.
希望是顿美好的早餐,但却是一顿糟糕的晚餐。
03
metonymy
借喻,转喻
I had the muscle, and they made money out of it.
我有力气,他们就用我的力气赚钱。
04
synecdoche
提喻
例如:
1. There are about 100 hands working in his factory.他的厂里约有100名工人。
05
synesthesia
通感、联觉、移觉
例如:
1. The birds sat upon a tree and poured forth their lily like voice.
鸟儿落在树上,倾泻出百合花似的声音。
06
personification
拟人
拟人是把生命赋予无生命的事物。
例如:
The night gently lays her hand at our fevered heads.
夜晚温柔地平复着我们狂热的头脑
07
hyperbole
夸张
例如:
1. I beg a thousand pardons.
我千百次地祈求宽恕
08
rhetorical repetition
叠言
例如:
It must be created by the blood and the work of all of us who believe in the future, who believe in man and his glorious man—made destiny.
它必须用我们这些对于未来,对于人类以及人类自己创造的伟大命运具有信心的人的鲜血和汗水去创造
『叁』 英语作文的写作方法网上讲得太复杂,讲点简单的......是初中级
我觉得初级的话还是模仿比较有效,针对不同的题材在网上下载不同的模板和范文,先背诵,在模仿写作,比较有效。我记得我们考4级前一个月都会背模拟题的范文,挺有效果的,个人经验,仅供参考。
『肆』 英语作文开头怎么写
一、说明原因型模块
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注释:
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
6、说明XX优点三的影响
二、说明原因型模块
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
三、说明原因型模块
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7).
注释:
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
四、说明原因型模块
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since
(5),it is natural that (6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
注释:
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
提纲式作文写作模板
1、对立观点式
A. 有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B. 有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 There might be some element of truth in these people's belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象
B.产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E.前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辩论式议论文模版(一)
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that
观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that
观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,
论据1. More importantly,
论据2. Most important of all,
论据3. In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模版(二)
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that
观点1. While others point out that
观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing,
论据1. For another,
论据2. Last but not the least,
论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
辩论式议论文模版(三)
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that
观点1. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all,
论据1. Furthermore,
论据2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,
论据3. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
『伍』 英语写作常见开头有哪些
1、开门见山,揭示主题文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“ I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的,如通过文章要表扬谁,批评谁,或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
『陆』 英语的写作方法
开始抄的话可以多背背范文,照着模板写。然后渐渐熟了就记一些有用的新颖的亮眼的词组和句子,常常使用常常新。平常多写,拿给同学或者老师看,多练比光背有用多。
英语作文其实不纠结,就跟我们写中文作文一样,都是零起步多练习就可以了。
『柒』 英语作文怎样写开头和结尾
一. 英语作文开头方式
1、“开门见山”式
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回忆性开头
二. 英语作文结尾方式
1、自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
『捌』 英语作文写作方法
您好!
一般应做到
内容切题:不能走题、偏题
表达清楚:要让别人知道你想说什么,不要用你认为能看懂的汉语式英文句子
意义连贯:中英文化差异造成思维方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事实,所以写英语作文不要过多的进行心理、环境描写,120个字的作文结构要缜密,理由和例子要简洁有力,说明问题,不要东拉西扯。
句法多变:为避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:强调句、倒装句、否定句等等
语言正确:不要犯低级的语法错误
英语作文其实不难,如果你的英语底子不好,不太擅长使用比较复杂的语法,词汇量也比较有限的话。建议用最简单的句子表达意思,句式越简单越好,能表达意思就好,一些生辟的单词如果不会不需要直译,可以用些词组。能表达意思就好,如果不会用用多了反而容易出错,平时作业时可以慢慢积累,可以试着用些当作练习,考试时就不必了,原因就不多说了。我觉得要写好英语作文还是平时多积累些,加上一些练习,比如平时可以多看些英语美文,如果有时间也可以刻意记些,时间长了语感自然就出来了,考试时有可能不知不觉的就闪出了平时的记忆。
多用连接词!
递进型:besides ;what's more ;let alone解释型:that is (to say);in other words转折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列举型:for example;such as ;on the other hand因果型:since;therefore;as a result并列型:and;or;also;as well as总结型:in a word ;in short; on the whole;in conclusion见解型:in my opinion;speaking;as far as I am concerned
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