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高考英语图画作文写作指导

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『壹』 看图,帮忙写一篇高中英语作文作为参考,并详细叙英语写作技巧。万分感谢!

由于美国人生活繁忙、紧张,讲求快速,时间就是金钱,所以近年来许多美国大学也在推行日常生活的讲和写,不用难字,不写长句,不含偏见的「三不」。也就是说,尽量使用简短易懂的白话英语 (Plain English),写得愈白愈好,用字愈少愈妙,使别人可以一目了然,充分了解。这不但可节省「思索」时间,也可避免对方的误解。还有,老外为了族群和谐相处,也不使用带有偏见的字眼。以下即为一些例子,以供读者参考。

1. 尤其在商业上,报章杂志或公文书信上,尽量不用难字 (big word) 或过时的字眼 (old-fashioned word); 例如:

Many people feel that moral ecation is the infrastructure of higher learning. (许多人认为道德教育是高等知识的基础) (如果用 foundation 或 basis 代替 infrastructure 就更明白)

Three hundred acres of land is the parameter of our university,s expansion (growth). (三百英亩的土地是本大学发展的限度) (如果用limit代替parameter,会更简单易懂。)

This news has been disseminated all over the U.S. (这消息已散布到全美各地) (如果用spread取代disseminated,不更简单?) (动词时态是:spread, spread, spread)

The president of this college is not diminutive in size. (这大学的校长个子不小) (假如用small代替diminutive,不更明白吗?)

I have to elucidate this document to my staff. (我要向我的员工解释这份文件) (如用explain代替elucidate,也许更明白。)

Mr. A will endeavor to be a physician. (A 先生想尝试当个医生) (如果用try代替endeavor,会更浅白。) (endeavour = endeavor)

We hope to visualize world peace in the future. (我们希望将来看到世界和平)(如果用see代替visualize,也许更简单!)

The charitable organization solicits for our annual donation. (慈善机构要求颐且荒暌欢壤志?(假如用 ask 代替 solicit,更浅白易懂。)(solicitation是名词)

We don't know what may transpire when we have a new boss. (当新老板来后,我们不知会有什么发生。) (如果用happen代替transpire,也许更明白。)

Please act as soon as possible on the aforementioned matter. (前面提过的事,请尽速办理。)(如果用 previous 代替古字 aforementioned 不是更明白?)

这就像美国大文豪马克吐温 Mark Twain 也曾说过:「我不愿在字典里找长字或难字,我绝不用『metropolis』这个字,因为我同样可以用『city』这个字来代替」。罗斯福总统为了强调美国政府不会遗忘那些穷人,在一篇讲词里用了这么一句:「We are endeavoring to construct a more inclusive society.」后来被人批评咬文嚼字,卖弄文笔。如果用浅白易懂的字眼写成:「We are going to make this country in which no one is left out.」或「We are trying to make everyone equal.」也许更简单明白!

2. 老外也主张不写噜苏或绚丽的字眼(flowery or wordy),句子应该越短越好,一句能用两个字,绝不多加一个。 例如:

At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal. (现在我们应该为我们的目标团结一致)(如果说:Now, we should pull……更简单。因为 at this point in time = now)

Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged. (虽然我的英语不好,但我不灰心。) (如果说:Although my English is not…… 就更简短。因为despite the fact tha t= although = Though)
I am of the opinion that Mr. Lee should resign from this position. (我想李先生应该辞职) (假如说:I think Mr. Lee should……不是更简单吗?因为I am of the opinion = I think)

He quitted the job e to the fact that he was sick. (他由于生病而辞职) (若说:He quitted the job because he was sick. 更简单。因为 e to the fact that = because)

In the majority of cases,he likes to ride bike to the office.(他通常喜欢骑单车到办公室) (如果说:Usually, he likes to ride…… 更简单。因为 in the majority of cases = usually)

She shows a preference for tea rather than coffee. (她喜欢茶而不是咖啡) (若说:She prefers tea rather……更简短清楚,因为 show a preference for = prefer)

I will bring the matter to the attention of Mr. Wang. (我要通知王先生)
如果只说:I will tell Mr. Wang (about the matter). 不是更简单吗?因为 bring the matter to the attention of = tell = inform) (句子最后面:「about the matter」可以省去); 同理,也要避免意义的重复或用字的多余 (rendant);

例如:
The consensus(of opinion)is that we have to act right away.(大家认为我们必须立即行动)(of opinion 可以省去,因为 consensus 的意思,就是大家的意见。)

The letter shows that the problem(continues to)remain unsolved.(他的信显示问题尚未解决)(continue to 是多余的字,因为 remain 已经有 continue 的含意。所以句子就成为:The letter shows that the problem remains unsolved.)

He has made his (final) conclusion in his speech.(他在演说里做出结论) (final 是多余的字,因为 conclusion 已经含有 final 的意思。)

He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。(他有多年经商的经验) (actual 也是多余的字,因为 experience 已有 actual 的意味)

We assembled (together) all the parts for our radio.(我们装好收音机的零件)(因为 assemble 本身就有 together 的意思,所以 together 是多余的)
Enclosed (herewith ) please find the report of the meeting.(herewith 是多余的字,因为 enclosed 就有 herewith 的意思)(即:附上会议报告,请查收)
写到这里,想起一位深受美国人民爱戴,一向主张不写长句、不噜苏的美国已故参议员 Stephen Young,他每次受邀参加会议、演讲、宴会时,他的回信只有三个字「我会到」(I'll be there)……。也有人打趣的说:「讲演或写作的句子,就像穿迷你裙,愈短愈好。」(Like wearing mini-skirt, sentences in speech or writing should be the shorter, the better.)

此外还有:in reference to = about;draw to close = end; at an early date = soon等。

3. 老外为了族群和谐相处,除不用歧视或偏见的字眼外,连男女性别,也要避免区别,以示「平等」。 例如:
Mankind are considered the smartest animals in the world。(人类是世上最聪明的动物)= Man is the smartest animal……。 (如果改为:Human beings are considered the smartest animals…… 就能包括男女。所以 mankind = man = human beings) (注意:mankind 后面动词要用多数,而 man 的后面动词,则用单数)

Manpower seems not strong enough in developing our economy here. (发展这里的经济,似乎缺乏人力资源。)(如果说:Labor power seems not strong enough… 也就没有「男性主义」的感觉。可见 manpower = labor power = work force = human resources)

This small company hired a cleaning woman yesterday.(这个小公司昨天请来一名清洁女工)(如果说:This small company hired an office cleaner…也就没有男女之分了)

He (she) has been a committee chairman (chairwoman) since 1998. (自从1998年他就是委员会主席) (假如把chairman或chairwoman改为chairperson或chair,就没有男女之分。) (如指讨论会的主持人,也可称为 moderator 或 coordinator。)

Many businessmen (businesswomen) feel their jobs are very stressful.(许多商人觉得工作压力很大)(如果把 businessmen (businesswomen) 改为 business people 或 business executives 或 business managers 就可包括男女了)(凡是单数 man 或 woman,其多数都是 men 或 women。)
Policemen (policewomen) should treat citizens with courtesy.(警察对人民应该有礼貌)(假如把 policemen 或 policewomen 改为 police officers 就可避免男女性别)

Congressmen (congresswomen) should speak up for their constitutes. (国会议员应该为其选民说话)(constitute = voter) (我们也可以把 congressmen 或 congresswomen 改为 members of congress 或 congressional representatives) Stewardesses for international regions may get jet lag sometimes.(国际航线的空中小姐有时会有时差疲惫的现象)(如把 stewardess 改为 flight attendant,就能包括男女空中服务员。)同理,我们可以把 salesman 或 saleswoman 改为 salesperson;把 mailman 改为 mail carrier 或 postal worker;把 foreman 改为 supervisor 等等。
当然,一些带有种族偏见的字眼,甚至有侮辱的味道(insulting words 或 slur),也要尽量避免使用,以免闹出麻烦。例如:
对黑人不要用 Negro,更不能用 Nigger(用 Black 还可以),礼貌的说法是 Afro-American 或 African-American;

对白人不要用 Honky(这是黑人骂白人的用字),正确用法是 Caucasian,或 white people; 对犹太人不要用 Hymies,应该叫 Jewish 或 Jewish people;
对越南人不要用 Gook,要用 Vietnamese; 至于墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人,包括 Puerto Rico,正确的用法多是 Hispanics 或 Latins,不过据说西班牙人为了维护自己的文化,倒喜欢别人称为 Spaniard。
还有黑白结婚的孩子,也不可称为 Oreo(Oreo 饼乾外面是巧克力,里面是白奶油)。

有偏见的老外,不叫华人为 Chinese,而叫 Chink 或 Chinaman(从前还叫「Yellow Peril」,即黄祸)。遇到这种事,怎么办呢?我建议:「君子不与小人斗」,最好是「不理」(ignore)或「走开」(walk away)。不过老外与你谈话时,如果使用这些不礼貌的字眼,那么你就可以说:「For your information,the word you just used is derogatory(或 inappropriate)to describe someone of my race.」(只想让你知道:你刚刚所用的字,来描写我的族群,是很不合适的)。这时,你也可说一句「拜拜」了。

『贰』 大哥大姐没,求高考英语作文模式。图画类、演讲类,书信类、通知类、研究报告类,这五类作文的开篇、结...

From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreased rapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet

『叁』 高考英语作文写作的几点建议

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下载源文档需要:18元一、要有自信这是写好高考英语作文的首要条件。如果学生还没开始写,就认为自己肯定写不好,那么这种心态就肯定写不好文章。所以学生应该沉着冷静,对自己充满自信,静心构思,这样才能为自己写好一篇高考作文打下良好的心理基础。二、要仔细审题这一环节也必不可少。看到作文题目后,首先要确定作文的类型与体裁。一般来说,高考作文分为图画作文、表格作文、图表作文、提纲作文和开放式作文等。高考作文常出现的体裁有记叙文、说明文、议论文、书信、日记、通知、发言稿等,其中书信、日记和记叙文都是学生平时经常用到的体裁

『肆』 高考英语作文写作指导:如何让句型升级

一、注意审题
小作文的审题(即审读材料)很重要,决定着文章的成败.因为回一个小作文的材料中,往往答隐含了若干个写作要求,如不细心审读,抓不到这些隐含的要求,就很容易出现错误。
二、注意语言的简洁
这一点体现在两方面.其一,小作文字数一般是100┄300字,受篇幅限制,语言要求简洁明了.其二,如果是写应用文,则语言也一定要简洁,因为语言简洁是应用文写作的最基本要求.
三、力求结构完整
小作文是片断性作文,而非篇章.虽如此,但不能一味忽略结构的完整性.一篇小作文如果能够做到结构完整,则效果会更好。
四、注意表达方式的运用
受文体的制约,一篇文章总以某种表达方式为主,同时兼用其他表达方式为主.小作文也应注意这一点.如江西省2002年中考语文小作文题为二选一,(1)通过某一情景或场面,描写你最喜欢的色彩.(2)就你最喜欢的色彩,发表议论.无论选哪一题,或描写、或议论,总得以一种表达方式为主.但如果能兼用其他表达方式,如兼用议论和抒情,表达自己对某种色彩的某中看法和喜爱之情,则能使短文大为增色.

『伍』 高中生如何写图画英语作文

读懂图画的内涵和深意,用朴实的语言描述就行 ,如果你的英语很好 ,可以使用一些特殊的语句、词组、语法结构、生僻的单词

『陆』 求篇高中英语作文,要求看图

Dear David,
Last week we had a discussion on what we should do for our school before graation. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some of us think that we can
donate some books we used for the school library. Or we can donate some money to buy something in memory for our school. Others think that it's not necessary to donate money. We can study hard and make our school proud of us. We can clean our school and make it more beautiful.
In my opinion, we don't have to donate money or books. We can do something meaningful without money. For instance, we can do some voluntary work to beautify our school's environment or to get better results in the coming entrance examination so that our school will be proud of us.

『柒』 高考英语漫画作文怎么写最容易得高分

考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)
Tasks:
1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons
2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing
3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing
2010年江苏省高考说明:
示例1
鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。 它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。 但是, 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。 请你以鼠标为切入点, 根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右。 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
示例2
下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。
注意:1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
To most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor.
Difficulties?
1. 读图
2. 解意
3. 谋篇
读图
1. 漫画的题目 眼睛
2. 漫画的画面 细节
3. 漫画的文字 观点
4. 漫画的夸张 寓意
解意
1. 辨明褒贬,找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻?
2. 联系生活,明晰主旨 Imagination!
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读!!!
谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…
The picture above is about …
…Let’s look at the picture above/first.
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
Part 3 Give your opinions
I think/believe that
As far as I’m concerned,
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
Only in this way can….
Polish up your article!
1. To use linking words if necessary
2. To use complicated structures if possible
1. To use linking words
表示平行、对等或选择关系
and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...
表示转折关系
but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while
表示对比关系
on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...
表示因果关系
so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, e to, thanks to.
表示时间、顺序关系
first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing ... for another, in the end,
表示递进、强调关系
besides, what’s more, in addition, worse still, above all
表示解释、说明关系
such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on
表示结论
in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion
2. To use complicated structures
For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.
再叮嘱几句:
1. 保证三要素-体裁、时态、人称正确
体裁:议论文
时态:一般现在时
人称:第三人称
2. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误
1)误解图意 大忌!
2) 企图幽默 可笑!
3)不明寓意 白写!
4)中心不明 混乱!
3. 控制字数(没话说PK太啰唆)
4. 搞一精辟的结尾!!

『捌』 高中图片类英语作文写作方法

首先,要对图片进行描述抄。然后,说明图片揭示的现象或道理。最后,提出你自己的观点,改进建议等。
1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
希望对你有帮助。(^_^)

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