1. 帮忙看一下我写的这篇英语作文有什么重大语法错误，帮忙改一下，提一些写作建议。万分感激。（四级作文）
写的不错，ingoring 拼写错误，其他没问题
What the drawing vividly depicts is that people play computer in modern life when working,playing,staying at home or sleeping.The picture illustrates that the time of people play computer increasingly than before.Playing computer account for more time than before.
This no deny that computer have important impact in modern life.It can broading our horizon,working efficultly communicating conveniencly.Whereas,this is a largely harm to our eyes because play computer long time.We concentrate on computer,ingoring other interesting incidents.
2. 英语语法错误
你这句子读上去奇奇怪怪的，帮你改了一下
A new law was issued （law 不能用publish做动词，in可以省略）回this week and it required （时态一致）答children must frequently visit （小辈拜访长辈应该不是被动吧） their parents whose age were over （使用定语从句，超过60岁介词用over）60 years old.
3. 求英语高手查看语法错误。
In this article Mansell reviews the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and points out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue. The author uses data gained from the experiment and The FDA, which is meant to protect the(应该去掉) American consumer. They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things, (应该去掉) in six months,（改为。） They got the data about(应该去掉) what they expected to get. Their researches focus on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do(应该去掉) parents help their children to quit smoking. This article is useful to my research topic（the topic in my research）, it (which)covers that there are a (应该去掉) several ways of stopping(to stop) the young from swallowing in smoking, such as do(doing) more exercises. The main limitation is that there are no others (other)experiments to support his opinion; only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is. Thus, the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best, （改为。） Therefore, more experiments will be testing(tested) in the future and outcomes(outcome) will be showing (showed)as soon as possible.
4. 英语中常见的语法错误
所谓的常见个人觉得因人而异。有的人常犯其他人不一定。建议楼主在平时的学习中注意积累，到复习的时候温习一下，大有裨益。
祝你学业进步！
5. 英语语法有哪些常见错误
您好
常见英语语法错误
1．句子成分残缺不全
We always workingtill late at night before taking exams.（误）
We are alwaysworking /We always work till late at night before taking exams（正）
We should readbooks may be useful to us. （误）
We should readbooks which may be useful to us. （正）
2．句子成分多余
This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you. （误）
One test ends, butanother is waiting for you. （正）
The driver of thered car was died on the spot. （误）
The driver of thered car died on the spot. （正）
3．主谓不一致
Someone/Somebodythink that reading should be selective. （误）
Some think thatreading should be selective. （正）
My sister go tothe cinema at least once a week. （误）
My sister goes tothe cinema at least once a week. （正）
4．动词时态、语态的误用
I was walkingalong the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. （误）
I was walkingalong the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. （正）
We have little time to read some books which we interest. （误）
We have littletime to read some books in which we are interested. （正）
I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. （误）
I have beenstudying in the college for two years（正）
5．词类混淆
It is my pointthat reading must be selectively. （误）
In my opinion,reading must be selective. （正）
Honest is so important for everyperson. （误）
Honesty is soimportant for everyone. （正）
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. （误）
The old man washit by a car when he was crossing the street. （正）
6．名词可数与不可数的误用
Too much tests aredisadvantage for students’ study. （误）
Too many tests aredisadvantageous to students. （正）
In modern society, people are under various pressures（误）
In modern society,people are under various kinds of pressure. （正）
7．动词及物与不及物的误用
The trafficaccident was taken place at the junction of two highways. （误）
The trafficaccident took place at the junction of two highways. （正）
Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. （误）
Because of hisexcellent performance, the boss raised his salary. （正）
8．介词to和不定式符号的混淆
Too many testswill do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. （误）
Too many testswill do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. （正）
All these contributed to solve the serious problem. （误）
All thesecontributed to the solution to the serious problem. （正）
9．情态动词的误用
It may not good toour health. （误）
It may be not goodto our health. （正）
They should spent much time. （误）
They should spendmuch time. （正）
10. There be句型的误用
There exists somenew problems such as being dishonest. （误）
There exist/arisesome new problems such as being dishonest. （正）
There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college ecation. （误）
There are manyways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college ecation. （正）
1.动宾搭配不当
We must payattention to it and make solutions to the problem. （误）
We must payattention and find a solution to the problem. （正）
It also may help you to make success. （误）
It may also helpyou succeed/obtain your goal. （正）
2.根据中文逐字硬译
If someone’sfamily situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. （误）
If one’s family isnot well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. （正）
Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health（误）
Let alone get intouch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit（正）
上面这些错误比较典型、集中，请大家务必要注意，其他的错误，如单词拼写、大小写、标点符号的误用等，可谓千姿百态，无奇不有，在此就不一一列举。
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6. 英语语法错误检查
When we see them, some of us （复may be happy to crazy）.句子制要有谓语
We can see many stars （in the news on the outdoor photos）, whether （attending）some formal activities or （going） for a walk, mostly is wearing sunglasses. 注意介词,动名词
（Like the famous singer Madonna, she always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
句子要有主语
7. 英语句子有语法错误吗
整体表达还是非常流畅的，个别措辞不准确，比如original改成initial较好。however连词用的不很恰回当，答意思不很清晰，不知道你本来想如何表达。
1，in front of the people，加上the，表示“人民，民众”，如果表示“人们”一般后面加上定语比较合适，例如：in front of the people you care about，你关心的人。
因此建议：in front of people
2，because和so不能连用，把第二句的so去掉，因为两个都是连词，一起用，就不是完整的一句话了。
8. 帮我检查一下有没有大的语法错误~（英语）
我帮你改了一下，是不是更上一层版楼权？
Oh,my darling
are u listening
a song is singing
it tells u my loving
it is feeling of wondering,
if i can only say it while sleeping
who's ever heard my heart crying
next time i will be trying
try forgetting
because i can not help loving
oh,my darling
please stop escaping and running
all you know is my feeling
9. 我是个外国学生，“（英语写作时）无重大语法错误”是什么意思
That means that there are no major grammatical errors in your passage.也就是说你的文章基本还可以，没有有版多大问题。权Understand？
10. 英语语法错误！
Spainsh----Spanish
they still living in MM.------they still live in MM
as i said i'm not trying to be a rich people------as i said i was not trying to be a rich person
which i don't want to living in a too much pressure just becouse the money--------------whcih i didn't want to live in a way with too much pressure just because of money