㈠ 2009年安徽省的英语高考作文
2015年安徽高考英语作文题目及参考范文某英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动，请你 以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 1. 采访的对象; 2. 采访的原因; 3. 想提的问题。注意： 1. 词数120左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4. 短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。 one possible version: A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting. 。
㈡ 2013年安徽高考英语满分作文
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热烈祝贺xxxx完全命中2013年安徽高考英语作文题
预测七：交通规则与人文素质（中国式过马路、酒后驾驶）
预测题（1）中国式过马路
最近，你将参加一个英语作文比赛。要求参赛者根据下面的这幅漫画进行写作。请按照下面的提示，写一篇120字左右的英语短文。
1、这幅画反映了当前的一种什么现象？
2、分析出现这种现象的原因；
3、针对这个现象发表看法。
生词提示：中国式过马路：Chinese style of crossing road 红绿灯：traffic light
【参考答案】
The picture shows what the Chinese style of crossing the street is. It is clear that some pedestrians tend to run the red light in groups when crossing the street. This phenomenon has attracted widespread concern in China.There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Some people are always in a hurry, so they ignore the traffic signal to save time. Others lack safety awareness,thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together.Actually running the red light is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents. I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior. First, the public should be ecated to follow the traffic rules. Second, more overpasses should be built to make it easy to cross the street. Besides, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be severely punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.
【相关报道】2013安徽高考外语考试结束 英语作文与中国式过马路有关
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6月8日，2013安徽高考外语考试结束，合肥八中、六中等考点的考生已陆续地走出考场。据合肥八中考点的一位孟姓考生介绍，英语试题不难，听力也很清楚，作文题目涉及当下的时事热点，教导行人车辆遵守交通规则。
合肥市十一中张姓考生说，英语考试和模考难度差不多，完型填空和阅读均不是很难，单选是自己的弱项，英语作文是以“遵守文明，从我做起”为题，写120字的作文。（吴婷婷 黄丛萍）
㈢ 2017年安徽省会考英语作文
Happy is neither a gift nor a right,we must take the initiative to seek out,heart to pursue in order to obtain.When you try new things,accept new challenges,because you will discover a new dimension of life but pleasantly surprised.T here are dreams,there to pursue,there will be happy.Because the course of the struggle and achieve the goals of the brilliant,can engender immense pleasure.
㈣ 09-11年 安徽高考英语满分作文
2006【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：
感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助
一本英语词典忘记带回
词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵
词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上
邮资自己付
注意：
1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
3、参考词汇：邮资-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I’m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名师点评]
本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。
2007【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 参考栏目：栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。
2011高考英语满分作文赏析
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以 ‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
作文：
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
㈤ 求十篇好的高考英语作文(近几年的安徽省高考)及翻译，给好评。
高三学友， 市面上很少你可以把作文（真题卷）的共有结构提取背下来（导语 过度回……）再记一答个主题的（翻遍卷子就知道了 节约）句子 差不多五句 最后把好句子记了 不要有错误，我作文一般18.19很强了。按理我不该说的 但咱是一个省的。
㈥ 翻译2008安徽英语高考作文范文，在线等...
早上好，先生们女士们。我们中的一些人与父母有问题，当他们经常查我们的书包或看我们的日记。我完全明白为什么我们对这种行为感到不舒服，但是没必要感到难过。我们的父母检查我们的包或者日记是为了确保我们没有陷入任何的麻烦。他们可能听说过一些可怕的故事关于其他的一些孩子，认为我们可能也会那样做。或者他们只是想要和我们联系但是那种做法是错误的。我的建议是：我们需要他们的信任就像我们信任他们一样。假如你认为你不可以跟他们交流，就写一封信放着---他们一定会看到的。谢谢
㈦ 英语高考作文有语法
高考英语中最常见的作文类型是议论文,论述你对某一样事情的看法.可以专用以下模板,这都是属我高三常用的句子.
开头：nowadays,there is a heated discussion on sth .Views on that vary from one person to another.
中间叙述一些人的看法：someone hold the view that·····others claim that`````
说出自己的看法:from my own perspective``````on my point of view````
㈧ 2015年安徽高考英语作文范文
2015年安徽高考英语作文题目及参考范文
某英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动，请你 以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象;
2. 采访的原因;
3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。
one possible version:
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
望采纳。
㈨ 我写的2010安徽高考英语作文
看了一遍，觉得你的主要问题是语句不通顺 （不是说语法不对，就是这么用着有点别扭）。还有一个就是词汇还不够，在我看来用词比较简单，缺少可以为你加分的深度。这两个可能就是你得了18的原因；但我觉得你的整体结构啊什么的都是没问题的，我打的话20左右。下面在你的文里举几个例子。
“Nowadays, TV, cell, and Web are very common in our daily life. ” 如果改成 "Televisions, cell phones and the internet are all very widely used in our daily life." 就好些，名词前面不是复数应该加个 "the"
"masses of rubbish short messages" 应该是“junk message" 啦，不是"rubbish" 哦。
”there are a great deal of bad information“ 应该是 "there is", "information" 是不可数名词。还有，尽量避免用比较空泛的形容词，比如 "bad"/"good", 因为看起来觉得你词汇不够，影响打分者对你的印象。
”on some mobile phone websites“ - "some of the mobile phone websites"
"which is harmful to our mental health" - "mental development" 虽然你说的没错，但是听起来别扭。。。
"However, I believe that TV and Web are both useful" - "on the other hand...", 用"however"一般是在说同一件事物的不同方面时用的。
就这些，没考好也不要担心，继续努力学习吧。