❶ 英语写作中常见中式英语分析
1. I very like it
I like it very much.
2. 这个价格对我挺合适的。
The price is very suitable for me.
The price is right.
Note：suitable(合适的、相配的)最常见的用法是以否定的形式出现在告示或通知上，如：下列节目儿童不宜。The following programme is not suitable for children在这组句子中用后面的说法会更合适。
3. 你是做什么工作的呢？What’s your job?
Are you working at the moment?
Note：what’s your job这种说法难道也有毛病吗？是的。因为如果您的谈话对象刚刚失业，如此直接的问法会让对方有失面子，所以您要问：目前您是在上班吗？Are you working at the moment?接下来您才问：目前您在哪儿工作呢？Where are you working these days?或者您从事哪个行业呢？What line of work are you in?顺带说一下，回答这类问题时不妨说得具体一点，不要只是说经理或者秘书
4. 用英语怎么说？How to say?
How do you say this in English?
Note：How to say是在中国最为泛滥成灾的中国式英语之一，这决不是地道的英语说法。同样的句子有：请问这个词如何拼写？How do you spell that please?请问这个单词怎么读？How do you pronounce this word?
5. 明天我有事情要做。I have something to do tomorrow?
Sorry but I am tied up all day tomorrow.
用I have something to do来表示您很忙，这也完全是中国式的说法。因为每时每刻我们都有事情要做，躺在那里睡大觉也是事情。所以您可以说我很忙，脱不开身：I’m tied up.还有其他的说法：I’m afraid I can’t make it at that time. I’d love to, but I can’t, I have to stay at home.
6. 我没有英文名。I haven’t English name.
I don’t have an English name.
Note：许多人讲英语犯这样的错误，从语法角度来分析，可能是语法功底欠缺，因为have在这里是实义动词，而并不是在现在完成时里面那个没有意义的助动词。所以，这句话由肯定句变成否定句要加助动词。
明白道理是一回事，习惯是另一回事，请您再说几话：我没有钱；I don’t have any money.我没有兄弟姐妹；I don’t have any brothers or sisters.我没有车。I don’t have a car.
7. 我想我不行。I think I can’t.
I don’t think I can.
Note：这一组然是个习惯问题，在语法上称为否定前置，这就是汉语里面说“我想我不会”的时候，英语里面总是说“我不认为我会”。以后您在说类似的英语句子的时候，只要您留心，也会习惯英语的说法的，
8. 我的舞也跳得不好。I don’t dance well too.
I am not a very good dancer either.
Note：当我们说不擅长做什么事情的时候，英语里面通常用not good at something，英语的思维甚至直接踊跃到：我不是一个好的舞者。
9. 现在几点钟了？What time is it now?
What time is it, please?
Note：What time is it now这是一个直接从汉语翻译过的句子，讲英语的时候没有必要说now,因为您不可能问what time was it yesterday, 或者what time is it tommorow?所以符合英语习惯的说法是：请问现在几点了？还有一种说法是：How are we doing for time?这句话在有时间限制的时候特别合适
10. 我的英语很糟糕。My English is poor.
I am not 100% fluent, but at least I am improving.
Note：有人开玩笑说，全中国人最擅长的一句英文是：My English is poor.实话说，我从来没有遇到一个美国人对我说：My Chinese is poor. 无论他们的汉语是好是坏，他们会说: I am still having a few problem, but I getting better.
❷ 如何把英语语法运用到写作中
语法有很多种啊，孩子~
至于如何运用，可以说，在写作中你的每一句话都内包含了语法容，比如说：I am a student...当中就有语法，我觉得你的意思应该是，运用那些较为难的从句语法吧？
我来告诉你，从句要是运用好了，你的作文会非常漂亮，对于中国学生来说，最好先把自己认为很好的句子的中文想好，在翻译成英文时加入短语，最后整理时态，这样不仅保证句子的质量，又避免了许多由于马虎出的错误。。。希望我能帮到你。
❸ 求帮忙分析这篇英语作文中的语法错误~
Amy Chua ,an America-bornChinese
was a professor of Yale who wrote Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and the book came out in 2010.
The content of the book is about how the writer teaches his two daughter in Chinese traditional ways.
This book has an effect on the readers by raising the question of what kind of ecation is better for children, the American one or Chinese one ?
The Chinese version was sold in 2011, which made a lot of Unexpected reaction from Chinese mothers who disagreed with the writer
the lastest news is that Amy’ The eldest daughter has been admitted to Harvard and Yale
❹ 关于英语写作(句子的语法)
句子的开头就是主语吧，主语当然不能用动词，只能用名词性质的单词或者短语，这不单单是写作里的语法，而是渗透在英语各个方面中的语法。其实个人认为，学好语法最大的优势就是英语写作，帮助作文整体的严密工整，所以如果要学好语法的话，还是建议买一本好的语法书，每天多看多练，还有就是模仿优秀英语作文中的语句和写作技巧，会有很大帮助的哦~
❺ 英语写作中句子成分及语法问题
由于题干抄中主谓宾俱全，所袭以后面的分词结构只能是状语，就算从逻辑意语上看有解释说明advertising的意思，但它从语法上看不可能是定语或同位语，因为同位语或定语成分一般都要紧跟被修饰的对象。除非硬把它放在advertising后面。如 in conclusion, advertising, not only ...but also..., plays an essential role in society. 相当于 advertising that not only make ... but also ... plays an.... 这样写显然头重脚轻，改成原句读起来更加通顺。
但现在关键是分词结构在本句中就是放在句末而不是句中，那就无法把其视为定语或同位语成分了。这里比较合适的是作为结果状语，作为对其"重要作用或角色 "的补充说明
❻ 写英语作文时有什么要点关于语法的要点
一、写英语作文时,使用各种语法手段是必要的.语言的形成是先有“语（声音）内”,后有“言（文字）”容,最后在 “语言”实践的基础上才上升为指导使用语言的“语法”.没有人因为不懂得语法而不会讲话.因此,写作文时应该按照题目的要求组织语句和段落,没有必要先考虑语法而后构思句子.可以按照下列四步去完成写作任务：
1. 勾勒要点：即把作文要求中的所有要点没有遗漏地勾勒出来.
2. 编写提纲：即用英语简单句按照要点写成提纲.
3. 梳理成段：即用必要的连接手段把提纲按照发展顺序梳理成段.
4. 润色成文：即在已经构思好的段落中添加比较高级的词语,如过渡句、关联词语等,并把简单句改写为复杂句,如各种复合句、非谓语动词、虚拟语气等.
二、另外,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,是高考作文能否获得高分的必要手段.因此,考试前有必要学会语句间的承接手段.
❼ 英语作文分析（语法，流畅度）
“来There're two different opinions between students. ” 中的between应该改为自among，因为students是三者或以上。
“It's the reason that they learn the subjects which they're interested in“ 中the reason前应该加for，for the reason that 是固定结构；learn前面应该加can,这样句意更通顺
“do a lot of favour ”中lot of 应该去掉
“ who're graate from ”中 are 去掉
“ jobs whatever ” 改为whatever jobs ，因为whatever是形容词
“won't be able to ” 改为can't ，be able to 指经过努力而获得的一种能力
❽ 英语写作文时要注意那些语法
英语书面表达获取高分应注意以下几点：1
文章时态，语态的准确运用，回2
所用短语搭配及词汇的答准确性（英式拼写和美式拼写以及词汇用法均可接受，3
各种句式，句型的规范应用，4
文章的逻辑性，即逻辑词汇的运用，5
工整清秀的英语书写字体也是留给阅卷人极好印象，获取印象分的要点，掌握以上几条，高分书面表达并不难。
❾ 英文论文写作中的语法问题
1. 主语和谓语的单数和复数要一致
英语中名词有它的单数和复数形式，动词也有它的单数和复数形式，二者要一致。单数主语(subject)名词要用动词(verb)的单数(singular)形式，复数主语名词要用动词的复数 (plural)形式。我们写中文的不太习惯英语的这种写法，很难做到不假思索地配对，需要特别留心才能不出错误，特别是当主语名词和动词被分开时。试看下面的例句：
A high percentage of peptides that are made of amino acids are present in the sample.
A high percentage才是真正的主语，而不是邻近的amino acids, 所以应该用单数形式。
宜改为：A high percentage of peptides that are made of amino acids is present in the sample.
让事情更复杂的是英语名词被分为不同的种类，其中的一类叫集合名词。它既可以当单数用词也可以当复数用。集合名词当整体来讲时是单数，每个成员作为个体时用复数。
2、修饰语同主语名词关系上要一致
当用动名词、分词短句和不定式短句作修饰语时，修饰语中的动词要同主句中的主语名词关系上要一致。
科技杂志论文中有这种语法错误的情况较多。严格来讲这只是种语法错误，一般不影响对句子的内容的理解，所以很多作者不太注意。编辑和阅稿人有时也没有严格要求改正。比如下面就是Nature杂志2006年第439卷中的一个例子。
Using the enhancer GAL4/UAS expression system, short-term memory traces of aversive and appetitive olfactory conditioning have been assigned to output synapses of subsets of intrinsic neurons of the mushroom bodies.
1) 动名词
After finishing the purification, the activity of the isolated compound was then studied.
We or I是动名词finishing 形式上的主语，同主句的主语activity不一致。
宜改为：After purification was finished, the activity of the isolated compound was then studied.
或：After finishing the purification, we studied the activity of the isolated compound.
Treated with the new drug, the blood cholesterol levels of participants were lowered by an average of 30%.
宜改为：Treated with the new drug, participants showed an average of 30% decrease in their blood cholesterol levels.
2) 分词短句
The iron concentration was determined using the Fenton reaction method.
The iron concentration同using the Fenton reaction method关系上不一致。
宜改为：The iron concentration was determined by the Fenton reaction method.
或：We determined the iron concentration using the Fenton reaction method.
When measuring the atmospheric level of carbon dioxide, air samples from a remote place, such as an island, is preferred.
宜改为：When the atmospheric level of carbon dioxide is measured, air samples from a remote place, such as an island, is preferred.
3) 不定式短句
To further investigate the potential role of biking in causing infertility, an expanded population of biking athletes was surveyed.
不定式短语的形式主语是we or I，同主句主语population不一致。
宜改为：To further investigate the potential role of biking in causing infertility, we surveyed an expanded population of biking athletes.
To confirm the diagnosis, blood test was ordered.
宜改为：To confirm the diagnosis, the doctor ordered blood test.
3.主语和主语的行动(谓语)在逻辑上要一致
由于一些中文和英文的表达方式不同，把中文直接翻译成相应的英文会不讲 . 一个经常被引用的语句是“price is cheap ”。中文可以说价格便宜，但英文只能说价格高或低。物品可以说cheap or expensive. 用中文的表达方式来写英文，会出现主语和主语的行动在逻辑上不一致。在写一个句子时要注意行动的真正主语名词是什么。下面是一些例子：
The highest antibiotic proction was obtained at 48 h.
不是proction而是proction yield.
宜改为：The highest antibiotic proction yield was obtained at 48 h.
The scavenging activity for hydroxyl radicals was based on Fenton reaction.
不是activity而是assay of activity
宜改为：The assay of scavenging activity for hydroxyl radicals was based on Fenton reaction.
The pharmacological compounds of ginseng were identified.
药物活性化合物应该是：pharmacologically active compounds.
宜改为：The pharmacologically active compounds of ginseng were identified.
4、代名词和其代理的先行词要一致
代名词和其代理的先行词要在人称，单数或复数，和性别上一致。一些常见的代词是：he, his; she, her; it, its (单数); they, their, these, those (复数); that, this (单数). 比如下面的例句中，compounds和their一致，protein和it一致。
Many related compounds were synthesized and their antivirus activities were studied. Growth hormone is a protein. It promotes human body growth.
下面的例句中,the 应该用 their 取代 .
The potential antioxidant capacity of compound A and compound B could be deced from the protective effects against oxidative stresses.
宜改为：The potential antioxidant capacity of compound A and compound B could be deced from their protective effects against oxidative stresses.
用代名词时，除了要保持一致外，还要避免代理不清的情况出现，以免不清楚它们到底指什么而引起误解。
The crude sample was dissolved in water and extracted with organic solvent. It was then evaporated to yield the proct.
It指organic layer还是指water layer？不明确，最好不用it.
宜改为：The crude sample was dissolved in water and extracted with organic solvent. The organic layer was then evaporated to yield the proct.
During meal hormones are released after which blood flow increases in the stomach.
Which既可以代表meal也可以代表hormones, 容易产生误解 .
宜改为：During meal hormones are released. After their release stomach blood flow increases.
5、位置的强调作用
在英语写作中，若要强调某件事情，就把它放在句子的前面。中文写作中，有关句子的条件，时间等的修饰句都是放在前面，而主句总是放在后面。而英文中即可以把条件或修饰句放在前面，也可以放在后面。放在前面就表示你要强调修饰句的条件。比如：
Before the hurricane arrived, most of the people have moved out.
Most of the people have moved out before the hurricane arrived.
在英语中两种位置关系都可以。前者强调在hurricane来之前，后者强调moved out. 而在中文中，只有一种说法，反过来说“大多数人都离开在hurricane来之前”就不对了。按中文的位置关系直译成英文，往往会不确切。同样按英文的位置关系直译成中文也是怪怪的。我上小学的孩子回家来喊“我要吃冰激凌今天，我没吃好长时间了”，就是英文“I want ice cream today. I have not eaten it for a long time.”的直接翻译。
科技写作中，一般还是把主句先写出来，除非你想强调修饰的是条件。
Through scavenging free radicals, antioxidants play an important role in protecting against complex diseases.
宜改为：Antioxidants play an important role in protecting against complex diseases through scavenging free radicals.
In microbial fermentation, phosphorus is commonly the major growth-limiting nutrient.
宜改为：Phosphorus is commonly the major growth-limiting nutrient in microbial fermentation.
主动句中事情的执行者(作者)放在前面，有强调事情的执行者(作者)的意思，而不是要研究的事物。被动句强调要研究的事物，这也是为什么科技论文中被动句用得比较多的原因之一。
We studied their effects on cell growth. 强调We.
Their effects on cell growth were studied. 强调Their effects.
6、修饰词和被修饰词要邻近
科技写作要求严谨，明确。为了严格定义一个事物，往往要加上限制性的修饰词或短句.比如描写实验用的mice时，一般不会只说mice，而是用类似“NCI-H23 tumor bearing female athymic nude mice”的描述。前面有5个修饰词来定义研究用的mice这时一般把最窄的定义写在最前面，最广的定义写在后面.修饰语要靠近同被修饰的对象。因修饰语和被修饰的词被隔开，而造成意思混乱的情况很多。下面是一些例子。
Inhibition of Acid B on xanthine oxidase was also reported.
Inhibition of 后面应紧跟xanthine oxidase，而不是Acid B, 隔开后句子就很难读 .
宜改为：Inhibition of xanthine oxidase by Acid B was also reported.
The chelating activities for ferrous ion of the Acid B were assessed.
The chelating activities后面应紧跟Acid B, 而不是ferrous ion.
宜改为：The chelating activities of the Acid B for ferrous ion were assessed.
Recing power represents the electron donating capacity, which may serve as a significant indicator of potential antioxidant activity.
❿ 考研英语作文语法分析
定语修饰meaning.