高中英语写作之语法错误分析

㈠ 如何避免在高中英语考试中作文里的语法错误。

找大学英语四级的作文模板书,如果照着模板套题就不怕会犯错啦.我就是这样提高滴,貌似23分还是很不错的成绩吧... 这是最快最实惠的办法了

㈡ 高中的英语作文，请英语老师帮忙看一下哪有语法错误或者有错误的地方告诉我一下，如何修改的更好谢谢老师

第1段
more and more students are home from work everyday because ...
First 改成 Firstly或 At first First 不能单独用
Second 改成 Secondly
parent +S
problem 问题，习题（数字，事实方面） 应该+S
search it with computer...改成 search for the answers with the help of computer...
第2段
people 改成 students
...they think that it is a good chance for them to communicate with each other and cultivate their teamwork 你那句版人称权好像乱了
最后那句 Our 改成 their
最后一段
as far as i concerned （好像是)
living on school改成 campus
which can never be learnt at home 应被动

个人观点 请参考 呵呵

㈢ (高中英语)可以看一下我的作文有哪里有语法错误或表述不当吗老师每次都不改

稍后发图给你。

㈣ 高中英语作文 主因 词汇量少 拼写经常出现错误 觉得语法枯燥无味 看

首先告诉你，语法一点也枯燥，也不难。之所以觉得枯燥和难可以给你举个简单例子你就会明白。
比如你站在一面满是雾气的玻璃窗后面看景色，那么任你多聪明，视力多么好，你就是看不清楚。这时你也许就怀疑自己不够聪明，视力不够好，而实际情况是因为有这层迷雾造成了你无法看清。那么一旦把这层迷雾擦除，你瞬间就会觉得世界清明起来，风景看的一清二楚，简单明了。

现在你应该明白了，之所以你觉得语法难，什么从句，主句，单句，复句，时态、非谓语，语气等你不理解，是因为有这层迷雾，传统的英语教育，不但无法擦除这层迷雾，反而描的更黑，教的糊涂，学的更加困惑。

老师照本宣科，没有讲透，学生并没有真正理解，就不得不死记硬背，即使死记硬背记住了，也不能算真正掌握而能灵活运用。

语法也无需死记硬背的。语法对于自己母语的人似乎不存在。因为母语自己天天用，而且自小而大，父母老师不断教和纠正，自然内化了你正确的语言结构和顺序。

但是对于非母语语言，你没有那么多练习，不是天天说，也不是每天花很多小时练习，更重要的是没有老师和家长不断的帮你纠正和教你讲话，导致你不可能像母语一样内生这门语言的正确的语序和结构。但是为了高效的掌握一门语言，这时就需要先学习这门语言的语法了。

那么什么是语法呢？
语法是语言的法则、语言的精华、语言规律的高度凝缩。

语法并不枯燥，枯燥的是没有理解语法的本质，而去死记硬背。没有真正的理解，也就无法灵活正确的应用。 语法学的稀里糊涂，用的稀里糊涂，自然就觉得枯燥乏味。

整个小学、初中、高中、甚至大学阶段的语法学习，也就数十节课就可以系统透彻的学完，但是传统教育却折磨了学子们数十年，却越学越糊涂。

推荐华东理工大学的《英语思维：解密英语语法的原理》这本书，该书是国内第一本系统讲解英语语法原理和思维内涵的书，是第一本从语言原理层面完整系统的呈现英语语法全貌和完整框架体系的书。

也可以学习同名视频课程http://study.163.com/u/englishthinking，短平快，十节课真正理解英语语法，适合那些英语语法混乱毫无章法同学，也适合那些英语还不错，但是没学透无体系遭遇瓶颈无法突破的同学，看完后，对英语的理解有脱胎换骨之感。

建立了英语语法的整体框架结构，理解了英语语法所蕴含的思维内涵后，你就不会再觉得语法乏味。

学透语法之后的英语继续学习，就可以通过精看美剧进行词汇的学习，听、说、读、写的锻炼。

利用高效系统建立起来的语法知识体系后，可以欣赏美剧、阅读新闻，交友娱乐，快乐的享受英语给你带来的乐趣。

㈤ 高中英语作文 我的英语老师 这篇文章的语法错误帮忙指导一下，谢谢！

Ms. Li is very impressive to me. She is a young and beautiful teacher,with enthusiasm and full of energy. I like her unique teaching style, which usually makes the students get the new knowledge easily and absorb them quickly. She is always ready to explain everything to us patiently and clearly. The most important thing is that she always encourages students to study hard and never give up. For example, she usually tells us stories about succeessful men who had struggled for life before they succeeded. “How can we see the rainbow without experiencing a rainy day?” is her classic quote. Overall, she is more and more popular with us. We love her very much. I am sure that we are going to learn a lot from her and make great progress in English.
看来这个老师没您说的那么好，否则，您也不会写出这么烂的文章。

㈥ 求10篇高中英语作文120字左右，要有一些语法错误

Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an instry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.

翻译：
每个人都有自己的梦想，我也一样。但是我的梦想不是律师，不是医生，不是演员，甚至不是一种行业！我的梦想也许大人们会觉得可笑，但是，这是我一直追寻的！我的梦想是想要自己有一个七彩的人生！我要它成为一幅美丽的画，它不但要有鲜明的颜色，也要有暗淡的颜色，我不排除这幅画有一部分的黑色，我反而会很珍惜这些暗淡的颜色！不是吗，试问一下，一幅色彩鲜艳的画，如果不加一点暗淡的颜色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？人生就象画一样，画中鲜艳的颜色就代表着人生美丽快乐的时光。画中暗淡的颜色就代表着人生遭遇困难，不愉快的时候。也许你会觉得拥有一条平坦美丽的路不是很好吗，但我并不觉得。一个人如果一生平坦那有什么意思呢？人生只有短短几十年，我要他走到最后时，每一个回忆都事充实的！
亲你看看这篇行不行？你说要长点儿的话，好像我这篇又有点儿短。亲你要是看着还顺眼的话，就凑活着用吧~~~~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
再给你两篇，是写朋友的，你自己选选~~~ A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are
depressed. I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.
A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever
或
My best friend and I get along with each other quite well. But we are so different. He is funnier, more outgoing than I am and i'm more serious. He is more athletic and likes to play all kinds of sports but I am smarter on study. My friend is wilder than me and I am calmer. He is tall, thin, strong,with short hair, And sometimes he is very careless and lazy. On the other hands, I am short, fat, weak, with shorthair. He is very helpful because I am very lazy and don't want to do any sports. And I will help him with his study.
I think our friendship will last forever.

㈦ 高中英语作文，麻烦帮忙帮忙看看有什么语法错误

I am a big fan of climbing (climbing 什么？climbing本身不是个活动。如果你指的是在野外走路/ 探险，可以替换成 “hiking”). (插入transition，因为这前后两句话没有任何联系。比如你可以在这里插入 “However, I almost got into trouble because of my hobby once.”) One afternoon, I went (改为 “was”) climbing (改为 “hiking”或其他更好的词) in the wild. （插入转折，还是前后没关联，比如“I had a good time, yet）When I decided to go home nearly （改为“near”）the (删除“the”) evening (或者把 “nearly the evening” 改为 “at sunset”), I realized that I have (删除 “have”) lost my key somewhere (删除 “somewhere”). I looked for the key while (改为 “as”) I go (改为 “went”) down the hills for a long time (,) but I had no luck (把 “I had no luck” 改为 “the action was in vain”—不改也没错，但是这是更高级的用法，你的读者会喜欢的). I was so worried and (改为 “because”—大哥，这是因果关系好不好—因为你饿了而没有钥匙回不了家，所以你才担心……) I started to feeling （改为 “felt”—更简洁）a little bit (改为 “rather”—a little bit 太口语化) hungry. But （两句连一句）I couldn't (could not—正式作文里，永远不要用缩写！！！) go home (加入 “and eat dinner”—前面你说你饿了，后面你说你回不了家，两者有联系么？我知道正常人都能看出来有联系，但是答题一定要把老师当弱智一样，把所有的东西都写清楚。别不服气，我受过惨痛教训，不希望你重蹈覆辙而已) without my key. (加转折 “Luckily”) Just when I (was) about to gave (give) (写过去时就要全用过去时啊，时空穿梭机还没被发明出来呢) up, I met one of my friends (a friend, 你要说的是“一个朋友”不是“朋友之一”). I told him the story of (改为 “about”—更简洁) me losing the (改为 “my”—你的钥匙没有那么伟大，也不是人人皆知世间只有这一把，所以你要说清楚是你的钥匙) key. He was so kind and (改为 “that”—又应该是因果关系，他之所以是好人，是因为他帮你找钥匙—that 后面放解释/ 原因) he helped me to find it. After about (删掉，或者换成 “approximately”—一样的意思，about 太口语化了) 10 (ten—minutes, 正式作文里，永远不用阿拉伯数字, 除非数字太大，写出来不简洁，比如76663549) we finally found it (改为 “my key”—上句已经用过it 了，这句换个花样，让文章多样化) behind a bush. I was so excited (excited? 找着个钥匙你像磕了药一样一蹦三尺高？不是吧？但是 “excited” 就这意思—改成 “relieved” 或者 “happy”. (+转折 “Thus”) To express (my, 知道你学的是个定语，但是要学会变通) gratitude, I decided to have dinner with him. And I will (用过去时, “would”) pay for the bill.

*这是真事？有些不合理呢。因为找不到钥匙回不了家，又饿，所以才担心。 但是你朋友帮你找到钥匙了，你又有钱请人家吃饭。。。既然有钱，干嘛开始因为找不到钥匙回不了家，又饿而担心啊？如果是编的，把结尾改成“以后会请人家吃饭”

I am a big fan of hiking. However, I almost got into trouble because of my hobby once. One afternoon, I was hiking in the wild. When I decided to go home at sunset, I realized that I lost my key. I looked for the key as I went down the hills for a long time, but the action was in vain. I was so worried because I felt a rather hungry, but I could not go home without my key and eat dinner. Luckily, just when I was about to give up, I met a friend. I told him about me losing my key. He was so kind that he helped me to find it. After approximately ten minutes, we finally found my key behind a bush. I was relieved. To express my gratitude, I decided to have dinner with him. And I would pay for the bill. (*To express my gratitude, I promised myself that I would buy him dinner to pay him my thanks.)

看不出两段的差异，讲的是一个事情啊。只是两种语法错误而已啊。如果要求是用两种写法的话，让别的大大改第二段吧。 我一个人有一个写作风格，所以只能写出一个正确语法的答案。

要想要高分，有三点：词，句，段
词：用长词，难词。并且要准确把握词的意思。比如找到钥匙你是不担心了，不是兴奋。。。

句：我不清楚你都学的什么，但是尽量用不同的句型。你上面的这段话，句句都是主谓宾 （I 干了什么。I 干了什么）。这不是语法错误，但是会让你的文章及其单调以及初级。抱歉没法帮你改，我要是改了，就等于帮你重写一篇了。。。

段：大哥你写的不是文章吧。根本没有中心思想。从你爱登山扯到你要请朋友吃饭。事件虽然发生的比较合理，但是没有中心思想。没法只言片语讲清楚，可以发网络信息给我或者自己找书学。还有就是你的转折，前言不搭后语。教你个办法：写出来后，把两句挨着的话单拎出来，想象自己只写了这两句话，看看两句话连贯不连贯。用白痴的智商去看，不要让大脑自作聪明的补全。

貌似就这些了。我写的可能有些苛刻，别介意啊。不清楚中国高中的英语程度，我尽量改成完美了

㈧ 高中英语作文出现语法和时态错误一般回扣几分，还有疑问句也用错了

一般的话,英语错一句话,扣1分,错一个单词扣0.5。在作文里面,写错时态影响不大,1-2分吧.还要看你内错的多不多容了.错的多老师就认为你英语基础不好,没准分数就下来了,错的少而内容丰富改卷老师也可能会忽略小的错误一般扣多少分也会根据很多情况来决定的比如整体写的怎么样,字迹是否工整,内容怎么样,象你这种情况少则1分多则3分吧跑题了.10分左右.

㈨ 高中在写英语作文时,怎么减少语法错误.

如果基本时态你都可以掌握的话,那么作文里就不要写那些从句什么的,简单一些的句子就可以了,加上适当的关联词连成长句即可.