㈠ 我这篇英语作文有哪些语法错误
1 increaseing--increasing 2 Socreateing Green Campus -- So creating green campuses
3 accord mederning standard--meet the need of modern ecation
4 Creating a Green Campus is not only means that pay more attention in protecting the environment but aslo means that improving the manners and try the best in studying.----Creating a Green Campus not only means paying more attention to protecting the environment but aslo means improving the studying method and trying one's best to study.
5 A clean campus and a positive learning environment could accelerate students studying harder and persist their dreams. -----A clean campus and a positive learning environment could get the students to work harder and be more active.
6 As far as my personal experience and best knowledge,in order to creating a Green Campus ,i suppose that we could do not throw rubbish everywhere and learn our subjects harder. ----As far as I know,in order to create a Green Campus ,I suppose that we shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere and should learn our subjects harder.
㈡ 求帮忙分析这篇英语作文中的语法错误~
Amy Chua ,an America-bornChinese
was a professor of Yale who wrote Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and the book came out in 2010.
The content of the book is about how the writer teaches his two daughter in Chinese traditional ways.
This book has an effect on the readers by raising the question of what kind of ecation is better for children, the American one or Chinese one ?
The Chinese version was sold in 2011, which made a lot of Unexpected reaction from Chinese mothers who disagreed with the writer
the lastest news is that Amy’ The eldest daughter has been admitted to Harvard and Yale
㈢ 求解这篇英语写作有什么语法错误 求帮忙改正
第一句：1.Wednesday2.过去式用had an.....3.最好改成and discussed about...spelling with....
第二句：about前最好有and。only can speak but can't write well.这样应该流畅一些。
第三句：既内然是last wednesday就应该用过去容式，后面的时态错误就不一一写了。最好不要用one
reason有些像由中文直译的，应该用first reason，is后面用that合适一些。type去掉，太像直译的了。training改成practice。in normal time改成at ordinary time。also后加is。提高弱点，没这种说法，逻辑问题。pay attention to固定搭配。it指代不明。
整篇文章直译句子过多，事态错误，简单句太多，内容不丰富，但词汇量还好。
㈣ 这篇英语作文有语法错误吗急急急急！！！！！！！
第一句话就很别扭：你就可以直接说：I am very glad to share my Shanghai expo trip with you。
世博就是exposition，简称expo 就可以
第二句话的语意大概是：他教会了我许多，对吧。应该是：It's tayght me a lot.bring没有教会的用法
得~我给你重写吧，词还是你的，就是给你改改，你重复的太多，总是A LOT，英语尤其是口语最忌讳这个~从First开始：
First, the activity really impressed me deeply, including the constructions, foods and the parades. It’s really a shock to me，like all kinds of styles of buildings and costumes come in to my eyes, you know, as they are all something new to me and made me surprised. Second, the holding of World Expo in my own country brings me a sense of honor. It’s a symbol of the 此处换一个别的词 of my homeland. Thirdly, the Expo is not only a exhibition to me but also a class; I really learned a lot from every word the guide have told me and every picture that was shown to me.At Last, I want to say that the Expo really means a lot to me, the nation(更正规), and the world.
写的还是很有文笔的，但就是在自然点更好，希望有帮到你，我可能跟你一样是个中学生...呵呵
也希望你给点分啊~
㈤ 求解这篇英语写作有什么语法错误 求帮忙改正
第一句：which ...【and】 has a long history.
第二句：
It was prosperous/quite popular in the Qing Dynasty and then turned into part of people's daily life.
第三句：
Paper-cutting is mainly used in three ways:decoration，religion and design,with decoration the most widely used.
第四句：
Nowdays, paper-cutting has become one of the best gifts sent to friends,which is very popular with foreigners.
第五句：
There are now more than 30 stores managing paper-cutting ,whose artworks are sold as far as Southeast Asia.
祝你开回心答如意！
㈥ 这篇英语作文有语法错误吗
1，去掉第二句开头的And
2，第四句When we are playing（加个are）
3，第五句which team gets（get加s）这句话最好改成the team which scores the most points will win the game.
4，第六句because it requires teammates to cooperate
5，最专后一句together和with others是重属复的，随便去掉一个
㈦ 这篇英语小作文有什么语法错误吗
1行改成includes
3行去掉more and more,large改成larger
4行since改成from,因为内有since要用现在完成时
6行less后the改成than
倒数容第三行phone要用复数
倒数第二行hand改成word
最后一行a 改成an
㈧ 求检查这篇英语作文，有没有语法错误或单词错误，求改错，拜托一定要仔细检查(>﹏<)
an old man
㈨ 这篇英语作文有什么语法错误
句子开头是不是没复制全？
第一个：训练营是training camp，你是写多了个n吧。而且这句后面的从句如回果是要表达为了跟答人比赛所以邀请人的话我觉得用so that we can比较好，比赛划船可以用have a boat racing。
第二个：时间和日期在英文里是分开的，反正我是没见过时间+of+月日这种结构：其次日期的表达是写先写月份后写序数词的日期，表示某月的第几天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
㈩ 求英语大神指导，，我写的这篇作文有什么可笑的语法错误，就是特别突出的语法错误，，请指出，，越多越好
Wild animals
Animals are our friends, but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat. The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger. Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live. Now, just imagine, what will happen if there aren't animals? The world will happen a chain of events, we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die! Therefore, we should protect wildlife animals. I think First, every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger. Then, they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat. But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
你的观点还是很好的.打字上可能有些错误, 我这里给你改过来了.然后,我给你修改了大部分句子,如下：
The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger.
改为：These people have killed so many wild animals that some species are in danger of extinction.
Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.
改为：Meanwhile, the greenhouse effect leads to temperature rise, which results in iceberg getting melted and animals like polar bears will lose their habitats.
The world will happen a chain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!
改为： A chain of events will happen in the world. We people won’t have meat to eat and we will get ill and may even die in the end!
But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
改为：But there is still a long way to go before we can make these two points come true.