A. 求英语高手查看语法错误。
In this article Mansell reviews the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and points out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue. The author uses data gained from the experiment and The FDA, which is meant to protect the(应该去掉) American consumer. They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things, (应该去掉) in six months,（改为。） They got the data about(应该去掉) what they expected to get. Their researches focus on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do(应该去掉) parents help their children to quit smoking. This article is useful to my research topic（the topic in my research）, it (which)covers that there are a (应该去掉) several ways of stopping(to stop) the young from swallowing in smoking, such as do(doing) more exercises. The main limitation is that there are no others (other)experiments to support his opinion; only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is. Thus, the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best, （改为。） Therefore, more experiments will be testing(tested) in the future and outcomes(outcome) will be showing (showed)as soon as possible.
B. 请英语高手看看这里又没有语法错误
把最后那两句连起来比较好。不然你的那句"now..."里没有谓语，属于病内句。
可改为：容
now,
as
attendant
at
the
yindo
hotel
zhuhai
i
am
pleased
to
be
able
to
participate
in
this
interview.
C. 英语高手请检查语法错误
1.my topic 应该是the topic of mine这个是惯用通病
2.It may pass by without your attention我个人认为不应该有 by 不是经过，而只是时间的消逝，用pass 你后面的都是这样用的
3.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future, 我觉得不是young 而应该是youth名词 你说的那个是青年人，而不是青春
4.they all made full use of their youth time,后面不用加time吧或者是yong time.
5.Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older中的passing 是不是应该是passion猜测你是笔误
6.We should work harder and harder. We should master more knowledge and more skills.改成
We should work harder and harder to master more knowledge and more skills.你觉得怎么样，尽量减少用第一人称做主语的句子毫无关联词地重叠在一起。
其实我还觉得，应该在你引用的那段前面加上一个承上启下的句子，比如说，what is the youth.更好些然后在How do you master your youth? 的前面再加个连接句，你的连接太硬了，就主题部鲜明了啊
D. 请英语高手给指点一下，有没有语法错误
第七句改成，We can have lunch together.
第十一句改成：回答是过去式，提问怎么能是现在时呢？How did you get there
而且方式不能用从内句，改成：I got here by (driving my) car.
下面那容句话一样。改为：When did you buy it?
倒数第三句、可以直接说：It spent me $5000
倒数第二局：I think it is worth it
没有of
总之你还要细心点，因为这些东西都是很简单的
纯正美语，希望加分，也希望有帮到你，我急用分，谢谢
E. 急!!!!! 求英语高手检查是否语法错误!!!
I not no!
F. 请英语高手帮忙修改语法错误。
你这里的语法错误很多啊。我尽量在你的基础上改吧。
Along with the computer application increasinged widely and deeply and the fast development
of information technology,the network is graally intergrated into people's lives.So the network is good or harm to our life.
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G. 急！！！！请英语高手指教 有没有语法错误。在线等。。。。。。。
We don't think that some kinds of behaviors in White Day or Valentine's Day are helpful for our friendship.
When I was a primary student ,a friend of mine, he just gave peperos to the friends who were tall. So the friends who were short were very angry, and a great deal of trouble arosen between the two groups of friends. The friends who didn’ receive the gifts would be very sad, and they would hate the people who didn’t give them gifts.
And I think we don’t need to/ needn't use the gift to show our true friendship . We can use the expression of eyes or look of faces to show our thinkings or feelings .
On Pepero Day it is not just giving friendship and receiving friendship. People will buy so many peperos. People use this way to give and receivie gifts to develop friendship, though this way is a waste of money. Maybe giving gift s will make someone happy but it is just for a short-time not forever.
H. 求英语高手纠正语法错误，在线等答案！
Three different endings, it is not the director have his words at hand , It because of Laura` reaction when she met that dog. The first ending, Laura is shocked by the dog. The second end,she is tripped down by the dog owner and then falling down the stairs , the overall time delay a few seconds. The third ending,she skip several stairs with a few steps. The overall time advance a few seconds . Indeed, the faster you run, the better the outcome.Perhaps the director is illustrating that we must strive to grasp every inch of time, even just a few seconds.
I. 请检查此段英文中的语法错误
原文
UNDER THE BRIDGE _ the upcoming season
In recent days, the second season of a interesting animation had been on show. It was proced in a major TV station, TBS (Tokyo Broadcasting System Incorporation). Its name is Under the Bridge.
改后
UNDER THE BRIDGE on the upcoming season【个人认为介词有用on较好】
In recent days, the second season of an interesting animation has been on show.
【有 recent days通常都用完成时态 可是个人认为没必要用过去完成时
此外 interesting 读音为元音开头 所以 a 要改 an 】
It was proced on a major TV station,【介词用on才能表达那个频道在上演什么吧】
TBS (Tokyo Broadcasting System Incorporation).
Its name is Under the Bridge.
【此句没语法错误 但不符合表达习惯
改为 it named (called) Under the Bridge 较好 不过原句绝对没有语法上的错误】
以上仅为初中生的观点 知识面还很浅薄 希望有高手能指出毛病
J. 英语高手请进 有无语法错误 为什么
有错误，下面的才对
as you can see that he is a good boy .
as you can see , he is a good boy .