A. 这是一篇需要更改语法的英语作文=L= 英语大大快来帮我一把
嗯fake commodities 是两个词……是排版问题吗？
*第一节可以直接变成一句话：...China today, that...
*the beginning of 可作 the emergence of, beginning我也说不出哪儿不对，但是意思稍微欠那么一点儿……
pharmaceutical (拼错了
这句话的介词似乎有问题……理论上应该是There are lots of fake commodities in XXX instry。那你想表达“从这个行业到那个行业”，这是一个同位语。所以应该是There are lots of fake commodities in various/almost all instries, from pharmaceuticals to food（嗯这里好像instry也不用做重复，可以这样直接说东西）
buy这个动词强调动作，这句话也就变成了“很多人害怕他们会去买假货”。可以变成“have bought（买到了假货）”或者“will get（会买到假货）”
“In order to..."一句，我的理解是”为了放心，所以人们倾向于高价购买商品“？如果是这样的话，”make people assured“加上之后主语是另一个they在这样的上下文中有让”别人“放心的意思。可写作"In order to be assured, customers tend to..."
high price 是两个词？但是这个地方也不能用high price，不能和spend一起用。可以是to spend a good sum of money/ to buy goods of high price
"in my opinion..."句：首先复数一般不需要和the连用，而且这里也无需特指，所以可以是"A fake commodity is..."或是"Fake commodities are..."
这句话的后半段意思是否是”假货是不良厂商为了牟利（的手段）“？一个是manufactures应作manufacturers。句子也有一些语法问题，如果我理解的句意没错的话……保留一下你原文的词句，这句话的翻译可作"In my opinion, unscrupulous manufacturers proce fake procts in order to generate maximum profits"。 这里 to reap benefits 不妥，这主要是褒义，或者隐喻的用法。
I think this must be? might be?可能是原文笔误
*中文中虽说”和什么有关“，英文中常直接写作”有什么引起/引发了什么“，但似乎并不怎么重要= =
*既然这里说了"Internationally"，不如上一节的开头也说"domestically"，也显得结构比较完整
"The reason"一句应作"The reason is thatChina has too many fake commodities"原文中缺少从剧中的动词，也一般不那么说
"In order to"一句，是否是指”为了中国的形象和人们的安全“？In order to是连词词组，后面必须跟着动词（所以in order to ensure是对的）。可作"In order to rebrand China's image/re-image China and to ensure..."。事实上，表达”为了某样东西“的时候可直接使用介词for，因此也可作"for the image of china and the safety of..."
"the safety of people",此处应该去掉原句中的介词，或者保留介词变成"...of the people in China"——因为介词表示限定，必须有特指。事实上，不如改成"...of Chinese citizens"，避免词语重复……（不知道你是什么标准的作文要求哈
"can not"应作"should not"，前者是“不可能（被虚假广告骗）”的意思
*secondly前面得分号那里其实可以断句？
"the supervision ability"应作"supervisory abilities"，或直接作"improve their supervision"
"circumstance be solved"处，circumstance所指的“情况”不是中文里有问题的“情况”，只是一种描述的“情况”。所以这里还是应该用"problem be solved"
最后的"persecution"我不太确定你的想法……persecution”一般指政治上的迫害。如果表达“不再受假货的荼毒”这样的话可作“be free from the threats of fake commodities”(不再受假货的威胁)
注：标注星号的只是用词问题，其余的是语法问题。
嗯其实写完了之后想也许你只想让我帮你改完把成品给你就好了……但总之我还是把大概的理由罗列了一下，希望能对你有帮助
因为只要求改语法所以就只改了一些语法（可能没改全（应该不会改错（喂
希望你能加油哦！不知道你这篇文章是哪种考试用的文章，除了语法以外英语写作还有其他技巧上的也可以多注意一下
其实英语语法不算语言里面很难得，想想我们中文多微妙啊他们可死板了……我觉得多看看记记下一篇就不会有问题啦（何况网络翻译君自己的语法也……
另：顺手输入了fake commodity搜索，发现了 My view on fake commodities的例文，也许对你有帮助。
http://www.360abc.com/article/2135.html
B. 大家的英文文章语法都是自己修改的吗
Competition and Coorporation：
First of all, I think competition has a more important influence than coorperation.
In the whole society, people never be satisfied with what they owned and they just want to gain more,such as resources and rooms, etc.
For example, people want to gain the biggest benefit by competition in a business rather than achieving the benefits distribution equally by coorperation.
In addition to this, even people's life has a close relationship with competition.
Since human beings were born, people have been alive by continually competition. Therefore, now, the whole world is a highly civilizated society by continually developing.
In a word, I think the importance of competition is bigger than coorperation.
C. 求一篇英语作文，，语法错误多不碍事，我可以自己修改，，
我的理想——魔术师
呵呵!听到这个题目,也许会有人感到很奇怪!也许会有人问我说:"魔术师,有什么好的.只不过是一些骗人的把戏!"但是我想成为的不是骗人的魔术师而是真正的魔术大师.
有时,我也想成为一名魔术师.因为我想用我神奇的魔力来改变这个地球.
有时,我想成为一名魔术师.因为我想用我神奇的魔力来让天更蓝,水更清.为什么?为什么现在的人们这么对待大自然.难道没有人去组织么?不,不是这样的.人们不是这么残忍的我门曾经去尝试阻止过.但是没有用,如果我真的是一个魔术师,我会用我神奇的魔力来改变这些,来改变现在这些让心痛的事情,我会用魔力把这些垃圾彻彻底底的消除掉,不会早让它污染到空气.土壤.让"污染"这个词语永远在字典里消失.
有时,我也想成为一名魔术师.因为我想让我神奇的魔力来让地球的每一个角落都变成绿色.现在有许许多多的人们为了钱把树木砍伐掉.也许他们只考虑到眼前的利益.但是他们真的不知道后果么?还是明知故犯?这些失去的永远也补不回来了.如果,我真的是一名魔术师,我会用我的魔力来弥补这些,用我的咒语来打动这些人,希望他们能和我们一起来创建美好的家园.
有时,我也想成为一名魔术师,我想让我神气的魔力来改变我的家园,校园,把我的校园变成一个四周都是树.一眼望出去.天是那么的蓝,在蓝天的照耀下,草是那么的绿.树又是那么的高大.如果我是一名魔术师,我用我神奇的魔力,为太阳画上一张笑脸.
这不过是一种无畏的想象,我只是希望告诉大家,我们大家每一个人都是神奇的魔术师,用咱们的手去改变我们美好的家园把!让我们的家园更美丽,漂亮把!
D. 英语作文修改，主要在句子文章结构和语法上，更高级一点。（电脑自动评分，应付电脑就行）
改了改当中不太对的地方
When facing work, we may have such a question--why we work. Some people think that work is to earn a living. Nonetheless, the rich are still working. So, I think we work to realize our self-value and prove ourselves fundamentally.
For one thing, work makes us valuable to society. When we work, we can not only support our families, but also create social value. In addition, we also benefit others at the same time. And finally we gain the inner validation.
For another thing, work gives us a chance to prove our abilities. If we do a good job, we are telling others that we have strong ability and others will approve and respect us, which means that we gain the endorsement of others.
No matter waht inner validation or endorsement of others is, they are all for proving our existence is meaningful. So everyone ought to try his best to make contributions to the society positively.
E. 英语作文语法修改
Half year before, when I first came to the U.S.,
since I took ENG100, I have taken EAP 121 and EAP 131.
F. 英语作文求语法和句式修改，谢谢
Nowadays, a word called “competent” is widely used in the society, which caused stressful atomosphere among people. To accomplish their goals, people try their best to accomplish their work only for more money and fame. Thus, people are easy to get more pressure from both work and life, and that’s the reason why people’s average weight are increasing but their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
It is well-known that more stress may cause people getting more fat. Because some people don’t keep to a regular time to do the proper things they should and may stay up late in the night for hours. For example, my history teacher is 24 years now but since she has taught 30 classes for a week and what's more she haven't the time to relax, however, she’s now gaining more fat and can easily become ill. Learning this from my teacher, we can make a conclusion that work under high pressure not only makes people unhealthy but also gives negative influence on life and regular work..
Moreover, stress also can easily make people get angry, which plays an important part in people’s unhealthy lifestyle. This is because when people get angry, they choose to eat more foods than before to eliminate their bad tempers. Meanwhile, when some people get angry, they may give up doing sports as they should everyday, and this in turn, causes the lack of exercises. By and by, people pay less attention on living a peaceful and healthful life but instead they chose to live a irregular and high-stressed life in the end, which also leads to their attitude towards the world a more negative one.
From what I have discussed above, it’s a great way for people reaching for their hopes. And I think little stress could make people be more successful. So, I reckon that people need a more peaceful life to enjoy health and also to enjoy true life.
修改了一下用词语法和句型~~希望对你有用~
G. 英语作文修改.就修改语法的，，拜托了。。
Dear Ms.Lee
The new semester has begun.In this semester.I plan to preview before English classes.I will spend thirty minutes to one hour on it in the day.And in class,I will take notes when necessary. I want to be more active in class,so I will ask at least one question every class and be active speaking.
After class,I will follow the requirements of the teacher to do exercises.In every morning ,I will read texts aloud from 7:25-7:45 am except Sunday.
When I have a rest every week,I will practise my oral English 30 minutes twice .And I plan to memorize 6 words everyday except Sunday.
Of course,the review is necessary.I will spend one hour every Sunday to review what has been learned in the past week.
H. 有没有专门的英文语法修改软件
易改
I. 哪里有能够修改英语作文语法的网站
你去文国网看看
上面几乎涵盖所有的小语种
网站：
www.vechina.com
如果满意版请采权纳。
J. 论文英文怎么修改啊，我总觉得自己好多语法错误。
你觉得自己出现好多语法错误，那是你对英语语法学的不精。对于这一方面的问题回就是必须把语法学到位，熟练掌握答：1、十大词类，每种词性的用法特点及其在句子中的句法功能和位置。2、动词时态，十六种时态的用法特点及其句子结构和连用的时间状语必须明确，运用自如。3、动词语态，明确动词的主、被动语态，并且何时用被动语态更贴切。4、动词的语气，对于一个句子是用陈述语气、疑问语气、祈使语气还是虚拟语气，要根据表达的需要恰当定位。5、非谓语动词的用法，固定短语以及固定搭配等的正确记忆和运用。6、主谓一致的情况。7、简单句、并列句和复合句的正确使用以及句子成分的正确分析等等。所以，要明确自己的错误在哪，才能够正确纠正错误，甚至不再犯错误，还要注意中西文化语言表达的不同。 另外，对于论文英文如何润色，我的建议是要注意正确使用形容词、副词等修饰成分和关联词，以及长句子，即并列句和复合句以及高级句子的使用，如果一味的使用简单句子描写，即使文章中没有错误，但也不会有多大的起色，反而会使文章显得生硬、苍白无力，更拿不到高分。因此，写作时要根据情况适时润色，根据需要恰当而正确表达。