① 求检查这篇英语作文，有没有语法错误或单词错误，求改错，拜托一定要仔细检查(>﹏<)
an old man
② 我的英语写作总有许多语法错误,导致失分严重,请问怎样才能减少这写错误
如果你想写出地道的英语文章的话，你可以多读出自外国的报纸，可以模仿其中的句版子写法，建议有权2份报纸，1。
21世纪英文报
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中国日报~~~~~
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份报纸第一个比较浅显易懂
适合于大学生
第二个
词汇量比较大一点。
③ 英语作文，检查是否有语法错误
This essay is crap. Anyway, I correct it to look better.
The progress of science has made great changes to people's lives. Almost everyone has his own private car. In the street, everywhere is a busy scene. There are a lot of people and vehicles. However, people never stop to interact. Nowaday, we seldom home-cook, we often eat in a restaurant. In the evening, the home is very quiet, very few family will have the whole family members together. The street, brightly lit, is forever fill with noise. Whatever things you need, you can go to the store to buy. As such, family meeting becomes less. People just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's mind is only thinking of money. The former happy life has disappeared. Everyone needs to slow down and enjoy life.
④ 英语作文 求帮忙检查一下错误 比如语法和标点 马上考研
I am和heard时态不一致，beautiful international两个形容词不能叠用，景点的英文可以用专places of interests。
个人意见，reap ... experience这么翻译有点欠妥属，还有可以用“xxx（some places）is worth visiting”代替“you can go to xxx”。
加油好运～
⑤ 英语作文检查语法错误（回答后再加分）
An important lesson
I learned an important lesson in a school trip when I was in grade six. Our school always held trips at the end of each semester. All the students waited with excitement for that day. We filled up our bag with snacks the day before the trip, then I went to a beautiful park with all my classmate by school bus.
We followed the teachers to walk around the park first, and the history of the park were introced. Later on, the teachers divided us into a few groups, so we can see more details with smaller groups. However, we got some different opinions about going in which directions. Then my best friend and I decided to visit on our own. There were a lot of trees that are over a hundred years, and the lake looked green with the reflection of the trees. Some people were rowing boats in the center of the lake. We also rent a boat for half an hour; it was so romantic. After that, we wanted to have some new fun. We saw an old man, who had many white pigeons stood in the trees. My friend loved pigeons, so I asked the old man if we can feed the birds. He agreed. We put the corns on the ground and all the pigeons flied around us; they were as beautiful as snow. We had a great time to play with them. The sky was getting dark, and we remembered it was time to go back to the school bus. But we forgot where the entrance of the park was. We walked around and around, there was no one here except us. I almost started to cry. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. That was my teacher. I know that the school bus had waited for us over two hours - only two of us were missing. All the teachers were very worried.
The teacher ordered us to write a paragraph on realizing our mistakes. I was so regretful; I learned that I should always listen to the teachers and stay in the group, or it will be very dangerous. I will never do that again.
改完了。表示楼主思路很通畅，但是要注意断句。句号用的太多了，其实有些地方可以改为逗号的说。(^_^)
⑥ 英语写作常见语法错误，比如run on sentence,misplaced/dangling modifier,wordy expression等
英语写作常见语法错误
1.主谓不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
2.句子成分残缺不全
We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
We should read books may be useful to us. (误)
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
3.句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
4.词类混淆
It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
5.动词时态、语态的误用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
⑦ 自己写英语作文怎么才能检查语法上的错误
Well, that all depends on how your English is and nothing else.
⑧ 英语 英语作文 语法错误
你好，
首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”，不内过意容思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。
第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。
如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！
⑨ 自己写英语作文怎么才能检查语法上的错误 自己英语水平有限,
虽然WORD是一个办法,但考试时能用word吗?
建议你多做改错题,能找出别人的错误也当然回可以发现自己的不足.不要一个答词一个词地检查,要整句地观察,分析句子结构,从而找出错误.
最基本的是巩固语法知识,多用,熟悉了下意识也会写对.
⑩ 自己写英语作文怎么才能检查语法上的错误
虽然WORD是一个办法来,但考试时源能用word吗?建议你多做改错题,能找出别人的错误也当然可以发现自己的不足.不要一个词一个词地检查,要整句地观察,分析句子结构,从而找出错误.最基本的是巩固语法知识,多用,熟悉了下意识也会写对.