㈠ 急！！这篇英语作文有语法错误吗
有错误。Besides, my hometown develop the eco-tourism, make it popular with ...... 权且不说选词、用词，句子结构就错了。在make 前面加：which即可。内还有，the economy in my hometown have benefited..., the economy 不是看作复数吧？？ 怎么容用 have 了？？
㈡ 这篇英语作文有什么语法错误
Thursday April 12th rainy
Today is(改为) really too bad!When I opened an umbrella,Ifound my purse is(改为was) missing.there was (改为were)some money and(去掉and) my photos and so on in the purse.I looked for it everywhere,but still can't found(改为couldn't find). I'm(改为I was) very worried to run home to tell my parents。(改为.)They called the police.I hope (改为hoped)they can (改为could)help us(改为me) to find my purse.Few hours later,a police called us to go to the police station to get purse.I looked and sure(改为was sured) this is (改为was)my purse.Thank goodness!I really thanked the police and picked up my purse person.(最后一句话改为I really thanked the police because they picked up my purse.)
㈢ 英语作文中常出现的语法错误有哪些
时态 三人称单数的变化 单词过去式，过去分词的变化 固定句型的用法（如：打电回话的固定模式……） 固定词组（答如：there be) 动名词作主语谓语动词用单数等的语法 还有like后面接动词的ing形式，would like+动原这些易混淆的地方……
㈣ 英语作文，尽量不要有语法错误。但是可以有一点点
My opinion on rise of population
As the population of the globe rises rapidly, many problems have arisen: insufficiency of grain's supply, high unemployment rate, roaring of house prices and so on. As a developing country, China is a populous nation whose main instry is agriculture. Although a few people are rich, the majority of Chinese are below the poverty line. Anyway,we should persevere in family plan policy to slow the rise of the population in order to relieve the press of shortage of resources.
网络教育团队【海纳百川团】
㈤ 请问这篇英语作文有什么语法错误
When I was in Grade 2 at senior school, I was a positive and hardworking student who had lofty ideals. However, nothing was satisfactory. I tried my best to get good grades in every test, but none of the tests was satisfactory. (At that time—时间不明确) I began to be lazy and negative and began to be addicted to computer games.
One afternoon when the class was over, I stayed on my seat waiting every to leave the classroom. Five minutes later, no one was in the classroom except me. I stood up and stepped up to the platform. I excitedly turned on the computer that was used to play the PPT to play computer games. In the following thirty minutes, my fingers constantly tapped the keyboard like playing the piano. And I totally abandoned myself to computer games enjoying the pleasant sensation the computer game gave me. I was so intoxicated that I didn’ feel the passage of time. Suddenly I was disturbed by a cough. I subconsciously raised my head and looked around. To my surprise, my head teacher stood still by the door staring at me. ”Yang why don’t you go to the canteen?” he asked.
I falteringly answered, ”I was just studying.” and left the classroom in a hurry.
In the evening when I was studying I received a message from my head teacher. It read,”Yang, you don’t have to study all day. You can alternate work with rest. I believe you will get good grades. If you have any questions, you can consult me and I will be happy to help you. Let’s make efforts together!” Sense of guilt rose in my mind. See what I have done. I lied to my teacher! I realized that if I didn’t study hard, I would let not only my head teacher but also myself down. At that moment, I decided to work hard and finish my ideal university to thank my teacher for his care. I would never say Never!(最后一句话，读不懂)
㈥ 我的这篇英语作文有语法错误吗
句子开头是不是没复复制制全？
第一个：训练营是training camp，你是写多了个n吧。而且这句后面的从句如果是要表达为了跟人比赛所以邀请人的话我觉得用so that we can比较好，比赛划船可以用have a boat racing。
第二个：时间和日期在英文里是分开的，反正我是没见过时间+of+月日这种结构：其次日期的表达是写先写月份后写序数词的日期，表示某月的第几天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
㈦ 看英语作文有没语法错误
楼主你好，您的短文很精彩，
您的这篇英语作文没有语法错误，但是有一处单词专错误：There
are
a
lot
of
problem
on
the
earth
such
as
water
pollution
and
air
pollution.（您文章的第属一行）应该变成=可数名词变复数时应该加s。
㈧ 一个英语作文，有没有语法错误
你这完全是中式英语，语法错误太多了。
㈨ 我这篇英语作文有哪些语法错误
1 increaseing--increasing 2 Socreateing Green Campus -- So creating green campuses
3 accord mederning standard--meet the need of modern ecation
4 Creating a Green Campus is not only means that pay more attention in protecting the environment but aslo means that improving the manners and try the best in studying.----Creating a Green Campus not only means paying more attention to protecting the environment but aslo means improving the studying method and trying one's best to study.
5 A clean campus and a positive learning environment could accelerate students studying harder and persist their dreams. -----A clean campus and a positive learning environment could get the students to work harder and be more active.
6 As far as my personal experience and best knowledge,in order to creating a Green Campus ,i suppose that we could do not throw rubbish everywhere and learn our subjects harder. ----As far as I know,in order to create a Green Campus ,I suppose that we shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere and should learn our subjects harder.
㈩ 这篇英语作文有没有语法错误求指点。
总体来说写得很好，是一篇很有想法的文章，其背后隐含的思考也很有深度。有一些语法和拼写错误，但是瑕不掩瑜。以下为修改建议：
注意时态一致性。文章开头即说“It was a long, long, and horrible dream”，后面的内容也是围绕dream展开，所以描述dream的内容都应与开头句的一般过去时保持一致。如这一句：At the beginning, if anyone is(was) in touble, it would call that person and give(gave) him or her the precise solution. But if they ask(asked) it, 'who are you?', it would never tell them.
拼写错误。最后一句maters应该为matters，要细心哦！另外最后一句整理一下：But later, it(可改this cunning evil，避免it过多） didn't only(可改just) call them when they are(were) in trouble,(.) It would call them anytime anywhere(anytime anywhere可直接用，不加and，表示随时随地）, and commanded(command，省略would，与前面的would call保持一致）them to do the matters which they're sick of.
其它搭配和连接问题。WIth the help of '10,000', people seemed to live in a proctive way. It was like a cult, and massive people became crazy about it.
最后再说一次，我很喜欢你这篇作文。后面应该还有内容吧，要写下去哦！希望对您有帮助；）