英语作文语法错误反思

⑴ 英语 英语作文 语法错误

你好，

首先，第一句没有什么问题，只是我不明白你那句“arouse the attention from all walks of life”是什么意思。“Prevention of the mountain”可改成“impediment of the mountain”，不内过意容思差不太多，我只是觉得prevention听起来有点怪。“Excellent scenery”可改成“magnificent scenery”。下一句“detect”改成“notice”吧，有点奇怪。“Has conquer”应该改成“has conquered”。最后一句我也没看能解释一下吗。

第二段第一句把“but”改成“yet”比较好吧。“Dazzing”是啥，你是想说“dazing”还是“dazzling”？“MaYun is greatly robust”把is改成“was”。剩下的就没啥问题了！我给你推荐一个查英语语法的网站，还蛮好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的点。

如果有帮助到你请采纳一下，谢谢！

⑵ 英语作文检查语法错误（回答后再加分）

An important lesson
I learned an important lesson in a school trip when I was in grade six. Our school always held trips at the end of each semester. All the students waited with excitement for that day. We filled up our bag with snacks the day before the trip, then I went to a beautiful park with all my classmate by school bus.
We followed the teachers to walk around the park first, and the history of the park were introced. Later on, the teachers divided us into a few groups, so we can see more details with smaller groups. However, we got some different opinions about going in which directions. Then my best friend and I decided to visit on our own. There were a lot of trees that are over a hundred years, and the lake looked green with the reflection of the trees. Some people were rowing boats in the center of the lake. We also rent a boat for half an hour; it was so romantic. After that, we wanted to have some new fun. We saw an old man, who had many white pigeons stood in the trees. My friend loved pigeons, so I asked the old man if we can feed the birds. He agreed. We put the corns on the ground and all the pigeons flied around us; they were as beautiful as snow. We had a great time to play with them. The sky was getting dark, and we remembered it was time to go back to the school bus. But we forgot where the entrance of the park was. We walked around and around, there was no one here except us. I almost started to cry. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. That was my teacher. I know that the school bus had waited for us over two hours - only two of us were missing. All the teachers were very worried.
The teacher ordered us to write a paragraph on realizing our mistakes. I was so regretful; I learned that I should always listen to the teachers and stay in the group, or it will be very dangerous. I will never do that again.

改完了。表示楼主思路很通畅，但是要注意断句。句号用的太多了，其实有些地方可以改为逗号的说。(^_^)

⑶ 英语作文 语法错误 考研

with the passage of time 应该是没有这样的用法的，可能有但是不符合英国人对语言的用法，后面回那句话你用了答两个谓语： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用后置定语或者定语从句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life会更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴随状语，这里用定语从句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成为了这个句子的第二个谓语，你可以用and把句子隔开。
这篇文章主要就是句子中出现多个谓语，以及谋些词组的固定搭配不熟悉，建议多记一些固定的词组，这个作文大概可以打十二分左右吧

⑷ 英语检讨书600字

the mistakes that he would like a lot of things, reflect on a lot of things that they are very remorseful, very air itself committed to the iron law school, but also a profound understanding of the seriousness of their mistakes, committed by their own error is a shame.
schools in a school on the repeated injunctions, has repeatedly stressed that school discipline school to remind students not in violation of school rules, but i did not, then schools and teachers in mind, there is no attention to the teacher to say, there is no emphasis on the promulgation of the important issues in schools, as if they were heeded, these should not be. is also a lack of respect for teachers. teachers should bear in mind that in mind, then, the school discipline school rules promulgated minds.
after that, i would like to cool for a long time, the mistakes i have not only brought trouble to their own, held up their own learning. such an act and i also created the school and its adverse effects, damage to the school's management system. in the middle of the students also led to adverse effects. since i am a person's mistakes, it may cause other students to follow, the impact of class discipline, grade discipline, the discipline of the school is also a kind of destruction, but also have great expectations of their teachers and parents is also a types of injury, as well as other students in an irresponsible parent.
each school will wish to see their students achieve high academic achievers, all-round development and establish a good image, but also to make our schools have a good image. students have every hope that a good school for their own learning environment to study and life. including myself, have to have a good learning environment, but a good learning environment that we have to rely on common maintenance to set up and i myself have made a mistake this time to undermine the school environment that is should not, if the students do each and every mistake, then there is no formation of a good learning environment for students violating school regulations should also be given punishment.
i stayed two weeks at home, and own a lot, but also realize that they committed a very serious mistake, i know, cause such huge losses, i should have for their own pay for the mistakes, i am willing to bear although it is the responsibility can not afford, especially for major colleges and universities in the ecation of people in this error should not shirk its primary responsibility.
i accept criticism in good faith and are willing to accept the deal given by the school.
excuse me, teacher! i made a serious question of principle. i know who my teacher is very angry school. i also know that the students did not breach regulations, not inconsistent with discipline and do their own thing is a basic responsibility, but also the most basic obligations. but i did not even do the most basic. now, made a really big mistake, i am deeply deeply regret it. i will take this incident as a mirror and discipline at all times conct themselves and their criticism and ecation, and consciously accept supervision. i would like to know shame and alert, to know shame and to forge ahead, to remedy the situation of shame as a driving force, to study hard.
i have to go through this incident, to raise awareness of my thoughts, and strengthen accountability measures. or would like to make their own learning, learning for me to be the most important for the survival of future employment are very important. i can see now is very small, i still have the ability to fight. i would also like to fight once again to work hard in the hope that a good teacher to give me an opportunity to students, i will turn over, and really serious to learn, as full of life, this course at home is also delayed, schools the courses have been very tight and very hard to learn, learning to live in the future, i will learn, the classes are making an effort to hurry up.
just remember to enter the school, class and sub-class of teachers have high expectations of me, can learn to accept, but in discipline problems in schools under the iron law of the repeated injunctions, in school discipline and strict environment regulations i committed such a serious mistake, the school should be punished to me, and i do not know how many times saying, principals, teachers, i was wrong, i was wrong. mom, dad and i are wrong, i was wrong

⑸ 英语考试考砸了。要写英文检讨100字。主要是因为词汇量不足，语法错太多，平时不够认真。要用英文哦！

I am feeiling very sorry for not doing well on my english exam.
I am, hereby, doing some self-reflection.
The reasons that I did not do well on my exam would be the following:
first, lacking of quantity of vocabulary; second, too many grammatical mistakes; and third, the most important one, i did not review well enough.
I, starting from this moment, will put as much time as i should on reviewing stuff i learn everyday.
Specifically, I will review the vocabulary, ensure mastering at least 5 new words per day; and I will make sentences with the grammar I learn.
I'm sure I will do better on my next exam.

⑹ 英语考试反思 500字

尊敬的老师：
您好！
时光匆匆,转眼间考试也已结束,试卷也发下来了.望着试卷上的分数,我惊讶了.因为这和我应有的水平相差甚远， 我在此向你说一声对不起，我辜负了您对我的殷切希望。在这次期末英语考试中我成绩十分不理想，不仅伤透了你的心，也让我无地自容。于是，今天，我怀着十二万分的愧疚和懊悔写下这份检讨书，以向您表示我对不好好学英语这种恶劣行为的歉意及打死也不再不好学英语的决心。
早在您刚带我们的时候，您就已经三令五申，一再强调，全班同学，一定要好好学习，认真学英语。直到现在，老师的反复教导言犹在耳，严肃认真的表情犹在眼前，我深为震撼，也经深刻认识到此事的重要性，于是我一再告诫自己要把此事当成头等大事来抓，不能辜负老师对我们的一片苦心。也应此，我现在开始自我反省.
正如高尔基说过的那样---当你把一件是看得十分重要的时候，磨难和失败就接踵而来了。就像在这次考试前，我因为太想考好太紧张导致我焦虑失眠，第二天精神状态极其不好。但归根结底，还是由于我学得不牢固，要不然就是精神不好也不会考这个分。忆起当时，我当时就因为太焦虑不好好复习！但，悔亦晚矣，悔亦晚矣！而其他那些诸如粗心大意，没看清 题目的事情我就不想多说了，我知道这些理由说出来都是不能成立的，因为，这所有的问题都只能归结于我没有学扎实，还未能达到一个现代中学生该具有地认识问题的水平。未能对老师们的辛勤劳作做出回报，我越来越清晰地感觉到我是一个对自己，对父母，对老师不负责的人
对于我（们）没有考好的事情，所造成的严重后果如下：
1、 折磨了老师的精神，这样的折磨可能让老师工作分心，造成更为严重的后果。
2、 影响个人综合水平的提高，使自身在本能提高的条件下未能得到提高，违背父母的意愿，实乃不孝。
这次期末考试，我考的不好，在此深刻检讨，希望以后不要再考这个分数……
学英语，最重要的就是读，听，背，只要这三个能100%做到的话，那英语成绩，没有100分，也能95分。 但是，我却没有做到，没有听，没写好，没背好，什么都只做了三分之一，导致成绩不理想……
此次考试后，我深刻检讨，认为深藏在我思想中的致命错误有以下几点：
1、 思想觉悟不高，对重要事项重视严重不足。就算是有认识，也没能在行动上真正实行起来。
2、 平时生活懒散。如果不是因为懒散、粗心大意、记忆力水平低，我怎么会把老师教的东西学不扎实？又怎么会考不出分？
我平时学习不认真，考试成绩便很好地回报了我，为此,我决定以后好好学习，天天向上，在此，我订了一份计划：
一、学好课本知识。
学习的最重要阶段是预习。也就是说在老师上课之前，先得自己学习一下课文，在预习中要尽量主动地解决问题，把不懂的问题记下来，在上课时跟老师、同学一起学习讨论。课本要反复阅读，直到把问题看的透彻了、明白了。
二、注意课外积累。
适当的课外阅读是很有必要的。进入了紧张的学习阶段，我们不可能再有大量的课余时间进行阅读，因此，阅读时要有选择。我们应广泛浏览各种书籍和报纸杂志，从电视、广播、网络上获取信息，并有条理的做下笔记。要关心社会生活，了解社会动态，使自己的思想要不断进步。这样不仅能使我们积累更多知识，更能丰富我们的生活。
三、加强写作训练。
我们学习英语的一个重要应用方面就是写作。提高写作能力要从点点滴滴做起。课外积累是写作的基础，要学会对文章的细读，精彩的篇章最好能背诵。如果腹内空空，是写不出好文章的。除此之外，注意观察生活、感悟生活，坚持不懈的记日记，有感而发的写随笔，都是帮助我们写好作文的有效途径。写好的作文要反复修改，也可以请教老师、同学的意见，精益求精。
但我想仅靠以上几点还是不够的,我还就该拥有几点科学应试技巧.于是,我根据我自己的实际情况想出了几点.第一点:拿到考卷后,应把考卷整体审视一遍,看一看哪些题比较容易,哪些题比较难.第二点:先从简单的题做起,把那些好拿的分数全部拿过来.第三点:如果有选择题不会,乱蒙也要写上一个.因为如果你写了你就有的机会,总比没有机会好.第四点:遇到难题,实在写不出来的话,就过.不要死死地盯着那道题,而忽略了别的题.第五点:考完后,认真地检查,看看自己有没有把题目看错或抄错.
在下一次考试中,我一定会尽自己最大的努力做到最好.，以我的实际行动来表明我的决心。
如果你是真心想检讨的话，建议你还是不要抄的好，要自己写。考不好又有什么关系，下次努力就好了，我也有没考好的时候。
祝你好运！！！！

⑺ 求改正我的英语作文的语法错误。

1 higher paying -high paid
Professionals who make -get这里make不对
there are several benefits to a good ecation-to 改为for

2 condition was the biggest obstacle at me-at 改为for
So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china表意不清，我不知道你想表达内什么意容思

⑻ 英语考试没考好反思的英语作文800字

写作思路：从文章的写作目的、中心主旨入手，以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来，正文：

But when I saw the bright red handwriting, I felt as if the world was still. A low score is like a sharp sword that deeply hurts my competitive heart, and cold water falls on my face, which makes me more sober. There are two main reasons.

但当我看到那鲜红的红笔字迹时，我感觉仿佛这个世界都静止了。偏低的分数犹如一把利剑深深刺痛了我争强好胜的内心，也如冰冷的水倒在我的脸上，使我更加清醒。试分析主要原因主要有以下两点：

Hearing loss is too serious. I am very clear about the reasons for this defect, because I have hardly listened to tapes since the beginning of school, and I find reasons for not practicing listening every day, which leads to a serious loss of marks in the listening part.

听力部分失分过于严重。关于造成这一缺点的原因我是非常清楚的，因为开学到现在我几乎没有怎么听过磁带，每天都为自己的不练习听力找理由，所以导致听力部分的失分严重。

Listening, for good English learners, is not to lose points, but there are no small problems. After this blow, I have made up my mind to practice listening. No matter how late I learn every day, I will spare time to practice. I believe that with my efforts, listening will no longer be a part of lowering English scores.

听力，对于好的英语者来说是不能丢分的项目，但次却出现了不小的小题。经过这次的打击我已经下定决心一定要练习听力，不论每天学到多晚，都要抽出时间来练习。我相信，经过我的努力听力会不再是拉低英语成绩的部分。

This test is to a large extent the summary of my recent English learning and the exposure of learning problems, so this test has an extremely important role in improving my learning methods.

这次的考试在很大程度上是对我近期英语学习的总结及学习问题的暴露，所以这次考试对我改进学习方法有着极其重要的作用。

Only by finding problems in time and solving them quickly can we be a qualified learner. I believe that with my unremitting efforts, my English score will be steadily improved.

只有及时发现问题并迅速地解决问题才配做一个合格的学习者。我相信，在我坚持不懈地努力下，我的英语成绩定会稳步提升。

⑼ 英语作文评析，重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文) 详细说一下错的地方，谢谢

一，第一句去掉for.像next month，this weekend此类时间短语在句子里作状语前面一般不加介词。二，专第三行属We should 后面having应为动词原形have，wearing应为wear，因为should是情态动词，后接动词原形三，We all welcome to everybody算是chinglish中式英语，建议改为Everybody is welcome.例如平常我们说的不客气You are welcome.四，建议句语句之间适当加些连接词，如and之类的就行，是文章显得像个整体，而不只是几个句子的罗列。个人浅见，相互学习哈。