1. 帮我找依照以下一段英语有没有语法错误
Ha,
ha!You
will
not
live改为You
will
be
not
alive.就可以了。其他的没有错误，写的
挺好的
。
2. 麻烦哪位英语好的帮我看下下面这段英语有些什么语法错误，改正一下。
help do sth 和 help to do sth 都可以。
没有语法错误，Good job！只是个人觉得Besides之后又来个了what's more，都是此外的意思，回将what's more 改为答last but not the least 如何？
建议将句子加在第二句， relaxing 之后，when之前
There are more and more poeple who have the problem of obesity and doing sports is the best way for them to lose weight.
3. 下面这段英文可有语法错误麻烦高手帮忙看一下。。。。
spirit其实不如抄用awareness好，你体会袭一下。第一句拆开来吧，别用长句，这种长句看着不舒服的。第二句And I have a strong (不是stronger, sorry英语里面没有这样的比较的，中文是通的，可是英语里不对）ability to adapt(此处没有to)the new environment,......and various(不要用diverse，diverse一般形容物种多样性还差不多)work pressure（压力是压力，不是force,force是指物理上的，pressure是指精神上的）。后面是 having strong ability(没有the)。整个改掉，改成Moreover， I'm curious about new things in my life and always try to experience it.Besides, I'm very creative.这个比你原来好点。
另祝找工作成功啊，我也大四来着~加油
4. 麻烦哪位英语好的帮我看下下面这段英语有些什么语法错误，改正一下。
说实话，你写的基本没有语法错误，但没有什么出彩的地方。Nowadays more and more people get overweight,we can learn that exercise is the best way to lose weight and keep fit.People need to play sports because it is a good way to relax. When we are tired of work or study, we can play football, basketball, table tennis and so on to relax ourselves. It can not only relax our brains and eyes but also helps us to build our bodies. I think it's really helpful to both our health and our study or work. Besides, It can help us make lots of new friends and communicate with each other well. What's more, it is good for teamwork when we play sports. And it can also make us feel comfortable and refreshed.
5. 下面这段英文如何翻译有没有语法错误
我的大学生活即将结束，（college life 应该是campus life)
我下一阶段的生活将是投入社会活动
next period of my life is to involve in social activities.
当我在四年的大学生活中，我常常提醒自己提高自己的能力，努力提高自己
During my four years campus life, I always reminded myself of improving the abilities, kept going on, kept making progress
我全力投入大学的各种活动。
课外，我读许多专业和辅修的书籍。
I read many academic books about my major subject and optional subject outside class.
我在日常生活中很简朴
I keep simplicity in daily life
我热爱体育，热爱生活，对于未来充满形象
I love sports , I love my life, I am certainly confidence with my future.
我相信，能力才是最重要的，
I believe, It is the ability that most matters.
是的我能行。
Yes , I can do it.
6. 帮忙看一下下面这段英文有什么语法错误没
Three months after-----Three months later
goes a graation trip ------makes a graation trip
is launched to Japan ----is launched on Japan
he finds himself is at the gate of the White House ---------he finds himself at the gate of the White House
the 9th selecao 不懂
she lives with her sister since her parents died in an accident.------she has been living with her sister since her parents died in an accident.
She meets Takizawa at the graation trip.---She meets Takizawa ring the graation trip.
粗略的看了看~ 发现几个瑕疵 呵呵 代表的话 没错
7. (好的80分)看一下以下这段英语，有什么语法错误，请纠正，谢谢
We can find there are about 38 percent students failed the exam from this table. They need to change their __study habits_____(学习习惯回).
And as we know there are about 30% students can’答t sleep well at night. Some students maybe sleep just for a little time like me. It is harmful to them. If they didn’t sleep enough, they will not study well next day. So it is very important to develop a good study habit. We should keep in mind that your habits determine your future.
8. 下面这段英语有哪些语法错误，或表达的比较牵强的地方呢哪些地方可以说的更漂亮些
貌似比较中式英语
XiaoZhang,are you free this weekend ? Would you like to go along with me to attend an insurance trade fair in HangZhou .Are you convenient for a 2-day business trip ? Its topic is closely related to our business .Since my secretary XiaoLin is sick ,he in not able to go with me. Considering that you have some related experience in this area, I think you are the best choice to take the place of XiaoLin. I will provide you with some infomation about the important companies that will participate in the fair. At last ,would you be so kind as to book 2 tickets for me from Shanghai to Hangzhou at 9.30 on Saturday. Thank you very much.
注意细节，改了些小词。
希望能帮到你O(∩_∩)O