1. 英语作文改正（包括语法，单词使用不准确等等） 万分感谢！
Last winter holiday,I went to Harbin with my mother. It's very cold in winter.There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world.You must wear warm clothes.The most exciting thing is playing with snow.Skating is also very interesting there. I will' always remember Harbin,for the snow,the ice and all the beautiful things.I love Harbin.
2. 英语作文语法更正
what is your favorite project?
let me tell you.
to learn english is very interesting.
but because of my laziness/ but because i am lazy.
my english is not good.
i will learn english well.
3. 英语作文一篇，麻烦帮忙修改~！（语法，通顺，择辞，优美,逻辑）
THIS IS ME
Hello every,I'm Ekaterina.
I study in(at) 成都七中育才学道分校.My favorite subject is music,I do well in singing and dancing. I believe that music can make people pure,so I want to be a musician when I grow up.There are no borders for music in the world,but if you want to sing to other nations,you should use their languages in songs.When I understand that,I konw the import of learning Enlish.Fortunately,my parents let me learn English when I was a little girl.There are nothing easy in the world,and there are nothing boring in the world.Now,I can speak Enlish well,and also like English very much.
That's all,thank you.
再的都对
4. 帮我看看我自己写的这段英文语法对不对求大神 Hello,friend,I'm glad to r
问题不少
weak up后面逗号改成句号
后面定语从句用法不对，country后面版的that放到know后面
rich后面改句权号
discuss后面加about our 直接discuss business会很奇怪 后面改句号
take改成taken
but后改成didn't pay for it句号
后面你是想说 有什么想知道的直接问我 吗 如果是这样的话 应该是 You can ask me anything that you want to know
后面send改成prepared
最后直接改成 Once you pay for the proct, I will immediately deliver it.
结尾应是：
sincerely
xxx（你的名字或公司名
5. 求帮忙修改一下我的英语作文 语法错误啥的 谢谢拉
“ you always have so much expectations!” I slammed the door as if it could make their mouths shut up and ran away from that house where was full of cold ness and blame. The cold wind in the street blew on my face like a knife and (I sank through the floor). In my parents’ words, it sounded like I had no future anymore, I was so lazy and decadent that i were a pig (for slaughter) .Their requests and expectations were just like a heavy mountain on my back which made me could not breathe.
Walking in the street, I suddenly saw a familiar figure --- Jason, the “king” in my primary school! My memory of childhood was blurry all the time but when I saw his face ,he recalled all the past to me.
Jason was a typical school bully in our primary school. Fights were the normal things for him. I was his deskmate and we were good friends in fact.He looked like didn't care about anything and I bet that he never had a complete class.I have not seen him after graating from the primary school.
I said hello to him, “ How are you recently?”
Jason looked at me as if i asked something embarrassing and an unknown emotion flashed from his eyes, “Hi, it’s been a long time.”
“You must have had a good time now.” I said, “ You are so bright in our perimary school .I remember those things all the time.”
Jason said, “No, in fact, I quited from school and work in a restaurant for a long time.
I suddenly realized that maybe my primary school cl assmate did not live as good as I imagined. His clothes was shabby and his face was also older than ours.
“Why you leave school?” I asked.
“Oh, it is a long story.” Jason said, “Sometime I admire you to have such a responsible parents who concerned of you.”
“How can you think so!” I was really surprised, “ You can’t imagine how noisy they are! They try to keep you studying all the time and give you tasks endless.
“Shut up!” he roared at me and drove mad and i heard the hard,sharp thrusts of his breath. We were in silence for a while and he stared at me in a nearly sympathetic sight. “You don't know what you have and how happy you are now! If my parents had ecated me anything or just care about me , I wouldn't be what I am now!”
Suddenly it was like a hand touching my heart, I realized that parents’ care and control was so rare that could lead me to the correct road. It was like the scissor pruned the askew branches. Maybe it would difficult to obey but it could help you grow up .
“Thank you.” I said to Jason sincerely,for his roar and mention.
I turned back and ran home.I knew I must open that close door.
亲〜小错误太多了咯〜时态、过去时怎么写、大部分我都帮你改过了、还有一句用虚拟语气、括号的是我没看懂你的意思、还有一些搭配意思对的、但不这么用、自己改咯〜
6. 给我纠正一下英语作文的语法错误行么，很急
（1）love不可数，且there be句型用就近原则，所以第一句的are改为is 如下：There is a lot of the love of my parents.
(2)逗号前后的东专西可有修饰关系，所属以第二句中的are可以去掉直接使用形容词 如下： innumerable
（3） 逗号前后的东西一定要有联系，故第三句的 remember 动词原形不能对单独使用，如2所说需要表修饰，且这里为主动记住 如下： remembering also can not finish.
（4）Mum大写
（5）删去of mom and Dad take care,
（6）improve 为提高的意思 disease 为疾病的意思 故最后两句不能说疾病一天一天地提高 所以改为 如下： My disease left me a way day by day【我的病一天天离我更远了】
望采纳 谢谢！
7. 这是一篇需要更改语法的英语作文=L= 英语大大快来帮我一把
嗯fake commodities 是两个词……是排版问题吗？
*第一节可以直接变成一句话：...China today, that...
*the beginning of 可作 the emergence of, beginning我也说不出哪儿不对，但是意思稍微欠那么一点儿……
pharmaceutical (拼错了
这句话的介词似乎有问题……理论上应该是There are lots of fake commodities in XXX instry。那你想表达“从这个行业到那个行业”，这是一个同位语。所以应该是There are lots of fake commodities in various/almost all instries, from pharmaceuticals to food（嗯这里好像instry也不用做重复，可以这样直接说东西）
buy这个动词强调动作，这句话也就变成了“很多人害怕他们会去买假货”。可以变成“have bought（买到了假货）”或者“will get（会买到假货）”
“In order to..."一句，我的理解是”为了放心，所以人们倾向于高价购买商品“？如果是这样的话，”make people assured“加上之后主语是另一个they在这样的上下文中有让”别人“放心的意思。可写作"In order to be assured, customers tend to..."
high price 是两个词？但是这个地方也不能用high price，不能和spend一起用。可以是to spend a good sum of money/ to buy goods of high price
"in my opinion..."句：首先复数一般不需要和the连用，而且这里也无需特指，所以可以是"A fake commodity is..."或是"Fake commodities are..."
这句话的后半段意思是否是”假货是不良厂商为了牟利（的手段）“？一个是manufactures应作manufacturers。句子也有一些语法问题，如果我理解的句意没错的话……保留一下你原文的词句，这句话的翻译可作"In my opinion, unscrupulous manufacturers proce fake procts in order to generate maximum profits"。 这里 to reap benefits 不妥，这主要是褒义，或者隐喻的用法。
I think this must be? might be?可能是原文笔误
*中文中虽说”和什么有关“，英文中常直接写作”有什么引起/引发了什么“，但似乎并不怎么重要= =
*既然这里说了"Internationally"，不如上一节的开头也说"domestically"，也显得结构比较完整
"The reason"一句应作"The reason is thatChina has too many fake commodities"原文中缺少从剧中的动词，也一般不那么说
"In order to"一句，是否是指”为了中国的形象和人们的安全“？In order to是连词词组，后面必须跟着动词（所以in order to ensure是对的）。可作"In order to rebrand China's image/re-image China and to ensure..."。事实上，表达”为了某样东西“的时候可直接使用介词for，因此也可作"for the image of china and the safety of..."
"the safety of people",此处应该去掉原句中的介词，或者保留介词变成"...of the people in China"——因为介词表示限定，必须有特指。事实上，不如改成"...of Chinese citizens"，避免词语重复……（不知道你是什么标准的作文要求哈
"can not"应作"should not"，前者是“不可能（被虚假广告骗）”的意思
*secondly前面得分号那里其实可以断句？
"the supervision ability"应作"supervisory abilities"，或直接作"improve their supervision"
"circumstance be solved"处，circumstance所指的“情况”不是中文里有问题的“情况”，只是一种描述的“情况”。所以这里还是应该用"problem be solved"
最后的"persecution"我不太确定你的想法……persecution”一般指政治上的迫害。如果表达“不再受假货的荼毒”这样的话可作“be free from the threats of fake commodities”(不再受假货的威胁)
注：标注星号的只是用词问题，其余的是语法问题。
嗯其实写完了之后想也许你只想让我帮你改完把成品给你就好了……但总之我还是把大概的理由罗列了一下，希望能对你有帮助
因为只要求改语法所以就只改了一些语法（可能没改全（应该不会改错（喂
希望你能加油哦！不知道你这篇文章是哪种考试用的文章，除了语法以外英语写作还有其他技巧上的也可以多注意一下
其实英语语法不算语言里面很难得，想想我们中文多微妙啊他们可死板了……我觉得多看看记记下一篇就不会有问题啦（何况网络翻译君自己的语法也……
另：顺手输入了fake commodity搜索，发现了 My view on fake commodities的例文，也许对你有帮助。
http://www.360abc.com/article/2135.html
8. 我写的一篇英语作文，帮忙改下语法谢谢
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every
classmate
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everybody
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"他们不会答嘲笑你"
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9. 英语作文改错，希望能把有语法错误的地方改正一下，一定要准确，20分。
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10. 求改正我的英语作文的语法错误。
1 higher paying -high paid
Professionals who make -get这里make不对
there are several benefits to a good ecation-to 改为for
2 condition was the biggest obstacle at me-at 改为for
So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china表意不清，我不知道你想表达内什么意容思