① 求助~~检查这篇英语文章的语法错误
People used to say” Behind every successful man there‘s a woman.” It means that women often sacrifice their own career to help their husbands or sons. In China, the position of women in the society has been changing since the founding of the People’s Republic of China in 1949. Today, instead of being housewives, more and more women are going to find their own professions. Now, women are playing important roles in various fields. But do we satisfy only because we have a job? No! We also need respect, need social recognition!（need respect and social recognition，要气势的话，可以用排比句，^_^）
From my point of view, the most important thing we need to do is to be independent--- both physically and mentally. I have read a book named< Jane Eyre >. This is a story about a special woman who has been struggled（been struggling） for her ideal life fearlessly. The story can be looked（可以用，view，see，或是consider这类要深度考虑的词） as a symbol of the independent spirit. In the story, Jane Eyre was economic independence---- she got her job to be a tutor after long years of struggle. More importantly, Jane Eyre was sentimental independence. When she came to know her husband had got a wife already, she made up her mind to leave. She is Jane Eyre: An independent woman, a model for every liberated woman.
What’s more, a liberated woman must have confidence in herself and proud of being a woman. We must believe that we can stand beside men not behind them. We have the same chance for success. We have the equal right to refuse to work with men who do the same work for a different pay（who do the same work but get a different pay）.
Now, women have made up a large part of work force almost in every field, and it has shown that we are superior to men in many ways. I do hope one day the sentence will become” Beside every successful man there‘s a woman.” --- Though it still has a long way to go.
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呵呵，写得不错
男女本该平等
② 写英语作文怎么检测自己语法呢
I will very appreciate that you may give some help to me (for my study) in the later days.
Please allow me to introce myself here. 这句我觉得可以删掉，要么放在 第一段第一句后面。
likes to read a book -->Something like reading，taking a walk and so on.
although she is a woman, but full of wit,-->although引导的从句不能与but, however连用，但可与yet, still连用. 这个句子可以改成： even though she is a woman , but she is ful of wit..
Though I am quiet, but like to like-minded friends, learn together... 这个句子。。。。。。
I hope that they will be able to study abroad --> they ??
个人意见，仅供参考，不能保证百分百正确哦~
③ 请帮我检查这段英语文章的语法。
After I had graated from junior high school, I came to America with my mother. She helped me find a high school to continue my ecation, and helped us settle down, Then, we hardly spend any time together and I was always alone at home. She rarely comes home for dinner. I often lean on the window still and search for her, in the hope to see her coming home. However, for many nights, she hadn't come home before I went to sleep.
④ 英语语法检查
语法上 错误很多 不一一说明了 详细看我下面写的范文
段落上 只有开头段 和 主体段 没有结尾段 就内容而言，也没有 作文的 起 承 转 合 应有的结构
句式上 简单句太多 缺乏长句 复杂句 以及特殊句式 来支撑你的论点
用词上 简单词太多 基本都是初中词汇 没有亮点词汇和加分词汇
逻辑上 很混乱 第一段你说想写捕鲸业 第二段却看不出你要写的内容
最后一点 我学英语到今天 一看到这种捕鲸类的topic 立马想到正反两个方面论证
今天第一次看到Lz把这种题目当记述文来写，我觉得很有创意，受教了。
不过我觉得这种类型还是写成议论文比较合适
总之问题很多 建议不管你是初中 高中 还是 大学 还是该多看看范文
ok，问题说完了，下面上正餐
In recent years, it is said that Australians are aware of stopping whaling and protecting whales which living in the Antarctica, while Japaneses keep whaling in the Antarctica so dramatically that even was warned by Australian Administartions.Consequently heated news have been going on about whether whaling should be forbiden.In this passage, I would like to discuss both sides.
In terms of whale fishery,It is evident that the golden age of whale fishery is over,which in particular,the main purpose on whale hunting is to get the valuble oil,meat,and bones of whales,while at the same time, these precious proportions have been instead with the counterparts of high technology inventions.Furthermore,the violence in killing of whales is a challenging to the contemporary sosciety,which the peace,equality,and friendly affections to the nature and what are contained in nature are often announced in media programme.
By contrast，I admit that definitely the government budgets is benefit from the instry chains in some area of the world such as Japan. Howerver,I have to say it is not an efficent way to solve national finance and economic by killing whales in long terms. As a eyewitness,we apparently see how Japanese neighbourhood,China, develop the national power and enhanced the level of living conditions as a staggering rate without whaling.
In summary, on the basis of the above factors,I am convinced that whaling should be banned and whales should be protected, and in addition, I wish that people are more aware of knowing whales.
这篇范文是我刚写的
时间： 也就花了半个小时
标准： IELTS（雅思）的句式模板和论证形式 + 大学四六级的词汇
说明： 开头段 和结尾段 都是 标准的IELTS模板 第二段主体段我只写了两个论点 第三段让步段我只写了一个论点
当然我可以写的更详细一点，用词也可以更复杂一点，但是太累，另外我觉得LZ的水平如果拿更深奥的文章来忽悠你有悖实际 这个文章已经够用了
仅供参考
⑤ 英语文章求检查语法和润色什么的。。
第一段写的
we
all
know
some
criminals
are
dangerous,
里面
去掉some，因为既然是犯人就应该是dangerous的.
their
(space)
teacherS.
第二内段
being
accused加空格。容So
that
gives
a
chance
to
the
criminals
to
rece....
3段
there
are
many
such
places,
去掉such.i
think
it
is
away,
a
和
way家空格。
注意你写的东西
好多单词中间都没有空格空开，
然后你的第一句开头写的和结尾不搭
如果你说
penalty和reform要一起的话
开头应该大概这样写
我给你个比方
Above
all,
I
can
not
completely
agree
with
either
of
the
two
ways(or
practices),
i
think
they
should
be
combined.
这样写才收尾呼应。
⑥ 请帮助检查以下英语文章的语法错误
第一篇似乎存在不少非语法错误～读不通了～
第二篇：“版one kind of the cake”中的the多余；
“权difference of it and ”改为“differences between Brownie and ”更好； “lies in”改为“are that”； “and must be”改为“and it must be of"； “will also”前缺主语； “the almond or peanut”改为“almonds or peanuts”； “flavouringly”这个单词似乎不存在～～汗～后面的那个above用得也让人不明所以～～； “Bring”改为“Take”； “eaten”去掉。
累死了～追加点分吧～
⑦ 急急急急，英语专业本科论文语法错误检查，四千词左右，可以谈价钱。
毕业论文可以找师哥师姐
⑧ 英语作文，语法检查
很多错误。。。。。把你要表达意思写出来，我给你写。
⑨ 帮我检查一下英语作文，语法错误什么的 十万感激
xin hua senior school,has a history more than 100 years, with 48 classrooms and about 300 wonderful teachers, where near the mountain and with a river across it.
第一句复很别扭的，你制没必要为了弄长难句而写这种句子。可以这样：Xinhua Senior School- an excellent school with history of more than 100 years- is armed with 48 classrooms and 300 wonderful teachers. It is near a mountain with a river across it.
spend more time in doing sth with more practice so that they are able to know
⑩ 翻译的英语文章语法检查
改为如来下：第一句自你要表达的意思如果是“我对交朋友没什么感觉”的话，你的这一句语法非常混乱。told用得不对，impression的表达也不对。可以直接说I
am
not
interested
in
making
friends.
其他表达也比较拖沓。修改如下：Anyone
can
be
my
enemies
or
friends.Although
I
know
that
"People
gather
sitcks"这一句，是想表达“众人拾柴火焰高”吧？这里英语是有固定用法的，你既可以照字面说：The
fire
burns
high
when
everybody
adds
wood
to
it;
也可以直接用英语表达同样的含义，说：great
things
may
be
done
by
mass
effort。所以最后这一句应该改成：Although
I
know
the
speaking
"The
fire
burns
high
when
everybody
adds
wood
to
it".
But
I
also
have
my
own
idea
"The
flying
eagle
is
by
itself."