英语四级作文道歉信

『壹』 请问08年6月的英语四级作文技巧

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路点评：
表明歉意
◇语言点提示：
① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用开头句式
② assign: 分配，指定，布置
③ e；到期的，预期的
④ I’m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式
◇第二段思路点评：
解释原因，虽然不是真的给人道歉，但是理由还是要充分的好。
◇语言点提示：
① referential: 用作参考的
◇第三段思路点评：
表明尽快完成论文，并表示以后会按时交论文
◇语言点提示：
① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用结尾
（二）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的；
2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的
3. 收入差距对社会的影响
●审题概述●
议论文，根据题目要求文章可分为三点：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；对社会的影响。在叙述第一、二点时，可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接，以及论证的逻辑。
● 范文●
Income Gap
1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.
1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.
◇第一段思路点评：
收入差距的合理性
◇语言点提示：
1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题
2 reflect 意为“反映”
3 in one’s view 意为“在某人看来”（分析观点时常用词组）
4 efficiency 意为“效率”
◇第二段思路点评：
收入差距的不合理性
◇语言点提示
1On the other hand：意为“另一点、另一方面”（提出相反观点，与上文衔接）
2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”
3another point: 提出另一小点
4back up 意为“支持”
◇第三段思路点评：
收入差距的影响
◇语言点提示
1As anything has two sides, so…... 议论文常用句式
2motivate：意为“激励，刺激”
3get rid of：意为“摆脱，除去”
（三）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Green Olympics. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 现在社会上有很多环境污染和精神污染的现象，提出你对“绿色奥运”的看法。
2. 为什么要提倡“绿色奥运”。
3. 提倡绿色奥运，从自己做起。
●审题概述●
本篇为议论文，针对各种污染现象提出对“绿色奥运”的理解。可分为三部分：对“绿色奥运”的态度，当然是支持了；其次，提倡“绿色奥运”的原因，可以从环保的好处说起；最后，从自己做起，怎样支持“绿色奥运”。
●范文●
Green Olympics
Olympic Games, as we all know, is a historic sports meeting. "Green Olympics", is one of the three 1themes of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. At present, people"s life is being flooded with exhaust gas from automobile, waste water from factories and so on. Owing to these 2phenomena, we should 3advocate "Green Olympics", and I am positive of this point.
1Two possible reasons are as follows. Firstly, environmental protection benefits people"s health. In terms of increasing number of trashes around us, such as white plastic bags, one-off cups and chopsticks, it is sensible of disposing of them reasonably. So we ought to use clean technology, 2renewable and recyclable materials. Secondly, environmental protection is crucial to our country, and even to the world. In recent years, natural disasters, like tsunami in Indonesia and snowstorms in China, are partly e to the 3disturbance of the environmental balance.
1In conclusion, as college students and the young generation, we should try our best to advocate "Green Olympics". The 2008 Olympic Games will be a green and unique Olympics.
◇第一段思路点评：
列举一些污染现象，提倡“绿色奥运”
◇语言点提示
1theme：意为“主题”
2phenomena: （phenomenon 的复数）“现象”
3advocate：“倡导”
◇第二段思路点评：
提倡“绿色奥运”的原因
◇语言点提示
1possible reasons are as follows：常用句式，列举理由
2renewable and recyclable: “可更新，可循环的”
3 disturbance: “扰乱”
◇第三段思路点评：
“绿色奥运”从自己做起
◇语言点提示
1In conclusion：最后总结
（四）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter. You should write at least
120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游，并且回忆美好的旅行经历 ，同时邀请小何来你的家乡做客
●审题概述●
这是一封感谢信，一般要表明感谢的事由。本题可分三部分：感谢小何在云南的接待；回忆在云南的经历；邀请小何来做客。
●范文●
June 17th ,2006
Dear Xiao He,
1Thank you so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a 2fantastic time with you and your family. Your great 3hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.
When I think of those 1gorgeous places of 2scenic beauty you showed me around, 3I couldn’t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is 4out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your 5snug log-cabin, small and 6cozy, which was turned into my dream house in 7fairy land those nights.
Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently 1referred to as 2Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I 3cannot wait to see you here.
Yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路点评：
感谢小何在云南的接待
◇语言点提示
1Thank you so much for doing something: 感谢信常用开头
其他常用句式： Many thanks for your kind and warm help.
I am greatly indebted to you for your help.
Thank you for your generous hospitality.
Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favor.
2fantastic：意为“极好的”
3hospitality：意为“好客，热情”
◇第二段思路点评：
回顾在云南的经历
◇语言点提示
1gorgeous：“很好的，华丽的”
2scenic：“风景的”
3I couldn’t be more delighted：强调很高兴
4out of this world：“出色的”
5snug log-cabin：“干净的小木屋”
6cozy：“舒适的”
7fairy land：“仙境”
◇第三段思路点评：
邀请小何来做客
◇语言点提示
1refer to：“提到，指的是”
2Oriental Paris：“东方巴黎”
3cannot wait to do something: “迫不及待”
（五）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
Advertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 广告的作用
2. 广告的形式多样
3. 广告的夸张性
●审题概述●
这是一篇说明文，用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。写好说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注意条理，而且要巧妙运用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作比较、分类别、列数字、打比方等。
●范文●
ADVERTISEMENTS
Advertisements are forcing their way into people’s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually 1manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their 2merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every proct is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.
There are many ways to advertise and ‘ads’ come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some procts are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. 1Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big instry now and many 2agencies have been set up to 3furnish a variety of forms..
However, advertising is not always truthful. A proct is often 1misrepresented. The advertiser 2exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer 3falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised procts and have 4been dissatisfied with them.
◇第一段思路点评：
广告的作用
◇语言点提示
1 manufacturer: “制造商”； retailer：“零售商”
2 merchandise：“商品”，集体名词，这里用作单数
◇第二段思路点评：
广告的形式：报纸，电视等等
◇语言点提示
1Billboard：“广告牌”
2agency：“代理”。Advertising agency：“广告代理”
3furnish：“提供”
◇第三段思路点评：
广告的夸张性，众人对广告的怀疑
◇语言点提示
1misrepresent：“误认，错误表现”
2exaggerate：“夸张”
3falls victim to：“成为……的牺牲品”
4be dissatisfied with：“对……不满意”

『贰』 怎样写一篇好的四级作文，有必要背别人的作文吗但是我背了就忘了

英语作文，是分类型的，包括应用文(建议信、询问信、咨询信、道歉信、邀请信和通知等)、议论文、说明文、记叙文等等。所以你首先要知道它的每个类型是怎么来写的比如说应用文写作中的建议信。可以写成三段式的也可以写成五段式的，一般首段是写作目的，需要开门见山。中间段落需要阐述三条相关建议，每条建议后要阐述建议原因和好处。最后一段再次总结建议并希望建议有效。
第二点,你需要背一些万能的句型。比如建议信中我们表达写作目的有这样的一些句型。
I'm writing to you to give my advice on...
Delighted to receive your letter in which you mentioned you have trouble in doing sth.,I am more than previleged to share my advice with you.
等等句型。
第三点，要注意自己的英文书写，可以使用数学练习册或者笔记本、活页纸等横线格来进行练习。先上网搜索相关字体的26个字母的写法，有斜体、圆体、衡水体等，然后先练习26个字母，觉得不错了，可以练习写上面背过的句型，每天不写多，只写三到五句，每句写五遍，力求每个单词，每句句型都写得美观大方。这样即练习了书写，也复习了句型。
最后，要每周找一篇四级作文进行作文练笔，自己用背过的句型来写作文，最好是限时写作，尽可能把握时间和写作节奏和思路，注意书写。
希望对你有用。

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『伍』 今年英语四级考试 作文 让给朋友写一封信 表达他对我的好 我紧张没看到写信 我就是写成了

大学英语四级考试作文（附范文）1．书信例1：感谢信（1） 给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游（2） 回忆美好的旅行经历（3） 邀请小何来你的家乡做客June 17th , 2006Dear Xiao He,Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a fantastic time with you and your family. Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life. When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn’t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I cannot wait to see you here. Yours, Li Ming例2：投诉信（1）陈述你对学校图书馆的不满（2）列举图书馆存在的问题（3）希望能够得到改进September, 11Dear President,I am a sophomore with the Department of Law. My name is Wang Ming. I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library. You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds. It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time. In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye. Some seats in the reading rooms are ‘permanently reserved vacant seats’, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use. What a terrible waste of valuable resource! Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime. And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time. These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation. Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes Yours sincerely,2．记叙文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration1.杨玲生病，情绪低落.2.班上同学准备cheer her up.3.举办一场欢迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn’t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day. That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn’t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful. 3．论说文例：Buying or Borrowing Books（1） 有些人认为书应该借来看（2） 有些人认为书应该买来看（3） 你的选择？Buying or Borrowing BooksBooks can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life. There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying. While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure. Many people choose to borrow books. For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money. For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them. And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling. Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish. Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books. Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4．口语作文例：工作总结演讲1. 简述上周五系学生会搞的一次以环保为主题的到某一湖区拾trash的活动。2. 上述活动的效果及存在的问题。3. 你的建议。My fellow students,Last Friday, the Students’ Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake. The purpose of this project is to enhance(加强)the environment awareness of general public. Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists. As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job. When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support. But our work still left some to be desired. For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted. For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing. But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning. In this case we can put in more hours. And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection. Thank you.5．图表作文A： staying at homeB: travelingC: doing social investigationD: other waysFrom the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations ring vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off. Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling. Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years. Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited. In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world. In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad. You should write at least120 words following the outline given bellow:1. 近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学2. 出现这种现象的原因3. 这种现象可能带来的影响四级模考参考范文：Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their ecation.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more. Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change. First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries. They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market. Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs. And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.毕业的问题 1、Studying Abroad or Home (1) 现在有越来越多的人想出国留学。 (2) 出国留学与在国内学习的对比。 (3) 你的观点。 Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, moreandmorepeople want to study abroad. There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life. What difference does it makebetween studying abroad and studying home Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher ecation, I think studying home is preferable. For one thing, you don’t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE . This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals. In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends. Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time. For these reasons, pursuing one’s higher ecation at home is a more realistic and sensible choice. In a word, I prefer to study home. The Intensified Postgraate Entrance ExaminationIt can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraate entrance examination year by year. Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraate entrance examination becomes higher and higher. In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising. What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences On the one hand, there are three reasons for this. First, the job market becomes more and more competitive. As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree. Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graation from the undergraate. Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society. On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this. For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability. For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the indivial but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 表达自己对晚交论文一事的歉意。2. 说明未能按时交论文的原因。3. 表示自己将尽快把论文补交上并表示以后将按时交作业。这是一封道歉信，写的时候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：开篇直奔主题，然后说明原因，最后提出可能的补救措施。第一段，对晚交论文及对此造成的后果表示歉意；第二段，说明理由（可信的理由，而不是随便应付老师的借口）；第三段，表示尽快完成论文。【范文】A Letter of ApologyDear Mr. Wang,①I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③e this Friday, but to my regret, I haven’t even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you. I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future. Sincerely yours, Li Ming◇第一段思路点评：表明歉意◇语言点提示：① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用开头句式② assign: 分配，指定，布置③ e；到期的，预期的④ I’m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式◇第二段思路点评：解释原因，虽然不是真的给人道歉，但是理由还是要充分的好。◇语言点提示：① referential: 用作参考的◇第三段思路点评：表明尽快完成论文，并表示以后会按时交论文◇语言点提示：① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用结尾Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的；2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的3. 收入差距对社会的影响议论文，根据题目要求文章可分为三点：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；对社会的影响。在叙述第一、二点时，可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接，以及论证的逻辑。● 范文●Income Gap 1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay. 1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work. 1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路点评：收入差距的合理性◇语言点提示：1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题2 reflect 意为“反映”3 in one’s view 意为“在某人看来”（分析观点时常用词组）4 efficiency 意为“效率”◇第二段思路点评：收入差距的不合理性◇语言点提示1On the other hand：意为“另一点、另一方面”（提出相反观点，与上文衔接）2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”3another point: 提出另一小点4back up 意为“支持”◇第三段思路点评：收入差距的影响◇语言点提示1As anything has two sides, so…... 议论文常用句式2motivate：意为“激励，刺激”3get rid of：意为“摆脱，除去”

『陆』 雅思G类 作文道歉信 请大家看看这份作文答案能拿多少分

评分我不会，但是一下些许需要提出：

1. 格式我没看出来 （比如齐头式的话每一段都顶格版写，然权后每一段空一行，称呼和正文之间也应该空一行，最后的sincerely和正文以及和Dave之间也要空一行，Sincerely 后面家逗号）

2. 中间句式较为单一，还有一些词性（如importance）或者单词(realize)的误用，以及固定搭配的误用 But now……that……

   以上意见仅供参考。

3. 用词及造句均低于大学英语四级水平。
   

『柒』 英文道歉信

To JA (agencies)
The absence from activities of workshop for successful skills on January 16

I am XX from Grade 4, XXX middle school. I am really regret for not attending activities of workshop for successful skills on January 16 after signing up, which might waste the human resources of your institution, and miss a good chance to enrich myself. I am so regret that I am writing to apologize to your institution. I sincerely hope that I can still participate other activities held by your institution in the future, and that my slip won't have any bad impact on other students's participation. Sorry for the inconvenience caused.
All the best,
XXX from XX middle school,

January 16, 2010