『壹』 求高一英語作文的寫作技巧!(廣東的最好)
俗話說:「萬事開頭難。」對於作文來說,寫好作文開頭尤為重要。總的來說開頭方法多種多樣,有一條是最重要的,那就是:簡潔明了迅速入題。請看近年各地中考滿分文的開頭。
技巧一:設計懸念,吸引讀者
我快要死了——我躺在病床上,四周黑漆漆的一片,十分寂靜,偌大的房間里,只能聽得見我微弱的呼吸聲。(陝西省中考滿分作文《感受生活之美》)
技巧點撥:這篇文章的開頭設計了一個懸念:「我」快要死了。於是讀者不由得被吸引住了,會想,他怎麼會快要死了死了呢?他得了什麼病?後來會怎樣?這種開頭方法,抓住了人們閱讀時的好奇心理,精心設計吸引讀者閱讀,效果很好。
技巧二:開門見山,亮明觀點
痛苦的時候,你會回家,用眼淚盡情發泄;心煩的時候,你會回家,讓家的溫暖驅散心中的烏雲;家——融進去的是悲傷,化解出來的是快樂;家——接納的是難過,釋放的是開心。家真好!(選自雲南省中考作文《家,真好》)
技巧點撥:記敘文也能開門見山。你看,這篇文章運用排比的形式將自己對「家」的感受毫無遮掩的表達出來。為全文定下了基調。
技巧三:聯想回憶,巧妙敘述
獨立小院,月光如水,靜靜地流瀉在我的身邊,我感到了心沉水底的清涼,引起了對你的不盡的思念!曾記得也是這樣一個月色溶溶的夜晚,我把你送上了開往異鄉的列車…… 小小年紀,孤身一人在異鄉奮斗的你,一切還好嗎?(河南中考滿分作文《當我面對「溶溶月色」的時候》)
技巧點撥:中考中,常有追憶式文題出現,需要考生追憶過去發生的某一件事。此時不妨聯想回憶,引發思緒。
技巧四:突出矛盾,渲染氣氛
「你這書記趁早別當了,半點用也沒有!」從學校風塵僕僕趕來的我,離家門還有百來米遠,就聞到了一股濃濃的火葯味,聽到了媽媽對爸爸的呵斥聲,一種「黑雲壓城」的感覺猛烈襲上我的心頭。媽媽也是多事,爸爸干什麼她都要干預一通,搞不好就暴跳如雷。好在爸爸宰相肚裡能撐船,每次都是任憑媽媽一陣暴風驟雨過後,才用幾句綿里藏針的話收拾殘局。今天不知又為了什麼。(選自湖北仙桃中考滿分文《「民主牆」的風波》)
技巧點撥:記敘文的寫作要善於製造矛盾,在矛盾中展開故事情節才能吸引人。這篇文章在一開頭就抖出一個矛盾沖突。目的是要迅速抓住讀者的心,引發讀者的閱讀興趣。
技巧五:巧用修辭,展示文采
假如我是小鳥,我會記住那出生時的巢穴;假如我是樹苗,我無法忘記那滋養我的土地;假如我是江河,那雪域高原成為我記憶中的烙印;假如……無論我是什麼,無論我以什麼方式存在,我可以忘記周圍的一切,甚至可以拋棄自己,但有一樣東西是不可泯滅的——那就是回報。(選自貴陽市中考滿分文《詮釋回報》)
技巧點撥:修辭是語言運用中不可缺少的部分。巧妙而又貼切的修辭手法的運用常能使語言增添許多風采。在考場作文中,考生若能熟練運用修辭手法扮靚語言,定能得到良好的效果。
技巧六:描寫環境,烘托背景
晚風吹過河面上最後一波漣漪,夕陽收起它最後一首余暉,秋霜目送去最後一隻歸雁。我們默默地站著,目光游離在那若即若離的記憶之門上。當許許多多都已凋盡,我們起碼還可以對自己說:「別傷心,我已體驗過那種感覺,雖然只是曾經擁有。」(選自安徽省中考滿分文《曾經擁有》) 技巧點撥:一切景語皆情語,在記敘文、散文的寫作中,環境描寫是不可少的。環境描寫可以渲染氣氛,可以襯託人物、可以推動故事情節的發展。如果在文章的開頭先進行一段簡潔的環境描寫,既可以為文章提供一個特定的背景,又能使文章形成一種特殊的氛圍。
技巧七:廣泛引用,突出主題
「月朦朧,鳥朦朧,簾卷海棠紅。」 每當我吟誦這句詩,心中便有說不出的陶醉。心也朦朧,眼也朦朧,眼前真個展現了同一幅畫來。(選自吉林省中考滿分文《陶醉》)
技巧點撥:引用法是一種很常見的文章開頭法,的內容是很豐富的,若是議論文則常名人名言以增強論證效果,突出主題;若是記敘文、散文則可以引用歌詞、詩句。此外,還可引用古語、俗諺、對聯等等。
『貳』 高中英語作文寫作技巧
剛參加過高考~~絕對有用(總結了很久)
①給觀點分組討論類 開頭模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****(根據題目要求套用了)
論述觀點 when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that **** ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they consider that ***
結尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****
②一些精彩亮點連接詞 in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore
moreover(另外)
last but not least important ,most important (最重要的是)
worst of all (最糟糕的是),
to make matters wores(更糟的是)
as far as i concerned, personally(我個人看來)
however ,nevertheless(然而)
希望對你學習有用!
參考資料:自己咯~
『叄』 高中英語作文範文:如何准備高考
首先你有一年的時間去自己慢慢探索規律技巧
其次一定要注意書寫
再者調查報告、記敘文、議論文、書信、說明文等格式、寫作時應注意問題都要在復習過程中慢慢總結
『肆』 高中英語作文題目(可以不要範文!)~急!
有點沒懂你的意思 你是要 英語作文的題目?
是不是幫你想幾個題目就行
但你又要中文信息是什麼意思啊
你網路hi我 我再告訴你
『伍』 高一英語作文寫作(120詞左右)拜託幫忙了,謝謝
Dear daddy,
Now,love is the only word i can say.How touched i was after i saw the letter written by you.How much you love me!When I was just a baby,you loved me without any reason.You hope me to be a great men like a lion so that i can be brave and successful.Thank you ,daddy.
I am 14 years old and i am a junior school student ,now.i have faced lots of things that is not so easy in society. Maybe i am not as successful as you think.But you know ,I will always be brave enough to face difficulties.
Today is your 50-year-old birthday.i just hope you can always be happy and stay health.I love you.
辛苦了,問題要打這么多字。
現打的,有錯誤的話還請包涵啊。
『陸』 速求「高中英語作文範文」十篇
高中英語作文復範文寫作講評
......看圖作文講制評8 江蘇省石庄高級中學 秦建華 為迎接高考高中作文講評課,你常常復習功課到深夜。請根據下列圖畫用英語寫一篇日記。 注意:1、日記須包括所有圖畫的內容,高中作文講評教案可以適當增 ...
詳見:http://hi..com/darenxx/blog/item/3f91a932c8eea198a61e12ba.html
『柒』 高一英語作文範文10篇
1.Last Chinese New Year. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to changshan by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired,my shoes broke. Dad said to me,「tingting, don』 do anything halfway.」at last,So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally,Since then, I've kept these shoes。i was very happy
dear mike,
haven』t seen you for a long time. how have you been? i am missing you all the time. as the weather is splendid now, i have made a plan to go out to the countryside by bike. each of us may take food for the picnic, which we will have at the hillside. the countryside must be very lovely, with grass and trees growing flourishingly, flowers full bloom and bright sunshine. we can enjoy the scenery to our hearts content, at the same time and take some pictures as a memory. it is possible for us to meet at the bus stop 8 a. m. i am sure we will have a good time. do come and join us.
yours always,
Beijing, the capital of People's Republic of China, the central municipality, National Center City China, Chinese politics, culture, ecation and international exchange center, while the decision-making centers and management centers in China's economy and finance. Beijing is located in the northern end of the North China Plain, southeast connected with Tianjin, the rest is surrounded by Hebei Province. Beijing has built more than 3000 years of history of the capital city and the history of 850 years, is one of "China's four ancient capitals", with some international influence, which first appeared in the literature of the name "thistle." Beijing since the Yuan, Ming blend of Chinese culture, has many historical sites and cultural landscapes, is the world's largest city has the world's cultural heritage. Beijing is also one of the most rainfall in North China region. The historic International Higher university, Peking University, Tsinghua University, also located in Beijing.
Yuan Yuan:
With the calendar torn off, the weather has been hot summer day into the cool of the fall, you and me corporations meet by chance, know not long, but you're moving and righteous people, we hit it off, as has been known to pay, it can be said It is destined, but now far divided in two. Non-vegetation can be ruthless cooked. The thought here, mind quite melancholy, surely you are too it! Two in the afternoon, in Huanggang Huangmei Opera Theater to watch Dream of Red Mansions. We hope arrive
Chinese government reiterated: South China Sea islands are Chinese territory since ancient times, China's South China Sea Islands and adjacent waters has indisputable sovereignty, "will never allow any country under any pretext and in any manner be violated." Insist on sovereignty belongs to me, this is the Chinese government's consistent position is to negotiate a basic prerequisite for China to solve the South China Sea and the South China Sea neighboring countries concerned.
Yesterday, we visited space hotel. We came to the visitors to experience weightlessness room.Seen from the porthole to look beautiful planet once every 45 minutes and the sunrise and sunset, it is a unique experience. In addition, the window around some equipment specially designed for fixed body of tourists. Visitors who do not wear those bulky flight suits and oxygen equipment. Space hotel is really beautiful.
I have a friend named yangyang. Her medium height, shapely, oval face, small eyes but great temperament. She is interested in singing and dancing. She has participated in the city's singing competition, won the first prize. She loves sports, like hiking fitness. She was a helpful person. Once she saw in the street an old lady fell on the road, she was sent to hospital after the old woman propped up their own money to grandma doctor, then quietly leave, even the name was left. Her favorite food is pasta, I always ask her to eat noodles.
Last Saturday, I went to the zoo and parents. That morning, the weather was fine. We decided to go by bike, environmentally friendly and convenient. To the zoo, originally planned with the animals according to a like, a lot of zoo visitors, not the camera. In the afternoon it began to rain, the animals are sleeping. No umbrella, feeling tired and hungry. So we will return home.
Hua southeast of the annual flower fair was a feast, but also a good opportunity for the development of cross-strait agricultural exchanges, sixteenth Strait Flower Expo in November in Zhangzhou City, southeast Hua meet with you, the number of flowers on the square ten kinds of flowers bloom, very spectacular; EAF shop dozen highly ornamental freshwater fish; romantic rose garden four fragrance; and modern agricultural science and technology museum and fantasy Pavilion advanced agricultural technology and fresh proce. Flower Expo held at a time when the harvest season, fans can also spend for good fruit and enjoy all the flowers, never want
In real life, all kinds of extravagance and waste of the phenomenon is still uncommon, the fine tradition of thrift that some people seem to be forgotten. In daily life, the waste phenomenon is shocking. Large shopping malls, supermarkets and other occasions, open air summer wear jackets, winter wear a shirt open air has become a surprising phenomenon. The ubiquitous plastic bags when shopping and disposable supplies; office pulled the curtains open daylight fluorescent power; not after work lights, computers, printers and other office equipment is always in standby mode ...... all kinds of waste common.
Yesterday, we visited space hotel. We came to the visitors to experience weightlessness room.Seen from the porthole to look beautiful planet once every 45 minutes and the sunrise and sunset, it is a unique experience. In addition, the window around some equipment specially designed for fixed body of tourists. Visitors who do not wear those bulky flight suits and oxygen equipment. Space hotel is really beautiful.
Yesterday, we went to the work park with whole school teachers and students.We entered the park to see everywhere full of flowers, the road on both sides by tall Metasequoia. We all appreciate the beauty, she came to the playground. Amusement park roller coaster, bumper cars, carousel, Ferris wheel, pirate ship and so on. We get together enjoyable to play. Finally, we saw a four-dimensional movie. It was a happy and meaningful day.
My father was born in May 1971, is now an accountant. My mother was born in November 1978, is now a teacher. They love life, love outdoor sports, every weekend to take me climbing, let me breathe the fresh air of nature. I am happy and harmonious family, parents courteous.
xinghuatan Park is big and good-looking, where there are many trees, flowers and a Great Lakes. In the middle of the park ,there is a small river before. Middle Creek has a pond with lotus in full bloom, there are many fish enjoy swimming in. Planted with almond trees around the park, a tree covered with sweet fruit. In front of every house loaded with beautiful flowers.
My hometown in shantou. Sand everywhere there before, very desolate.Traffic blocking。 Now ,the railway connecting the capital,there is very beautiful. In the middle of the village there is a small river before. Middle Creek has a pond with lotus in full bloom, there are many fish enjoy swimming in. Planted with almond trees around the village, a tree covered with sweet fruit. In front of every house loaded with beautiful flowers. Happy people live here.
Dear jane,
I』m LiHua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I』m very happy to learn that you』re going to stay with my family while you』re in Beijing. While you are here, we』ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You』ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we』ll eat at the school dining hall. I』m sure you』ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It』ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We』ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua
My favorite character is Chibi Maruko. Chibi Maruko is a lovely lazy little girl, she has a pair of bright eyes, a small mouth, short hair. Her stature is very short, so people called her little meatball. She is 10 years old, on the third grade. She has many friends, such as jade, Toshiko, Hanawa, Maruo and so on. Her family a total of six people, namely small balls grandfather, grandmother, father, mother and sister. Maruko especially like Grandpa, do not like my father, because my father always said that some small balls did not understand the words. Small balls favorite food burgers, ice cream, pudding, cakes and so on. Small balls sometimes contradictory trouble with your sister, but she was both less than a day and well, really a Ming amazing!
Notice
9:00 tomorrow held in small school each class monitor session;. Staff and students 16:00 see the cinema to see a movie in English; starting at 1:30 pm in the curriculum 。please tell each other .
『捌』 2016山西運城高一期中英語作文範文
書面表達(滿分20分)
假設你叫李華,是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學生小王給你寫信,提到自己偏胖,想節食減肥,徵求你的意見。請你給她回一封信,談談你對該問題的見解。內容要點如下:
1. 健康比漂亮重要
2. 學生以學習為主,不要過於注重外貌和別人的看法
3. 可以通過多鍛煉身體來保持健康,要改變不良的飲食習慣 4. 健康的心態也很重要
注意:1. 短文必須包括所有內容要點,可適當發揮
2. 詞數:100左右 3.參考詞彙: state of mind 心態
寫作參考
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others』 opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I』m looking forward to your next letter.
『玖』 高一英語作文範文
09)全國卷I (1)
假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家裡。今天你的房東Mrs Wilson 不在家,你准備外出,請給Mrs Wilson 寫一留言,內容如下:1. 外出購物 2.替房東還書 3.Tracy 來電話留言:1).咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2).此事已告知Susan .3)盡快回電
範文:Mrs Wilson ,
I』m going out shopping , and won』t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o』clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn』t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10)全國卷 (2)
假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest),希望附近大學的外籍教師Smith 女生來做評委。請參照以下通知給她寫一封信。
英語演講比賽
主題:人與自然
時間:6月15日下午2:---5:
地點:501教室
參賽選手:10名
聯系人:李華(電話44876655)
範文: Dear Ms. Smith ,
I』m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students』 Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I』m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic 「Man and Nature」. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I』m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11) 全國卷 (3)
假定你是李華,正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定,你需要書面預約,請按下列的要求寫一封信:1.本人簡介 2.求助內容 3.約定時間 4.你的聯系方式(Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678)
範文: Dear Sir ,
I』m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I』m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I』m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假設你正在參加全省中學生演講比賽,請你針對有些父母經常翻開孩子的日記或書包這一現象,寫一篇演講稿,陳述你的觀點。 內容包括:1.認為同學們不必為此煩惱 2.希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷 3.建議與父母進行交流溝通
範文: Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there』s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we』d like to trust them .If you don』t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假設你將參加某英文雜志開展的一次徵文活動,內容要求你在電視,手機和網路三者中,放棄其中的一個並陳述理由。請你以「which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?」 為題,寫一篇短文。
範文: Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there』re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文報社開設了一個專欄:experience . 本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以「my approach to difficulties in learning」 為題,用英語寫一篇短文,談談自己的一些做法。
範文: My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假設你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽,請按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
範文: The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假設你和幾位同學成了一個英語俱樂部,開展了為期2個月的活動。現在,你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進行經驗交流,請寫一份英語發言稿。1.簡要描述俱樂部開展的一項與英語有關的活動 2. 談談你們開展活動的收獲。
範文:
Boys and girls ,
Today I』ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That』s all. Thank you.
11) 陝西卷 (9)
假定你是李華,在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上,你看到以下內容。 請你根據博客內容,寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。
I』m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陳述自己的理由 3.提出至少2條建議。
範文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends』 advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 (10)
假設你是某中學新老師李紅,請給你的朋友張華寫封信,告訴他你第一天上課的情景,主要內容如下:1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介紹你處理該事的方式 3.談談你的感想
範文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It』s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named 「mother」 for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I』m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong