『壹』 在老師的幫助下我在英語寫作上已經取得了很大進步(in English writing)
With the help of my teacher, I have made much progress in English writing.
『貳』 英語寫作~Assignment Writing English
Michael Jackson died of fatal cardiac arrest on June 25th 2009. He was 50 years old.
Jackson was the most well-known idol in the world. Even people who never listen any music know his name.
People always blame Michael Jackson for his plastic surgery, accusations of child catamite and his abnormal personality, but they do not care his lonely sad childhood. Jackson grew up surrounded by famous people and an adoring public. It seems he never enjoyed his childhood like a normal boy. Actually, Jackson is so shy that he shrunk from meeting strangers. So how can we believe the famous Pop star really like his stage career in his childhood? He played the role of others and screw up his tiny courage to face the large audience. Michael Jackson lived in the applause of crowd. Maybe he was accustomed to live with the surround of praise and fame, or he just got addict to the perfect performances of his own. Nevertheless his contribution to music is obvious to all of us.
Jackson started his musical career at the age of 5 and he became a famous singer when he was 8. As the lead singer of the 「Jackson 5」 who formed in 1964, Jackson established his unsurpassed situation of 「King of Pop」. He is one of the most successful artists and 5 of his albums are among the best selling of all time. So when people say he has contributed "absolutely nothing" to society, they are very wrong.
Why Jackson is remembered by us all? It is because not only the wonderful music, the fantastic dance and his character but also his charity.
Michael Jackson is a true humanitarian, an example to us all. He has devoted much time and money to a wide range of charities. He loves children and takes time out to visit sick children. He also has special rooms at his home Neverland for sick and terminally ill children. Neverland Ranch every 3 weeks was open to children to play at the amusement park. Many of these children were sick with things like cancer. Sometimes Jackson would completely pay for their medical costs. He was also listed in the 2000 edition of the Guiness Book Of World Records for breaking the world record for the "Most Charities Supported By a Pop Star". It states that Michael Jackson has supported 39 charity organizations either with monetary donations.
Nobody is perfect. Although Michael Jackson is the god of music, he inevitably receives much attention by media. His privacy was often violated. Eventually he had to live in his own Wonderland like a naive boy. But what he did is still the focus of mass media. When some paparazzi and unprincipled reporters could not find anything of Jackson』 affairs, they overstate his rumor or make up gossip and scandal. I have listened only a few Jackson』s songs, and I am not a fan of MJ. But I am moved by what he want to convey through his songs. His music has touched the souls of millions of people around the world.
『叄』 英語寫作：初級詞彙和高級詞彙，用哪個得分高顯而易見
用詞越簡單越好。如果用得過於頻繁，所謂的高級詞彙會讓人生厭。講到底，版看你的diction of words 在語法的媒介下怎麼使用權。
----- The easier the words, the better the reader feeels about your writing. Used too frequently, the so-called high-class words will get your reader away from your work. Obviously it is the diction of words that are assisted with your grammar that makes your writing pleasant / enjoyable to read.
『肆』 求經典的英語諺語，寫作用得上
你看下，不知能否用得上啊！哈哈！祝您學業有成！
1.愛屋及烏 Love me, love my dog.
2.百聞不如一見 Seeing is believing.
3.比上不足比下有餘 worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best, but be better than the worst.
4.笨鳥先飛 A slow sparrow should make an early start.
5.不眠之夜 white night
6.不以物喜不以己悲 not pleased by external gains, not saddened by personnal losses
7.不遺餘力 spare no effort; go all out; do one's best
8.不打不成交 No discord, no concord.
9.拆東牆補西牆 rob Peter to pay Paul
10.辭舊迎新 bid farewell to the old and usher in the new; ring out the old year and ring in the new
11.大事化小小事化了 try first to make their mistake sound less serious and then to rece it to nothing at all
12.大開眼界 open one's eyes; broaden one's horizon; be an eye-opener
13.國泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace
14.過猶不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough; beyond is as wrong as falling short; too much is as bad as too little
15.功夫不負有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.
16.好了傷疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more
17.好事不出門惡事傳千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.
18.和氣生財 Harmony brings wealth.
19.活到老學到老 One is never too old to learn.
20.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones
21.金無足赤人無完人 Gold can't be pure and man can't be perfect.
22.金玉滿堂 Treasures fill the home.
23.腳踏實地 be down-to-earth
24.腳踩兩只船 sit on the fence
25.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal; a hedge between keeps friendship green
26.老生常談陳詞濫調 cut and dried, cliché
27.禮尚往來 Courtesy calls for reciprocity.
28.留得青山在不怕沒柴燒 Where there is life, there is hope.
29.馬到成功 achieve immediate victory; win instant success
30.名利雙收 gain in both fame and wealth
31.茅塞頓開 be suddenly enlightened
32.沒有規矩不成方圓 Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 33.每逢佳節倍思親 On festive occasions more than ever one thinks of one's dear ones far away.It is on the festival occasions when one misses his dear most.
34.謀事在人成事在天 The planning lies with man, the outcome with Heaven. Man proposes, God disposes.
35.弄巧成拙 be too smart by half; Cunning outwits itself
36.拿手好戲 masterpiece
37.賠了夫人又折兵 throw good money after bad
38.拋磚引玉 a modest spur to ince others to come forward with valuable contributions; throw a sprat to catch a whale
39.破釜沉舟 cut off all means of retreat；burn one『s own way of retreat and be determined to fight to the end
40.搶得先機 take the preemptive opportunities
41.巧婦難為無米之炊 If you have no hand you can't make a fist. One can't make bricks without straw.
42.千里之行始於足下 a thousand-li journey begins with the first step--the highest eminence is to be gained step by step
43.前事不忘後事之師 Past experience, if not forgotten, is a guide for the future. 44.前人栽樹後人乘涼 One generation plants the trees in whose shade another generation rests.One sows and another reaps.
45.前怕狼後怕虎 fear the wolf in front and the tiger behind hesitate in doing something
46.強龍難壓地頭蛇 Even a dragon (from the outside) finds it hard to control a snake in its old haunt - Powerful outsiders can hardly afford to neglect local bullies.
47.強強聯手 win-win co-operation
48.瑞雪兆豐年 A timely snow promises a good harvest.
49.人之初性本善 Man's nature at birth is good.
50.人逢喜事精神爽 Joy puts heart into a man.
51.人海戰術 huge-crowd strategy
52.世上無難事只要肯攀登 Where there is a will, there is a way.
53.世外桃源 a fictitious land of peace away from the turmoil of the world;
54.死而後已 until my heart stops beating
55.歲歲平安 Peace all year round.
56.上有天堂下有蘇杭 Just as there is paradise in heaven, ther are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth
57.塞翁失馬焉知非福 Misfortune may be an actual blessing.
58.三十而立 A man should be independent at the age of thirty.At thirty, a man should be able to think for himself.
59.升級換代 updating and upgrading (of procts)
60.四十不惑 Life begins at forty.
61.誰言寸草心報得三春暉 Such kindness of warm sun, can't be repaid by grass. 62.水漲船高 When the river rises, the boat floats high.
63.時不我待Time and tide wait for no man.
64.殺雞用牛刀break a butterfly on the wheel
65.實事求是seek truth from facts; be practical and realistic; be true to facts
66.說曹操,曹操到Talk of the devil and he comes.
67.實話實說speak the plain truth; call a spade a spade; tell it as it is
68.實踐是檢驗真理的唯一標准Practice is the sole criterion for testing truth.
69.山不在高，有仙則名'No matter how high the mountain is, its name will spread far and wide if there is a fairy; '
70.韜光養晦hide one's capacities and bide one's time
71.糖衣炮彈sugar-coated bullets
72.天有不測風雲Anything unexpected may happen. a bolt from the blue
73.團結就是力量Unity is strength.
74.「跳進黃河洗不清」'eve if one jumped into the Yellow River, one can not wash oneself clean--there's nothing one can do to clear one's name '
75.歪風邪氣unhealthy practices and evil phenomena
76.物以類聚，人以群分Birds of a feather flock together.
77.往事如風'The past has vanished (from memory) like wind.; What in past, is pas
78.望子成龍hold high hopes for one's child
79.屋漏又逢連陰雨Misfortunes never come singly. When it rains it pours.
80.文韜武略military expertise; military strategy
81.唯利是圖draw water to one's mill
82.無源之水,無本之木water without a source, and a tree wiithout roots
83.無中生有make create something out of nothing
84.無風不起浪There are no waves without wind. There's no smoke without fire. 85.徇私枉法bend the law for the benefit of relatives or friends
86.新官上任三把火a new broom sweeps clean
87.虛心使人進步,驕傲使人落後Modesty helps one go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind.
88. 蓄勢而發accumulate strength for a take-off
89.心想事成May all your wish come true
90.心照不宣have a tacit understanding; give tacit consent; tacit understanding 91.先入為主First impressions are firmly entrenched.
92.先下手為強catch the ball before the bound
93.像熱鍋上的螞蟻like an ant on a hot pan
94.現身說法warn people by taking oneself as an example
95.息事寧人pour oil on troubled waters
96.喜憂參半mingled hope and fear
97.循序漸進step by step
98.一路平安，一路順風speed somebody on their way; speed the parting guest
99.嚴以律己,寬以待人be strict with oneself and lenient towards others
100魚米之鄉
101.有情人終成眷屬'Jack shall have Jill, all shall be well.'
102.有錢能使鬼推磨Money makes the mare go. Money talks.
103. 有識之士people of vision
104.有勇無謀use brawn rather than brain
105.有緣千里來相會Separated as we are thousands of miles apart, we come together as if by predestination.
106.與時俱進advance with times
107.以人為本people oriented; people foremost
108.因材施教teach students according to their aptitude
109.欲窮千里目，更上一層樓'to ascend another storey to see a thousand miles further; Ascend further, were you to look farther; Would eye embrace a thousand miles? Go up, one flight.' a land of milk and honey
110.欲速則不達Haste does not bring success.
111. 優勝劣汰survival of the fittest
112.英雄所見略同Great minds think alike.
113.冤家宜解不宜結Better make friends than make enemies.
114.冤假錯案'cases in which people were unjustly, falsely or wrongly charged or sentenced; unjust, false or wrong cases'
115.一言既出，駟馬難追A real man never goes back on his words.
116.招財進寶Money and treasures will be plentiful
117.債台高築become debt-ridden
118.致命要害Achilles' heel
119. 眾矢之的target of public criticism
120.知己知彼,百戰不殆Know the enemy and know yourself, and you can fight a hundred battles with no danger of defeat.
121. 紙上談兵be an armchair strategist
122.紙包不住火Truth will come to light sooner or later.
123.左右為難between the devil and the deep blue sea
『伍』 英語寫作高手請進！
what should we do to prevent AIDS
1 帶套抄
2 daitao
3 always wear a condom before having affairs
4 不要吸毒 don't using drugs
6 不要非法賣血 don't selling your blood illegally
7 宣傳這些給周圍的人 let everybody around you know these
這點東西都寫不好 哎。。。
『陸』 英語寫作:寫獎學金的必背句型
56 .But with low-income students projected to make up an ever-larger share of the college-bound population in coming years，some schools are re-examining whether that aid，typically known as「merit aid」，is the most effective use of precious institutional dollars.
英語四級譯文:
但隨著接下來幾年裡低收人家庭的孩子進入大學，在大學生中所佔比重越來越大，一些學校開始重新審視這種資助，也就是通常所說的獎學金制度是否能最有效地利用寶貴的教育基金。
四級詞彙講解:
本句的主幹是some schools are re-examining...。with low-income students...in coming years作伴隨狀語;whether引導的從句whether that aid...is the most effective use of precious institutional dollars作re-examining的賓語;過去分詞短語typically known as"merit aid」則是對aid進行的補充說明。
merit aid指「優秀獎學金」。
英語四級考點歸納:
美國本科獎學金分為三類:
※ Need-Blind(資金需求無關):此類獎學金的發放一般多為資金實力雄厚的私立大學，他們不考慮學生是否需要學校提供資助，一旦學生符合錄取標准，他們會根據學生的家庭情況判斷該學生的家庭能夠承擔多少費用，其餘費用全部由學校設法提供。美國的很多私立名牌學校都執行需求無關的政策，例如哈佛大學、普林斯頓大學、耶魯大學等。
※ Need-Based(資金需求有關):該類獎學金依據學生家庭經濟狀況提供，主要考慮父母收入、家庭資產、家庭大小和其他因素。
※ Merii-Based(優秀獎學金):此類獎學金一般發放給學業優秀的學生，名額一般很少，而且數額一般不能滿足學生的需要，獎學金主要是起表彰作用。
『柒』 珍貴用英語如何表達英語寫作,急用!!
這里應該想表達的是稀罕的：
rare/scarce/unique
『捌』 （關於英語寫作）Clear opening statement of the point of your paper
of the point of your paper 是來 statement 的後源置定語，of your paper 是 point 嵌套的後置定語，整體意思是 「對你論文的觀點的陳述」 (從後往前翻譯)。
這本身是不完整的句子，可能是 Is it a clear opening statement of the point of your paper？的省略。