增加高考英語寫作亮點

㈠ 高考英語寫作，如何提升文章亮點

要想把一篇文章寫好，不僅要注意行文通順與連貫、過渡與銜接等，還要對文章進行潤色，嘗試使用高級詞彙和復雜句式，以增加文章的亮點，給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧設開頭和結尾

1．開頭

常見的開頭方式有開門見山式、描述主題式、提供背景知識式、小故事引導式、提出問題式、設置懸念式、倒敘式和名言引入式等。雖然開頭有著各式各樣的風格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各異，但又有其共同遵循的原則：

開頭多是通篇文章內容的摘要

開頭常能展示文章的主題

開頭應能抓住讀者的注意力，引導讀者讀下去。

用於文章開頭的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．結尾

結尾的方法有很多，如總結式、重復式、結論式、暗示式和求解式等。

結尾一般是文章的升華或對文章主題的歸納，也是寫好文章的關鍵。好的結尾能喚起讀者共鳴，深化主題，給人回味，引人深思。

用於文章結尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准確地道的英美式表達

1．注意區分同義詞、近義詞的細微差異

a little boy小男孩(有可愛之意)

a small boy小男孩(強調身材瘦小)

2．恰當使用限定詞

用詞准確，從另一個角度來講就是要使論述客觀、適度，這就需要考生適當使用一些限定詞，以避免觀點的絕對化，從而提高說服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意詞語的習慣搭配

用詞准確不僅要求考生掌握具體單詞的含義，還要熟悉詞語的習慣搭配，一定要避免受漢語影響而出現錯誤。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口語化

高考作文一般應該使用較正式的書面文體，因此在寫作時要避免使用口語化的詞彙。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免贅言啰嗦

贅句是指用詞不簡練。表達某一思想，本來只需要一兩個詞，卻用了冗長的片語或者從句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表達結構

1．變簡單句為並列句或復合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用關鍵詞彙(介詞，不定式等)壓縮句子長度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．語態互換

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．語序調整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．強調句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感嘆及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．語氣虛擬

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非謂語動詞的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入語

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好壞。

(3)No pains，no gains.不勞無獲。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老學到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.學無止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事實勝於雄辯。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。

11．句式調換

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

㈡ 高考英語作文怎麼合理擴展寫作要點

1. 把字給我寫好!!!

就是所謂的「第一印象」，至關重要，這決定了你的作文檔。閱卷老師閱卷時首先給你的作文定檔，如滿分25分，一檔20-25，二檔15-20，以此類推。想拿高分必須保證自己的作文在一檔。

試想你的字老師都看不懂，給你三檔就不錯了。這個樓上有圖有真相，我就不贅述了，字寫得不好看也沒關系，一筆一畫寫清楚。切記別寫花體，反正我是看不懂的，老師願不願意看我就不知道了。

2. 結構清晰

簡而言之就是段落清楚，我的建議是三段式，第一段寫現象，第二段寫方法，第三段寫總結。大概就是這樣一個模式，隨便翻一個高考例文就差不多這樣。

全文必須有清晰的連詞和介詞，比如however，moreover，more importantly;to begin
with，further-more 。總結用to conclude，generally speaking等等。

3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮點詞句

這個問題我之前回答過，高考英語作文該怎樣做好積累呢? 也是我的經驗之談，全靠這個拿高分。

有人私信我要我再補充幾個亮點句式和片語，在這里滿足一下。

it is vital for us to do ……

……is nothing but wasting time

prevail among

broaden sb『s horizon

……is groundless

It』s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……

there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon

就說這么多，只要自己用心積累，考試的時候必然不愁詞用。不過請務必弄清這些句式或片語的准確用法。

4. 幾個重要的注意事項

請不要使用同一個詞超過3遍!學會變詞，比如要重復表示"下降"，請不要寫三四個「drop」，學會用decrease，descend，go
down，fall，decline。

絕對不能出現拼寫錯誤，時態錯誤，單復數錯誤。想從一檔變成二檔，請出錯。請不要忘記三單動詞加s。請保持文章所用時態合理的一致。

不斷的變換句式。被動句，強調句等變換著使用，嘗試用虛擬語氣等多種時態。前提是合理，不要把自己搞糊塗了。

㈢ 高考英語作文常用亮點句型有哪些

1.Nothing is + er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive ecation。
沒有比接受教育更重要的事。
2.can not emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much
(再怎麼強調.。。的重要性也不為過。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。
我們再怎麼強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。
3.There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否認的……)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad toworse。
不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。
4.It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道……)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。
全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。
5.There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫無疑問的……)
例句：There is no doubt that our ecational system leaves something to bedesired。
毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。
6.An advantage of is that + 句子(……的優點是……)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(proce) any pollution。
使用太陽能的優點是它不會製造任何污染。

㈣ 高考英語作文亮點短語

就我而言：as far as i concerned
briefly/ in brief 總之
yaccident偶然
onaccountof…因為…，由於…
inadditionto…除…之外
on(the/an)average平均，一般來說
onthebasisof…根據…，在…的基礎上
at(the)best充其量，至多
onbusiness因公，因事
inanycase無論如何，總之
incaseof…假使…，萬一…incase假如，以防(萬一)免得
innocase決不
keep/holdpacewith…跟上…，與…同步
takeplace發生，進行
taketheplaceof…代替…
makesense講得通，有意義
agreat/gooddealof大量(修飾不可數名詞)
influenceon影響
replyto…回答…，答復…
onceuponatime從前onceinawhile偶爾，有時
accountfor…說明…
allowfor…考慮到…
liveon/by…靠…生活，以…為食
referto…參考…，查閱…，涉及…，提到…
serveas…用做…
takefor把……認為是…，把……看成是…
thinkover仔細考慮
dependon…取決於…
devoteto…奉獻…，致力於…
engagein…從事於…，忙著

㈤ 如何增加英語作文亮點

加入經典語句，好詞好句

㈥ 怎樣使英語作文有亮點

要想獲得高分就應在「正確」表達的基礎上寫出自己的特色，寫出自己的「亮」點。

一、詞彙選擇——標新立異

在寫作中「較高級詞彙」的使用主要是指使用《大綱》上沒有的詞語、使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。

1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常見詞語，而situates in則是《大綱》上沒有的，屬於高級詞彙。

2)在周末我們做很多作業。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表達時沒有使用過於直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大綱》詞彙end加後綴-less變化來的。

3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表達要點時，B句使用了well furnished,這比good語氣強，也顯得生動。

在造句時,「較高級詞彙」如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結構造句——與眾不同

在造句時,既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數同學使用了there be結構，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另闢蹊徑而使用了「主語+謂語+賓語」結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞彙，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡潔)

2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(強調句式)

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)

3、句式多樣,復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、並列句與復合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較復雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用 there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房裡面有卧室、有洗澡間、有廚房；卧室里有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇——獨具匠心

在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點，同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹，我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002範文堪稱典範。請看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)該文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，開門見山，隨後兩個段落均使用了主題句(見黑體字部分)，使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。

2)在表述要點時範文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如「40%的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高。」前部分作為主題句放在句首，而後部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清楚。

3)範文使用了and, what is more, however等連詞，在段落之間使用了on the other hand(說明前後兩個觀點是相悖的)，這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯系，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。

4)範文在第二段為說明不收門票的「原因」時增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等細節，這也是解決句與句之間缺少連貫性的常見方法。

總之，要想使自己的文章有亮點，吸引讀者，在考試中獲得高分，就應在用詞、造句、謀篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一處特長都是「亮」點，都是值得肯定的。

㈦ 關於提高高中學生英語寫作能力的幾點看法

1. 把字給我寫好！！！
就是所謂的「第一印象」，至關重要，這決定了你的作文檔。閱卷老師閱卷時首先給你的作文定檔，如滿分25分，一檔20-25，二檔15-20，以此類推。想拿高分必須保證自己的作文在一檔。
試想你的字老師都看不懂，給你三檔就不錯了。這個樓上有圖有真相，我就不贅述了，字寫得不好看也沒關系，一筆一畫寫清楚。切記別寫花體，反正我是看不懂的，老師願不願意看我就不知道了。
2. 結構清晰
簡而言之就是段落清楚，我的建議是三段式，第一段寫現象，第二段寫方法，第三段寫總結。大概就是這樣一個模式，隨便翻一個高考例文就差不多這樣。
全文必須有清晰的連詞和介詞，比如however，moreover，more importantly；to begin with，further-more 。總結用to conclude，generally speaking等等。
3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮點詞句
這個問題我之前回答過，高考英語作文該怎樣做好積累呢？ 也是我的經驗之談，全靠這個拿高分。
有人私信我要我再補充幾個亮點句式和片語，在這里滿足一下。
it is vital for us to do ……
……is nothing but wasting time
prevail among
broaden sb『s horizon
……is groundless
It』s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……
there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon
就說這么多，只要自己用心積累，考試的時候必然不愁詞用。不過請務必弄清這些句式或片語的准確用法。
4. 幾個重要的注意事項
請不要使用同一個詞超過3遍！學會變詞，比如要重復表示"下降"，請不要寫三四個「drop」，學會用decrease，descend，go down，fall，decline。
絕對不能出現拼寫錯誤，時態錯誤，單復數錯誤。想從一檔變成二檔，請出錯。請不要忘記三單動詞加s。請保持文章所用時態合理的一致。
不斷的變換句式。被動句，強調句等變換著使用，嘗試用虛擬語氣等多種時態。前提是合理，不要把自己搞糊塗了。
請平時做好積累，考試時直接套用。
希望能幫助到你，望採納！

㈧ 求：高考英語作文亮點句型

1.It was not until I failed to pass the exam that I realized only
by making every effort to prepare it can one improve his grades.
直到考試失敗,我才意識到只有全力做好准備,才能專提高成績屬一百字

㈨ 高中英語作文中常用哪些可以加分，有亮點

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分：
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分：
Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.
正文部分：
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分：
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all.Thank you.
三、議論文模板
1.正反觀點式議論文模板
導入：
第1段：Recently we』ve had a discussion about whether we should...（導入話題）
Our opinions are divided on this topic.（觀點有分歧）
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方觀點）
Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3個贊成的理由)
第3段：However,the others are strongly against it.（反方觀點）
Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What』s more...In addition...(列出2~3個反對的理由)
結論：
第4段：Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,for it will do us more harm than good,so I support it.（個人觀點） オ
2.「A或者B」類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others,however,argue that B is much better.Personally,I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that ...Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段:Of course,B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2個B的優勢)
結論：
第4段:But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出結論) オ
3.觀點論述類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
As a student,I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對）
The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（過渡句,承上啟下）
正文：
第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)
結論：
第3段：In conclusion,I believe that...（照應第1段,構成"總—分—總"結構）
4."How to"類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem,but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is ...Finally...(列出2~3個解決此類問題的辦法)
結論：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強調解決此類問題的根本方法)
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題.The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 .This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 .After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化,the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) .The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 .In the column,we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that (結論).The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因)./ It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板：
1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture,we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know,.../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...