⑴ 什麼是高考英語寫作內容的擴展方向
滿意回答 上面各位的回答都不錯,我給你找的是專門針對考研用的,因為看你的年紀應該不是為了考四六級這么簡單了吧。
寫作是語言的重要環節,看看英語考試中對作文的重視就明白了。在考研中,寫作意義極其重大,其性價比(即投入的時間和提高的幅度)非常高,在我看來,如果你的閱讀水平還可以的話,寫作將是你的突破口。
提高寫作只有一個字——「恆」,絕對的熟能生巧。我在網上看過高手寫的文章,簡直可以用恐怖來形容,完全是閱讀理解的水平,而作者的訣竅就是每天寫每天練!只要不斷的寫不斷的改,你的文章會讓你自己吃驚。套用一句:寫作恆久遠,練習永流傳。
然而備考的時間是很緊的,不可能每天保持大量的練習,好在其要求也不高,從現在開始,到考前完全可以達到要求,但千萬不要間斷!很多同學都有一個情況,越不寫,越怕寫;越怕寫,越不寫。萬事開頭難,所以開始的練習尤為重要,而練習應以詞句為主+閱讀好文章,我就有一本記錄本,專門收集好的詞句,效果很好。這里列其中一些較簡單實用的,希望能對大家有所幫助(不過,建議同學們最好自己寫,自己收集,印象會深很多,每天花10分鍾過過,絕對值得。另外,我列的句子很有限,多半是骨架,大家要學會擴展,並且在記憶的時候多聯想一下。舉例來說,一篇你的文章,用心改一下,好好套用幾個句式,改些檔次較高的詞和片語,可以提高不少哦):
一. 總結句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ,both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二. 開首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I』m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三. 並列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what』s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四. 轉折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***』s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(盡管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn』t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五. 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六. 強調句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It』s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七. 圖表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短語:made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外,文章結尾也很重要,它的作用是概括全文內容,進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意義表達得更加深刻。
文章結尾的形式也是多種多樣的,常見的有以下幾種:
1.首尾呼應,畫龍點睛
在文章的結尾,把含義較深的話放在末尾,以點明主題,深化主題,起到畫龍點睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的結尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2.重復主題句
結尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達到強調的效果。如「I Love My Home Town」(我愛家鄉)的結尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然結尾
隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。如「Fishing」(釣魚)的結尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4.含蓄性的結尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點明作者的看法,而是讓讀者自己去領會和思考。如「A Day of Harvesting」(收割的日子)的結尾:
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5.用反問結尾
雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,並具有特別的強調作用,引起讀者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我們要不要學做家務?) 的結尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don』t you agree, boys and girls?
6.指明方向,激勵讀者
結尾表示對將來的展望,或期待讀者投入行動。如「Let』s Go in for Sports」(讓我們參加體育運動)的結尾:
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let』s go in for sports.
文章的結尾沒有一定的模式,可以根據表達主題的需要靈活創造。一般的習慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經常採用自然結尾的方法;但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結束語,以便使文章首尾呼應,結構完整。贊同9| 評論
⑵ 高考英語寫作中如何把要點寫全 且有細節支撐有什麼技巧嗎可以按題型題材分類回答
高考英語作復文主要得分點有三個制:1、書寫;2、內容扣題;3、段亂分布與銜接。
根據你的問題,我就講一下第二點吧。要想把要點寫全其實很簡單,一般高考作文的題目中都會給你用1234分條的線索,比如某某某來信,你要給他回信,然後題目會說你1、要告訴他什麼什麼;2、要安慰她之類;3、告訴他如果你是他你怎麼辦……之類你就可以按順序,把提示的話翻譯成英語(注意套幾個老師給的經典的句型,別一味的用簡單句,顯得很沒水平,定語從句是最屢試不爽的句型),按照題目給的順序給出來列出來就好了,這樣這篇文章就差不多有了四分之一到三分之一的字數,而且絕對扣題,這樣的文章十三分保底。然後在每一條的後面,再添幾句自己的話,這個也是很容易的,頓時就有了細節,這樣就拿到大約十五到十七分了。然後只要書寫和段落分布不出問題,二十分到二十三分應該不是問題。
⑶ 高考英語寫作,如何提升文章亮點
要想把一篇文章寫好,不僅要注意行文通順與連貫、過渡與銜接等,還要對文章進行潤色,嘗試使用高級詞彙和復雜句式,以增加文章的亮點,給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。
一、巧設開頭和結尾
1.開頭
常見的開頭方式有開門見山式、描述主題式、提供背景知識式、小故事引導式、提出問題式、設置懸念式、倒敘式和名言引入式等。雖然開頭有著各式各樣的風格,不能千篇一律,要因不同文章的需要而各異,但又有其共同遵循的原則:
開頭多是通篇文章內容的摘要
開頭常能展示文章的主題
開頭應能抓住讀者的注意力,引導讀者讀下去。
用於文章開頭的句型有:
(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...;Those who object to...argue that...;They believe that...;But people who favor...,on the other hand,argue that...
(2)Faced with...,quite a few people argue that...;But other people conceive differently.
(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...
(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...
(5)Now it is commonly held that...;But I doubt whether...
(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.
(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.
(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...
(9)There is no denying/doubt that...
2.結尾
結尾的方法有很多,如總結式、重復式、結論式、暗示式和求解式等。
結尾一般是文章的升華或對文章主題的歸納,也是寫好文章的關鍵。好的結尾能喚起讀者共鳴,深化主題,給人回味,引人深思。
用於文章結尾的句型有:
(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...
(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...
(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...
(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...,but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.
(7) There is little doubt/denying that...
(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.
(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
(10) In conclusion,...
(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...
(12) Personally,I prefer to...
(13) In short,...should learn to...;Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
(14) As far as I am concerned,I agree with the opinion that...
二、准確地道的英美式表達
1.注意區分同義詞、近義詞的細微差異
a little boy小男孩(有可愛之意)
a small boy小男孩(強調身材瘦小)
2.恰當使用限定詞
用詞准確,從另一個角度來講就是要使論述客觀、適度,這就需要考生適當使用一些限定詞,以避免觀點的絕對化,從而提高說服力和可信度。
He is the top student in our class.
He is one of the top students in our class.
3.注意詞語的習慣搭配
用詞准確不僅要求考生掌握具體單詞的含義,還要熟悉詞語的習慣搭配,一定要避免受漢語影響而出現錯誤。
Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)
Nobody is to blame for it.(T)
4.避免口語化
高考作文一般應該使用較正式的書面文體,因此在寫作時要避免使用口語化的詞彙。
This is the best hotel you can find here.
You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.
5.避免贅言啰嗦
贅句是指用詞不簡練。表達某一思想,本來只需要一兩個詞,卻用了冗長的片語或者從句,如repeat again,return back,still remain,very perfect等。
三、提升表達結構
1.變簡單句為並列句或復合句
Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.
2.借用關鍵詞彙(介詞,不定式等)壓縮句子長度,提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom,a bathroom,and a kitchen in it.
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.
3.語態互換
Someone saw him studying hard in his study.
He was seen studying hard in his study.
4.語序調整
The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.
Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.
5.強調句式
You must write to me when you get there.
Do remember to write to me when you get there.
6.感嘆及省略
Time flies like an arrow.
How time flies!
Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.
Look out for cars when crossing the street.
7.語氣虛擬
You didn't take my advice,so you failed in the exam.
If you had taken my advice,you wouldn't have failed in the exam.
8.非謂語動詞的使用
They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
Singing and laughing,they went back to school.
9.插入語
I think the book is well worth reading.
The book,in my opinion,is well worth reading.
10.格言警句的套用
(1)Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好壞。
(3)No pains,no gains.不勞無獲。
(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老學到老。
(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
(6)One is never too old to learn.學無止境。
(7)Actions speak louder than words.事實勝於雄辯。
(8)Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。
11.句式調換
He came here at 5 pm yesterday.
He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.
Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.
⑷ 高考英語作文中,不給要點,只給作文提綱,要自己填充內容的是什麼類型的作文,要怎麼寫
英語作文類型:一般都是議論文,一部分是記敘文。有對比,圖表,文字提示等類型。
應對策略:1.用較高級詞彙替換第一反應詞:
在寫作的過程中,很多考生習慣第一反應想到哪個單詞就使用哪個單詞,比如談到「好」就是good,而第一反應詞往往是比較簡單的,甚至不適合書面語言,所以千萬別一想到某個簡單而順手的詞就立刻下筆,而是思考它的同義詞。思考後考生會得到4到5個同義詞,這里的任意一個詞都可能會比你想的第一個詞復雜些。通常考生想到的第一個詞是平時使用較多的詞,也是比較簡單表意比較籠統的詞,所以放在口語中使用更加適合,而寫作用詞最好用書面詞彙,並且書面詞彙會比起第一反應詞的籠統,表意更加具有指向性,進而可以使文章語言更具生動和真實性。
2.學會用多個同義英語詞彙表達一個中文意思
在中文中習慣「求同不求異」,所以我們習慣用同一個詞來強調某一個概念,而在英文中正相反----「求異不求同」,所以就要學會用不同的詞來表示同一個概念。比如:好的:就可以用positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good。
3.句型要盡可能多樣化
高考英語寫作其實就是一個「SHOW",你要在短短幾十分鍾內秀出你學了十幾年的英語就要學會盡可能地多使用自己會的句型和語法知識。尤其是在作文中非常好用的「非限定性定語從句」「時間狀語從句」等等。
4.連接詞要常用
要想讓自己的文章行文順暢,邏輯合理,就要學會使用起到各種作用的連接詞。
5.字要盡可能公整
畢竟這是應試作文,判卷時間是很有限的,所以在很大程度上,文章的「外在形象」非常重要,因為我們留給閱卷老師的「印象」極為重要,所以就要讓你的字盡可能工整~
⑸ 高考英語寫作技巧
1.盡量來用短句,避免長句。自
2.多用高級詞彙,避免誤用。
3.字跡清晰,尤其注意要工整,不能塗改,有時間最好打草稿。
4.多留意範文的開頭與結尾。注意借鑒
5.注意總結,對各種類型的文章最好能背上一二篇範文。
(這是我的親身經驗!)
(我今年高考英語作文應該只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功)
⑹ 高考英語作文怎麼合理擴展寫作要點
1. 把字給我寫好!!!
就是所謂的「第一印象」,至關重要,這決定了你的作文檔。閱卷老師閱卷時首先給你的作文定檔,如滿分25分,一檔20-25,二檔15-20,以此類推。想拿高分必須保證自己的作文在一檔。
試想你的字老師都看不懂,給你三檔就不錯了。這個樓上有圖有真相,我就不贅述了,字寫得不好看也沒關系,一筆一畫寫清楚。切記別寫花體,反正我是看不懂的,老師願不願意看我就不知道了。
2. 結構清晰
簡而言之就是段落清楚,我的建議是三段式,第一段寫現象,第二段寫方法,第三段寫總結。大概就是這樣一個模式,隨便翻一個高考例文就差不多這樣。
全文必須有清晰的連詞和介詞,比如however,moreover,more importantly;to begin
with,further-more 。總結用to conclude,generally speaking等等。
3. 拿高分最重要的就是要有亮點詞句
這個問題我之前回答過,高考英語作文該怎樣做好積累呢? 也是我的經驗之談,全靠這個拿高分。
有人私信我要我再補充幾個亮點句式和片語,在這里滿足一下。
it is vital for us to do ……
……is nothing but wasting time
prevail among
broaden sb『s horizon
……is groundless
It』s obvious that ……is playing an increasingly essential role in ……
there are two/three reasons behind this phenomenon
就說這么多,只要自己用心積累,考試的時候必然不愁詞用。不過請務必弄清這些句式或片語的准確用法。
4. 幾個重要的注意事項
請不要使用同一個詞超過3遍!學會變詞,比如要重復表示"下降",請不要寫三四個「drop」,學會用decrease,descend,go
down,fall,decline。
絕對不能出現拼寫錯誤,時態錯誤,單復數錯誤。想從一檔變成二檔,請出錯。請不要忘記三單動詞加s。請保持文章所用時態合理的一致。
不斷的變換句式。被動句,強調句等變換著使用,嘗試用虛擬語氣等多種時態。前提是合理,不要把自己搞糊塗了。
⑺ 高考英語作文段落拓展的手段有哪些
提綱一定要包含所提供的情景要點,主要是關於記人; c.要避免兩個極端.其實想出兩條之後就可以動筆,有側重點地檢查,要象做完型填空一樣對待考場作文.一般說來記敘文有時間,防止遺忘).要避免寫那些與中心內容無關緊要的細節,近幾年上海和全國英語高考卷中的寫作,並且練習和模考時把他們用熟. 第二步、句子連貫.使用假想例子 5.使用自己選種的套話;使用過去發生的事例時用的是過去時,而是要求考生在充分領會「提示」的前提下,不僅造成文章邏輯結構不清、用詞貼切的作文.使用數據 4.據統計.當被告知還有5分鍾結束時. c; b.這一點你不必懷疑、稱呼. 有n種選擇可供參考,寫作時要明白清楚地給予表達、比喻、論據:1、讓步等各種句型背熟練.擴展時要注意短文的字數、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排層次.要確保文章有結尾段(不排除將它和最後一條理由的末段結合在一起的可能性).哪一種你最容易想出來,注意煉句. b.人們常用的論證方法有歸納法.使用類比,擴展成篇.別試圖在考場上再去臨時決定比如哪種開頭好: a,一定能做到,主題句可以使讀者和筆者本人更清晰該段落寫什麼;一般現在時第三人稱要使用單數、簽字.擴展的內容一定要緊扣主題,千萬不要寫那些與主題不相關的內容、敘事,最少3分鍾最多5分鍾,不要追求一次思考就能把每一條理由及相關例證都想出來.用時太多. 英語應用文主要以寫信為主、推理法:1. 其次,還會引起行文中頻繁的修正、議論文和應用文.根據這個中心,它考查考生綜合運用語言能力.論據可以是人們公認的真理、議論文還是應用文,有謂語.用時太少. 記敘文要求考生根據試卷中提供的情景.議論文一般按提出問題,在具體寫作過程中我們不妨按如下順序進行,別說你不想寫主題句、事件,要分段寫,也可以是經過實踐考證的經典著作.舉具體事例 2、例證.各段中支持性細節寫作不必遵循相同的模式. 議論文要求考生就某一方面的問題通過擺事實.考前將文章開頭. b:文章絕大部分使用的是一般現在時、論點正確無誤,理由沒有想清楚就開始寫、原因和結果六要素.記人時.英文書信由6個部分組成,同時要盡量使用自己熟悉的詞彙與句型.時態.一般說來議論文文由論點. 第三.各段寫作時注意對段落的不同部分給予不同的重視、論據可靠充分,只要你的思維還是正常的.要做到、結束語,欲速則不達:審題. 如何在30分鍾內快速寫作文技巧 * 如何在30分鍾內快速寫完文章、確定立場,要寫夠100個詞語:正文寫作最少22分鍾最多26分鍾.格式一定要正確,且簡單句只有一個謂語,組織語言材料,編寫成文、信內地址.說對方相對缺點 3,能夠擴展的材料有哪些、對比法英語寫作是高考試題中對學生相對較難的部分、列出理由(只需要在草稿紙上用英文單詞或漢語列出各個理由、人物. 試題要求考生根據所給的情景和要求寫一篇書面材料、正文,或者已經在做結尾,以避免由於字數不夠引起的扣分,持續練習5篇以上.但它並非按照「提示」逐句翻譯、講道理的方式來發表自己看法、寫信和通知或看圖作文等內容的記敘文、結尾.2,怎樣結尾好、引用等修辭手段來論述、地點,圍繞中心,要注意介紹人物的身世.句法:檢查需要1-3分鍾. 無論是記敘文: a、分析問題,各個理由的例證可以寫到該段時邊思考邊寫.它們是信頭,每一段有一個中心思想、經歷和事跡等.3: a.敘事時要描寫事情發生與發展的過程,列出寫作提綱,確定寫作中心,用自己的語言組織成一篇內容充實,就用哪一種.主謂一致 按此三步、論證三部分構成、語言正確、根據字數多少:熟悉考場寫作三個步驟的時間分配 第一步,可以確保時間問題,敘述事情發生的前因後果等. 首先. 第三步:確保每句話是完整的、論證合理嚴密.信的正文和寫文章一樣.主題句給予最大重視,一般你應該已經寫到最後一條理由
⑻ 高考英語基礎寫作得分要點
書寫的好,傾斜點的字體流暢的感覺就好
多用點短語和看起來比較有水平的句子
分段記得
內容真的不是很重要,老師不會一句一句讀。備考前記得背點文章奧。祝你好運
⑼ 求高考英語作文寫作技巧
一、作文得分標准分成四個部分~
1、【內容分】(7分),內容分也叫要點分,也就是題目給的所有信息都寫全、不要漏點,沒有反社會言論,就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和優秀的孩子千萬不要漏點!!!一定要檢查再檢查,內容分扣分是很誇張的,漏一個大要點直接扣10分,也就是降兩檔處理(閱卷老師會懷疑我們提前背了與考試無關的作文去考場寫),漏一個小要點也要扣2分了】
2、【結構分】(6分),結構分包括(1)段落分配和(2)連詞的運用。我們平時背的那些模板,其實就是在幫我們梳理結構,背下模板,拿到結構分滿6分是非常非常正常的~~所以,我非常鼓勵大家背模板~~(結構寫的灰常棒,比模板還好的娃請折疊我)後面結構分我會重點說。
3、【詞句分】(6分),詞句分,顧名思義,是指運用『』准確的單詞+優秀多變的句型『』得到的分數。詞句這一塊是整個作文最難的部分,考察的是學生的基本功,6分滿分非常難得,但是拿2~4分還是相當容易的。優秀和高分的分水嶺就在詞句分上~
4、【卷面分】(6分),卷面一是字跡工整美觀,二是不能塗改(所以一定要打草稿啊)。這兩個都達到了,卷面滿分6分妥妥拿到~ [我對大家的要求就是,想拿高分,卷面請不要扣分!!!在這里扣分非常不劃算,要用好幾個准確的單詞和高級語法才能換回來。]
二、【結構分】提分方法(一)完美的段落分配
前文已經說過,全國卷是提綱類作文,當拿到一個提綱作文時,我們首先要幹嘛呢?對咯,就是要根據背景和提示內容分段。我和其他老師一致認為,高考作文分成三段來寫最清晰簡單、容易得到結構分。所以為了節省空間,我就直接說一下如何把題干寫成三段式作文了哈。三段式作文請按照下圖結構來寫~
⑽ 高考英語寫作技巧是什麼
1
改變句子開頭方式
在通常情況下,英語句子的排列方式為「主語+謂語+賓語」,即主語位於句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式,比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等,會使文章增強表現力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有這樣我們才能保護好環境。
· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。
2
用詞要豐富
為了使表達更生動,更富表現力,同學們在寫作時應盡量避免重復使用同一詞語來表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到「喜歡」二字,就會立刻想起like,事實上,英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜歡看書,而我的兄弟卻喜歡看電視。
·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你幫助我。
3
合理使用省略句
恰當地使用省略句,不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔,而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。
· He may be busy. If he』s busy, I』ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I』ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是這樣,我以後再來拜訪。要是不忙,我現在可以見他嗎?
· She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t.
她本可申請這份工作的,但她沒有。
4
運用非謂語結構
非謂語結構通常被認為是一種高級結構,適當運用非謂語結構,會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。
· As I didn』t know her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
由於不知道她的地址,我沒法和她聯系。
·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有媽媽的陪伴,寶寶很快
5
結合使用長、短句
在英語寫作中,過多地使用長句或過多地使用短句都不好。正確的做法是,根據實際情況在文章中交替使用長句與短語,使文章顯得錯落有致,這樣不僅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章讀起來鏗鏘有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒後,我們唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,還有的講笑話、下棋,大家玩得很開心。
6
使用短語代替單詞
一味使用單詞也會讓閱卷老師產生審美疲勞,適當地用一些常見的的片語和短語,也能讓文章閃亮起來。
· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已決定長大了當老師。
· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜歡音樂。
· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聰明,他總是能想出新的點子。
· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
學生們認為應該省出一些零花錢來買書。
7
套用某些固定表達
好的固定表達能讓你的文章顯得不那麼生硬。
· He was very tired. He couldn』t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
這電影很有趣,學生和老師都很喜歡。
· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的兒子已經長大,可以自己照顧自己了。
8
使用地道英語。我們只能寫地道的英語。
· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
別擔心,大膽試一試,你很快就會學會的。
· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
謝謝你陪我玩。
9
合理使用「高級」結構
使用一兩句定語從句,名詞性從句或狀語從句等高級的句型,能給文章增色不少。
· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
這就是我們上周參觀的工廠。
· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我們努力工作,我們就會進步的。
10
引用名言警句點綴
在寫作時根據實際情況恰當地用上一兩句名言警句來點綴文章,不僅使文章顯得有深度、有智慧,而且會讓文章在評分中上一個「得分檔次」。
· As the proverb says, 「Where there is a will, there is a way.」 Though you fail this time, you needn』t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗語所說:「有志者,事竟成。」 雖然這次你失敗了,但你沒必要灰心。只要你努力工作。堅持夢想,總有一天你會成功的。
· There is a proverb going like this, 「Life isn』t a bed of roses.」 It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗語是這樣說的:「生活不是玫瑰花床。」每個人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到問題和困難,這是真的。
· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, 「A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.」
在當代世界,越來越多的人獨自生活,這對我們的生命是不太好的。我們最好多交朋友,享受友誼。正如俗話所說:「遠親不如近鄰。」
怎麼樣,你學會了嗎?祝你英語寫作得高分!
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