Ⅰ 今年高考英語作文寫身邊的人,身邊人報紙上,新聞上的名人跑題嗎
寫報紙上、新聞上的人不太切題。
但是,如果你最後寫這樣一句就更好:雖然專我不曾面對面見過他(她)屬,但我感覺他(她)就在我身邊,時刻激勵著我做一個樂於助人的人(Although I have never met him/her face to face, I feel that he/she is just beside me and always inspires me to be a helpful person)。這樣「身邊」的含義就擴大了。
Ⅱ 英語作文,假設你是李明,是一名高中生,上周末你們學校舉辦社團節,請你根據以下提示寫一篇英語報道,
Giving is Receiving
I』 a student from Green Middle School. My name is LI Ming. I like helping others because
I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes
I help clean up city parks. I go to the old people』s home and do some cleaning for them once
a month. So I』m pretty popular there. I often visit the children』s hospital to cheer the sick kids
up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to
charities to help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves.
Do you agree with me?
Ⅲ 求一篇英語關於報導一次活動的作文
自己改動一下就行了
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http://www.rrting.com/English/yyxw/這里有近千篇英語作文,希望能幫到你,好就要給分喔,未來幾年寫作文都不用怕了
Ⅳ 求高考英語作文範文10篇!
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Ⅳ 高考英語寫作,如何提升文章亮點
要想把一篇文章寫好,不僅要注意行文通順與連貫、過渡與銜接等,還要對文章進行潤色,嘗試使用高級詞彙和復雜句式,以增加文章的亮點,給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。
一、巧設開頭和結尾
1.開頭
常見的開頭方式有開門見山式、描述主題式、提供背景知識式、小故事引導式、提出問題式、設置懸念式、倒敘式和名言引入式等。雖然開頭有著各式各樣的風格,不能千篇一律,要因不同文章的需要而各異,但又有其共同遵循的原則:
開頭多是通篇文章內容的摘要
開頭常能展示文章的主題
開頭應能抓住讀者的注意力,引導讀者讀下去。
用於文章開頭的句型有:
(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...;Those who object to...argue that...;They believe that...;But people who favor...,on the other hand,argue that...
(2)Faced with...,quite a few people argue that...;But other people conceive differently.
(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...
(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...
(5)Now it is commonly held that...;But I doubt whether...
(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.
(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.
(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...
(9)There is no denying/doubt that...
2.結尾
結尾的方法有很多,如總結式、重復式、結論式、暗示式和求解式等。
結尾一般是文章的升華或對文章主題的歸納,也是寫好文章的關鍵。好的結尾能喚起讀者共鳴,深化主題,給人回味,引人深思。
用於文章結尾的句型有:
(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...
(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...
(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...
(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...,but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.
(7) There is little doubt/denying that...
(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.
(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
(10) In conclusion,...
(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...
(12) Personally,I prefer to...
(13) In short,...should learn to...;Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
(14) As far as I am concerned,I agree with the opinion that...
二、准確地道的英美式表達
1.注意區分同義詞、近義詞的細微差異
a little boy小男孩(有可愛之意)
a small boy小男孩(強調身材瘦小)
2.恰當使用限定詞
用詞准確,從另一個角度來講就是要使論述客觀、適度,這就需要考生適當使用一些限定詞,以避免觀點的絕對化,從而提高說服力和可信度。
He is the top student in our class.
He is one of the top students in our class.
3.注意詞語的習慣搭配
用詞准確不僅要求考生掌握具體單詞的含義,還要熟悉詞語的習慣搭配,一定要避免受漢語影響而出現錯誤。
Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)
Nobody is to blame for it.(T)
4.避免口語化
高考作文一般應該使用較正式的書面文體,因此在寫作時要避免使用口語化的詞彙。
This is the best hotel you can find here.
You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.
5.避免贅言啰嗦
贅句是指用詞不簡練。表達某一思想,本來只需要一兩個詞,卻用了冗長的片語或者從句,如repeat again,return back,still remain,very perfect等。
三、提升表達結構
1.變簡單句為並列句或復合句
Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.
2.借用關鍵詞彙(介詞,不定式等)壓縮句子長度,提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom,a bathroom,and a kitchen in it.
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.
3.語態互換
Someone saw him studying hard in his study.
He was seen studying hard in his study.
4.語序調整
The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.
Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.
5.強調句式
You must write to me when you get there.
Do remember to write to me when you get there.
6.感嘆及省略
Time flies like an arrow.
How time flies!
Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.
Look out for cars when crossing the street.
7.語氣虛擬
You didn't take my advice,so you failed in the exam.
If you had taken my advice,you wouldn't have failed in the exam.
8.非謂語動詞的使用
They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
Singing and laughing,they went back to school.
9.插入語
I think the book is well worth reading.
The book,in my opinion,is well worth reading.
10.格言警句的套用
(1)Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好壞。
(3)No pains,no gains.不勞無獲。
(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老學到老。
(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
(6)One is never too old to learn.學無止境。
(7)Actions speak louder than words.事實勝於雄辯。
(8)Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。
11.句式調換
He came here at 5 pm yesterday.
He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.
Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.