『壹』 求一篇英語作文，是看漫畫寫一個連貫的英語故事的那種，120字左右就行了，急求，我在線等啊各位！可以加分
我很好奇那張漫畫啊。給你寫沒有問題。就是想看看看那張漫畫。回 畢竟這是你們老師答為了鍛煉你的思維跟英語才有的一個作文題目。我想最起碼你給我寫一篇漢語的我給你翻譯可以嗎？
If you failed to discrible the details of the cartoon, I would write a bad paper.
I think you know I know that what I want to say.
『貳』 如何做好英語寫作時的連貫性研究 博客
寫作的四項評分標准中，大部分考生關注的是詞彙的替換、拼寫的准確以及句法的多樣性這幾個比較基礎的方面，對於連貫和銜接這一項的要求因為和我們的母語產出是一樣的，所以很多考生往往覺得不必要重視，順其自然地寫下去就好。但分析認為，實際上不論圖表分析還是議論文，在這一項上失分的情況都比較多，而只要理解並引起足夠的重視這種原因造成的失分比詞彙和句法方面的更容易糾正。
連貫和銜接這一評分標准中我們一般所提到的只是銜接，也就是說前後兩個句子或者段落之間要有如but, and, therefore 等信號詞反映出內容之間的邏輯關系，常見的有順接、轉折、並列、遞進、因果等等。而連貫體現在語域和邏輯兩個方面。前者指的是全文的措辭、文風、句式等應保持一致；後者指的是文章應該有合理的組織和合理的主位化，相鄰的句子應圍繞一定的核心概念來表達，使得全篇行文通暢。
語域方面的連貫問題在議論文中比較嚴重，也就是所謂的模板句式太多或者Memorized的詞彙或短語太多，與全文文風不符，學員反饋最低壓到4.5到5分。邏輯方面的連貫主要是在圖表作文中問題較多。主位(theme)不完全等同於主語，因為主語一般是動作的發出者或者評價的對象，而主位是側重於每個句子由什麼開始，可以是名詞充當的主語，也可以是時間或地點狀語。適當的調整主位是為了服務於行文的連貫性。如：
It can be seen from the figure quoted that Brisbane and Perth consumed the same water when it was under 125 kl, with 0.42 per kilometer. Sydney took the leading position at this level, with $0.98, comparing to Adelaide and Melbourne ranged from $0.78 to $0.84 per kilometer.
Things changed a little bit when the consumption over 125 kl. Sydney remained its first position($0.98 per kl). Meanwhile Adelaide ($0.78) and Melbourne ($0.84) ranked the least.
這兩個段落有明顯的單詞和句式的重復，而且有句法錯誤，所以得分不會高於6分。但上述問題不是短時間內可以糾正過來的，而連貫方面的問題則不同，這實際上是讀圖時的要求。
兩段聯系起來可以看出作者分段是按照耗水量是否超過125kl來分段的，所以大於或小於125kl就應該作為每段突出強調的部分提前，即將其主位化。第一段明顯安排欠妥。
此外第一段中開始寫的是Brisbane and Perth用水的數量相同，而後面寫的是Sydney和另外兩個城市的水價比較，這段的主線就游移不定，也就是說前後不是圍繞同一點來的，所以不夠連貫。此外，如果我們要從用水量低於125kl這個圖開始分析，一般也應該分成兩類：用水量和單價，並且視情況分別寫出極值、排序、比較等。
分析認為，很多考生覺得圖表作文不怎麼出彩，所以將主要精力放在應付議論文上，對於讀圖分析根本不重視才造成上述問題。而段落的劃分是最基本的分析圖表要求，如果分得不清楚，或者明明分段但是段首句主位處理不當，將肯定會失分。
『叄』 如何保證雅思寫作的文章連貫性
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系;反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。每個人的情況不同，也可以登錄文都國際教育官網進行一對一的咨詢。
1、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A.按時間先後排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was
obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew
the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then,
when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours ----- it
must have been close to noon ---- the heat nearly hid us in; the
radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to
cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was four o'clock
and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the
tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in
the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very
nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.
By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we
knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky
day.
本段從"rose"(起床)寫起，然後是吃早餐("not to miss breakfast", "closing at nine o'clock")，然後是"close to noon"，一直寫到這一天結束("By nine--")。
B.按位置遠近排列(spatial arrangement)
例如：From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got
closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all
right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were
also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a
pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten
feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of
glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was
made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had
four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a
steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light
changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and
we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠及近，從遠處("from a distance")寫起，然後"get closer"，再到(" ten feet
away")，最後是"inside the pagoda"……當然，按位置遠近來寫不等於都是由遠及近。根據需要，也可以由近及遠，由表及裡等等。
C.按邏輯關系排列(logical arrangement)
a.按重要性順序排列(arrangement insgroupsof importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much
skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine,
your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as
soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends
on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word.
And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the
organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be
that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In
the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the
large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is
perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達能力，它的重要性與職業，身份有關，從"not need much skill"或"of little importance"到"more important"，最後是"most important"。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been
careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any
number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the
reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what
it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the
reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has
switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader
loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps
sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- the writer, in whose
head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing
link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not
taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and
"sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big
one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然後通過5個"perhaps"加以例證。
c.由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with
the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in
breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not
possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her
independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff
unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed,
perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand,
loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till
night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who
saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually
offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable,
on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds,
drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is
imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什麼兩只貓會被搞混。然後對兩者進行比較，末句才下結論。
2、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字並找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First,
though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his
efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math.
Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient
in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects
besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of
high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had
to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on
schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward
realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉換詞語(transitional words or
phrases)，另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有：first, though, so, in
particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and,
consequently, and, finally.後者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he,
those, his, he, these,
his.本段1有詞彙105個，所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞彙量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流暢(smoothness)有益，而且對於學生在規定時間內寫足所要求的字數也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000
years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented
only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word
choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent
often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are
ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in
the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture,
loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture,
loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and
writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的"it"之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現許多重復的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was
developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent
development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is
usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is
often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell
where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard
diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies
on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing
lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the
differences.
有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：
1)不必要的改變時態，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where
he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes
refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to
die down, but they come after him anyway.
2)不必要的改變單復數，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy.
But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run
out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the
deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3)不必要的改變人稱，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's
activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in
the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members
will do things together and know one another. You need to give up
isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of
obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態，人稱以及數的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
『肆』 12個帶「when」和「while」的英語作文，需要有連貫性……哪位大蝦能幫幫忙啊，急用……
i had a dog when i was 9 years old. i got the dog while i was eating my birthday cake. It was very cute.i always play with it while my mom was cooking in the afternoon. but it so naughty when we didn't notice it. one day, the dog came to my room when i was doing my homework. the dog jumped on my bed while i was drinking water. when i noticed that, the dog had already gone. and my bed was so dirty. i thought i had to tell my mom. so i go downstairs while my mom was watching TV. i told my mom when she began to prepare dinner. she heard that very angry. my mom was yelling at my dog while the dog came into kitchen. we started to cleaned my room. after cleaned my bedroom. my mom began to cook and i played with my dod. while my mom was cooking, someone knocked the door. i opened the door and my dad came in. at that moment, my dog drop down from stairs. i run to my dog when my dog was crying. and our family sent my dog to pet hospital immediately.
12個。故事很爛但是請勉強接受吧，重復用這個句子還要連貫真是不怎麼容易。
『伍』 寫英語作文的時候，怎樣才能將文章寫的連貫一些
石家莊新東方來的老師說，想要將文源章段落、句子寫的連貫，只要還是在於平時多積累、多練習，只有這樣，上了考場才能發揮出應有的水平。
另外在寫作文的時候要注意兩點，一是要注意句子的順序。寫文章的時候最忌顛三倒四，所以同學們在寫文章的時候要先想好先寫什麼，再寫什麼，最好的是在下筆之前先列一個提綱，提綱是整個文章的骨架部分，列好提綱，再下筆就快多啦。第二個要注意的是句子之間的過渡。一段話中層與層之間，一部分內容與另一部分內容之間，要用恰當的詞語把它們連接起來，使表達的意思前後連貫。不要讓句子看起來前後不搭，這樣的話你的文章你自己看著都會很頭疼，更不用說閱卷老師了，所以一定要注意條理清晰、前後連貫。
建議各位同學在平時的時候可以聽一些英文廣播，或者外文雜志，「平時多積累，下筆如有神」。給大家推薦一些好的內容，廣播可以聽bbc，voa，英文雜志推薦《經濟學人》。另外，新概念系列也是學習英語的一個藍本。平時沒事的時候翻翻看，背一些經典文章，培養了語感，上了考場就輕松自如了，文章不僅會連貫，更會讓你得高分哦。
『陸』 英語作文 用6至8個意思連貫的英文句子介紹你們家是如何過春節.
there are many traditional festivals in our country.
to our chinese ,the most important is the spring festival.
we have our spring festival ring the winter holidays.
sometimes it is in january.
sometimes it is in february.
usually people are on leave for seven days.
ring the spring festival ,children alaways put on new clothes.
the whole family have the traditional dishes such as mplings,and fish for the dinner together.
there is much delicious food.
people often visit friends or relatives.
we often get many nice presents,too.
every evening we are allowed to stay up and play with fireworks.
we all have a good time.
因為是從紙張上打到電腦里,為了快點我什麼大寫都沒弄,你如果覺得這篇文章好的話來問我吧.
『柒』 求英語作文中的連貫詞
1)表層次:
first,firstly, to begin with, further, in the first place
second,secondly, to start with, still, furthermore
third,thirdly, what is more, last, last but not least
also, and then, next, besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addtion finally
2)表轉折；
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despitethe fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contarary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3)表因果；
therfore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence e to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4）表讓步：
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5)表遞近：
furthermore moreover likewise what is more
besides also not only...but also...
too in addtion
6)表舉例：
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7)表解釋：
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words
8)表總結：
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
namely in all therefore to summarize
遞進: then(然後)， besides， furthermore(而且)，moreover (此外), what』s more，even ;in addition ；What』s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse等。
what』s worse, above all, not only …but also
轉折: however(然而)，but，on the contrary(相反)，after all(畢竟) ，although; in spite of ;On the other hand； instead ; yet, while, though,
總結: finally，at last，in brief(總之)，in conclusion(最後)， in short ; in general ; generally speaking,at last, in a word,
強調: indeed，certainly(一定)，surely(確定)，above all(尤其)等.
『捌』 英語文章的連貫性如何更好的保持
有一些詞聯系前後文，比如first,second,third;at first,next,finally:last but not least等短語，你可以找一些英語文章的模板看看，或者找一些這樣的回詞答記一些，用到作文中會添彩不少。