A. 英語寫作建議信
建議信 Letter of Suggestion
Dear editor,
I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs and learning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students』 eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Lei
B. 用英語寫建議信
My dear friend,How are you all these days?I'm writing to you to make sure whether you still think me of best friend. Frankly speaking, I prefer you not to smoke. I don't like to tell you the harm of smoking because I believe you know it clearly. Give it up, my dear friend!I also notice that you spend too much time into internet games. Do you still remember that once you asked me to be active when I was in grey. But how could you be so addicted to these unreal games? You are so crazy about them. Oh, come on,gay! Get away from them and be ambitious!Wish you smart and health.Your trust friend,(署名)
C. 怎樣寫 建議信 英語作文
建議信例題:假如你是李明,你發現部分同學每次遇到重要考試,都會出現一些焦慮症狀。請你用英語寫一封信,向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內容應包括下列要點:
焦慮症狀建議
頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食慾不振等
1.考前制定好合適的復習計劃
2.考試期間正常作息
3.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助於睡眠
範文:
Dear editor,
I m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Li Ming
(One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, ring the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and ring an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
D. 英語作文 建議信
dear li ming :
welcome to our class
I know you haven't adapted to us from the term start, I want to help you ,because I believe you will become one of us .
in the first place ,the trues that you don't communcate with us I think it's that you afraid talk to others . you should cantact us as much as you can . in this way we can know more about you ,such as what you like and what you want . what's more ,be confident of yourself , I think it's have an good effect on yourself
in my opinion ,most of us are willing to help you ,however ,you must depend on yourself ,so,please be happy accept us ,especially our teacher,she is very knid !
in fact ,we really want to make good friends with you ! we can help you whatever you want ! come on !
best wishes !
yours
zhanghua
E. 英文建議信的例子
建議信是對收信人就某一問題提出建議和忠告。建議信有可能寫給某個組織或機構,就改進其服務質量提出建議或忠告:也可能是寫給個人,就其人生的某個重大決定提出自己的建議。 內容要點: + 寫信的目的以及所談事情的簡介,包括背景、現狀、存在的問題和可能的發展;
+ 提出建議的原因;
+ 建議的內容;
+ 客氣話或感謝注意事項:+ 語氣要誠懇,有禮貌;
+ 建議內容要具體;
+ 可提供不止一個解決方案供選擇或一個問題的不同方面提出建議。建議信-範例:Dear Sir or Madam,
As someone who has travelled throughout Asia on business and holiday I would like to give my opinion on its environmental impact. Having visited Indonesia, Thailand and Malaysia I understand that tourism can bring money to developing countries. However, this money often goes into the pockets of foreign investors, and only rarely benefits local people. Multinational hotel chains also have little regard for the surrounding wildlife when they build new resorts. This can cause many problems.
In view of these facts we, as tourists, can directly affect these countries in a positive way if we are thoughtful. When we visit these countries we can visit restaurants, bars and even hotels that are owned by local people. In addition, we can refuse to give Iuxury resorts our patronage and therefore prevent them from becoming even larger. Most importantly we should check that any tours or excursions we take have minimal effect on the natural surroundings. Finally, we can even attempt to change the behaviour of other tourists by sharing our opinions.
If we follow these simple steps we can be sure that our pleasure is not causing any harm to people or places that we visit.
Sincerely yours 建議信-開頭段常用句子:* I am writing to express my views concerning…
* I would like to suggest that…
* I am writing in reply to …
* I am writing with my suggestion about…
* May I suggest that…
* In my opinion, I would say…建議信-結尾段常用句子:* I would be more happy to see improvements in this regard.
* I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
* I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
* I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations are helpful/practical/useful/beneficial. 建議信常用詞彙:arrange concern condition
consider for the sake of improve
in my opinion matter out of the question
prevent propose regard
schele suggest unsatisfactory
F. 高中英語作文建議信萬能開頭
一天,老師帶領同學們去植樹。路上,同學們排著整齊的隊伍。天氣很好,藍天上飄著朵朵白雲,春天真美啊。老師給我們分了工,我們大家就分頭幹了起來。
同學們先挖樹坑,挖完後把小樹苗放進去,再填上土,最後再給小樹苗澆點水,一棵小樹就種好了。大家幹得興高采烈。小剛和小紅幹得特別認真。小紅扶著小樹苗,小剛給小樹苗填土,小樹苗種好了,他們都高興地笑了。經過一個上午緊張愉快的勞動,同學們在小土坡上種了幾十棵小樹苗。看著自己的勞動成果,同學們心裡高興極了,在老師的帶領下,滿意地回去了。
評改意見:從文章中我們可以看出,小作者沒有認真審題,弄清題意。題目要求在觀察中看看圖上畫的是什麼季節,都有誰,他們在干什麼,特別強調要注意近處兩個人的動作,因此文章的重點應寫圖畫上近處兩個學生植樹時的動作,分幾步寫清楚植樹的過程,這些在文章中並沒有具體地介紹,對人物動作的描寫只是「小紅扶著小樹苗,小剛給小樹苗填土。」怎樣扶,怎樣填,以及他們是怎樣挖坑,怎樣互相配合,小作者都沒有寫清楚。觀察的不細致,反映在文章中,就讓人感到語言簡單,內容空洞。因而在人物的語言,神態等方面,小作者缺乏想像。描寫主要人物的神態,只有一句「他們都高興地笑了」,沒有一句對話,使圖畫的內容並沒有在讀者的眼前像放電影一樣活起來,顯得死板。文章內容鬆散,有時與主題脫節。開頭部分老師帶同學們去植樹,具體的時間,地點,原因都沒有寫。「同學們排著整齊的隊伍」一句更顯得突兀,對天氣的描寫與贊美,本來可以與植樹聯系起來,但又被作者忽視了。對勞動過程的描寫,作者用「先怎樣,再怎樣,最後怎樣」一筆帶過。沒有勞動的場面,沒有具體的人物活動。圖中的學生們從他們手裡的工具以及動作可以看出,他們有的在挖坑,有的在澆水,有的扛來小樹苗,有的自己干,有的兩三個人一起干。文章中沒有描述。主要人物的描寫中,也讓我們不能了解植樹的步驟,過程是怎樣的。
文章結尾沒有起到點明中心,深化主題的作用。「在老師的帶領下,滿意地回家了。」滿意什麼,為什麼滿意?勞動的結果只是種了幾十棵樹,植樹的意義何在?讀後並沒有使人受到教育,明白植樹對保護環境,對人類生存的重要性。這是文章的一大不足。