㈠ 如何上好高中英語寫作課
1、開門見山,揭示主題文章一開頭就交待清楚文章的主題是什麼。如「How I Spent My Vacation」(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是題為「Honesty」(談誠實)一文中的開頭:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、時間或環境開頭在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如「A Trip to Jinshan」 (去金山旅遊)的開頭:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回憶性的開頭
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如「A Trip to the Taishan Mountain」(泰山游)的開頭是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的開頭即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如「The Happiness of Reading Books」(讀書的快樂)的開頭:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介紹環境式的開頭即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如「An Accident」(一場事故)的開頭是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什麼問題等。如「Pollution Control」(控制污染)的開頭:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
㈡ 高一英語寫作課教案中的教學目標怎麼寫
Teaching Aims
1.To get the students to appreciating remarks on friendship or friends.
2.To enable the students to write a short story about friends or friendships.
Teaching Proceres
Step 1 Discussion
Now, I found 500 pounds in Roy』s pocket. Did Roy steal the money from the charity? Someone says 『yes』, someone says 『no』. If Roy did steal the money from the charity, shall I tell the teacher or call the police? If Roy didn』t steal the money, what should I do?
Discuss it in groups of four .
Collect answers from students. Draw a conclusion; whether Roy stole the money or not, we help him all the same. Because we』re friends. Friends are the ones we can get help from and we can trust.
In this unit, we have talked a lot about friends and friendship, knowing the importance of friends. And what do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?List good qualities and bad qualities a friend may have.
Suggested answers:
Good qualities:
hospitable considerate enthusiastic friendly kind polite honest loyal brave positive optimistic smart intelligent modest generous determined responsible mature
Bad qualities:
dishonest unfriendly dishonest rude impolite selfish lazy careless pessimistic Brainstorming:
Step 2 Writing
Describe a problem you had with a friend and give advice on how to keep friends.
Suggested expressions:
close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to , considerate, warm hearted, honest,
一些有關友誼的名言警句如:
On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.(---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship.(---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
Sample:
Friendship is one of the most valuable relationship in our lives, it may even last through you whole life. I have a good friend. Sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, once we discussed a problem of our homework, as we held different ideas and wanted to persuade each other, we argued a lot. However, after we found the correct answer, the one that was wrong apologized at once. No matter how often we quarreled and what we quarreled for, we are good friends for ever.
My favourite proverb says ' friend are like stars, you don』t always see them, but you know they re always there.' Thats true, indeed friends are willing to help you all the time. When you are down ,friends raise you up with their hearts .When you lose your way, friends guide you and pull you to the right way. When you have sorrow to complain of, friends are always the best ears for you.
So please cherish your friends, because everyone of them is unique and precious. Getting along with friends is just like growing plants. We must use patience, trust, and honesty as fertilizer to make friendship stonger. And never forget ,plants need sunshine, so do friends. Often give them some warm and you will find your hearts are getting closer.
Friendship stands on both sides , so the more you give and the more you will get . Remember, the key is your sincere heart.
Step 3 Promotion and Homework
1)Assign another writing task based on the following information:
What do you think of a friend or friendship?
How to keep friendship?
2) Instruct the students to write and revise by themselves.
3) Let the students hand in their final copies.
4) Select some good samples to read to the whole class.
Suggested sample:
Friendship is the most important things in life. Good friend would like to help you when you met some troubles. Real good friends could put each other in their hearts. Real friendship is like the spring rivers flowing down the mountains, silently. Everybody is looking forward to meeting real friends.
How to find real friendship and keep it? I think it is like you planting a big tree. You should choose good seeds and take care of it to make it grow. Almost the same thoughts between each other is on base. Maybe fight also will happen. How to do? To make real friend, you don't be shy to explain your thoughts to the other. Try your best to keep friendship forever. It is necessary to tell the truth and respect each other.
教學實施過程:
針對學生這樣的實際情況,並受任務型教學法啟示「任務型教學理論實際上就是建立在討論或交流教學思路的基礎上的,是交流教學思路的一種發展形態,英語教學要以學生為中心,教師要為學生設計運用語言的環境,通過大量的交流活動總結和掌握語言的規律,並在交流活動中實踐,從而達到目的.」我對每模塊後的書面表達內容的教學作了調整,這樣處理:即把寫作課變成討論和寫作並存的活動課,並在活動課中備有相關的多媒體內容或音樂,使學生在真切愉快的情景中搜集寫作素材,完成寫作內容,最後達到激發學生寫作興趣,提高寫作技能並促進其他幾種技能的效果。具體教學過程如下:
第一步,確定題目後,教師啟發學生思考,回憶寫作中所需要的相關詞彙,必要時通過多媒體展示相關內容,然後教師在黑板上進行總結或藉助多媒體把關鍵詞語呈現給學生.例如外研版教材Book6 Mole3 Interpersonal relationship___ Friendship,該模塊的寫作任務講述朋友之間所產生的矛盾問題,並提出建議如何保持友誼:Describing a problem you had with a friend and giving advice on how to keep friends教師可先展示一些有關友誼或本班同學相處的圖片、幻燈片、音樂等,以激發學生的學習興趣。然後教師可引導學生說說自己的好朋友,盡可能用到本模塊所學過的詞彙:close, trust, chat, be on good terms, get on very well, keep in touch, get to know, personal matters, be similar to, considerate, warmhearted, honest, 等等。
第二步,分組討論(均勻分配不同程度的學生),要求學生圍繞寫作話題藉助有關詞彙,人人動口,積極思維:1.Who is your good friend? 2. How do you become good friends? 3. Have you ever quarreled with each other? 4.What』s the problem? 5. Have you made up? 6. What should you do to keep your friendship? 等, 並讓學生各抒己見,提供出不同的詞語句型,如1.I』ve known him/her for ... 2.We first met six years ago...I remember meeting him/her for the first time 3.We have much in common. 4. I not only...but also... 5.I suggest that... 6.Why not...? 7.Can』t we ...? 8. What about...? 9. Friendship is both... and... 10. If we... , we can...等也可提供一些有關友誼的名言警句如:On friends and friendship:
A true friend is one soul in two bodies. (---Aristotle)
A friend in need is a friend indeed. (---Ray)
Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing. (---Benjamin Franklin)
A friend is a present which you give yourself. (---Robert Louis Stevenson)
Fate chooses your relatives, you choose your friends. (---Abbe Jacques Deille)
A faithful friend is the medicine of life. (---William Shakespeare)
The bird a nest, the spider a web, man friendship. (---William Blake)
We choose our friend by instinct, but we keep them by judgment. (---Alfred Capus)
Friendship is love without his wings. (---George Gordon Byron)
True friendship is a plant of slow growth.(---George Washington)
同時教師提醒學生在討論中盡量使用正確的時態、語態並用英語交流。這一步也是學生英文寫作收集寫作素材的過程。教師可參考與到各個組中,幫助學生解決疑難問題,並根據不同的寫作內容和各小組的實際水平適當給他們提供一些新的詞彙,同時鼓勵那些平時不善於言談的學生開口交流和幫助基礎較差的學生。通過不斷的教學實踐,我發現:在這種活動或情景之下,學生無拘無束,大膽熱烈討論,加之教師的指導,寫作的素材自然獲得不少。最後每組選一位代表執筆完成書面表達,並在時間允許內在全班朗讀;
第三步,教師進行總結歸納: Friendship is a kind of human relations. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. .Long live friendship! 同時再次強調寫作中所需的時態、語態和學生寫作過程中容易犯的錯誤等關鍵問題。而後要求學生課後完成各自的寫作內容並上交作業。
第四步,作文評價是個意義重大的環節,可採用以下評價機制,包括學生自評→學生互評→教師評價→全班反饋→範文共賞五個環節。
學生參與情況:
運用這種教學方式,我所教的班級學生普遍反映:這種討論和寫作的方式更適合他們,因為氣氛活躍,讓人覺得輕松,通過小組的討論、互相幫助和老師的指引,較容易搜集到寫作素材,而且參考小組素材再結合自己的觀點,就更容易下手寫作了。每個小組都能寫出較為優秀的文章,而且,學生完成作業情況非常好,能充分運用課上所講的相關詞彙和表達方式,有些同學的文章寫得相當好,可以作為範文展示學習。總而言之,這種寫作教學法既激發了學生的寫作興趣,又提高了他們的口語表達能力,同時還培養了他們的群體合作精神,而且也達到了師生互動交流。
㈢ 如何有效促進高中英語課堂寫作教學
在我的教學工作中,作為一名教師,我總認為要做個有心人,讓數學真正成內為學生願學、樂學的學科容,只有這樣,才能為學生提供充裕的探索、實踐的空間和時間,才能調動大多數同學的學習積極性;才能大面積提高小學數學教學質量和學生綜合素質。
㈣ 談談如何上好高中英語寫作課
目前,英語寫作教學仍然以傳統的教學模式為主,也就是老師給題目,學生寫專作文,老師批改,學生修改屬,整個寫作教學以教師為主,學生為輔,普遍存在著教學過程與評價過程相分離的現象。很多教師辛辛苦苦地教學但效果不佳,也有很多學生背過大量的優秀範文,也寫了許多作文,但寫作水平一直沒有太大的提高。在此,本人就如何上好英語寫作課發表一些淺顯的看法,和大家共同討論一下。在英語寫作課堂上,可以採取「英語寫作三步教學法」。所謂「英語寫作三步教學法」就是將英語寫作教學過程分為前、中、後三個部分,並且在每個部分都融人適時適當的評價方式及評價方法。在「寫作前」,教師提出寫作任務和評價內容。教師提出的寫作任務要緊扣教材知識點並且貼近學生的生活,要具有真實性、可探究性和趣味性。學生要准備好本課的重要詞彙,從讀音、詞形、詞性、詞義、基本用法和固定搭配等方面為寫作做好准備。教師可根據實際情況把學生分成若干小組,分組時要充分考慮到每個個體的不同之處,取長補短,使得每個層次的學生在寫作時都有東西可寫,都能品嘗到成功...... (本文共計2頁) [繼續閱讀本文] 贊
㈤ 淺談如何提高高中英語寫作教學的趣味性
創設趣味教學情境,營造輕松教學氛圍在新課改的教學背景下,傳統高中英語寫作教學的方回式已經不能答滿足學生的學習需求了,現階段,隨著信息技術的快速發展以及素質教育要求的不斷提升,我國高中英語寫作教學已開始向趣味性教學發展,逐漸擺脫了「一刀切」、「滿堂灌」這些教學模式的影響。為了更好的提高實際教學的趣味性,教師就可以在寫作教學的過程中積極創設極具趣味的教學情境,讓學生在輕松和諧的教學氛圍中產生對寫作學習的興趣,進而實現高效學習、快樂學習
㈥ 怎樣優化課堂教學環節提高英語寫作能力:讓學生的寫作
寫是一種綜合能力的訓練,它是一個系統工程,應貫穿於教學活動的全過程。每一種有效的教學方法,貴在堅持,作為教師,必須長期堅持不懈對學生的寫進行訓練,使學生的寫作水平能在有條理、有秩序的學習過程中得以發展,逐步提高他們的英語應用能力。
隨著新課標對寫作能力要求的提高,高考寫作在高考試卷中所佔分值也在逐步增加。許多高中英語教師也意識到了高中英語寫作的重要性,並且對如何提高學生的寫作水平做了一些嘗試,但是我們必須承認高中英語寫作教學還相對滯後,對學生的寫作水平的提高效果甚微。學生習作中存在著眾多問題,主要集中於以下幾個方面:(1)句子中的謂語動詞把握不好,忽視動詞形式變化及動詞在中英文意義上的差別;(2)內容表達中式化,結構混亂,語意含糊;(3)內容空洞,語篇不連貫。如果我們認真反思平時課堂教學,我們不難發現,教師對於學生語言表達基本功的訓練不夠,寫作起點過高;不注重培養英語思維習慣;而且忽視對寫作立意,思想內容表達方面的指導。針對以上問題,筆者在教學中嘗試了從以下四個方面對學生進行英語寫作基本功訓練,力求能在平時的教學活動中逐步提高學生的英語寫作能力。
2 英語寫作能力的培養過程
2.1 立足文本,遣詞造句,培養英語思維習慣
在上課過程中,我們經常會採用一些blank- filling 等形式考查學生對於新詞彙或文章內容的掌握情況,卻很少使用從詞到句方式復習課文,提高學生的語言表達能力。而從詞到句的復習方法有助於增進學生對語句構成過程的認識,強化他們對英語語言結構的感知,培養英語思維習慣。下面以m3 u4 howlife began on earth 閱讀課為例,在學習課文的基礎上,教師給出課文出現的一些關鍵詞動詞作為提示,讓後讓學生根據課文內容完成一些簡單句,對所寫的句子再進行改進,聯句到文。具體如下:
根據所學的課文內容,和已給的動詞的提示,分別在這詞的左右兩邊空格處填寫適當的內容,使語意完整。下面是一些學生寫的例句。
proce: the explosion of the earth proced water vapour.turn into:water vapour turned into water when the earth cooleddown.
allow:water allowed the earth to dissolve harmful gases into theoceans and seas.
develop:life began to develop on earth.
長期以來,中學英語教學中,教師只注重語言知識的教授,而淡化了英語思維的培養。很多學生平時所吸收的知識量大都是零散的單詞、片語,而對於英語句型結構知之甚少,讀文寫作時沒有養成用英語語言思維的習慣。下筆寫作時,母語思維自然就占上風,中文式句型頻頻出現就不足為奇了。
2.2 漢英翻譯,巧設空格,規范英語句型表達
漢英翻譯是多數老師採用的提高學生書面表達能力的有效策略。但是它也有自身的弊端,特別是對於英語水平中等及偏下的學生來說,還需要改進。因為翻譯練習的考查是以結果為中心,而沒有以過程為中心,即在翻譯過程中,練習本身沒有體現對學生思維過程的引導,規范學生英語句型表達。當教師用紅筆更正學生習作中多處錯誤後,學生雖知錯誤的地方和原因,但他們可能下次還會犯同意的毛病,因為那些錯誤是老師更正的。為了解決這一問題,在教學實踐中,我嘗試在設計漢英翻譯時,增設一些規定數量的空格,目的是為了引導他們能用英語正確思維,規范句型表達。如:根據所給的關鍵詞和原句已給的提示語,翻譯中文,補全英文句子,每空一詞。
(1)這張照片讓我想起了我的童年時代。(remind)the photo reminds me ofmy childhood.(鞏固重點詞彙remind..of 的用法)
(2)自從他大學畢業後,他一直從事農業工作。(work on)he has been working on the land since he graated fromcollege.(現在完成進行時的鞏固)
(3)由於她沉迷於小說,她沒有意識到外面下雨了。(be lost in)lost in the novel , she didn』t realize that it was raining outside.(非謂語用法的鞏固)
練習過程中,由於關鍵詞的提示及空格的引導,學生會感到目標更明確,避免不知所措,無從下手。而且為了按要求完成句型,學生在翻譯過程中會進行積極思考,嘗試不同的詞彙、時態、結構等,思維就會更嚴密,自主學習能力也會增強。同時老師的批改和分析也會變得簡單,清晰多了,學生也更容易更正自己的錯誤。教師也可以避免面對學生翻譯的錯誤百出的句型而無從下手批改的局面。
3 結語
寫是一種綜合能力的訓練,它是一個系統工程,應貫穿於教學活動的全過程。首先,在平時的教學活動中,教師應該注重培養學生的英語思維習慣,不斷嘗試新的有效的教學方法引導學生掌握英語句型基本結構,強抓語言表達基本功,為寫作能力的提高奠定堅實基礎。其次,教師還應不斷給學生展示結構豐富、詞彙優美的佳句美文,並且逐步引導他們從不同的角度,用不同句型表達自己的思想,讓學生體會到英語語言的魅力。要提高學生的作文水平,講評也是很重要的教學環節。我們知道一篇好的文章應該是詞彙、語法、內容的完美結合。點評學生文章時不僅要考慮到文章的詞彙、句型、結構,還要顧及文章的中心思想、語言內容等方面是否明確、充實。總而言之,每一種有效的教學方法,貴在堅持,作為教師,必須長期堅持不懈對學生的寫進行訓練,使學生的寫作水平能在有條理、有秩序的學習過程中得以發展,逐步提高他們的英語運用能力